中考英语书面表达——topic writing my holiday experience 课件（25张PPT）

(共25张PPT)
Topic Writing
My vacation experience
Can you tell me the names of these festivals
New Year’s Day
May Day (Labour Day)
National Day
Christmas Day
Thanksgiving Day
Independence Day
Can you tell the dates of these festivals
January 1st
May 1st
October 1st
December 25th
On the 4th Thursday in November
The fourth of July
Thanksgiving is an American festival.We have celebrated the festival _______the first pioneers from England arrived in America by ship in the 17th century. ______ they were crossing Atlantic, many people_____, and after they landed, their first winter was worse than any English winter.The local people, the Native Americans ,taught them how to ______corn. The ________year they celebrated together by _______a dinner of the new food.
We still celebrate Thanksgiving today with a traditional dinner. On that day, we all help prepare the food. We_____ the table, and then before we begin dinner, my father gives _________for the food. We usually eat too much. We often talk a lot and tell stories after dinner as well. When it is all _______, everyone helps wash the_______
Fill in the blanks with the correct forms.
since
grow
While
died
following
.
eating
lay
thanks
over
dishes
while, over, grow, following, lay, dish，since, thanks, eat, die
we went to my grandparents' home
as soon as the holiday began.
Before we arrived, Grandma had laid the table for us.
When it was all over,everyone helped
Grandma wash the dishes.
We were enjoying the moon
while eating the delicious mooncakes.
We have celebrated Mid-autumn Festival together
since I was born.
Luckily,this year, Mid-autumn Day and
National Day are on the same day. So
we have an 8- day holiday.
今年的国庆节和中秋节是同一天，假设你是大明，你的笔友Mike想知道你是如何度过这次假期的。请写一封e-mail给他。内容包括:
注意：1.词数：60-100词
2. 用since ,before,while, when,after, as soon as等引导的状语从句
when activities feelings
first day( Mid-autumn Day and National Day) visited grandparents,
had a big dinner together,go shopping---- meaningful and happy
second day visited Yandang Mountain
tired but excited
the following days stayed at home relaxed
Dear Mike ,
Luckily, this year , National Day and Mid-autumn Day are
on the same day in China .So we have 8 days off.
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
____Welcome to China._________________________________________
Best wishes
yours,Daming
写作五步法
审
列
necessary
If possible
连
加
美
善用高级词汇
活用多种句型
妙用引文和例子
巧用关联词
首
尾
美
Topic主题：
Type体裁：
Person人称：
Tense时态：
Structure结构：
Before writing
National Day Holiday
记述文
第一人称
一般过去时
Beginning开头
Main body正文
Ending结尾
重点
注意：1.词数：60-80词；
2. 用since ,before,while, when,after, as soon as 等词引导的状语从句
when activities feelings
first day( Mid-autumn Day) visited grandparents,
had a big dinner together,went shopping------ meaningful and happy
second day visited Yandang Mountain
tired but excited
the following days stayed at home relaxed
次要
写出假期的活动和感想（main body)
8m
请用before, after, as soon as, when,
while, until 等引导的状语从句来谈谈
大明在中秋节的活动。
After we had the dinner, my cousins and I
went to the cinema.
As soon as I came back home, I played
computer games with my brother.
加首尾，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。
可以在段首加上总起句.
（topic sentence)
常用连接词或短语
并列
转折
先后顺序
总结归纳
and, or
but, however
in a word, in short, all in all
first/ second/ then/what’s more/ finally.
1m
请把下列句子加上你认为有必要的连词或短语
1.After we had the dinner, my cousins and I
went to the cinema.
The film was very boring, I couldn't wait to
leave.
2.During the following days, I only stayed at home ,
we couldn't go to other cities.
3.I wanted to improve my English, I listened
to English songs every day.
But
because
In order to
因果/目的
时间状语从句条件
not---until\
before\after\
as soon as
while \when\since
because, so, in order to …
Make your compositions perfect
宾语从句
that\ if …
All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.
Reading makes a full man.
阅读使人充实。
只工作不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻。
It is better to travel ten thousand miles
than to read ten thousand books.
读万卷书不如行万里路。
恰当的谚语格言会让你的文章更完美
East or west,home is the best.
金窝银窝不如我的狗窝。
美
连
加
列
审
写作指导
人称:________________ 时态:__________
体裁：______
一般过去时
第一人称
记叙文
and, too，as well, first,third
then/what’s more/besides finally.
连接词、过渡句
高级词汇： enjoyable , colorful, meaningful
高级句型及引用语 as a saying goes that…
We all know that…
状语从句 、宾语从句
内容、加首尾 beginning & ending
要点（key points）
写作五步法
1.和爷爷奶奶一起过中秋
2.到雁荡山旅游
朗读自己的文章，按照习作评价标准表的项目进行自我修正，
并按下表要求完成自评任务.
项目 自评角度 完成任务打√，未完成任务打χ
整体
结构完整
要点齐全
细节 拼写正确
状语从句
标点符号
人称时态
书写工整
项目 标准 同伴评价 师评
结构（3分） 段落合理 （2 分）
衔接自然，有连词 ( 1分)
内容（8分） 要点全面 介绍自己的假期经历（4分）
我的假期感受（4分）
拓展合理 ( 1分)
语言（3分） 词汇丰富 (1 分)
句法正确,有状语从句( 2分)
卷面（1分） 书写工整（ 1分）
总分（15分）
习作作者：___________ , 同伴评价者:___________
好词好句摘录：______________________________________
experience
when
who
where
how
feeling
what
Homework
Finish your writing
level A ：Polish your writing(给你的文章润色）
level B: Write a composition about your vocation experience according to the mind-map.
完成作文自评和他评表格
Thanksgiving is an American festival.We have celebrated the festival _______the first pioneers from England arrived in America by ship in the 17th century. ______ they were crossing Atlantic, many people_____, and after they landed, their first winter was worse than any English winter.The local people, the Native Americans ,taught them how to ______corn. The ________year they celebrated together by _______a dinner of the new food.
We still celebrate Thanksgiving today with a traditional dinner. On that day, we all help prepare the food. We_____ the table, and then before we begin dinner, my father gives _________for the food. We usually eat too much. We often talk a lot and tell stories after dinner as well. When it is all _______, everyone helps wash the_______
Fill in the blanks with the correct forms.
.
while, over, grow, following, lay, dish，since, thanks, eat, die
今年的国庆节和中秋节是同一天，假设你是大明，你的笔友Mike想知道你是如何度过这次假期的。请写一封e-mail给他。内容包括:
注意：1.词数：60-100词
2. 用since ,before,while, when,after, as soon as等引导的状语从句
when activities feelings
first day( Mid-autumn Day) visited grandparents,
had a big dinner together,go shopping---- meaningful and happy
second day visited Yandang Mountain
tired but excited
the following days stayed at home relaxed
Dear Mike ,
Luckily, this year , National Day and Mid-autumn Day are
on the same day in China .So we have 8 days off.
_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
____Welcome to China._________________________________________
Best wishes
yours,Daming