中考英语话题写作指导与训练课件19张

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话题写作指导与训练
Warming up
What activities do you remind about daily routines
get up
go to bed
brush teeth
wash hands and face
go to school/work
take a shower
have breakfast/lunch/dinner
watch TV
do housework
do some reading
go shopping
What activities do you remind about daily routines
have classes
do homework
play basketball/football...
draw pictures
play the piano
listen to music
do exercise
take for a walk
have a birthday party
visit grandparents
go out with friends
go to the movies
have a birthday party
have a picnic
go fishing/hiking/camping
What activities do you remind about daily routines
Daily Routines
have to do
be interested in
weekdays
weekends
Writing progress：
relaxing？
exciting？
tiring
Step1: According to the writing requirements,
choose proper activities you want to describe .
根据写作要求选择恰当的描述内容。
Step2: Make your sentences longer by adding more information.
通过补充信息扩写句子。
describe daily routines
WH questions help
What do you usually do in your free time
What time do you …
Who do you … with
Where do you …
How long do you …
How often do you …
…
I read books __________.
I read books with my father for half an hour
in the living room every day.
I always read books in my free time. I usually
enjoy reading with my family at home. I often discuss the books I read with my parents as well. Sometimes I would like to read in the library because there are all kinds of book which even just comes out.
Step3: Make your pasage logical and specific by using adverbs of frequence.
通过使用频度副词增强文章的逻辑性，描述更具体真实。
feelings advantages
I read books on the bed before going to bed every day.
I think reading books is relaxing and helpful.
Reading books not only helps me open up my eyes to
the outside world, but also makes me relaxed.
It’s relaxing and helpful to read books.
It’s a good way for me to relax.
Reading books every day is a good habit.
1＋n拓展( n≦3)
Step4: Present your comments or feelings with supportive information.
通过支撑性信息丰富你的评价或者观点。
Why
feelings advantages disadvantages
healthy or unhealthy
surf the Internet
I usually
at home when I finish
my homework.
I can get the latest news by surfing
on the Internet.
And I can communicate with my
friends on QQ.
But it’s easy for students to fall
into bad habits if they surf the Internet too much.
Step5: Make sure the accuracy of your language.
确保语言表达的准确性。
1. As a boy, like other boys, I look forward to ______(stay) home alone one day.
2. On weekdays I am always busy with my schoolwork. On weekends, I usually_______ (spend) time with my family.
3. I'm having a great time ______ (do) sports on the playground with my classmates.
4. I realised _______ (be) home alone was not always perfect.
5. My daily life is full of pleasure/happiness /love.
6. It's important _______ (depend) on yourself, not to depend on others.
7. I have a busy______(and/but)happy weekend
8. In my opinion, doing sports is a good way______(relax)
staying
spend
doing
being
to do
but
to relax
佳句欣赏与模仿
1. My clock rings so loudly that it will certainly wake me up.【so … that … 如此……以致于……】
我们是如此地开心以至于忘记了时间。
_________________________________________
We were so happy that we forgot the time.
2. As a boy, like all other boys, I wanted to be a man.
【as … 作为……】
作为一个孩子，像其他孩子一样，我每年都期待着我的生日。
________________________________________
________________________________________
As a kid / child, like all other kids, I look forward to my
birthday every year.
3. As soon as I got home from school the first day, I
happily threw my schoolbag on the sofa.
【as soon as 一……就……】
我通常放学一回家就练习钢琴。
_______________________________________
_______________________________________
I usually practise the piano as soon as I come back home from school.
4. I realised being home alone was not always perfect.【realise + 句子 …… 意识到……】
他意识到做任何事靠自己是很重要的。________________________________________
He realised it was very important to do anything
by himself.
I watch TV with my father for half an hour every day.
I _______ TV with my father for half an hour
yesterday.
watched
I _____________ TV with my father for half an hour
now.
am watching
I ________________ TV with my father for half an hour tomorrow.
am going to watch
Step5: Make sure the accuracy of your language.
确保语言表达的准确性。
A. 介绍你的日常生活
B. 描述（上个周末）的活动
C. 制定接下来的生活计划
三、写作范例
假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom很想知道中国中学生的课余生活，请写一封信向他介绍你丰富的课余日常生活， 请写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于110词的邮件。
Writing example：
I have a busy but colourful life. I know how to look after myself. I always get up early in the morning, and I hardly ever stay up late at night. I usually finish my homework before 8:30 and read books on the bed before going to bed.
I have a busy but colourful life. I know how to look after myself. I always get up early in the morning, and I hardly ever stay up late at night. I usually finish my homework before 8:30 and read books on the bed before going to bed. I usually go to bed at about ten o’clock on weekdays.
PART1
三、写作范例
假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Tom很想知道中国中学生的课余生活，请写一封信向他介绍你丰富的课余日常生活， 请写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于110词的邮件。
It’s my favourite time to read books. Because reading can open up my eyes and travel on the book. I usually go to bed at about ten o’clock. I think I sleep well. Having enough sleep helps me study well. On weekends I always help my mother do some housework at home. I realise helping mother do housework is necessary.
PART 2
【写作微技能小贴士】
书信是人们在日常生活和工作中进行交际的工具之一，也是中考书面表达中常见的考试文体。写信的一般格式包括：称呼、主体和落款。
1. 称呼一般用Dear / Hi开头，与左边线对齐，称呼后常用逗号。
2. 正文是书信的主体部分，另起一行，可缩进式或齐头式，内容要简洁，注意得体地运用语言。
常用开头语有：How is it going / Is everything OK / I am glad / sorry that you ...
常用结束语有：
Best wishes for you! / I am looking forward to hearing from you./Wish you a happy holiday!
3. 落款：Yours truly, Yours sincerely, Love, Yours, 接着偏右下角署名。
你校将举行“中华好少年(China’s Good Children)”竞选活动，假如你是李娜，候选人之一，请你以电子邮件的形式写一封自我推荐信给组织者Mr. Chen，介绍你在紧张学习之外的精彩的课余生活。
内容包括：1. 健康合理的作息时间；2. 丰富多彩的周末活动；3. 感受。
要求：
1. 文章通顺、流畅，语言丰富；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 所提供词汇仅供参考，考生可自由发挥；
4. 词数：110词左右，除已给的开头和结尾部分。
参考词汇：get up, do housework, help, as, how to, so ... that ..., realize, exciting
实战演练
参考范文
Hi Tom,
I’m glad to tell you about my birthday.
As a boy, like all other boys, I always look forward to my birthday every year. I usually celebrate it with my friends. On my birthday, I usually hold a party. My parents usually prepare lots of food for me. I often make cakes with my mother. I think making cakes is an interesting thing. As soon as my friends get to the house, we start to sing birthday songs. And we eat cakes and noodles. Also, we play games such as cards and computer games, and watch videos. We are so happy that we often forget the time.
The most exciting moment is receiving gifts from my friends. My favourite present is a book that Lucy gave to me about how to make progress. The book teaches me how to be confident and patient. It is helpful for both my study and life.
I hope you can tell me about your birthday. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes for you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点点拨】
本文内容充实，思路清晰，整体布局合理。开头自然地引入自己过生日的主题，描述自己过生日时的情景，比较有画面感。在写为什么最喜欢的生日礼物是一本书时，理由也很充分。文中的双画线部分语言最值得我们借鉴。