2021-2022学年高中英语二轮写作专项训练概要写作 课件（28张ppt)
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English Writing Course
Summary Writing
Kevin
Nov. 2021
考情分析
浙江省5年10次高考（2016-2021）
8次读后续写（2016.10，2017.6，2017.11，2018.6，2020.1，2020.7，2021.1，2021.6）
2次概要写作（2018.11，2019.6）
考续写可能性较大；考概要写作可能性较小
考概要平均分相对较低，140以上高分较少
同一届两次作文形式保持一致可能性较大
读后续写与概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》（高考综合改革试验省份试用）
浙江高考概要写作题
概要写作题目要求
概要写作评分标准
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于40和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性；
（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
概要写作各档次评分标准
档 次 描 述
第五档 （21-25分） 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。使所有完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的语言。
第四档 （16-20分） 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但完全不影响意义表达。应用语句间的连接成分，使上下文连贯。有个别整句抄自原文。
第三档 （11-15分） 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点。有些语法结构和词汇错误，但不影响意义表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第二档 （6-10分） 理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点。有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第一档 （1-5分） 没有正确理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符。有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。多个句子抄自原文。
0分 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
概要写作评分标准
概要写作评分标准第五档（21∽25分）
理解准确，涵盖全部要点
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，使所有完成的概要结构紧凑。
完全使用了自己的语言。
概要写作总体策略
准确理解原文
主题句和关键词
删除非必要细节
使用自己语言和连接词
浙江高考样题
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people，is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
梳理要点
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people，is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
Para.1
在大多数人看来，去除污垢是一好事，然而，对于污垢的态度并不是一成不变的。
大意
转化
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people，is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
Attitudes towards dirt are always changing.
梳理要点
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
Para.2
历史上很长一段时间，生活在欧洲的人们会认为皮肤上的污垢能保护他们免于生病。
大意
For a long time in history, Europeans believed that dirt protected them from diseases.
转化
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
梳理要点
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far
Para.3
18世纪以来人们开始改变他们的态度，认为去除污垢可以保持健康，然而后来干净的标准似乎超越了科学的范畴。
大意
Since the 1700s, people’s attitude to dirt has changed, believing that washing dirt off benefits health. But seemingly people tend to value cleanness too much.
转化
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far
梳理要点
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
Para.4
如今，人们对污垢的态度仍然有很大的不同。免疫学家鼓励孩子们去接触污垢，因为这样有助于提高免疫力。
大意
Still different as attitudes to dirt are today, some scientists advocate children being exposed to dirt to improve immunity.
转化
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
联句成篇
Attitudes towards dirt are always changing. (要点1) For a long time in history, Europeans believed that dirt protected them from diseases. (要点2) However, since the 1700s, people’s attitude to dirt has changed, believing that washing dirt off benefits health. But seemingly, people tend to value cleanness too much. (要点3) Still different as attitudes to dirt are today, some scientists advocate children being exposed to dirt to improve immunity. (要点4) （65 words）
Version 1
联句成篇
People have mixed opinions about dirt on our skin. (要点1) For a long time in history, people living in European countries like France believed that dirt protected them from getting ill. (要点2) However, people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 hundred years ago. People have been informed that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) Yet, some scientists believe that being exposed to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点4)（73 words）
Version 2
概要写作“一定要”
1.准确理解原文是关键
2.以自然段为单位概括要点
3.删除非必要细节
4.核心词不必替换
5.写作时句式多样化
6.完全使用自己语言
7.恰当使用连接词。
使用连接词
功能 举 例
时间 first of all, next, then, later, afterwards, in the end, at last, eventually
并列 Besides, in addition, moreover, furthermore
转折 but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless, instead
因果 because, since, owing to, as a result of, due to, therefore, thus
让步 though, although, even if/though, despite
条件 if, unless, as long as, on condition that, only if, considering
对比 By/in contrast (to), instead of, rather than, while, compared to…
概要写作“一定不要”
不要使用第一人称
不要加入自己观点
不要对原文进行评论
不要添加任何无关信息
使用自己语言
1.同义替换法
观点
opinions
views
viewpoints
points of view
standpoints
变化
change
turn
vary
transform
differ
使用自己语言
2.正话反说法
He didn’t pass the exam.
He failed the exam.
The government doesn’t approve of the proposal.
The government opposes the proposal.
使用自己语言
2.词性转换法
Patience is very important.
Patience is of great importance.
Although his idea isn’t accepted, he didn’t give up.
Despite the refusal of his idea, he didn’t give up.
使用自己语言
3.改变句式法
People tend to pay much attention to their appearances.
Much attention tends to be paid to appearances.
主动变被动
使用自己语言
3.改变句式法
People believe/think that …
It is believed/thought that…
形式主语+被动
使用自己语言
3.改变句式法
It not only makes a big difference but also offers a good chance to the young.
Not only does it have a great influence but it also provides a golden opportunity for young people.
正装变倒装
使用自己语言
3.改变句式法
They didn’t pay much attention to the warning and led to a disaster.
They ignored the warning, which resulted in a disaster.
并列句变复合句
Their neglect of the warning resulted in a disaster.
并列句变简单句
使用自己语言
4.单词短语互换法
notice --- be aware of --- realize…
value --- attach importance to…
grab the opportunity --- jump at the opportunity
10 percent --- 1 out of 10 --- 1 in 10
in the 20th century --- in the 1900s/1900’s
…
Thanks for your attention!
English Writing Course
Summary Writing
Kevin
Nov. 2021
考情分析
浙江省5年10次高考（2016-2021）
8次读后续写（2016.10，2017.6，2017.11，2018.6，2020.1，2020.7，2021.1，2021.6）
2次概要写作（2018.11，2019.6）
考续写可能性较大；考概要写作可能性较小
考概要平均分相对较低，140以上高分较少
同一届两次作文形式保持一致可能性较大
读后续写与概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用
《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》（高考综合改革试验省份试用）
浙江高考概要写作题
概要写作题目要求
概要写作评分标准
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于40和多于80的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；
（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；
（3）上下文的连贯性；
（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
概要写作各档次评分标准
档 次 描 述
第五档 （21-25分） 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，有效地使用了语句间的连接成分。使所有完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的语言。
第四档 （16-20分） 理解准确，涵盖全部要点。所使用的语法结构和词汇虽有错误，但完全不影响意义表达。应用语句间的连接成分，使上下文连贯。有个别整句抄自原文。
第三档 （11-15分） 理解较为准确，涵盖大部分要点。有些语法结构和词汇错误，但不影响意义表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第二档 （6-10分） 理解有误差，仅涵盖半数要点。有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象。
第一档 （1-5分） 没有正确理解原文，造成概要内容与原文主题不符。有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。多个句子抄自原文。
0分 白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
概要写作评分标准
概要写作评分标准第五档（21∽25分）
理解准确，涵盖全部要点
能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇
有效地使用了词语间的连接成分，使所有完成的概要结构紧凑。
完全使用了自己的语言。
概要写作总体策略
准确理解原文
主题句和关键词
删除非必要细节
使用自己语言和连接词
浙江高考样题
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people，is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
梳理要点
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people，is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
Para.1
在大多数人看来，去除污垢是一好事，然而，对于污垢的态度并不是一成不变的。
大意
转化
Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people，is a good thing. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.
Attitudes towards dirt are always changing.
梳理要点
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
Para.2
历史上很长一段时间，生活在欧洲的人们会认为皮肤上的污垢能保护他们免于生病。
大意
For a long time in history, Europeans believed that dirt protected them from diseases.
转化
In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in. A particular danger was thought to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the King of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a friendly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman had taken a bath, the King ordered that，to avoid the attack of disease，the nobleman should not go out.
梳理要点
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far
Para.3
18世纪以来人们开始改变他们的态度，认为去除污垢可以保持健康，然而后来干净的标准似乎超越了科学的范畴。
大意
Since the 1700s, people’s attitude to dirt has changed, believing that washing dirt off benefits health. But seemingly people tend to value cleanness too much.
转化
Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived，dirt has no longer been regarded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18th century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning away dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: Clothes need to be whiter than white，cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far
梳理要点
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
Para.4
如今，人们对污垢的态度仍然有很大的不同。免疫学家鼓励孩子们去接触污垢，因为这样有助于提高免疫力。
大意
Still different as attitudes to dirt are today, some scientists advocate children being exposed to dirt to improve immunity.
转化
Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) position is gaining some ground.
联句成篇
Attitudes towards dirt are always changing. (要点1) For a long time in history, Europeans believed that dirt protected them from diseases. (要点2) However, since the 1700s, people’s attitude to dirt has changed, believing that washing dirt off benefits health. But seemingly, people tend to value cleanness too much. (要点3) Still different as attitudes to dirt are today, some scientists advocate children being exposed to dirt to improve immunity. (要点4) （65 words）
Version 1
联句成篇
People have mixed opinions about dirt on our skin. (要点1) For a long time in history, people living in European countries like France believed that dirt protected them from getting ill. (要点2) However, people began to change their attitudes towards dirt about 200 hundred years ago. People have been informed that washing dirt off our body can keep us healthy. (要点3) Yet, some scientists believe that being exposed to some dirt may help our immune system. (要点4)（73 words）
Version 2
概要写作“一定要”
1.准确理解原文是关键
2.以自然段为单位概括要点
3.删除非必要细节
4.核心词不必替换
5.写作时句式多样化
6.完全使用自己语言
7.恰当使用连接词。
使用连接词
功能 举 例
时间 first of all, next, then, later, afterwards, in the end, at last, eventually
并列 Besides, in addition, moreover, furthermore
转折 but, however, on the contrary, nevertheless, instead
因果 because, since, owing to, as a result of, due to, therefore, thus
让步 though, although, even if/though, despite
条件 if, unless, as long as, on condition that, only if, considering
对比 By/in contrast (to), instead of, rather than, while, compared to…
概要写作“一定不要”
不要使用第一人称
不要加入自己观点
不要对原文进行评论
不要添加任何无关信息
使用自己语言
1.同义替换法
观点
opinions
views
viewpoints
points of view
standpoints
变化
change
turn
vary
transform
differ
使用自己语言
2.正话反说法
He didn’t pass the exam.
He failed the exam.
The government doesn’t approve of the proposal.
The government opposes the proposal.
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2.词性转换法
Patience is very important.
Patience is of great importance.
Although his idea isn’t accepted, he didn’t give up.
Despite the refusal of his idea, he didn’t give up.
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3.改变句式法
People tend to pay much attention to their appearances.
Much attention tends to be paid to appearances.
主动变被动
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3.改变句式法
People believe/think that …
It is believed/thought that…
形式主语+被动
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3.改变句式法
It not only makes a big difference but also offers a good chance to the young.
Not only does it have a great influence but it also provides a golden opportunity for young people.
正装变倒装
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3.改变句式法
They didn’t pay much attention to the warning and led to a disaster.
They ignored the warning, which resulted in a disaster.
并列句变复合句
Their neglect of the warning resulted in a disaster.
并列句变简单句
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4.单词短语互换法
notice --- be aware of --- realize…
value --- attach importance to…
grab the opportunity --- jump at the opportunity
10 percent --- 1 out of 10 --- 1 in 10
in the 20th century --- in the 1900s/1900’s
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