2022届高三英语二轮复习：概要写作 如何灵活多样的表达要点 课件（28张ppt）

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如何灵活多样的表达要点
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① the motto “never give up ”helps one keep courage in the face of difficulties.
2.his work greatly affected me .
3,he is eager for success.
4.carelessness often leads to errors.
5.the most effecctive and lasting way to have welfare is to actively cultivate a sense of happiness.
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6. he thinks that he has the ability to get along well with others.
7.i decidedd to serve the people heart and soul.
8.some argue that sports stars do nothinng to society apart from entertaining.
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① it is well known that relating well to others is helpful for people to achieve professional success.
2.working hard at school is an important task for students.
3.if they focus on work ,problems like neglecting the family ,may arise.
4.he booked a table for ten/
5.it is obvious that i will help you
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6, it is common that our life is affected by other people aroud us .
7.however , we can still be our own masters by ignoring opinions of others.
8.that ‘s because we attach great importance to being arrproved of by them.
9.with the developmentt of technology ,peolpe have fewer opportunities to socialize in person,
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① without doubt, humans should be protect aniitfrom disappearing
2. the harmony between humans and nature is important in the modern world today.
3.it is clear that 2015 has taken the place of 2014 to be the warmest year .
4.the flood accounted for the bad crop
5. you will have to account for the disappeance of the money.
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6.the traffic accident arose from drunk driving.
7.the beatuy of the city consists in its magnificent buildings
8.the committee consists of ten members
9,there was not enough food in the village
10.the room are equipped with video cameras .
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①pressure caused by too much homework might lead to negative results .
2,physical exercise can help students decrease stress
3. cheating on exams has a bad effect .
4.preschool education has aroused wide concern.
5.parents spoilig explains the phenomenon.
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①for years ,psychologists have done much study oon buyer’s market.
2.not everyone is wealthy enough to buy all the good things on show in the market,
3.advertising serves as an instrument to appeal to customers .
4.our appetite for new producs also contributes to the problem.
5.buying products online is becoming more and more popular nowadays as more varieties are available at a relatively lower price.
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6.besides , advertising has a large influence on the decisions made by people .
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6.their goal will be difficult to achieve , but they said it is better t try and get as close as they could .
th7.a study shows that our body clock can be improved through camping , thus improving our sleeping quality.
8.though many students are more and more aware of their health,
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①though emojis make our interaction more colorful , it is unnclear whether they are taking the place of the conventional writing.
2.experts suggest teenagers sleep 8 to 10 hours a day so as to be negatively influenced .
3.thus , parents should keep happy.
4.8 to 10 hours is necessary for high school students and insufficient sleep has harmful impacts on both physcial conditions .
5.ever since she bought a smart phone , she has been attracted to the device.
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6.the scientists succeded in their research because they used new approaches and methods.
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①one of the biggest causes of unhealthy eating habits is the desire to lose weight .
2.however , some chemicals in these products acctually will bring negative effects on people ‘s physical health.
3.some creams are unable to give adequate protection against UV light
4.apart from the physical aspect of helath problem , it will also lead to emotional problems
5,people have many good reasons to object ot somoking in public places
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3.A healthy diet can equip us with a strong and healthy body
A healthy diet makes us strong and healthy.
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①There is no doubt that the celebrity spokespeople could promote the sale of a product.
② In order to keep our health , we should take more healthy food into
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③The company ‘s promise to satisfy customers’ need is important to its
success in sales promotion.
Undoubtedly, the celebrity spokespeople could boost the sale of a product.
To maintain our health, we should consider more healthy food .
The company’s commitment to guaranteeing customers satisfaction is vital to its sales promotion.
① You can obtain a large amount of information on the internet nowadays.
2.Make sure that you have 8 hours’ sleep.
8 hours’ sleep must be
3These days, football is one of the most popular sports in the world.
Abundant information is available on the internet.
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-- enjoys great popularity, is well-received,
-- global/ globally, worldwide, universal/ universally
Football, enjoys great popularity worldwide
① If things are not properly dealt with , our labor will be totally lost.
4If things are not properly , our labor will be totally lost.
5In the United States , everyone can buy guns.
.In the United States , guns are to everyone.
6.With a growing number of people sharing information online , its positive side stands out.
With an incresing of people sharing information online, some active factors gradually appear.
sharing online information ,which enjoys growing poopularity ,is beneficial.
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7 I believe televison influences our community in a negative way.
8.They start to pick up the habit of characters on the show.
8.They start to the habit of characters on the show.
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I hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively.
① I have a preference for a basic mobile phone though it is not as advanced as a smartphone.
2.It is of great importance to keep a balanced diet as well as a healthy eating habit .
3.All members shoud be equally treated .
All members should receive .
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I prefer to use an ordinary cell phone compared to a smartphone.
A balanced diet and a healthy eating habit are important.
equal treatment
The book is a reflection of Chinese society in the 1930s.
we found it difficult to solve this complicated problem.
what he had said left a deep impression on me .
school buses are safe for the environment
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The book reflects Chinse society in the 1930s.
we found difficulty in solving this complicated problem.
His words deeply impressed me.
School buses are environmentally safe
1.改变语态
Parents should give children more praise.
We are goint to discuss this problem in the meeting.
3.句式改变法
Children should be given more praise .
This problem is going to be discussed in the meeting.
2.使用不定式
it is difficult and i can’t finish it
We are goint to discuss this problem in the meeting.
3.句式改变法
I find it difficult to finish it .
This problem is going to be discussed in the meeting.
3.使用定语从句
Mr smith is our boss. He will leave for Japan next week.
Mr.smith , who is our boss ,will leave for Japan next week.
1.I totally agree .
2.Health is the most valuable thing.
I couldn’t agree more .
4.正话反说
Nothing is more valuable than health.
1women don’t have equal rights in some ccountries .
2.without advertising ,it will be very difficult for customers to judge the value of a product.
Women fail to get equal rights in some countries.
5.反话正说
with advertising , it will easy for customers to judeg the value of a product.
Thank You!