2022届新高考二轮复习新题型专项练习4
——读后续写(人际沟通)
1. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Several years ago I worked in an international company selling computer devices. At the time I had to travel around the country as a part of my work. I remember clearly that I was at a stage of my life where I only cared about how to earn more money.
Once, I went to the airport to take a bus to downtown as usual. The routine was as follows; get into the city, take the bus to the hotel, visit the customer, work late, take the bus back to the airport and fly back... Somehow, that day I decided to take the stairs down to a different exit, where I found a beautiful garden I had never seen before. I waited there and enjoyed the scenery until the bus came.
I was used to the seat behind the driver. However, that day I sat on a seat in the middle and a boy was seated next to me and he was carrying a great many suitcases. He turned to me suddenly and gave me one of the most sincere smiles I had ever seen from a stranger. He said warmly, "Hi, the perfect day is in the perfect place, isn't it "
I remember saying to myself—this must be one of the typical people who were young and just thought everything in the world was beautiful and easy. Why was he annoying me when I just wanted to enjoy the bus ride But out of politeness, I answered, "Really perfect! Did your dear parents pay for you to have some vacations on the beach " "No, I don't have parents and I'm not here for vacation." He shook his head instantly, "I'm here to achieve my biggest dream. Actually, I'm on the way to the army school where my grandfather studied a long time ago."
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
"I lost my dad 8 years ago and then my mom married again," he said.
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He told me that for 8 years, he had only one thing in his mind—to join the army school like his grandfather. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
At noon that day, I drove back home early. Just as I entered the living room, I heard a gentle sound coming from the bedroom upstairs—it was the sound of my favorite violin. "Thief!" I thought to myself.
I dashed upstairs. Sure enough, as expected, a boy of about 12 years old was petting my violin. The boy had messy hair and a thin face, his oversized coat seemingly filled with something. At first glance, I found a new pair of shoes missing. It seemed that he was surely a thief.
Then, I saw his eyes full of fear and despair. My anger was immediately replaced by a smile. I asked, "Are you Mr. Ram's nephew, Michael I'm his housekeeper. Two years ago, I heard his nephew living in the countryside would come. It must be you."
On hearing my words, the boy was astonished, but then he said quickly, "Has my uncle gone out I think I'd better first go out for a walk and visit him in a while."
I nodded and asked the boy who was preparing to put down the violin, "Do you like to play the violin so much "
"Yes, but I'm so poor that I can't afford one," the boy replied.
"Then, I give this violin to you." The boy looked at me doubtfully, but he picked up the violin. Going out to the living room, he suddenly saw on the wall my huge color photo I performed in the Sydney Opera House. He involuntarily trembled for a moment and ran out without looking back.
I was sure that the boy had understood what happened because no one would decorate the living room with the housekeeper's photo.
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
A few years later, I was invited to be a judge at a music competition of senior high school students. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After the competition, "Michael" ran to me, holding a violin box.
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A little boy and his grandmother came to see Santa at Mayfair Mall in Wisconsin. The child climbed up on Santa Claus's lap holding a picture of a little girl.
"Who is this " asked Santa, smiling. "Your friend Your sister "
"Yes, Santa," he replied.
"My sister, Sarah, who is very sick," the boy said sadly.
Santa glanced over at the grandmother who was waiting nearby and saw her wiping her eyes with a tissue.
"She wanted to come with me to see you very much, Santa!" the child shouted.
"She misses you," he added softly.
Santa tried to cheer the boy up, asking him what he wanted Santa to bring him for Christmas.
When they finished their talk, the grandmother came over to help the child get off his lap, and started to say something to Santa, but halted (停顿).
"What is it " Santa asked warmly.
"Well, I know it's really too much to ask you, Santa, but..." The girl in the photograph is my granddaughter. You see... she has leukemia(白血病)and isn't expected to make it even through the holidays," she said through tear-filled eyes.
"Is there any way, Santa, any possible way that you could come to see Sarah
All she's asked for. for Christmas. is to see Santa.
Santa blinked. swallowed hard and told to the woman to leave information with his elves(小精灵)as to where Sarah was, saying he would see what he could do. Santa thought of nothing else for the rest of that afternoon. "What if it were MY child lying in that hospital bed, dying " he thought with a sinking heart.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Santa knew what he had to do.
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4. 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was a cold, snowy evening. Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination----the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago he saw figurines(小塑像) of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to fulfil his little dream. He was so excited and barely noticing the world around him. Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the pavement, her back against the wall. He murmured(低语) "sorry" and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop, he went straight to the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more----all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy he reached for Spiderman.
"You like these, true believer "
Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.
"Y-yes, …Yes, they're awesome!" answered Tommy. "They're strong and fast and help other people a lot ..."the boy looked at figurines in admiration. "I wish I could be a superhero too."
"Then become one!" said the old man.
"How " Tommy asked in surprise. "I don't have any superpowers."
"And why would you need them " the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy's face, he squatted(蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy's arms. "Did you know that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person ---" he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. "He's a firefighter; he's saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be."
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. "You don't need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart."
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
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Justin and Mary woke up early, even though they were vacationing at their uncle's lake house. The night before, Uncle Thomas told them about the Foggy Figure that haunts(经常出没于) the lake. Justin and Mary were determined to see the ghostly creature before their vacation was over.
"Is it foggy outside " Mary asked, as Justin carefully looked out of the window.
"Yup! Let's go!" Justin let go of the curtain and rushed to the door with Mary.
It was only 5:00 am, so everyone else in the house was still asleep. As they moved quietly through the kitchen to the back door, Mary sniffed the air. It had the faint scent(香味) of coffee and something sweet. A sense of hunger struck her. "Maybe we should first have breakfast," she thought. But she still followed Justin out the door, down the back steps, and out onto the boat dock(码头). The fog had settled over the lake, making it impossible to see anything.
"Do you see anything " Mary asked, moving forward for a closer look.
"Nothing. Do you think Uncle Thomas was just trying to scare us with that story "
Uncle Thomas did have a good imagination. He'd been telling Justin and Mary stories for years, but this was the first scary story. Mary had a feeling that it wasn't made up.
Mary shook her head. "Remember what Uncle Thomas said The Foggy Figure haunts the lake. We're on the dock. Maybe that's why we can't see him. The people in the story were in boats."
"You want to take a boat ride on the water " Justin asked.
Mary looked around, trying to find Uncle Thomas's boat, but the fog was too thick.
"Mom and Dad will be really angry if we go out on the lake alone in this fog," Justin said.
Mary shrugged(耸肩). "Maybe we don't have to go anywhere. We could sit in the boat while it's docked. That wouldn't be dangerous."
"Okay." Justin moved towards the end of the dock. He could barely see the outline of the boat. "I'll go first."
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Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Mary's hand. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then
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6. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Barry, a promising young man, made a hit recently. His boss awarded him a nice car for the contribution he made to the company. With the new car shining, he could not wait to have a ride, and try its speed.
Barry was used to a fast-paced life and did not like the way his parents lived. "Slow down." "Watch your step." These words in his eyes, meant nothing to a big guy in big cities. He really had benefited a lot since he left his hometown for this city: houses, money and this prize car. For these, he had to work around the clock.
While driving, he recalled the days and nights that made what he is now. "Busy hours behind, cozy life ahead. Bugs beneath the mud, rockets in the sky." Being a happy man, he rapped all the way and drove his car fast down the neighborhood street.
Everything went quite smoothly at first, but then the road was becoming rougher.
"Nothing to worry about, man," Barry said to himself, speeding down the street.
"Watch out!" There seemed a shout somewhere.
"I am good!" Barry comforted himself as he always did in such situations.
Suddenly, he noticed a figure, who was trying to throw something at him. The next moment, a stone crashed into its back door on the right. Shocked, he pulled up and jumped out, only to find a large dent (凹坑) in his car. A few steps away stood an old man.
"What's wrong with you " Barry shouted at him. "Oh, my car!"
"Calm down, young man," the old man replied.
"Calm down You made that dent in my car!"
"Sorry, nothing else I could do," the old man pointed over Barry's shoulder. "Look!"
Barry turned around, and was surprised to find a big hole on the wall of a house a few yards away. "This road is not designed for speeding. The other day, a car rushed into the house, " the old man added. "No one was dead, but the driver of your age was badly hurt."
注意:续写词数应为150左右。
Staring at the big black hole, Barry broke out in a cold sweat.
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Several years ago, as I was on a business trip from San Francisco to New Orleans, I noticed I would have some time at the airport in Dallas before catching my connecting flight. So I called my friend Luke who lived in Dallas. "Luke, I've got an hour-and-a-half stop at the airport. If you can come out, I'll treat you to dinner." Luke enthusiastically agreed.
When the pilot announced that our fight would be delayed an extra few minutes in San Francisco, I became upset. Every minute that passed was one minute less that I would be able to spend with my friend. The plane arrived in Dallas an hour late. That left me only half an hour to stay with Luke and I still needed time to catch my connecting fight. At this point, I knew our having dinner together was totally out of the question.
When I stepped off the plane, Luke was there, waiting for me. "Hey, Luke," I said apologetically. "Thanks for coming out to meet me. I hope you didn't have to wait here too long."
"Oh, no problem," he replied easily. "I called ahead and found out your plane was going to be late."
"Oh, good," I replied. "Look, I'm really sorry about dinner, but I'll owe you one next e on, we'll find out what gate my next plane is leaving from. We can head over there together and talk a bit."
"I am very interested in having dinner with you," he said to me.
"The only way you're going to have dinner with me tonight is that you buy a plane ticket to New Orleans!"
"We're having dinner," replied Luke with determination. "Believe me. I have this whole thing arranged. Just follow me."
He picked up one of my bags and carried it out through the security check. The two of us hurried down a short flight of stairs in the parking garage and walked rapidly along several rows of cars until we came to the place where Luke's car was parked.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式作答。
I immediately noticed, in the parking space next to his car, a folding table.
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My parents love the saying "If at first you don't succeed, try, try again" so much that they even bought a pillow with those words on it. But I was recently in a situation where I was SO ready to give up.
It started last week when my friend Ollie and I were helping his grandmother Mary to carry boxes from her garage to her car for the homeless shelter rummage sale (义卖).
At the sight of a big old trunk (行李箱),we asked Mary what was inside. But she told us that as she had lost the key, she had to find a master locksmith to figure it out. "Let me have a try!" said Ollie. "I bet I can open that lock in two minutes flat! Maybe there's a treasure inside, like gold or diamonds or an ancient map!"
Mary smiled. "I'll tell you what. If you two treasure hunters can open this trunk, you can have it, along with whatever is inside."
Ollie got a tool kit and we set out to open the lock. But he definitely lost that bet. Those two minutes turned into two hours, with no luck at all. We had tried every tool in the kit, but the lock wouldn't move slightly.
"It's no use." Ollie sighed. "I guess we have to give up."
"But we can't give up!" I said. "What about 'If at first you don't succeed, try, try again" "
Ollie shook his head. "Unless you know a magical key fairy, we're never getting this unlocked."
Just then, my little brother Tex showed up. He showed great interest in the trunk. "It looks like an upside-down boat! Can I turn it over and pretend I'm sailing in the ocean "
"Sure," Ollie replied. "It's no good for anything else."
"Ahoy!" Tex said, climbing on top after Ollie and I turned it over. "I'm the captain!" He giggled as he jumped up and down. And right then, a screw (螺丝) from a hinge (铰链) came loose and rolled to the floor.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
"That's it! I know how to open it!" said Ollie.
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答案以及解析
1. 答案:
"I lost my dad 8 years ago and then my mom married again," he said. "My stepfather treated me badly and later he threw me out of the house. I've been living all over the country since then and I've learnt a lot from life through these years. Fortunately, I met a lot of kind people." Hearing his words, I was speechless and tears began to roll down my cheeks. To my relief, he continued his story.
He told me that for 8 years, he had only one thing in his mind—to join the army school like his grandfather. "My grandpa was a great general of the army and he left me this," he said proudly, showing me a golden knife. "I have been following my dream these years and I'm happy every day." When the bus reached his stop, he rose from his seat and took all his suitcases, saying goodbye with a big smile. From then on, I always try to do everything with my best smile on my face.
2. 答案:
A few years later, I was invited to be a judge at a music competition of senior high school students. Fascinated by the gentle sound of one participant, I was wholeheartedly impressed by his wonderful performance. As I looked up at the performer, I was astonished to see a thin face, so familiar, yet now lit up with joy and confidence. The "thief"! For an instant, I was amazed that the kindness I offered to cover the boy's misconduct would make such a big difference!
After the competition, "Michael" ran to me, holding a violin box. He asked with a slight tremble in his voice, his face red with excitement, "Sir, do you recognize me The nephew! It's your kindness that lights my life, and so does your violin. Today, I can give back this violin to you without regret..." Tears welled up in my eyes. Never had I anticipated that a tiny white lie would inject such great power into others and change their life.
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Santa knew what he had to do. He drove to the hospital and found out which room Sarah was in. Taking a deep breath, and forcing a smile on his face, he entered the room, saying "Ho, ho, ho! Santa!" Screamed Sarah weakly. Santa rushed to give her a warm hug and a Christmas gift. Now, Sarah," Santa said, "you have job to do, and that is to get well. I expect to see you at Mayfair Mall this time next year!" "Yes, Santa!" Sarah shouted, her eyes bright. Santa kissed her on the forehead and left.
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One year later at Mayfair Mall, a little girl came up to sit on Santa's lap and said, "Hi, Santa! Remember me " "Of course!" Santa answered(as he always does), smiling down at her. "You came to see me in the hospital last year!" Santa's jaw dropped. Tears immediately sprang into his eyes. "Sarah!" he shouted and hugged her tightly. He scarcely recognized her, for her hair was long and her cheeks was rosy-much difference from the girl he had visited a year before. He looked over and saw Sarah's grandmother smiling and wiping her eyes. That was the best Christmas ever for Santa Claus.
4. 答案:
Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. Finally he raised his head. "So I am supposed to..." he stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen. His eyes lit up---- he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. "Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please, "he said, and then returned, food in hand.
The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. "Thank you," she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily --- it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it.
解析:本文讲述了小男孩想要成为超级英雄的故事。 高分句型一:He stopped mid-sentence when he realized that he was alone. 翻译:当他意识到他自己在那的时候,他停住了说了一半的话。 分析:when引导的时间状语从句。 高分句型二:When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. 翻译:当他最后停止的时候,他呼吸很重,但是他并不觉得累。 分析:when引导的时间状语从句。解题方法点拨 (1)品读原文。确定文章线索每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章,找到该篇文章的写作线索。如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等这样有利于考生"顺藤摸瓜(结尾)"。 (2)仔细审题,明确续写要求一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此类短文续写的具体要求,如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示,这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。 (3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。同时结合文章画线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。 (4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句在确定了思路和内容之后。最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性,语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
5. 答案:
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Justin carefully lowered himself into the boat and then reached for Mary's hand. Mary climbed into the boat and sat beside him. She was getting nervous now that they were on the water. "See anything " They looked around, and gradually, the fog began to lift. Mary turned around and screamed. "The Foggy Figure!" It was in the boat with them!
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Justin and Mary hugged each other in fear, but then they heard a laugh. Justin moved towards the Foggy Figure. "Uncle Thomas " "I knew that story would get you two out of bed early enough to take a boat ride with me." Mary sighed, happy there was no Foggy Figure after all. Justin looked relieved, too. Uncle Thomas laughed. "What do you say I packed breakfast for us." Mary smiled. She had smelled the scent of coffee. And Uncle Thomas had packed sweet cakes for them, too. "Let's do it," Mary and Justin said.
6. 答案:
Staring at the big black hole, Barry broke out in a cold sweat. He might have run into the house like the badly injured driver had it not for the old man's kind reminder. He thanked the old man millions of times. As they parted, the old man gently squeezed Barry on the shoulder and said softly, "Young man, learn to slow down and a host of careless accidents can be avoided." "Absolutely, I will keep that in mind." Barry nodded heavily as he turned away.
Back to the office, Barry threw himself into his armchair, deep in thought. The old man's words kept ringing in his ears, which he felt made a huge sense. In fact, so quick-paced was he that Barry hardly noticed the "No Speeding" sign on the roadside, in which case he might have crashed into the same hole and knocked the house down, whose ruins would swallow his car as a whole and bury him alive. At the thought of this, Barry felt the familiar cold sweat returned. "Slow down." He jotted down the two words on his note sticker and put it up where he could see it easily.
7. 答案: I immediately noticed, in the parking space next to his car, a folding table. Luke opened the trunk of his car and pulled out a tablecloth, two folding chairs, a bottle of champagne and a few dishes he had arranged. There we were, sitting in the middle of a parking lot, celebrating our reunion and grinning from ear to ear. Drivers in search of a parking place were annoyed at us for taking up the space, but once they knew the situation, many of them broke into astonished smiles. Anybody who would do something like that for another person must be a wonderful person.
With seven and one-half minutes to go, we put everything back in the car and ran for my plane. Fortunately, we arrived at the gate with only seconds to spare. The flight attendant grabbed my ticket and rushed me on board. I collapsed into my seat, energized by the whole thrilling experience. Throughout the entire flight, images of the dinner with Luke haunted me. The whole thing had happened so quickly that I hadn't really had a chance to thank him properly. So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, "Luke, that was such a heartwarming thing you did for me, Thank you."
8. 答案:
"That's it! I know how to open it!" said Ollie. "These are regular screws. We could remove the screws so that the hinge can be taken off from the trunk!" he exclaimed with a radiant smile. Just now, we were so focused on the lock that we didn't try to open the trunk another way. Then we asked Tex to jump off the trunk, and turned it upright. Ollie immediately took out a screwdriver from the tool kit. In two minutes flat, he opened the trunk with my assistance. (79 words)
Oh! There were only lots of shoes in the trunk! Ollie and I were pretty disappointed at the discovery, which wasn't diamonds or gold. Seeing our frustration, Mary patted us on the shoulder, saying, "These shoes are in such great shape that we can raise money by selling them at the rummage sale." Our faces lit up and a sense of achievement crept over us. We found "treasure" after all! Our persistence finally paid off! If at first you don't succeed, try, try again. (73 words)