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Unit 11Sad movies make me cry.SectionB 3a-selfcheck导学案
【学习目标】
1. To talk about how things affect you.
2. To write a story similar to the one in 2b.
【学习重难点】
To learn how to write a narrative composition.
【课前积累】
(一) 单元话题短语积累
1．与某人争吵_____________
2．使某人开心____________
3．使某人失望____________
4．宁愿做某事而不愿做某事________________
5．从错误中吸取教训_________________
(二) 单元话题句子积累
6．我们对一道数学题有不同的看法。
We had ___________ ____________ about a math problem.
7．他的话使我感觉好多了。
His words ___________ ___________ ____________much better.
8．我们不应该害怕犯错误。
We shouldn't ___________ ___________ ___________ _________ __________.
（三）自行完成Self Check。
【合作探究】
【单元写作目标】
本单元的话题是“Emotions and feelings(情感与情绪)”，要求能根据文字提示或实际情况，简单描述某事物对人们的生活及情感所产生的影响。写作首先要把此事物介绍清楚，然后描述这件事对你情感或情绪的影响；最后也可得出结论，总结经验或表达自己的观点。
1. 定基调
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
3. 巧衔接
在记叙难忘经历发生的起因、经过及结果时，同学们可以使用表示时间的词语from then on和two days before / on the day he left with his family ...来连接上下文，这样文章的脉络会更清晰。
4. 添佳句
No one is perfect. (人无完人。)
5. 成篇章
An Unforgettable Experience
An experience I think was unforgettable was arguing with my best friend Li Hua.
One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home. We had different opinions about a math problem. Such a little thing caused an argument between us. From then on, we didn’t talk to each other. I knew that it was my fault, but I refused to admit it because I didn’t want to lose face.
I didn’t realize we wouldn’t see each other anymore until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents. Two days before he left with his family, I said sorry to Li Hua. We made peace with each other. This made me feel a sense of relief.
No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once.
【实战演练】
初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报 English Learning 正在以 ”My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
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Unit 11
Sad movies make me cry.
人教新目标版 九年级上
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作优质公开课课件
Warming-up
What makes you happy/sad
winning/losing a competition
Free talk
What makes you happy/sad
getting good/bad grades
What makes you happy/sad
performing something well/badly
What makes you happy/sad
your first trip outside your hometown
getting into a fight with your best friend
Think of some experiences that made you feel very happy or sad. Tell your partner about them. Use the following ideas to help you.
3a
● winning/losing a competition
● getting good/bad grades on an exam
● performing something well/badly in front of a big group of people
● getting into a fight with your best friend
● your first trip outside your hometown
Winning a competition makes me happy.
Getting bad grades makes me feel upset.
Tell your partner about them.
Competition
Boys say experiences that made you feel happy while girls say experiences that made you feel sad. The winner is who can say more experiences.
本单元的话题是“Emotions and feelings(情感与情绪)”，要求能根据文字提示或实际情况，简单描述某事物对人们的生活及情感所产生的影响。写作首先要把此事物介绍清楚，然后描述这件事对你情感或情绪的影响；最后也可得出结论，总结经验或表达自己的观点。
单元写作话题
Write a story similar to the one in 2b using your notes in 3a.
3b
In your story, try to explain the following:
●What happened
●When did it happen
●Where did it happen
●How did it make you feel Why
●What did you learn from the experience
1. 话题：谈论一件事物对自己的影响
2. 时态：一般过去时为主
3. 人称：以第一人称为主
4. 逻辑顺序：事情的发展顺序
Writing tips:
本文根据要求是一篇记叙文。它主要是说明事件的时间、背景、起因、过程及结果，即我们通常所说的五个“ W ”（what, who, when, where, why ）和一个“ H ” (how)。
1
2
3
4
Frame and content
(结构和内容)
clear frame
（结构清晰）
complete content
（内容完整）
Rich language
（语言）
good adjectives
(好的形容词)
good phrases
（好的词组）
use clauses
（使用从句）
use linking
words
（使用连接词）
Correct grammar
（语法）
correct tense
(时态)
spelling
words
（单词拼写）
punctuations
（标点符号）
Good handwriting
（书写）
clean and neat
(干净整洁)
Keys for your writing
明天英语课上的duty report该你发言了。请你以“An Unforgettable Experience”为题写一篇英语短文，给大家讲述你的一次难忘的经历。
1. 定基调
体裁：记叙文
时态：一般过去时
人称：第一人称和第三人称
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
点题 (1)_____________________________
_____________(我认为难忘的一次经历) was arguing with my best friend Li Hua.
难忘的经历 时间及地点 One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home.
An experience I think was unforgettable
列提纲 写句子
难忘的经历 起因及经过 (2)_______________________________
______________________(李华和我对一道数学题有不同的看法).
Such a little thing caused an argument between Li Hua and I.
Li Hua and I didn’t talk to each other.
(3)_________________________(我知道那是我的错), but I refused to admit (承认) it because I didn’t want to lose face.
(4)_____________________________________________(我没有意识到我们不会再见面) until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents.
Li Hua and I had different opinions about a math problem
I knew that it was my fault
I didn’t realize we wouldn’t see each other anymore
列提纲 写句子
难忘的经历 结果 I said sorry to Li Hua.
Li Hua and I made peace with each other.
(5)______________________________ (这使得我如释重负).
启示 Everyone makes mistakes.
(6)__________________________________________(我们不应该害怕犯错).
When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once.
This made me feel a sense of relief
We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes
3. 巧衔接
在记叙难忘经历发生的起因、经过及结果时，同学们可以使用表示时间的词语from then on和two days before / on the day he left with his family ...来连接上下文，这样文章的脉络会更清晰。
4. 添佳句
No one is perfect. (人无完人。)
5. 成篇章
An Unforgettable Experience
An experience I think was unforgettable was arguing with my best friend Li Hua.
One Saturday last term, Li Hua and I were studying together at his home. We had different opinions about a math problem. Such a little thing caused an argument between us. From then on, we didn’t talk to each other. I knew that it was my fault, but I refused to admit it because I didn’t want to lose face.
I didn’t realize we wouldn’t see each other anymore until I heard that Li Hua would move to another city with his parents. Two days before he left with his family, I said sorry to Li Hua. We made peace with each other. This made me feel a sense of relief.
No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. We shouldn’t be afraid of making mistakes. When we realize our mistakes, we should correct them at once.
An experience that made me very happy was winning the nationwide English speech competition last year.
At first, I didn’t know what to write for my speech, but after talking to my teacher and reading some books, I had some ideas and started writing. Then I practiced my speech many times.
Sample writing
主题是谈论事物对人的影响
时态用一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主
按照事情发展的顺序
范文赏读
On the day of the competition, I saw many people there. This made me feel very nervous! I started to worry that I would forget my speech. Then I remembered what my teacher told me — close my eyes and take deep breaths. I did that and it made me feel much better. When my turn came, I gave my speech with confidence.
用本单元目标语言：sth. makes sb. + adj. / do
按照事情发展的顺序
I waited anxiously for the results, and when I heard that I was the first prize winner, I jumped up and down with joy.
This experience taught me that being well-prepared is very important. It helps to read a lot, and also to ask people around you for advice. Most importantly, have confidence in yourself!
事情的结果
表达感受
Exchange your composition with your partner and correct mistakes you made.
1. Put the words in the appropriate place in the chart.
nervous unhappy uncomfortable worried comfortable relaxed angry awful happy uneasy Positive Negative
comfortable
relaxed
happy
nervous
unhappy
uncomfortable
worried
uneasy
awful
Self Check
2 Write sentences using the words given.
1. sad movies / cry
____________________________________
2. speaking in front of many people / nervous
____________________________________
____________________________________
Sad movies make me cry.
Speaking in front of many people makes me nervous.
3. money and fame / not always happy
_________________________________________
4. soft piano music / relaxed
____________________________________
5. rainy days / stay at home and watch TV
_________________________________________
_________________________________________
Money and fame don’t always make you happy.
Soft piano music makes me relaxed.
Rainy days make me want to stay at home and watch TV.
3 Number the things[1-6](1=least important,
6=most important). Write a reason for each choice.
____fame ____power ____friendship
____wealth ____health ____family
1
2
5
3
4
6
e.g. Fame is not very important. It can make me nervous if too many people follow me around.
Power is not important to me. I don’t like to control others.
Wealth is not very important. I prefer to live a simple life.
Health is important. A healthy body makes it possible for me to do many things in life.
Friendship is very important. Spending time with friends makes me happy.
Family is the most important to me. My family makes me feel comfortable and happy.
初中三年的校园生活精彩纷呈, 总有一些经历是令你难以忘怀的。学校英语报 English Learning 正在以 ”My Unforgettable Experience” 为主题向应届毕业生征文。请写一篇80—100词的英语短文，叙述你的一次难忘的经历，并谈谈你在其中的感悟和收获。 (短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。文中不得出现真实的人名和校名)
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