中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题09 书面表达
NO1：2020-2021学年上海市奉贤区七校联考七年级（上）期末
Writing.
35．Write at least 60 wo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rds with the topic"Growing Up"请你以"成长"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．
提示：在每个人的成长过程中，有些因素对人的成长具有重要的作用．如，一桩事、一件物、一个人、一段经历、一次体验…．请你就其中的一个进行描述，与大家分享．
要求：内容切题、语句通顺、意思连贯、字迹清楚．
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）2-1-c-n-j-y
NO2：2020-2021学年上海市松江区七年级（上）期末
X. Writing.（写作）（6%）
51．下个月农历新年即将来临，你将如何度 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )过除夕夜呢？请以"Chinese New Yearns Eve Party"为题写一则50﹣60字左右的除夕夜派对计划，以下问题可供参考.21教育网
1.Who（m） are you going to invite to the Chinese New Year's Eve party？21教育名师原创作品
2.What are you going to do at the party？
Chinese New Yearns Eve Party
NO3：2020学年上海市浦东新区第四教育署七年级（上）期末
59.Writing.
Write a passage of at ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )least 50 words on the topic“How to be a healthy kid”.（以“怎样成为身体健康的孩子”为题写一篇不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格）：
（注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. （以下提示仅供参考）
* Is it important to be healthy Why
* What exercise do you do to keep yourself healthy 21·世纪*教育网
* What do you eat to keep yourself healthy
NO4：2019-2020学年上海市浦东新区三林北校七年级上学期期末
61.Writing
Write at leas ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t60 words about“ How to stay healthy”.(以“怎样保持健康”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
NO5：2019-2020学年上海市浦东新区川沙中学南校七年级上学期期末
61.Writing.（作文）
Please write at lea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )st 60 words on the topic “A wonderful New Year’s Day”.我们迎来了新的一年2020年。你和你的同学们或者你的家人有没有一起庆祝新年的到来？在元且那天你们组织了哪些有趣的活动？你们品尝了哪些美味的食物？你们过得开心吗？请以“精彩的元旦”为主题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。21·cn·jy·com
Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考):
play games watch cartoons take photos
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NO1：2019-2020学年上海市黄浦区卢湾中学南校七年级上学期期末
Writing (写话)
56.Write a passage of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at least 50 words about the topic “How I keep healthy”. (我对健康怎么看？我是如何保持健康的呢？我是否曾经改变过不健康的习惯？请以“我是这样保持健康的”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文)
NO2：2019学年上海市虹口区鲁迅中学七年级上学期期末
X. Writing.（写作）
55.Write at least 5 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )0 words on the topic ‘A change to my bad habit '.（请以《我的坏习惯的改变》”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数）www-2-1-cnjy-com
（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following questions are provided as a reference（以下问题可供参考）【出处：21教育名师】
1. What bad habit did you have in the past
2. How did you change your bad habit (List at least two ways)【版权所有：21教育】
A change to my bad habit
NO3：2020-2021学年上海市进才中学北校七年级学习素养分析
VII. Writing(作文)
61. Write a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )passage of at least 60 words on the topic “A Change about My bad Habits”.（请以“改变我的坏习惯”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）21*cnjy*com
Suggest questions:
1. What bad habits did you have
2. Why were they bad (Give at least two reasons)
3. How are your habits now
A Change about My bad Habits
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NO4：2021学年上海市徐汇区西南模范中学七年级期末模拟
Write a passage ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) of at least 60 words on the topic”Shanghai in my eyes”5%21世纪教育网版权所有
64. 以“我眼中的上海”为题，写一篇不少于60字的文章。
1. Do you love Shanghai
2. In your eyes, what is it like Say something about the city.www.21-cn-jy.com
3. Why do you or don’t you love Shanghai Give at least 2 reasons.2·1·c·n·j·y
NO5：上海市世界外国语中学七年级上学期
Writing（作文）
48．write a passage of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at least 60 words on the topic" My Flat".（以"我的家"为题写至少60个字的短文。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）21*cnjy*com
（1）How is your flat？（e.g. ：Big or small？ How many rooms are there？）【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
（2）What do you usually do in your flat？
（3）Do you like your flat？Why or why not？
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专题09 书面表达
NO1：2020-2021学年上海市奉贤区七校联考七年级（上）期末
Writing.
35．Write at least 60 w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ords with the topic"Growing Up"请你以"成长"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格．
提示：在每个人的成长过程中，有些因素对人的成长具有重要的作用．如，一桩事、一件物、一个人、一段经历、一次体验…．请你就其中的一个进行描述，与大家分享．
要求：内容切题、语句通顺、意思连贯、字迹清楚．
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分）www.21-cn-jy.com
【分析】
重点短语：
1．the most ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) important people in my life我一生中最重要的人
2．get into trouble 遇到麻烦
3．lose courge 丧生勇气
高分句型：
1．Whenever I get into trouble and need a hand，they come over first to support me and encourage me．
无论什么时候我遇到麻烦或是需用帮助，他们总是首先站出来支持我，鼓励我．（whenever引导时间状语从句，意思是"无论何时"）
2．While they're getting older with grey hair，they never lose courge or effort in both life and jobs．
他们在一天天老去，头发也白了，但是他们从没有丢掉对生活和工作的勇气与努力．（while引导时间状语从句，意思是"当…的时候"）
例文 Growing up with ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )my parents
I consider my parents as the most important people in my life．This is not because they're wealthy or famous．Rather，what I value about most is the care and love they show to me．（成长中最主要的人是父母）
My parents work hard，however，they're always there for me．Whenever I get into trouble and need a hand，they come over first to support me and encourage me（高分句型）．I grew up with their care and love．While they're getting older with grey hair，they never lose courge or effort in both life and jobs．（高分句型）．（父母支持我，鼓励我）
With my parents'care and love，I am growing healthily and happily．From my parents，I have learned that one person can really make a difference．I'll never forget their care and love．I wish they could always be happy and healthy．（父母对我的影响）
点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．
NO2：2020-2021学年上海市松江区七年级（上）期末
X. Writing.（写作）（6%）
51．下个月农历新年即将来临，你将 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )如何度过除夕夜呢？请以"Chinese New Yearns Eve Party"为题写一则50﹣60字左右的除夕夜派对计划，以下问题可供参考.21cnjy.com
1.Who（m） are you going to invite to the Chinese New Year's Eve party？21·cn·jy·com
2.What are you going to do at the party？
Chinese New Yearns Eve Party
【分析】
【高分句型一】
Students like taking p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )art in it very much， because it is really funny.学生们非常喜欢参加它，因为它真的很有趣。
because引导原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
I am going to inv ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ite my parents to the Chinese New Year's Eve party.我打算邀请我的父母参加中国新年除夕晚会。【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】
invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事。
【解答】
Chinese New Eve
In the end of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )the year， people hold many activities to celebrate and welcome the New Year. In my school， because it is really funny. 【高分句型一】This year to my parents to Chinese Year's party.【高分句型二】（打算邀请谁）I am going to dance with my classmates. We prepared for it a month ago. Our teacher helped us a lot.
Tomorrow is the ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )party time. I am sure we will be great in the party.（希望）
NO3：2020学年上海市浦东新区第四教育署七年级（上）期末
59.Writing.
Write a passage o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f at least 50 words on the topic“How to be a healthy kid”.（以“怎样成为身体健康的孩子”为题写一篇不少于50字的短文，标点符号不占格）：【出处：21教育名师】
（注意：文中不得出现具体人名、校名等个人信息,，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference. （以下提示仅供参考）
* Is it important to be healthy Why
* What exercise do you do to keep yourself healthy
* What do you eat to keep yourself healthy
【答案】例文
How to be a healthy kid
Health is very ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) important to us. Everyone wants to keep healthy.We should have good eating habits to keep healthy. A saying goes that an apple a day makes a doctor away. Eating more fruit is good for us.
Of course, exer ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )cise is also important in our life. I often take a walk after dinner. What’s more, to keep fit, I eat more vegetables, less fat and sugar. Besides, drinking more water is very good for us.
All in all, having a healthy diet is really important for us.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )以“How to be a healthy kid”为题，根据提示内容写一篇短文。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，人称主要为第一、三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语： be good for，take a walk ，what’s more，all in all。
句型：We shoud ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )have good eating habits to keep healthy.为了保持健康，们应该有良好的饮食习惯。情态动词should后接动词原形， eating habits “饮食习惯”，to keep healthy，表目的。
A saying goes t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hat an apple a day makes a doctor away.谚语说“一天一苹果，医生远离我。”宾语从句含有谚语。
NO4：2019-2020学年上海市浦东新区三林北校七年级上学期期末
61.Writing
Write at lea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )st60 words about“ How to stay healthy”.(以“怎样保持健康”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)2·1·c·n·j·y
【答案】How to stay healthy
It's importa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nt to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing. I think there are several ways to stay healthy. First, good healthy eating habit is very important. we should eat three healthy meals every day instead of junk food. We'd better eat slowly. Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on. Last but not least, it's very important to laugh every day.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )篇作文要求我们以How to stay healthy为题，介绍生活中如何保持健康。“健康”这一话题非常贴近学生们的日常生活，教材中接触过的与此有关的词汇、短语和句型也比较多，学生们对此比较熟悉，因此写起来非常得心应手。审题可知，短文应分为两部分：首先引导健康话题，点明健康的重要性；接下来具体介绍生活中应如果保持健康，这是文章的主体部分。短文应用一般现在时态、第一人称来叙述。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇优秀 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的作文，短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、条理。短文开门见山，先点明了健康的重要性，然后引入主题“如何保持健康”；接下来进行了具体的介绍，用First, Second, Last but not least分成了三个部分，使表达很有层次。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。以简单句结构为主，穿插了并列句、宾语从句和复合句，还使用了非谓语动词。21世纪教育网版权所有
3. 高分亮点：
短语：stay healthy；e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ating habit；instead of；such as；stay up；in time；at least；and so on；Last but not least。
句型：It's impor ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )tant to stay healthy because without good health, people nearly can do nothing.；I think there are several ways to stay healthy.；Second, we should have good habits, such as, having enough sleep so don't stay up too late, wash our hands in time, brush our teeth at least twice every day, drink enough water, don't smoke and so on.。
NO5：2019-2020学年上海市浦东新区川沙中学南校七年级上学期期末
61.Writing.（作文）
Please write a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t least 60 words on the topic “A wonderful New Year’s Day”.我们迎来了新的一年2020年。你和你的同学们或者你的家人有没有一起庆祝新年的到来？在元且那天你们组织了哪些有趣的活动？你们品尝了哪些美味的食物？你们过得开心吗？请以“精彩的元旦”为主题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文，要求内容连贯，语句通顺，标点符号不占格。
Phrases for reference (以下短语仅供参考):
play games watch cartoons take photos
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【答案】A wonderful New Year’s Day
January 1st is New Y ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ear’s Day. It is a great day for all the people. So my classmates and I celebrated the important day at my home. We sang some songs, danced and played games. My parents prepared all kinds of food for us, such as fried chicken, hamburgers, apples and so on .We watched cartoons and enjoyed the food. We took many photos. All my classmates had a good time.21*cnjy*com
【分析】
本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇你如何和同学或家人庆祝元旦的短文，讲述那天你们组织什么活动、品尝了哪些美味的食物、你们过得开心吗。要求短文要包含所有提示信息，适当发挥，语言连贯，逻辑清晰。
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要用第一人称的方式 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )讲述如何与同学庆祝元旦，讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )紧扣主题，介绍在元旦日和同学的聚会以庆祝这个重要的日子，接下来介绍聚会的活动，品尝的食物，最后以“同学都过得很开心”总结全文。文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富，文句简短。 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )用短语sing some songs, dance and play games；watch cartoons and enjoy the food.；take many photos等描述聚会的活动；用have a good time总结全文，行文通畅，内容完整。
【点睛】本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )用第一人称、一般过去时；书写时要紧扣题干提示的问题“组织什么活动、品尝了哪些美味的食物、你们过得开心吗”展开。
NO1：2019-2020学年上海市黄浦区卢湾中学南校七年级上学期期末
Writing (写话)
56.Write a passage o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f at least 50 words about the topic “How I keep healthy”. (我对健康怎么看？我是如何保持健康的呢？我是否曾经改变过不健康的习惯？请以“我是这样保持健康的”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文)
【答案】
范文
I think everyone ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) needs to keep healthy. I have bread , milk and eggs every morning. I usually have rice, beef and vegetables for lunch. In the evening, I often have noodles .I play badminton with my friends three times a week for half an hour.21·世纪*教育网
I changed my eating h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )abit about three yeas ago .I didn't like to eat breakfast , but now I insist on eating breakfast every day. I hope everyone can have a healthy diet, too.21*cnjy*com
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )对健康怎么看？如何保持健康的呢？是否曾经改变过不健康的习惯等。注意在写之前不健康的习惯时，需要注意一般过去时。
2.例文点评：例文通过对 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )健康怎么看？如何保持健康的呢？是否曾经改变过不健康的习惯等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。
3.高分亮点：词组：keep heal ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )thy；every morning；three times a week；half an hour；eating habit；three yeas ago；have a healthy diet等；
句型：I think every ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )one needs to keep healthy./I play badminton with my friends three times a week for half an hour./I hope everyone can have a healthy diet, too.
【点睛】书面表达：
首先认真审题，看清题目中的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如keep healthy；every morning；three times a week；half an hour；eating habit；have a healthy diet等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。21教育名师原创作品
NO2：2019学年上海市虹口区鲁迅中学七年级上学期期末
X. Writing.（写作）
55.Write at least 50 w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ords on the topic ‘A change to my bad habit '.（请以《我的坏习惯的改变》”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文，要求意思明确、内容连贯，标点符号不计字数）【版权所有：21教育】
（注意：作文中不得出现考生的中文姓名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following questions are provided as a reference（以下问题可供参考）
1. What bad habit did you have in the past
2. How did you change your bad habit (List at least two ways)
A change to my bad habit
【答案】例文
A change to my bad habit
I used to have a bad ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) habit. I often play computer games, so I got a bad grade.
Later, my mother told ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )me that if I could pass the final exam, she would take me to the Great Wall. From then on, I knew I had to change my bad habits. When I wanted to play games, I took out a book and read.
Now I don't p ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lay computer games any more. I study much harder. I believe I can get a better grade.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求介绍自己的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )坏习惯的改变，属于记叙文写作。作者首先明确自己的坏习惯I often play computer games，然后介绍坏习惯在妈妈和自己的努力下改变了，最后表达希望I believe I can get a better grade。
2.例文点评：本文是“总分总”结构，用第一人称展开讲述了，时态以一般过去时为主；内容充实，描述细致，表达流畅，结构完整，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
高分短语：used to do, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )play computer games, the Great Wall, from then on, have to, take out, want to do.
高分句型：
1). I often play computer games, so I got a bad grade.（原因状语从句）
2). Later, my mothe ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r told me that if I could pass the final exam, she would take me to the Great Wall.（复杂宾语从句结构）
3). When I wanted to play games, I took out a book and read.（时间状语从句）
【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。例文最后连用两个比较级句子I study much harder. I believe I can get a better grade.写出了变化和希望。
NO3：2020-2021学年上海市进才中学北校七年级学习素养分析
VII. Writing(作文)
61. Write a passa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ge of at least 60 words on the topic “A Change about My bad Habits”.（请以“改变我的坏习惯”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
Suggest questions:
1. What bad habits did you have
2. Why were they bad (Give at least two reasons)
3. How are your habits now
A Change about My bad Habits
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【答案】范文：
A Change about My bad Habits
In the past, I h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ave two bad habits. One is to play too many computer games. The other is to eat unhealthily.
When I played ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )too many computer games, I always forgot to finish my homework which led to my bad marks in the school. My parents were worried about me. And sometimes I stayed out to play computer games which caused me to feel sleepy in class. Therefore, I didn’t do well in the subjects. As for the other bad habit, I used to eat fast food which made me fat. And I didn’t like eating vegetables and fruits. That couldn’t help me digest.
But now, I don’t play ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) computer games any more. I spend my time on study. And I also eat healthily and do more exercise. I often eat green vegetables and many fruits. I think I will keep away from the two bad habits forever.
【分析】
【详解】题干解读：题目要求以“改变我的坏习惯”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文；要求根据包含所有提示。www-2-1-cnjy-com
写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )和一般过去时为主，采用第一人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：阐述自己的坏习惯有哪些；第二段：阐述为什么这些习惯是不好的；第三段：阐述现在这些习惯如何了。
NO4：2021学年上海市徐汇区西南模范中学七年级期末模拟
Write a passage of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at least 60 words on the topic”Shanghai in my eyes”5%
64. 以“我眼中的上海”为题，写一篇不少于60字的文章。
1. Do you love Shanghai
2. In your eyes, what is it like Say something about the city.
3. Why do you or don’t you love Shanghai Give at least 2 reasons.
【答案】
I love Shanghai very ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )much because in my eyes it is very beautiful.It has Asia's tallest Oriental Pearl TV Tower and Shanghai Museum. The Oriental Pearl Tower has become a landmark building in Shanghai.Shanghai museum is a famous ancient Chinese art museum at home and abroad.
Here you can learn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )about the history of China's ancient development. When night falls, Shanghai becomes a sea of lights. Neon lights are colorful and dazzling. The street lamps on both sides of the street look like shining pearls, which make Shanghai colorful. Shanghai is really a beautiful city! I love Shanghai.
【详解】
1.题干解读：题目要求写“我眼中 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )的上海”。根据提示写作。要体现一下三方面的内容①你喜欢上海吗？②在你的眼里，它是什么样的？说说这个城市。③你为什么喜欢/不喜欢上海？至少给出两点原因。
2.例文点评：例文总体使用一般现在时态来写作。先表达自己的感情——喜欢上海。再写喜欢上海的建筑及原因，最后总结全文，喜欢上海。2-1-c-n-j-y
3.高分亮点：
短语：in my eyes；at home and abroad；look like。
句型：when引导的时间状语从句；非限制性定语从句。
NO5：上海市世界外国语中学七年级上学期
Writing（作文）
48．write a pas ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )sage of at least 60 words on the topic" My Flat".（以"我的家"为题写至少60个字的短文。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，班级及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a reference.（以下内容仅供参考）21教育网
（1）How is your flat？（e.g. ：Big or small？ How many rooms are there？）【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】
（2）What do you usually do in your flat？
（3）Do you like your flat？Why or why not？
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【分析】【高分句型一】
It is much bigger than the old one.它比那台旧的要大得多。
much bigger大多了。much修饰比较级。
【高分句型二】
I like playing comput ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )er games and doing my homework in the study.我喜欢在书房里玩电脑游戏和做作业。
like doing sth喜欢做某事。
【解答】
My flat
I have a new fl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at. （点题）It is much bigger than the old one.【高分句型一】There are four bedrooms， a living room， a kitchen， a balcony and two bathrooms in my new flat.There is a small garden in front of it， too. （公寓怎么样）I like playing computer games and doing my homework in the study. 【高分句型二】I watch TV in the living room. My mother and I plant some trees and grow some flowers in the garden.（做什么） To my great joy， I have my own bedroom now. I like it very much. I always keep it clean.（感受及原因）
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