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Section B
3a—Self Check
写作课公开课
人教新目标九年级上册
一、语言知识(常用词汇、短语和表达)
1.复习掌握本单元的重点词汇和短语。
lyrics, recall, dance to, folk music, sing along with. China’s national treasures
2.复习掌握本单元的重点句型：
1). ---What kind of music do you like ---I like music that I can sing along with.
2). --What kind of movies do you like ---I prefer movies that/ which give something to think about.
3).It was one of the most moving pieces of music that I have ever heard
二、语言功能
1.学习运用“I like. . . because. . . I feel . . . I think you should listen to/watch it too because. . . ” 这些句式对自己看过的书籍，电影，听过的CD等进行简单的描述。提高自己的欣赏美的水平。
2、Write about your favorite kind of music/movie and reason.
三、学习策略
1.能让学生有意识的运用目标语言进行输出，同时还启发了学生从所学的目标篇章中吸取
模仿写作的句型和表达，进而提高自己的写作能力。
2．本课的写作策略运用：学习感悟---思路归纳-----内容提示---段落提示----写作实践。
四、情感态度 通过写作训练，来展示自己的个人喜好，提高学生欣赏美的水平。
1. 我更喜欢有优美歌词的音乐。
I like music that ______________.
2. 我总是带不害怕这种电影的朋友。
I always bring friends that ________________this kind of movie.
3. 我喜欢悦耳的音乐，它能帮我在长长的一周工作后放松。
I like smooth music that _______________after a long week at work.
4. 音乐有一种不可思议的美，但是在美的背后我能感受到强烈的悲伤和痛苦。The music was strangely beautiful, but under the beauty I sensed ________________and pain.
5. 二胡听起来如此悲伤，我沉浸其中几乎要与它一同哭泣
The erhu sounded _____________I almost cried along with it as I listened.
has great lyrics
aren’t afraid of
helps me relax
a strong sadness
so sad that
Revision I
Pre-writing
Complete the sentences according to the Chinese.
Revision II
Pre-writing
Retell the story about Abing.
The man is Abing. He was born in Wuxi in 1893. He wrote many pieces of beautiful music. He was a folk musician. One of his most moving pieces of music in China is ErquanYingyue…
They like the music because they can ________to it.
dance
Warming up
Pre-writing
What kind of music do (you\they)\does she like
She likes the music because she can ______along with it.
sing
I like the folk music because its sad beauty makes people
______their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful
experiences.
recall
I love the song because the_______ are great.
lyrics
I like the comedy because it is a good way to _____.
relax
Warming up
Pre-writing
What kind of movies do you like
I like the cartoon because it is very _______.
funny
I like the science fiction film because it is very ___________.
imagination
I like the documentary because it is very
real and I can ________a lot from it.
learn
Presentation
Pre-writing
Read the passage and complete the chart.
My favorite kind of music is folk music. Because listening to folk music is a good way to relax.
Mom in the candlelight is my favorite song.I like it because it is beautiful. The lyrics are very great.It was sung by Mao amin. When I listened to it, I thought of my mom. The mother’s love is the greatest love in the world. I was moved by these lyrics.
I think you should listen to it, because it can help us love our mothers more.
Favorite kind of music
Why I like this kind of music
Favorite song
Why I like this song
How this song makes me feel
Why I think others should listen to
folk music
Because it is a
good way to relax
Mom in the
candlelight
it is beautiful. The
lyrics are very great
He thought of my
mom
because it can helpus love our
mothers more
Presentation
Pre-writing
分析本文的写作思路
1、本文运用的语言结构：
________________________________________________________________________________________________
2、本文的写作思路：
总（类型及理由）----分（ ）
----________________
I like. . . because. . . When I listen to/watch it, I feel . . .
I think you should listen to/watch it too because. . .
具体写自己喜欢的及理由
推荐的理由
What kind of music or movies do you like best Make notes in the chart by yourselves.
Favorite kind of music/movie
Why I like this kind of music/movie
Favorite song/movie
Why I like this song/movie
How this song/movie makes me feel
Why I think others should listen
to/watch this song/movie
Pre-writing
3a
Historical drama
Makes me aware of some important historical events and how they affected people’s lives
Gone with the Wind
It has a very interesting storyline and an excellent cast.
Deeply moved-sad about the effects of war, but I'm hopeful for the human spirit.
It's one of the best movies of all time.
While-writing
3b
Use your notes to write an article for a newspaper or magazine
to tell people about your favorite kind of music/movie and
your favorite song/movie.
Useful the following expressions to help you：
My favorite kind of music/movie is…
I like… because …
It was…by…
When I listen to /watch it, I feel…
I think you should listen to/watch it too because …
While-writing
本单元以“谈论个人及他人的喜好”为话题而展开，具体谈论了喜爱的音乐及其缘由。在生活中可供我们讨论的话题有很多，除音乐外，如喜爱的书籍、电影、老师、运动等。写这类作文首先要确定时态，多用一般现在时；其次写清楚自己的喜好，并说明自己喜爱的理由，同时也可谈谈自己的看法和感想。
Topic analysis
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Construct Structure
Structure
（升华主题）
（喜欢的原因）
（说明喜欢的事物）
Linking words
Firstly, However,
First of all, What’s more,
What's more, Instead,
Besides, All in all,
In addition, Finally,
Furthermore, In my opinion,
As the saying goes, In a word,
While-writing
My favorite kind of movie is the historical drama. I like historical dramas because they are a relaxing way for me to learn history and the effects that a historical event had on people’s lives.
My favorite movie is Gone with the Wind. It was made in 1939, based on a prize-winning novel by Margaret Mitchell. The movie’s plot is set against the American Civil War and it has an amazing cast that helps bring the story to life. When I watch this movie, I feel deeply moved. It makes me feel sad about the effects of war, but it also gives me hope in the strength of the human spirit.
I think you should see this movie too because it is one of the greatest movies of all time.
具体介绍喜欢的电影，注意用到定语从句
将自己喜欢的电影推荐给他人
开篇点题，说明喜欢的原因
Post-writing
Fan show
某英语报社正在向学生征稿，题目是“my favorite movies”。
假如你是张子涵，请你写一篇英语短文向该报社投稿，谈谈你最喜欢的电影《哪吒之魔童降世》（NeZha）并说明理由。
要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，不少于80字。
参考词汇demon魔；fate命运；fight out以斗争的方式解决，辩论出结果
审题立意
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Writing practice I
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谋篇布局
总述
具体介绍
表达感情
My name is...
In my spare time, I like movies which...
My favorite movie is...
The story is about...
He is born to...
However, his tries his best to...
It makes me...
... influence me a lot.
What's more, the songs...
In our world ,the movie...
It is well worth watching.
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短语储备
sing along with跟着……—起唱
in spare time在空闲时间
cheer up（使)变得更高兴;振奋起来
plenty of大量;充足
depend on视……而定;取决于
be born in/on出生于
try one 's best to do sth.尽全力做某事
stick to坚持;固守
not only ... but also...不但……而且……
in this way这样;通过这种方法
remind... of .../ make... recall...提醒……;使……想起……
be full of/ be filled with充满;装满
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句型荟萃
开头句
中间句
结尾句
My favorite is我最喜欢的是
The movie is about这部电影是关于
I like/love/prefer/don't mind... that/which/who...
我喜欢/喜爱/更喜欢/不介意.....
I like... because....我喜欢......因为......
It helps me...他帮助我......
When I listen to...,I feel...当我听......时，我感觉...
What's more,... 而且,......
In a world，the movie is...总之,这部电影是...
It's well worth watching.他值得一看.
It teaches sb. ...他教会某人...
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范文欣赏
My Favorite Movie
My name is Zhang Zihan. In my spare time,I like movies which can cheer me up and relax my mind.
My favorite movie is Ne Zha. The story is about Ne Zha. He is born to be a demon. However, he tries his best to be the master of his fate. I Like the movie. It makes me stick to my dream and keep on fighting.“If the fate is unfair, fight it out.”These words from the movie influence me a lot. What`s more, the songs in this movie are great.
In a word, the movie is fun and gives me something to think about.
It is well worth watching.
While-writing
Writing practice II
以My favorite music为题，写一篇短文，词数80左右。介绍一下自己喜欢的音乐类型，并说明理由。
本单元的话题是谈论“音乐和电影”，多以介绍音乐或电影的种类或形式为主，体裁多是说明文。
写作时，时态应为____________.
人称应为__________.
写 作 指 导
一般现在时
第一人称
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写 作 思 路 点 拨
The opening point
main part;
ending
引入话题：I love music and I often listen to music in my spare time.
介绍自己喜欢的音乐： I prefer music that isn’t too loud.
表达愿望：I hope I can become a singer and I can sing like the singers in “The Voice of China”
Post-writing
范 文 欣 赏 I
My favorite kind of music is old music. I’ll Never Forget My Mom is my favorite song.
I like it because it is beautiful. The lyrics are very great. It was written by Liu Zheng. Many famous singers like Cheng Lin, Liu Hegang, and Tan Jing once sang it. When I listened to it, I thought of my mom. The mother’s love is the greatest love in the world. I was moved by these lyrics.
I think you should listen to it, because it can help us love our mothers more.
My favorite kind of music folk music
My favorite kind of music is folk music because it is national feature and relaxing.
Erquan Yingyue is my favorite. It was played on a kind of instrument Erhu by Abing. I like it because I can recall Abing’s poor life and I’m proud of his amazing musical skills. I feel like crying when I listen to it. Its sad beauty makes people recall their deepest wounds from their own sad or painful experiences.
I think you should listen to it at your spare time because it was one of China’s national treasures.
Post-writing
范 文 欣 赏 II
1. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
plenty of, suppose, war, electronic, actor, spare
1. The comedy has ________ dialogs which are very humorous.
2. Since you prefer music that is relaxing, I don’t ________ you
would want to buy this __________ music CD.
3. Christmas is a time for spreading joy, so you should find some
_______ time to spend with your loved ones.
4. Although he is an _____ who does not have much experience, he
did an excellent job in the new ____ film.
plenty of
suppose
electronic
Self Check
actor
war
spare
Post-writing
2. Fill in the blanks with who, that or which. More than one answer may be possible.
A: Hi, Cindy! Would you like to see Sky High in 2050 this weekend
B: Hmm…no, I don’t think movies __________ try to describe the future are very interesting. Could we see City Danger instead
A: You mean, the new police story _________ was filmed in five countries
B: Yes, that’s the one. The actor ________ plays the hero used to be a schoolteacher!
A: OK, sure. It sounds like something _______ we both will enjoy!
that/which
that/which
who/that
that
1. I don’t like music
_______________________.
2. I enjoy spending time in places
___________________________.
3. I have friends
______________________________.
4. I like movie stars
__________________________________.
3.Complete the sentences about yourself.
that/which is too loud
that/which are relaxing
who/that are friendly and helpful
who/that are beautiful or handsome
Ⅱ. 用所给词的适当形式填空。
1. I work for a big (Australia) company.
2. Is your back still (pain)
3. (laugh) for two hours is a good way to relax!
4. They try their best (solve) their problems.
5. Now more and more people ride ________ (electricity)
bikes instead of ________ (drive)cars.
Australian
painful
Laughing
to solve
electric
driving
Class Test
1. Review the new words and expressions in Unit 9.
2. Polish your writing according to your group members’ advice.
3. Preview the new words and expressions in Unit 10.
Homework
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Unit9 Section B 3a-Self Check同步练习
I. 用所给单词的适当形式填空
1. She is a musician who (play) different kinds of music.
2. Tom prefers (read) to (talk).
3. (learn) English all by yourself is very difficult.
4. There (be) plenty of books in the library.
5. What about (go) to the museum for a visit
II. 根据汉语意思完成句子
6. 为了保持健康,我们应该坚持健康的饮食习惯。
We should to healthy habits to keep fit.
7.阅读时不一定总是需要在词典中查阅新单词。
It is not always necessary to new words in the dictionary while reading.
8.《西游记》是一本对青少年影响很大的书,很受欢迎。
Journey to the West is a book influences teenagers a lot. It is very popular.
9. 毫无疑问在南海采集可燃冰将给中国提供大量的清洁能源。
There is no doubt that collecting the flammable ice at South China Sea will China clean energy.
10.做运动能使人们更开心、更健康并且更自信。
Doing sports can make people happier, , and more confident.
III.阅读理解
Where can you learn about the cultural relics(文物) of our country You may visit museums or read books, but now a CCTV show may give you a more fun way to learn about them.
The show is called National Treasure. It has 10 episodes(集). It shows 27 treasures from 9 museums across China. In order to make ancient cultural relics come alive, the show uses different ways to explain the story, history and culture behind them.
Although it’s a show about old relics, it looks modern and technical(技术的). An IMAX-sized LED sired screen on the stage shows the treasures in detail.
The treasures are presented by national treasure keepers(守护者), both famous people and common people. Instead of just telling the stories and history behind the treasures, the show invites famous actors to be national treasure keepers. And they act out the stories on the stage. The actors even use the funny words to make their performances interesting and alive. For example, on the show, actor Wang Kai played Emperor Qianlong and TV viewers loved his performances.
While telling the stories behind the treasures, national treasure keepers also tell their own stories. For example, an old man named Qiu Qingnian is good at making natural paints for repairing ancient paintings. For many years,he has been looking for mines(矿) deep inside mountains. On the TV program, he shows TV viewers how to make natural paints.
The show has become widely popular with its interesting plots(情节), good performances and funny words. It has promoted(推广) ancient cultural relics and has encouraged more people to visit museums.
( )11. The show National Treasure was produced to .
A. look for national treasure keepers
B. make ancient cultural relics come alive
C. show the modern technology
D. invite some famous actors to act out
( )12. From the passage, we can learn something about the show National Treasure except .
A. actors’ good performances B. the stories with interesting plots
C. Qiu Qingnian’s mines D. the history and culture behind
( )13. What column(专栏) in a magazine might the passage come from
A. Health. B. History and culture. C. Sports. D. Science and technology.
( )14. The writer’s main purpose of writing the passage is .
A. to tell us what national treasure keepers do
B. to explain why National Treasure is popular
C. to teach us the ways of making natural paints
D. to introduce the TV show National Treasure
IV.根据短文内容,从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项
Dawa Dorji has many jobs: singer, barkeeper and English tour guide, but he is most famous as the lead singer of the first folk pop band in Tibet(西藏).In 2003, Dawa Dorji met two fans of Tibetan music. 15________ And later another two joined the band.
16. So they had to practice on weekdays in a small village after work. Dawa Dorji and his band members believed that they needed to communicate with their audience(听众) in order to write good songs. 17.
At the beginning, most audience were foreigners, but after a couple of months, many local people came to enjoy their music. 18.
“Whenever there is a festival, we Tibetans sing and dance. I sang songs with the old people, and I learned more about how to sing,” said Dawa Dorji.
19. And many of them are from traditional ones.
Dawa Dorji believes that their efforts are meaningful for introducing Tibetan folk music to the whole nation, and even the whole world.
A. Dawa Dorji was born in Lhasa.
B. Each member of the band had his own job.
C. They became good friends and started a band.
D. As a result, the band became more and more popular.
E. So at weekends they rushed to restaurants to sing for free.
F. So far, four albums with 48 Tibetan language songs have come out.
G. Each member of the band was free every day.
Unit9Section B3a-Self Check同步练习参考答案
I.1.plays 2.reading; talking 3.Learning 4.are 5.going
II. 6.stick; eating 7.looking; up 8.who/that wants 9.provide; with plenty of 10.Reading; are
III.11-14BCBD
IV.15-19CBEDF
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