2013中考英语书面表达第6集：共43页（含名师指导写作方法）

2013中考英语书面表达第6集：共43页（含名师指导写作方法）
该精品包括2012年、2011年、2010年各省市的模拟题、真题中的书面表达，既有经典的常练作文，也有与时俱进的新创新作文；题材广泛，都有参考范文。大多数文章都标明了年、省市，方便会员选用。排版工整。是专题练习、组合考卷的好材料。
稍差作文提高策略
一 中考英语稍差作文的评分标准
内容不够丰富、具体，词数较少，漏掉一个要点或只是简单要点，不能围绕内容适当发挥，语言表达过于简单，用词不达准确，句子不通顺、行文不连贯、层次不分明，有一些语法错误和语言错误，书写一般或潦草，标点运用不准确，10分作文计1－5分；15分作文计1－7分。
二 中考英语稍差作文的提高策略
从评分标准来看，它对考生的作文要求有四点：
1 内容要完整；
2 语句流畅；
3 没有语法错误；
4 书写规范。
用英文写作不像用母语那样得心应手，常常会受到词汇、语法、惯用法的限制，只要同学们平时注意两种语言的差异，抓住写作要点，也可妙笔生花。中考英语稍差作文的提高策略如下：
1 平时加强基本功。写作好比是唱戏：台上一分钟，台下“三年功”！要写好英语作文，离不开平时的勤学苦练。要从我做起，从平时做起，全面打好英语的基础，从听、说、读、写、译入手，进行广泛的训练，养成良好的英语学习习惯。
2 研究写作方法。英语常考的作文分为记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文几大类，每一种文体的写作方法是不同的，平时要留心学一学不同文体的写作方法，同时对照范文进行辨认，做到心中有数。
3 注意多多背诵。在英语学习中，人们往往忽略“背”的强大功效！“背”好比往银行（大脑）里存款，平时存储的多，用时才能随意支取，所以说，同学们听不懂、说不出、不会读、不会写等等，都是“背”得少的缘故。“背”是指背诵、记忆。它不单单是指背单词，更主要的是背诵句子、段落或篇章，每单元，每课都有一些集短语或词组、句式、习惯用法、语句等于一身的句子，我们称之为“核心句”，这些句子肯定是我们学习的重中之重，一旦你们把它们用专用的本子抄写几遍并背的滚瓜烂熟，用不了多久，你们就会发现自己比以前“聪明”多了！很多考试题就是课本上核心句的变式。抄背核心句要坚持经常，不能“三天打鱼，两天晒网”，学贵有恒！实际上，我们背的核心句就是“句套子”，只要你们背的好，学会套用，写作文就一定不会再愁眉苦脸了。另外，抄写核心句之前要弄懂句子的意思，上下句的连带关系，应答方式。然后认真抄写，规范，合理，注意字母的大小写，还有标点符号。然后就熟读，最后就背下来。过了一段时间要拿出来再背，减少遗忘，背的越熟越好。找些对应的练习加以巩固。最好把你们所背的核心句运用到作文里去，当然要因地制宜，活学活用。这样支持下来，你的英语水平肯定会比以前有明显的提高！如果在写作方法上你感到很困惑，那么，你还要多背些范文，学习一下他人的经验，这对于迅速提高英语作文水平大有好处。
4 加强写作练习。平时大家要选一些自己感兴趣的话题或作文题目时行写作练习，然后经老师批改和当面指导，相信对你作文水平的提高大有益处。
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1、、【2012黔西南】.书面表达。（共30分）
假如你是Jane，你的好友Mary在微博上说最近很累很不开心， 而且很担心即将到来的期末考试，请你在Mary的微博中回复， 给她一些建议，使她振作起来。（注意：文中不能出现姓名和学校等相关信息）
　　 提示：
1. 分析Mary 不开心的原因；
2. 给她一些建议使她减少压力；
3. 给她美好的祝福。
Dear Mary,
　　Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. I know you are under too much pressure. You can’t get on well with your classmates; you may worry about your exams.
　　I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
　　Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem.
　 Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Your,
Jane
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2、、【2011湖北荆州】书面表达(共15分)?
??? 假设你校要举办一期英语墙报,交流学习英语的感受,请你按下面表格中的内容要点提示写一篇题为“Find your own way to learn English”,80个词左右的稿件向其投稿,介绍你学习英语的体会。?
??? 稿件开头已给出,不计入总词数。?
??? 最初的情况现在的情况学习体会
学习?困难单词拼写 听力差 语法出错 阅读速度慢 学习?方法 记单元词汇表?(vocabulary list) 多听磁带 借书阅读 学好英语的关键?专心致志?自有方法
Simple answer?
??? Find Your Own Way to Learn English?
??? There are many ways to learn English, but everyone should have his or her own way.?
??? At first, I had many difficulties in Learning English. For example, I couldn’t spell some English words, and couldn’t understand what people said when they were talking fast. I often made mistakes in grammar and read very slowly.?
??? Now I have found some ways to improve my English. I copy down the vocabulary lists for each unit and keep them in my mind. I listen to English tapes every day and I can understand mostly what people talk about. I often borrow English books and read them after class.?
??? The most important thing to learn English well, I think, is to keep your mind on it, so that you can find your own ways to improve your English.(118 words)
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3、、【2011襄阳】书面表达 （本大题满分15分）
假如你的名字叫Lisa。 你的笔友Tara上周来信想你倾诉了她在班上学习成绩很好，但朋友很少，感到孤独的烦恼，并向你寻求帮助。请根据提示给她写回信，给她以帮助。
1. 写作要点提示：
1）简述Tara的烦恼；
2）针对她的烦恼提出几点建议；
3）表达你对她的鼓励与祝愿
2. 写作要求：
新的内容应包含所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可围绕提示要点适当增加情节，以使信得意思连贯；信的词数90词左右；信的开头和结尾以写出，但不计入总词数，也不得抄入答题卡。
Dear Tara,
I got your letter last weel.




Yours,
Lisa
One possible version：
Dear Tara,
I got your letter last weel. I hear that you do very well in all the subjects. Congratulations！But you have few friends. You feel lonely. You don’t know what you should do. I give some advice:
First, you should help the students who are in trouble, both in study and in life. They think you can get on well with them.
Then , join them. You can play, sing with them. Doing that can make you a member of them.
Last , after class, you can talk with them. Share the sadness and happiness with them.
I hope you can make more friends and become happy.
Yours,
Lisa
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4、、【2010·四川省眉山市】
根据提示，写一篇短文介绍张华的变化。词数60 左右。
提示：张华，一个九年级学生。家庭富裕（rich）。过去零花钱常常花在打电脑游戏上。现在，他努力学习，将零花钱大部分捐给UNICEF. 他觉得帮助别人会使他自己快乐。








【答案】
Zhang Hua is a Grade 9 student. His family is rich. He used to spend most of his pocket money playing computer games.. Now Zhang Hua works very hard at school . And he donates most of his pocket money to UNICEF. He thinks helping others makes him happy.
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5、、【2012无锡】书面表达 （本大题共10分）
假设你是无锡日报英文周刊English Weekly的特约小记者，请在答题卡指定的位置上，以“A New Town” 为题，写一则80词左右的简讯，介绍我市的太湖新城（Taihu New Town）。内容提示见下表：
简介
位于无锡南部，近五年来变化巨大
过去
有很多大型工厂
现在
政府已迁走所有工厂，空气清新，没有污染
问题
尚存一些，其中之一是公交线路太少
展望
……
注意：
简讯须包括表格内所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
表格中“展望“栏，请用自己的2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
简讯的标题已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
One possible version:
A New Town
Taihu New Town is in the south of Whxi. It has changed a lot in the past five years. There used to be many big factories here. The government has moved them all away, so the air is fresh and there is no pollution. There are still a few problems. One of them is there are too few bus lines. But I believe all these problems will be solved soon. The new town will become a wonderful place to live.
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6、、【2011湖南长沙】作文 （计10分）
近年来，中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。
② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
（2）字数：60---80词。
（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
参考范文：
Every one wants to keep healthy today, especailly our students. But we don’t pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, espacially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.
It is important for us to have good habbits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.
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7、、【2011广东】书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
你听说过Earth Hour这项活动吗？今年的Earth Hour你中如何度过的？请你写一篇题为“My Earth Hour 2011”的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你今年参加Earth Hour这个活动了吗？请表达你参加或者不有参加的心情。
2. 请描述你当时在哪里，与谁一起度过，做了什么事。
3. 请列举两件以上你在日常生活中经常做的有利于环保的事。
4. 号召大家加入到明年的Earth Hour活动中来。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的标题、开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
My Earth Hour 2011
The Earth Hour was from 8:30pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. ________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in.
参考范文
My Earth Hour 2011 (没参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was a pity that I didn't realize it was Earth Hour until I watched news on TV. At that time. I was shopping with my mother at the mall. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example. I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides. I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doinp so. Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. (86 words)
My Earth Hour 2011 (有参与)
The Earth Hour was from 8: 30 pm to 9:30 pm on Saturday, March 26th this year. It was the moment my friends and I waited for a long time. We talked and played games at home with all the lights off. We were glad to be in the Earth Hour. As a student, I have done lots of things to protect the environment. For example, I always carry a cloth bag while shopping. Besides, I often ride a bike to school instead of taking a car. I think we can care for the earth by doing so. Let's take part in the Earth Hour next year.
I believe that we can make our earth a better place to live in. (90 words)
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8、、【2012烟台】
假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习(exploring learning strategies)，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。
注意：1. 短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：100词左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
过去
现在
课堂
老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记，没有足够的时间独立思考问题。
老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题的方法。
课后
做大量的作业。
丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料等。
个人
感受
……
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ___________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One possible version:?
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.
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9、、【2011四川德阳】
第三节书面表达（满分15分）
假如你是张华，你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法，清根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。
要点：1.加入汉语班学习，可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语；
2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志；
3.听、唱汉语歌，有助于汉语词汇；
4.交中国朋友，即可练习口语又可了解中国。
要求：1.要点齐全，可适当发挥；80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.文中不能出现自己的地址、姓名及所在学校名称。

Dear Dave,
I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice. First, _______________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours
Zhang Hua
参考范文One possible version:
Dear Dave,
I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice. First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the3 most important thing is to remember as many Chinese words as possible.
Second, if you want to improve your listening ability, you’d better read Chinese books, listen to the tapes and radio programs in Chinese. You can watch the Chinese TV programs or DVDs.
Third, you make some Chinese friends. Your friends can teach you a lot of Chinese songs and introduce some Chinese festivals to you, too.
I think we will have a good time .write to me soon.
Yours
Zhang Hua
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10、、【2011?无锡】书面表达（本大题共16分）
请在答题卡指定的位置上，以“Saving Tigers”为题，为某中学生英文报《习作园地》
专栏写一篇80词左右的征文稿，内容要点如下：
1. 老虎是人们在动物园里最喜欢观看的动物之一；
2. 现在世界上仅存大约3,200只老虎，数目日趋减少；
3. 老虎处境危险的原因；
4. 保护老虎的建议。
注意：
1. 征文稿须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2. 第3、第4要点的内容须用5至6句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
3. 征文稿的标题已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
One possible version：
Saving Tigers
Have you visited zoos? Have you seen tigers in the zoos? I think a tiger is one of the most favorite animals in the zoo. But now there are about 3200 tigers in the world, and the amount of them is reducing. What caused them to reduce? Because many forests are cut down and they have no place to live in. In order to protect them we must build many natural reserves. And we must stop people from hunting.
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11、、【2012 广东】书面表达（本题15分）
根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？
你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。
就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。
作文要求：
不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today,__________________________________________
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Your,
Li Ming
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I can't stand bad manners in public, either. In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas. I think it's wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion, we should know more about good manners. On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude. If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.
Yours,
Li Ming (92 words)
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12、、【2011湖南永州】情景作文 （10分）
每个人都有不同的生活习惯，养成良好的生活习惯，会使我们拥有健康的体魄。良好的生活习惯有哪些呢？例如：每天按时起床和睡觉；饭前洗手；多吃水果和蔬菜，不吃垃圾食品；多参加体育锻炼；不乱扔垃圾和随地吐痰；不要再马路上玩耍，横过马路注意交通安全等。
根据以下提示，以How to Develop Good Living Habits为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：意思连贯、表达准确，词数60-80。
注意：短文的题目、开头和结尾已给出，且不计入总词数。
提示：before meals (饭前)； junk food （垃圾食品）； rubbish （垃圾）；spit（吐痰）；exercise （锻炼）；cross the road （横过马路）； traffic lights （交通灯）。
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.
How to Develop Good Living Habits
Everyone has different living habits. Good habits can make us keep healthy. As teenagers, what should we do?
In my opinion, everyone should get up and sleep on time every day. Don’t play or watch TV all night. That is bad for healthy and affect our work. We should eat more vegetables and fruit, and eat less meat. I advise everybody to take more physical exercises. Don't eat junk food, for example instant noodles. Don't litter and spit. Don't play on the road. Remember to obey the traffic rules. No jaywalking. In a word, if we want to keep healthy and happy, we must develop good living habits.
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13、、【2011安徽芜湖】书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
亲爱的的同学，你将初中毕业了。在这三年的学习生活中，你一定结交了许多的好朋友。请用英语写一篇短文，介绍一位你的好朋友Li Lei。
要点如下： 1. 他乐于助人，性格外向，兴趣广泛；
2. 他成绩优秀，经常在学习上帮助我；
3. 我准备送他一个…以表达感谢；
4. 我对他的祝福和希望；
注意：1. 词数80—100；开头已为你写好，但不计入总词数；
2. 短文需包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当加以细节或发挥，使其连贯、通顺，文中不得出现真实的人名、学校等相关信息。
3. 参考词汇：外向 outgoing
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei.
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（一）One possible version：
We are graduating from school soon. I miss so many good friends, especially my best friends ---- Li Lei.
Li Lei is a top student. He is outgoing and hard-working. He has a lot of interests and is always ready to help others. We get on well with each other so we often discuss our study together and he can always find out new ways to help me work out problems. I’m so proud of him.
I care so much about him that I want to do something meaningful for him. Before leaving school, I’ll send him a card that I make myself with my best wishes. I hope he will have a bright future and that our friendship will last forever.
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14、、【2012 泰安】写 作（共1题，满分15分）

学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点：
1. 去旅游，亲近大自然；
2. 参加娱乐活动，比如：听音乐、看电影……；
3. 进行体育锻炼；
4. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数：80～100，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to relax ourselves after the exam



One possible version：
How to relax ourselves after the exam
It is necessary to relax ourselves after the exam. There’re kinds of activities for us to take part in. First of all we can travel around to get closer to nature and this can broaden our mind as well as enriching our life. We can also go to the movie or listen to music. What’s more, joining in a sports club is a good choice, which can keep us healthy. For example, playing a football game in the afternoon may relax ourselves. Above all, we should arrange our time reasonably and live a regular life. I hope all of us can have a wonderful time.
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15、、【2011湖北·武汉】??书面表达（满分15分）
????假设你是Li Ming，目前在英国参加Homestay夏令营，住在Mrs. William家。现在，你需要完成培训老师布置的作业：用英语描述你的房东或房东太太。
????要点如下：
????1.外貌特征（自己发挥）；
????2.和蔼友善，与你相处融洽；
????3.经常照顾你的日常生活，如：洗衣等；
????4.对中国的历史文化很感兴趣；
????5.补充一至两点其他的看法。
????注意：
????1.词数60-80，文章开头已给出，不记入总词数；
????2.文中不要提及你真实的校名和人名。
????参考词汇：
????friendly adj. 友善的?culture n. 文化?get along with 与……相处
One possible version：
???My hostess is Mrs.William. She is a middle-aged housewife with blonde hair. I really like this outgoing woman. We get along well with each other. She always takes care of my daily life. She cooks and washes clothes for me. That makes me feel like at home. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She hope to visit China one day.
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16、、【2011·苏州】书面表达（共1题； 满分20分）
假定你是苏华。 你在加拿大的笔友John在做一个关于世界各国中学生如何过暑假的调查。 他给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解一下有关情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复，可以有适当的发挥。
注意：1、词数90个左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
2、回复中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
To: suhua@china.com.cn
From: johnsmith@yahoo.com.ca
Subject: summer vacation
Dear Su Hua,
I’m conducting a survey on how students spend their summer vacation in different countries.
I need your help. Would you mind answering the following questions?
● When do you start your summer vacation and how long is it?
● How do you go to a summer school? Why or Why not?
● Will you go to a summer school? And why?
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
John
To: johnsmith@yahoo.com.ca
From: suhua@china.com.cn
Subject: summer vacation
Dear John,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to answer your questions.
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在
答
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_______________________________________指
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I wish to visit you in Canada one day.
Yours,
Su Hua
答案：
One possible version:
Dear John,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to answer your questions.
In China, we start our summer vacation at the beginning of July. It lasts about two months. We can do many things to relax ourselves in summer vacation. I often go swimming, surf the Internet and watch TV. I will go to a summer school for a month to study English because it is important and I like it. But what I want to do most is traveling with my parents. We have been to many places. This summer, we are going to Beijing. We always have a good time.(90词)
I wish to visit you in Canada one day.
Yours,
Su Hua
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17、、【2012 丹东】根据要求完成大作文（15分）
最近中小学生的生活发生了很大的变化，学生在校时间缩短，作业量减少，课间开展丰富多彩的体育活动，有更多的业余时间做自己喜欢做的事。
请以How my school life has changed为题，围绕以上内容并结合下面图示用英语写一篇短文。
参考词汇：kick jianzi v. 踢毽子 skip rope v. 跳绳
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 根据所给内容及参考词汇，请适当发挥；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名；
5. 词数：70词左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How my school life has changed
My school life has changed a lot since this term. …
One possible version:
How my school life has changed
My school life has changed a lot since this term. We don’t need to get to school early. We begin our lessons at eight o’clock. We can get enough sleep.
At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day. After the second class we do morning exercises. After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope. In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports. Some play basketball, some play football, others run on the playground.
After school, we don’t have too much homework to do. We have lots of free time. We can do what we like . We can take part in many after-school activities.
In a word, we are happier and healthier than before.
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18、、【2011?盐城】书面表达
初中三年的英语学习中，北京阳光中学的同学也了与我们朝夕相处的朋友，其中Daniel的善良和助人为乐等优秀品质给我们留下了深刻的印象。请根据课本内容及下表提示，用英语写一篇题为“My Friend Daniel”的短文。
Daniel
Appearance
Likes
Dislikes
sports
Personality
helpful —— help an old woman cross the road
kind —— work at the Helping Hands Club
creative —— create a TV programme
…
What can you learn from him?
注意事项：
1. 词数：80词左右（已给出的文章开头不计入总词数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作适当发挥。
My Friend Daniel
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He

【写作要点】
(1)要以朋友的身份介绍Daniel，故人称主要用第三人称，时态用一般现在时。
(2)根据题目提供的要点进行说明，不要遗漏要点。
(3)可适当发挥。
One possible version：
My friend Daniel comes from Beijing Sunshine Secondary School. He has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses. He is good at playing computer games, but he dislikes sports. He has many good personal qualities. He is helpful. He often helps his classmates with the homework, and also helps the old woman cross the road. He is kind to others. He works at the Helping Hands Club. He is willing to help the people in need. He is also creative and organized. For example, he can create a TV programme and organize the class activities well. He is generous to his friends. He likes to share his things with them. So I want to be a person like Daniel from now and get along well with everyone.
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19、、【2011?四川成都】书面表达。（计10分）
假设你是小伟。你的室友大明昨天接到你朋友Maria的电话。她正在研究中国的节日文化，需要你的帮助。现在，请你根据大明所留的便条内容，给Maria回一封电子邮件。
Xiaowei,
Your friend Maria made a phone call to you yesterday. She wants to know the traditional Chinese festival—the Lantern Festival. She wants you to tell her why we like it, when and how we spend it (tell her at least 3 activities). Send an email to her at marial988@ gmail. com.
Please ask her what they do during Christmas for me.
Darning
注意：
1）电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数（80-100词）；
2）表达完整、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3）提示词：sweet rice dumplings汤圆 play with firecrackers燃放鞭炮 the Lantern Festival 元宵节
To: marial988@gmail.com From; xiaowei@sina.com
Subject: the Lantern Festival
Dear Maria,
How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival—
the Lantern Festival. Actually, ______________________________________________________________________.
Love
Xiaowei
□
One possible version:
To: marial988@ gmail. Com From; xiaowei? sina. com
Subject: the Lantern Festival
Dear Maria,
How are you? You asked me something about the traditional Chinese festival—
the Lantern Festival. Actually, we have it at the end of the Spring Festival.
We like the Lantern Festival because we can enjoy beautiful views at night. Usually, we eat a kind of sweet rice dumplings called yuanxiao, and we go out to watch colourful
lanterns with our family members. When it gets dark, it looks beautiful
everywhere with lots of lanterns. We also enjoy some firework shows or play with
firecrackers ourselves. It's great fun!
By the way, what do you usually do during Christmas?
Love
Xiaowei
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20、、【2012河南真题】书面表达（15分）
目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史，有人选择读史书来了解历史。你选择的理由是什么？请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。
选择
理由
看历史剧
情节有趣、通俗易懂；
读历史书
资料真实、引人深思；
你的选择
？
要求：1、语言表达准确；短文连贯通顺；
2、短文必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当发挥；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
4、词数80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总次数。
Many historical plays have been on TV recently.








【参考范文】
Many historical plays have been on TV recently.Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history.They think they are interesting and easy to understand.Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.
Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history.They believe books can tell them the true storied.They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.
I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.om]
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21、、【2012绵阳真题】书面表达（共1题，满分20分）
在即将告别母校的时刻， 你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情。请根据下面表格所列要点，以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题， 用英语写出一篇短文，放在你的QQ空间，供大家访读。
感
恩
对象
存栏记忆
未来与祝福
母校
美丽校园，快乐家园
越来越好
老师
教授知识，给予帮助
铭记在心
职员
关心照料，抚育成长
永远开心
同学
相处和睦，情同兄弟姊妹
保持联系
注意：1.词数：80词左右；
2. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名；
3. 短文的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计人总词数）。
参考词汇： 知识 knowledge; 职员 staff members; 永远 always/forever
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
【参考范文】One possible version：
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, dear junior school. You’re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you’ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You’re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I’ll remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You’ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You’ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let’s always keep in touch [80 words]
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
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22、、【2012安顺真题】书面表达（15 分）
人人都希望生活在环境优美的城市中，作为中学生，我们要积极为创建 “文明城市” 作贡献。请你根据下列图表所给提示词写一篇发言稿。
要求： 1．语句通顺，书写规范，文章中不得出现真实姓名和校名。 2．必须运用所有提示词，并写出两个以上自己的观点。 3．词数在 80 词左右。
Civilized（文明）City
good behavior
excellent environment
should
don't
can
had better not
talk politely
traffic rules
plant
your ideas
be friendly to
pick up litter
loudly
help
clean the small ads
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23、、【2012连云港真题】书面表达（满分20分）
假设你班上周就 “ Is it OK to tell white lies?” 开展了一场讨论，请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文， 简单介绍讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的观点。
陈述方
主要观点
赞成者
善意的谎言是出于好意， 说了不为过；
善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处；
善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信。
反对者
善意的谎言也是谎；
谎言会伤害友情；
谎言终究不能持久。
你的观点
………. ( 至少两点)
注意：1.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
2.词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计总词数；
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名；
4.参考词汇： 善意的谎言 a white lie
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies . The students have different opinions.
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies . The students have different opinions.
Some think it is all right to do so out of kindness. Besides , white lies can often help people get on well with each other. Sometimes , they may make one confident.
However, many others take telling lies very seriously. They insist that white lies are lies after all. They do harm to friendship. What’s worse, lies never go far.
In my opinion, I have to admit that all people lie at times. As long ass we’re true to each other, lies , whatever kinds they are , won’t stand in our way. (94 words)
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24、、【2012咸宁真题】书面表达（共12分）
同学们，咸宁市被列为首批国家旅游标准化四个示范城市之一了。让我们也行动起来吧！为了让母校变得更加美好，为家乡建设添砖加瓦，请同学们为校园建设积极建言献策。假如你是滨海中学初三年级学生刘雨，请你写一份建议书。 (以上背景内容无需表述)内容要点：1、校园环境（如：植树、种花、运动场、图书馆……）
2、特色课程（如：舞蹈、音乐……）
3、……注意：1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；词数80左右。文章开头、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
2、要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，可以适当发挥。
3、提示词：hope; organize; interestingDear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your reading!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
【参考范文】One possible version: (107 words)
Dear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, a library with a lot of interesting books in it should be built, so that we can read in our spare time every day. Second, we expect our own dancing hall and piano room. Many of us like dancing, and some are even good at playing the piano. Third, we dreams of having a playing-field with many flowers and green trees around. We can exercise there every day to make our body strong. Finally, I suggest teachers in our school organize more colorful after- class activities for students.
In a word, I hope our school will attract more visitors and I wish her a good future.
Thanks for your reading!Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
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25、、【2012临沂真题】书面表达（计15分)
假定你是王林，你的英国笔友Heleri在做有关也界各国中学生如何过周未的调查。她给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解相关情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据邮件中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复，可适当发挥。
注意：1. 不少于60词，开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。
2. 回复中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
Subject: Weekends From: Helen
Dear Wang Lin,
I’m doing a survey on how students spend their weekends around the world. I need your help. Could you please answer the following questions?
How do you usually relax yourself on weekends?
Do you do chores at home? Why or why not?
What do you wamt to do most? And why?
Thanks,
Helen
Subjcct: Weekends From: Wang Lin
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. I would like to answer your questions.
Best wishes,
Wang Lin
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Helen,
Thank you for your email. I would like to answer your questions.
I can do many things to relax myself on weekends. I often play table tennis, surf the Internet and watch TV. I usually do chores at home, because my parents are very busy and I want to help them. What I want to do most is going bike riding with friends. We have been 1o many beautifiii villages. Next weekend, we are going to Mountain Meng. We always have fun.
Best wishes.
Wane Lin
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26、、【2012烟台真题】假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习(exploring learning strategies)，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。
注意：1. 短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：100词左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
过去
现在
课堂
老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记，没有足够的时间独立思考问题。
老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题的方法。
课后
做大量的作业。
丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料等。
个人
感受
……
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考答案】One possible version:?
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.
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27、、【2012 广东真题】书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。
假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中学生，看了上述故事后，你想表达自己的看法。 请你给栏目编辑写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
你对其中的哪个故事感兴趣？原因是什么？
你对这个故事所提及的现象的看法。
就该现象提出至少两条解决问题的建议。
作文要求：
不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today,____________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Your,
Li Ming
Dear Editor,
I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today. I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou. I can't stand bad manners in public, either. In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas. I think it's wrong to break the rules in public. In my opinion, we should know more about good manners. On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude. If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.
Yours,
Li Ming (92 words)
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28、、【2012 泰安真题】写 作（共1题，满分15分）
学校英语角将于本周末举行以 “How to relax ourselves after the exam” 为主题的讨论会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。内容包括以下要点：
1. 去旅游，亲近大自然；
2. 参加娱乐活动，比如：听音乐、看电影……；
3. 进行体育锻炼；
4. 你的建议。
注意：1. 词数：80～100，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
How to relax ourselves after the exam



【参考答案】One possible version：
How to relax ourselves after the exam
It is necessary to relax ourselves after the exam. There’re kinds of activities for us to take part in. First of all we can travel around to get closer to nature and this can broaden our mind as well as enriching our life. We can also go to the movie or listen to music. What’s more, joining in a sports club is a good choice, which can keep us healthy. For example, playing a football game in the afternoon may relax ourselves. Above all, we should arrange our time reasonably and live a regular life. I hope all of us can have a wonderful time.
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29、、【2012 丹东真题】.根据要求完成大作文（15分）
最近中小学生的生活发生了很大的变化，学生在校时间缩短，作业量减少，课间开展丰富多彩的体育活动，有更多的业余时间做自己喜欢做的事。
请以How my school life has changed为题，围绕以上内容并结合下面图示用英语写一篇短文。
参考词汇：kick jianzi v. 踢毽子 skip rope v. 跳绳
要求：1. 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2. 书写工整、规范；
3. 根据所给内容及参考词汇，请适当发挥；
4.文中不得出现真实姓名；
5. 词数：70词左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
How my school life has changed
My school life has changed a lot since this term. …
【参考答案】One possible version:
How my school life has changed
My school life has changed a lot since this term. We don’t need to get to school early. We begin our lessons at eight o’clock. We can get enough sleep.
At school we have at least one hour for sports to relax ourselves every day. After the second class we do morning exercises. After that we usually kick jianzi or skip rope. In the afternoon, we can do different kinds of sports. Some play basketball, some play football, others run on the playground.
After school, we don’t have too much homework to do. We have lots of free time. We can do what we like . We can take part in many after-school activities.
In a word, we are happier and healthier than before.
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30、、【2012北海真题】书面表达（10分）
假设你是Alice，请你根据Lily的来信的内容写一封回信。针对Lily的困惑，首先谈谈你的看法，然后给Lily提一些建议，建议提示如下：
1．去她的朋友家里或打电话与她的朋友交谈；
2．给她的朋友写信或发E-mail；
3．请她的朋友购买不同的衣服或留不同的发型；
要求：
1．回信内容必须包括你的看法以及所有的提示内容，可适当发挥；
2．信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数；
3．词数：70个左右。
【参考范文】（One possible version）
Dear Lily，
I’m glad that I received a letter from you.
I think you should be happy that you best friend likes your clothes and haircut. If not, I have some advice that may help you. You should go to her house or call her up to talk to her. You could write or send an e-mail to her about your problem. You could also ask her to get different clothes and have a different haircut, or maybe you could find a new best friend.
Good luck!
Yours,
Alice
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31、、【2012北京真题】文段表达。（共15分）
根据中文和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文，所给英文提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验，如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……
现在，某英文报纸就分享（Sharing）话题征文，请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历，并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语：share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident
【参考范文】One possible version
I had an eaperience of sharing.When my ramily moved,I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that Ifailed. Igot worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on,we got to know each other and shared our ideas,problems,and happiness.We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.
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32、、【2012天津真题】书面表达（本大题共15分）
假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日，是星期五，在放学回家的公交车上，你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。
要点：
一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车，老人拿着书包和小提琴；
你给老人让座，老人的孙子却坐了下来，老人只得站在旁边；
孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝，并将空水瓶扔到车上；
你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人，保持环境卫生。
参考词汇：孙子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 保持……干净keep…clean
要求：1. 词数：80~100个。
2. 日记开头已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
June 3, Friday Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw




【参考范文】One possible version:
June 3, Friday Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.
When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
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33、、【2012 梅州真题】书面表达。（本题共15分）
目前，我国实施城市化进程中，给从乡村（镇）迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony 发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。
内容包括如下：
在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；
请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；
在星期天，可外出郊游等。
总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。
要求：1、涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
2、卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。
(可能用到的词：First, Second, Third，In conclusion)
Dear Know,
I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don’t know anybody here and I want to make some friends. What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?
Yours,
Tony
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do.
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It takes time and patience(耐心). I hope you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
【参考范文】One possible version:
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some（public） places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.（you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.）In conclusion(What’s mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
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34、、【2012 黄冈真题】书面表达(1 题，满分10 分)
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
注意：①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
③词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：网购shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods; 导致cause With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.
【参考范文】One possible version:
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.
That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping on line.
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