2013中考英语书面表达第5集：共43页（含名师指导写作方法）
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2013中考英语书面表达第5集：共43页（含名师指导写作方法）
该精品包括2012年、2011年、2010年各省市的模拟题、真题中的书面表达，既有经典的常练作文，也有与时俱进的新创新作文；题材广泛，都有参考范文。大多数文章都标明了年、省市，方便会员选用。排版工整。是专题练习、组合考卷的好材料。
中等作文提高策略
中考英语中等作文的评分标准
内容较完整，基本包含所有要点，内容较具体，基本能够围绕内容适当发挥，语句较流畅，用词较准确、句子较通顺、行文较连贯、层次较分明、表达基本清楚，有少量语法错误和语言错误，书写较规范，标点正确，10分作文计6―8分；15分作文计8－14分。
中考英语作文扣分项目：
整篇作文以满分10分为例，其中基本分占9分，整体印象分占1分。
整体印象不好扣1分
偏题扣2－3分。
文章不满规定词数，每少5个词为一个扣分单位，扣0.5分。
语法错误，每一个错扣0.5分，同一个错不重复扣分。
大小写、单词拼写、标点等错误每处扣0.5分，标点错误累计扣分不超过1分。
二、中考英语中等作文的提高策略
虽然各地中考英语作文的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面；整体印象，语言表达，词数规定等内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取加分点。中等作文的提高策略如下：
1 注意人称和时态，讲究层次和条理。在审题的过程中，就要考虑到文章所用的人称和时态，这也是提高作文分数的主要因素之一。整篇文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。要从实际需要出发，保证文章层次分明、条理清楚。
2 作文讲究可读性，注意词语运用效果。中考中，以提示作文为主，提出的要求也是很具体的，从此意义上讲，作文用不着更多的借题发挥，只要能够完整的可读性，不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生僻的词汇，对这些一知半解的词又不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显得生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词语和句型，避免不必要的失分。
3 注意语言表达习惯，回避汉语式英语。从实际来看，有些同学写英语作文还按照汉语作文的构思方法和写作方法来写，结果出现很多的汉语式英语，这也是他们丢分的主要原因之一。英语和汉语在很多方面存在差异，按汉语的思维方式写出的作文必然不符合英语的表达习惯，那么得分率肯定很低。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯。切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。
4 作文还需仔细推敲，讲究文采，因地制宜。有些同学因怕出错而只写短句式或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味，自然得分不高。要使文章有血有肉凡要把平时学的知识用进去，比如复合句（宾语从句、状语从句等）关键时用上一个，两个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采；“so that” “ not… but ”“ not only…but also ”等关联词，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。写出的文章要经的起推敲，尤其是写完作文之后，要将文章仔细推敲一番。
5 注意体裁和题材，留意要求写作的格式。每当提笔写作文的时候，要先想一想文章属于哪种体裁，按照不同体裁的写作方法去写。比如，写书信，就要按应用文的写作方法来考虑和写作，同时还要注意书信的写作格式，格式不正确，至少会丢一分。不同的题材，写作的角度和方法也是不同的，要做到因文而异。一味地套用范文，恐怕也会出现误差。从些意义上讲，审题加思考，方向要正确。
6 认真的书写，注意第一印象。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。所以说，最简单的增分点就是卷面清洁、字迹工整。很多工区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。
总而言之，英语写作水平的提高是一个渐进的过程，只要同学们在平时多加训练，多读文章，做一个有心人，在中考作文中取得理想的成绩就不是一句空话。
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1、、【2012潍坊真题】写作(满分15分)
假设你是大明，你的笔友给你来信了。请阅读以下来信，并根据内容写一封回信。
要求：1．80词左右；2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Daming,
I’d like to tell you something about my “important gift”．It was a beautiful smile．
When I was nine years old，I went to a new school．As a result，no one knew who I was．I felt lonely．Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual，a girl walked to me and smiled．
Though she said no words，I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again．After that she became my good friend．
As we all know，everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble．Could you tell me something about your “important gift” that touched you or changed your life?
Yours,
Susan
Dear Susan,
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Best wishes,
Daming
Dear Susan,
I’m glad to read your letter and your “important gift” really touches me. As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears.
Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual.
One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears. All at once, her sadness touched my deep heart. Since then, I have completely changed myself.
Best wishes,
Daming
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2、、【2012河北真题】书面表达（计10分）
假如你叫李华，请你就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题，根据下面的提示和要求，给你的老师Miss Li写一封信，谈一谈人的看法。
提示：(1)What’s your idea?
(2) Why do you think so?
(3) What is your advice?
要求：(1)信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2) 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 词数：60~80。
Dear Miss Li,
I think you’d better use ______________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hopefully you can think about it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hus
.【参考范文】Possible versions
Dear Miss Li,
I think you'd better use English in class. When you speak English, we'll have a good chance to improve our listening kills .It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make ! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly. This way, we can learn English better and better.
Hopefully you can think about it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Miss Li,
I think you'd better use both English and Chinese. The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English, it's good for our listening. At the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking, reading and writing .However ,if you only ous English, we can't follow you sometimes , especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is "Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary". This way, we can learn English better.
Hopefully you can think about it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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3、、【2012山东济南真题】书面表达（10分）
根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：burglar n.窃贼 steal(stole, stolen) v.偷
【参考范文】One night, Mr and Ms Green was sleeping. So did their cat. The cat dreamed of a fish. At that moment, a burglar came into their room quietly from the window. He wanted to steal something from their house. The cat woke up, he fought with the burglar bravely. Being afraid to wake up the Greens, the burglar had to escape from the window again. The brave cat protected the things from being stolen without waking up its owner.
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4、、【2012 桂林】.书面表达（共15分）
假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
. One possible version
My good friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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5、、【2011 山东烟台】
Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。
学会对自己微笑
1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。
2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。
3、有益于身心健康。
学会对他人微笑
1、便于与他人之间的交流。
2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。
微笑是一种语言
人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。
1、参考词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
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【写作思路】
一、审题
本篇作文考查体裁为议论文。本文指出微笑的重要性，并要求我们不仅学会对自己微笑，还要学会对别人微笑，同时指出学会微笑的重要性。
二、列举写作要点
1. 学会对自己微笑：smile at yourself
2. 学会对别人微笑：smile at others
3. 微笑的重要性：pass love and friendship；helps shorten the distance between you and other people
三、列出关键短语和句型
smile at sb. misunderstand，pass love and friendship；helps shorten the distance between you and other people
【参考范文】——One possible version:?
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”
Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
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6、、【2011浙江衢州】书面表达（共2小题）
根据下面图片，分别为图1和图2个写两个句子。
要求：（1）句子内容必须与图片相关；（2）句子完整，准确。
(1)To keep healthy, we should eat all kinds of fruits.
(2) Look! What fresh fruits they are!
(3)The boy is doing his homework with the lamp on.
(4) It’s very late. The boy opened the lamp to do his homework.
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7、、【2010·广西省桂林市】
节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
要点：
（1）每天步行上学；
（2）离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；
（3）不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；
（4）充分使用纸张；
（5）不使用塑料袋。
参考词汇：on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag
要求：
（1） 内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
（2） 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
【答案】My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
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8、、【2012 宿迁】书面表达（满分15分）
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….（至少一条）
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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9、、【2011贵州省】
在贵州一些偏远山区，许多学生住得离学校较远，每天上学要步行1个多小时。因为家里贫穷，中午他们只能吃从家里带的冷饭和冷菜，有的已经变坏了。一些学生甚至一天只吃早、晚两顿，没吃午饭，下午就饿着上课。
请以“You and me” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍他们的状况并谈谈你的感受和打算。
要求：
（1）可根据需要对所给材料进行取舍或适当发挥，不必逐字翻译；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名‘
（3）词数80—110.
You and me
You live in a mountain village. It’s far away from your school. It take you one hour to get there every day. To save money, you bring food for lunch. At noon, it is cold, some even goes bad. Sometimes you study the whole afternoon without lunch, only two meals one day.
I never worry about my life. Every day I study in a bright room and enjoy each delicious meal! What different lives we are living! As a teenager, surely I should do something fro you like raising money, collecting books, etc.
We are living under the same sky and let’s share the same happiness!
When we are studying in the bridge classroom, some poor students in Guizhou are walking on the way to school. Being poor, they have no money to buy food for lunch. What they eat at noon is the clod food they bring from home. Sometimes the food even goes bad. Some of them have only two meals a day. They often go on with their lessons in the afternoon without lunch.
What a hard life they are living! I think we should do something for them. Let’s share our pocket money with them and se some books to them.
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10、、【2011温州】书面表达（本题有1小题，共20分）
假如你叫刘宏，你学校每年都在世界水日（World Water Day）开展丰富多彩的活动，宣传节约用水，你的笔友Jim所在的学校也要开展类似活动，请你写信向他介绍你们的活动情况（活动内容见下表）。
活动时间
3月22日
参加人员
全校师生
活动形式
表演短剧
演讲比赛
制作海报
……
活动目的
告诉人们水的重要性、浪费水的危害、节约用水的方法……
活动感受
……
要求： 1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点，课适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 文章长度；约100词（不包含已给的词数）。
参考词汇：take part in, put on short plays, speech competition, make poster, helpful, save, waster
Dear Jim,
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day.
Yours,
Liu Hong
One possible version：
Dear Jim,
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day. On March 22nd all the teachers and students of the school take part in different activities.
Lots of students put on short plays. Some plays are funny, and they show us wasting water is bad for humans. Many students take part in the speech competition. They tell us what we should do to save water. Some teachers and students make posters and put them up in the school and neihborhood. In this way, more people know the World Water Day and join us.
All these activities are helpful. More and more people know the importance of water and begin to save it. Maybe you do the same.
Yours,
Liu Hong
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11、、【2010·青海宁夏】
假定你是赵方，今年暑假你将和父母一起去上海参观世博园，火车票已买好。请根据下表信息给你在上海的好友Jenny写一封信，告知她你们的行程安排，并与她约定一个见面的时间。字数：80词左右。信的首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
日期
活动内容
7月15日
从银川出发
7月17日
到达上海，入住江天宾馆（距世博园约四公里）
7月18-19日
参观世博园
7月20日
返回银川
参考词汇: 世博园 the pavilions of the World Expo
Dear Jenny,
I have got good news to tell you. ___________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Zhao Fang
【答案】Dear Jenny，
I’ve got good news to tell you. This summer vacation my parents and I will go to Shanghai to visit the pavilions of the World Expo. We have already bought the train tickets. We will leave Yinchuan on July 15 and arrive in Shanghai on July 17. We will stay in Jiangtian Hotel which is about 4 kilometers away from the pavilions. During the next two days we will visit the pavilions. We plan to return to Yinchuan on July 20. I will be free on the evening of July 19. Can we meet then? I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Zhao Fang
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12、、【2012 梅州】书面表达。（本题共15分）
目前，我国实施城市化进程中，给从乡村（镇）迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony 发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。
内容包括如下：
在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；
请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；
在星期天，可外出郊游等。
总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。
要求：1、涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
2、卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。
(可能用到的词：First, Second, Third，In conclusion)
Dear Know,
I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don’t know anybody here and I want to make some friends. What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?
Yours,
Tony
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do.
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It takes time and patience(耐心). I hope you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some（public） places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.（you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.）In conclusion(What’s mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
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13、、【2011贵州安顺】书面表达（15分）
最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(“Don’t keep your worries”) 的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1、内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、对老师和父母的建议。
2、词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
One possible version:
Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day．And they feel stressed too much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy．We will try/do our best and we also want to play on our own．
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14、、2011?湖南衡阳?】书面表达。（共10分）
你喜欢过生日吗？你的生日过得开心吗？每个人都曾有过难以忘怀的生日。请以“My Birthday”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日，让大家共同分享你生日的快乐。
要求：1.词数：80左右
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Birthday
My Birthday
March 5th is my birthday. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs. After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
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15、、【2012 黄冈】书面表达(1 题，满分10 分)
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
注意：①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
③词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：网购shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods; 导致cause With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.
One possible version:
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.
That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping on line.
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16、、【2011湖北十堰】初级写作（本题一节，计15分）
针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论。作为一名90后的中学生，请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你。
要求：1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息；
3. 词数：不少于80词。发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：selfish(自私的) ; Internet; believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想); in style, creative
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. ____________________
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We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
One possible version
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us, which make us become selfish. Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well.
We teenagers have high ideals. We always believe in ourselves and never say “die”. Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be easily accepted by us. You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life. We also know how to respecet your parents and teachers.
We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
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17、、【2011山东】书面表达（共1题，计15分）
随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢？ 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
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参考范文：
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on Internet for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
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18、、【2010·浙江省卷】
你即将告别朝夕相处的初中老师，请选择5门学科，给这些老师分别写一句最想对她/他说的话。下面所列学科供参考。
注意：范例可以适当参考，但不得抄袭；句中不得出现真实的人名和校名.
English Chinese Maths Science PE Art Music IT….
e.g. My dear English teacher，your class is really interesting.
【答案】76.Thank you for teaching me so well，my dear Chinese teacher..
You are so helpful，my dear maths teacher.
You make science so interesting，my dear teacher.
I love you，my music teacher.
Thank you for your help，my dear PE teacher.
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19、、【2012南昌】书面表达(15分)
某中学生英文报为了了解中学生的购物习惯与喜好，向广大中学生作调查。请你根据下面图表提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的购物习惯与喜好。（学科网精校）
提示：1．短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I 'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. ______________________________
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One Possible Version:
I'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. In my spare time, I like shopping. There is a supermarket in my town. Lots of things are being sold there. So I often go there with my mother to buy school things, food and drinks.
Of course, sometimes I want to buy something expensive. An MP4 player is what I want most, but I can't afford it now. I'm going to work for an English club during this summer holiday and make some money for it. We teenagers should not always ask our parents for money.
As for shopping online, I like it, because things there are much cheaper and I don't need to walk to the shops, which helps me save time. No matter where to shop, I enjoy it because it's really relaxing.
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20、、【2011肇庆】书面表达（满分15分）
请以“My Favourite Fruit” 为题写一篇英语作文。
要点：1. 简要介绍这种水果的形状、颜色等特点；
2. 列举你喜欢它的原因（至少三条）。
要求：1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 选择除桔子之外的其它水果；
3. 词数：60—80词左右。
One possible version:
My Favourite Fruit
Of all the fruits, I like apples best. First it is very beautiful. It is red and round. You can’t help eating it when you see it. Second, it is very sweet. It is really a kind of enjoyment when you taste it. Third, it is said that apples are very good for our health. There is a saying: “One apple a day, keeps a doctor away.” It means that if you have one apple every day, you won’t get any disease. The apple is not only an ordinary kind of fruit, it can also keep you away from disease, so there is no reason to refuse it. Try it and enjoy it!
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21、、【2011湖北黄石】 书面表达（10分）
假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏，成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封e-mail ,帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。
要点提示：1、说明玩电脑游戏的利弊。
2、建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动。
3、你对小明的期望。
要求：1、字数：80词左右（开头与结尾已给出，且不计入总词数。）
2、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3、文中必须包括提示中所规定的要点，并可适当发挥。
参考词汇：be addicted to 沉溺于--- ---
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
Yours,
Liu Chang
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently? We take pride in that you are good at playing computer games. Computers are more and more important in our lives. Playing games on them can help us know more about computers, which is very useful for our future lives. But if you are addicted to it, it’ll be quite harmful to you. It is not only bad for your health but also has bad influence to your study to spend too much time playing them.
Next you should take an active part in all kinds of activities in your free time. We all know you are a cute boy, you must do better in the study if you spend less time playing computer games.
Yours,
Liu Chang
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22、、【2010·山东省滨州市】
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。
暑 假 计 划
1、好好休息，学会放松
2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识
3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务
4、参加社会活动，了解社会
5、……
注意：
1、词数80～100；
2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名；
3、方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
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23、、【2012 广州真题】书面表达(共1题，满分15分)
你是学校英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开傍，就如何保持考前健康提出建议。主要内容如下：
(1)早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；
(2)饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；
(3)多做体育运动；
(4)你的其它建议。
Dear students，
As we all know,good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to…
Best wishes and stay healthy．
Yours，
Li Hua
注意：1．词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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24、、【2012黔西南真题】.书面表达。（共30分）
假如你是Jane，你的好友Mary在微博上说最近很累很不开心， 而且很担心即将到来的期末考试，请你在Mary的微博中回复， 给她一些建议，使她振作起来。（注意：文中不能出现姓名和学校等相关信息）
提示：
1. 分析Mary 不开心的原因；
2. 给她一些建议使她减少压力；
3. 给她美好的祝福。
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. I know you are under too much pressure. You can’t get on well with your classmates; you may worry about your exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem.
Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Your,
Jane
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25、、【2012无锡真题】书面表达 （本大题共10分）
假设你是无锡日报英文周刊English Weekly的特约小记者，请在答题卡指定的位置上，以“A New Town” 为题，写一则80词左右的简讯，介绍我市的太湖新城（Taihu New Town）。内容提示见下表：
简介
位于无锡南部，近五年来变化巨大
过去
有很多大型工厂
现在
政府已迁走所有工厂，空气清新，没有污染
问题
尚存一些，其中之一是公交线路太少
展望
……
注意：
简讯须包括表格内所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
表格中“展望“栏，请用自己的2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
简讯的标题已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
【参考答案】One possible version:
A New Town
Taihu New Town is in the south of Whxi. It has changed a lot in the past five years. There used to be many big factories here. The government has moved them all away, so the air is fresh and there is no pollution. There are still a few problems. One of them is there are too few bus lines. But I believe all these problems will be solved soon. The new town will become a wonderful place to live.
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26、、【2012南京真题】书面表达（满分15分）
上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday.
【参考范文】One possible version:
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.
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27、、【2012温州真题】书面表达（本题有1小题，共20分）
某英文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约100词的英语文章：内容包括，走路有利健康，和朋友结伴有利于……让父母节省……使城市……等等；可适当发挥。
注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：be good for, with friends, save
【参考范文】
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
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28、、【2012衢州真题】假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
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A pleasant outing
时间
上周末
参加者
你和……
地点
北山公园(the North Hill Park)
活动
骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏……
感受
……
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要求：（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
（3）词数: 80~110个。
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参考词汇：go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnic
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A pleasant outing
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【参考范文】One Possible version
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 p.m.. We were tired but very happy.
What a pleasant outing it was!
(106 words)
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29、、【2012宁波真题】书面表达（共15分）
小组活动（group work）是我们英语课堂中的一个重要学习方式。请你根据以下图示，写一篇短文，介绍我们应如何在课堂中开展小组活动，并谈谈你喜欢或不喜欢这种学习方式的理由。
注意： 1. 文章应包含所有要点；2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名；3， 开头已给出（不计入总词数）， 你只需接着写；4. 词数80左右，
Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it.______
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30、、【2012陕西真题】书面表达
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求：
1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
4. 词数：60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
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That's all.
【参考范文】One possible version
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all.
Thank you!
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31、、【2012黑河真题】书面表达 (共计15分)
（本题共15分，A题5分，B题10分）
（注意: 文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不赋分）
( A ) 6月1日，张丽莉老师班级的学生组织召开了“为老师祈福”的主题班会，会后由你(张佳岩)代表班委会给老师发一封E-mail。询问她的身体状况，表达感激与思念，并告诉她同学们一定会努力学习，同时祝她早日康复。要求：字数30—50词。
Dear Ms Zhang,
How are you?________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
(A) One possible version:
Dear Miss Zhang,
How are you? We all miss you very much (1分). Thank you for teaching us so well (1分). Don’t worry about us. We must try our best to study hard (1分). Are you feeling better now (1分) ? We all hope you’ll get well soon (1分).
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
( B ) 今春我省部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)
内容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水的不良现象 3.提出几条建议
要求：1.词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all.
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.
But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.
Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we’d better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.
Water is really important to man. Let’s save water from now on.
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32、、【2012 山东滨州真题】书面表达(共1题，计15分)
规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一
篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2．词数：80—100。标题和短文开头已给出，不计
入总词数。
3．参考词汇：be friendly to…，help，study hard，
come true
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be ______________________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible version:
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friend to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
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33、、【2012 山东枣庄真题】书面表达(共1题，满分10分。）
把下面的对话改成一篇短文。
A: Who is your best friend?
B: My best friend is Tom.
A: Why doesn’t he talk to you now?
B: Because we had a quarrel in school last week.
A: How did it start?
B: When he wanted to copy my homework. He had forgotten to do his. I didn’t think good idea for him to copy mine.
A: Why was it a bad idea for him to copy your homework?
B: It would start a bad habit and he should do his own work.
A: Did he get mad at you?
B: Yes, he said he didn’t want to be my best friend anymore.
A: What did you say then?
B: I said that was OK and we stopped talking to each other.
A: Are you sure he will get over it and say sorry to you soon?
B: Yes, he will.
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34、、【2012新疆阜康真题】书面表达（满分15分）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more
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【参考范文】
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
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35、、【2012福州真题】提示作文(12分)
2011年12月20日，福州市被评为“全国文明城市”(National civilized city)。你学校
的English club正在举办以“文明福州，持续文明”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿。
内容提示：◆尊敬师长，明礼诚信 ◆友善待人，乐才助人
◆遵守交规，不闯红灯 ◆保护环境，(写2—3个例子)
要 求：1)词数80左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数；
2)内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
参考词汇：respect (v. 尊敬), polite, honest, obey, traffic lights, protect the environment
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we ..._________________________________
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In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
【参考范文】
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students~ what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it's always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it's important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about. We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass. In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
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36、、【2012 桂林真题】书面表达（共15分）
假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。.
【参考范文】 One possible version
My good friend[www.@z&zstep.#︿c%om]
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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37、、【2012 宿迁真题】书面表达（满分15分）
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….（至少一条）
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
【参考范文】One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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该精品包括2012年、2011年、2010年各省市的模拟题、真题中的书面表达，既有经典的常练作文，也有与时俱进的新创新作文；题材广泛，都有参考范文。大多数文章都标明了年、省市，方便会员选用。排版工整。是专题练习、组合考卷的好材料。
中等作文提高策略
中考英语中等作文的评分标准
内容较完整，基本包含所有要点，内容较具体，基本能够围绕内容适当发挥，语句较流畅，用词较准确、句子较通顺、行文较连贯、层次较分明、表达基本清楚，有少量语法错误和语言错误，书写较规范，标点正确，10分作文计6―8分；15分作文计8－14分。
中考英语作文扣分项目：
整篇作文以满分10分为例，其中基本分占9分，整体印象分占1分。
整体印象不好扣1分
偏题扣2－3分。
文章不满规定词数，每少5个词为一个扣分单位，扣0.5分。
语法错误，每一个错扣0.5分，同一个错不重复扣分。
大小写、单词拼写、标点等错误每处扣0.5分，标点错误累计扣分不超过1分。
二、中考英语中等作文的提高策略
虽然各地中考英语作文的评分标准略有差异，但是都包括以下几个方面；整体印象，语言表达，词数规定等内容。我们在写作中要尽量避免扣分，争取加分点。中等作文的提高策略如下：
1 注意人称和时态，讲究层次和条理。在审题的过程中，就要考虑到文章所用的人称和时态，这也是提高作文分数的主要因素之一。整篇文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时；写经常发生的事或对人物的描写，要用一般现在时。要从实际需要出发，保证文章层次分明、条理清楚。
2 作文讲究可读性，注意词语运用效果。中考中，以提示作文为主，提出的要求也是很具体的，从此意义上讲，作文用不着更多的借题发挥，只要能够完整的可读性，不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生僻的词汇，对这些一知半解的词又不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章显得生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词语和句型，避免不必要的失分。
3 注意语言表达习惯，回避汉语式英语。从实际来看，有些同学写英语作文还按照汉语作文的构思方法和写作方法来写，结果出现很多的汉语式英语，这也是他们丢分的主要原因之一。英语和汉语在很多方面存在差异，按汉语的思维方式写出的作文必然不符合英语的表达习惯，那么得分率肯定很低。因此，平时应该注意不同语言的表达习惯。切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。
4 作文还需仔细推敲，讲究文采，因地制宜。有些同学因怕出错而只写短句式或简单句，写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞乏味，自然得分不高。要使文章有血有肉凡要把平时学的知识用进去，比如复合句（宾语从句、状语从句等）关键时用上一个，两个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采；“so that” “ not… but ”“ not only…but also ”等关联词，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次鲜明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠平时的不断训练和积累。写出的文章要经的起推敲，尤其是写完作文之后，要将文章仔细推敲一番。
5 注意体裁和题材，留意要求写作的格式。每当提笔写作文的时候，要先想一想文章属于哪种体裁，按照不同体裁的写作方法去写。比如，写书信，就要按应用文的写作方法来考虑和写作，同时还要注意书信的写作格式，格式不正确，至少会丢一分。不同的题材，写作的角度和方法也是不同的，要做到因文而异。一味地套用范文，恐怕也会出现误差。从些意义上讲，审题加思考，方向要正确。
6 认真的书写，注意第一印象。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”。所以说，最简单的增分点就是卷面清洁、字迹工整。很多工区都在写作上有1分的书写分。只要平时多下点功夫，得到这一分并不难。
总而言之，英语写作水平的提高是一个渐进的过程，只要同学们在平时多加训练，多读文章，做一个有心人，在中考作文中取得理想的成绩就不是一句空话。
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1、、【2012潍坊真题】写作(满分15分)
假设你是大明，你的笔友给你来信了。请阅读以下来信，并根据内容写一封回信。
要求：1．80词左右；2．文中不要出现作者本人的真实信息。
Dear Daming,
I’d like to tell you something about my “important gift”．It was a beautiful smile．
When I was nine years old，I went to a new school．As a result，no one knew who I was．I felt lonely．Then one day when I sat at my desk unhappily as usual，a girl walked to me and smiled．
Though she said no words，I felt the touch of something bright and friendly and it made me feel happy and warm again．After that she became my good friend．
As we all know，everybody may feel lonely or be in trouble．Could you tell me something about your “important gift” that touched you or changed your life?
Yours,
Susan
Dear Susan,
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Best wishes,
Daming
Dear Susan,
I’m glad to read your letter and your “important gift” really touches me. As for me, my “important gift” was my mum’s sad tears.
Two years ago, I became a “problem child”, and I was tired of everything. I did everything that was against my parents. That made my mum very sad, but she still loved me as usual.
One night, I lost my reason and broke a glass, which caused my mum to burst into tears. All at once, her sadness touched my deep heart. Since then, I have completely changed myself.
Best wishes,
Daming
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2、、【2012河北真题】书面表达（计10分）
假如你叫李华，请你就“英语老师用英语还是用英汉双语教学”这一问题，根据下面的提示和要求，给你的老师Miss Li写一封信，谈一谈人的看法。
提示：(1)What’s your idea?
(2) Why do you think so?
(3) What is your advice?
要求：(1)信须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。
(2) 信中不要涉及真实的人名和校名。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 词数：60~80。
Dear Miss Li,
I think you’d better use ______________________________________________
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Hopefully you can think about it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hus
.【参考范文】Possible versions
Dear Miss Li,
I think you'd better use English in class. When you speak English, we'll have a good chance to improve our listening kills .It is also helpful for our reading, speaking and writing. We can copy what you say all the time. The more chances we have, the more progress we will make ! So I hope you can teach in English. But please use simple English as much as possible and speak clearly and slowly. This way, we can learn English better and better.
Hopefully you can think about it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Miss Li,
I think you'd better use both English and Chinese. The best way to learn English is to use it. When you teach in English, it's good for our listening. At the same time it is helpful to improve our speaking, reading and writing .However ,if you only ous English, we can't follow you sometimes , especially when you explain grammar rules and language points. So my advice is "Use English when possible and use Chinese when necessary". This way, we can learn English better.
Hopefully you can think about it.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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3、、【2012山东济南真题】书面表达（10分）
根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。
参考词汇：burglar n.窃贼 steal(stole, stolen) v.偷
【参考范文】One night, Mr and Ms Green was sleeping. So did their cat. The cat dreamed of a fish. At that moment, a burglar came into their room quietly from the window. He wanted to steal something from their house. The cat woke up, he fought with the burglar bravely. Being afraid to wake up the Greens, the burglar had to escape from the window again. The brave cat protected the things from being stolen without waking up its owner.
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4、、【2012 桂林】.书面表达（共15分）
假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
. One possible version
My good friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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5、、【2011 山东烟台】
Life is just like a mirror, you smile at it, and it smiles at you, too. 请你以“Learn to Smile”为题，根据下表所列的要点写一篇100词左右的文章（文章开头已给出）。
学会对自己微笑
1、面对困难与烦恼学会微笑（考试失利、被别人误解等）。
2、使你自信，击败你的人有时就是你自己。
3、有益于身心健康。
学会对他人微笑
1、便于与他人之间的交流。
2、给别人带来快乐,自己也快乐。
微笑是一种语言
人人都能懂，传递友谊，拉近距离。
1、参考词汇： 对某人微笑 smile at sb. 误解 misunderstand
2、短文必须包括所有内容要点，不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.” Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
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【写作思路】
一、审题
本篇作文考查体裁为议论文。本文指出微笑的重要性，并要求我们不仅学会对自己微笑，还要学会对别人微笑，同时指出学会微笑的重要性。
二、列举写作要点
1. 学会对自己微笑：smile at yourself
2. 学会对别人微笑：smile at others
3. 微笑的重要性：pass love and friendship；helps shorten the distance between you and other people
三、列出关键短语和句型
smile at sb. misunderstand，pass love and friendship；helps shorten the distance between you and other people
【参考范文】——One possible version:?
Learn to Smile
I remember a song by Westlife, the first sentence of it is “Just a smile and the rain is gone.”
Do you like smiling? I think you should learn to smile .
First, learn to smile at yourself when something unpleasant happens in your life. If you fail an exam or you are misunderstood by your friends, don’t be sad. Just smile at yourself . Smiling at yourself brings back your confidence . Sometimes the one who beats you is not others, but yourself. And smile can also keep you healthy.
Second, learn to smile at others. It will make you communicate better with people. Smiling at others makes yourself happy as well.
In a word, smile is a kind of language belonging to everyone. It passes love and friendship and helps shorten the distance between you and other people. Living with a smile ,every day will be shiny.
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6、、【2011浙江衢州】书面表达（共2小题）
根据下面图片，分别为图1和图2个写两个句子。
要求：（1）句子内容必须与图片相关；（2）句子完整，准确。
(1)To keep healthy, we should eat all kinds of fruits.
(2) Look! What fresh fruits they are!
(3)The boy is doing his homework with the lamp on.
(4) It’s very late. The boy opened the lamp to do his homework.
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7、、【2010·广西省桂林市】
节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。Li Ming 是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他, 请以 “My Low-carbon Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。
要点：
（1）每天步行上学；
（2）离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；
（3）不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；
（4）充分使用纸张；
（5）不使用塑料袋。
参考词汇：on foot, turn off, tap, reuse, make full use of, plastic bag
要求：
（1） 内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
（2） 不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。
【答案】My Low-carbon Life
My name is Li Ming. I am a middle school student. I go to school on foot every day. I always remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans when I leave the classroom. When I am not using water, I always turn off the tap. I often reuse water, for example, when I finish washing the clothes, I use the water to clean the floor and water flowers. I never use plastic bags. I think saving paper is necessary, so I often make full use of paper. It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment.
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8、、【2012 宿迁】书面表达（满分15分）
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….（至少一条）
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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9、、【2011贵州省】
在贵州一些偏远山区，许多学生住得离学校较远，每天上学要步行1个多小时。因为家里贫穷，中午他们只能吃从家里带的冷饭和冷菜，有的已经变坏了。一些学生甚至一天只吃早、晚两顿，没吃午饭，下午就饿着上课。
请以“You and me” 为题写一篇英语短文，介绍他们的状况并谈谈你的感受和打算。
要求：
（1）可根据需要对所给材料进行取舍或适当发挥，不必逐字翻译；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名‘
（3）词数80—110.
You and me
You live in a mountain village. It’s far away from your school. It take you one hour to get there every day. To save money, you bring food for lunch. At noon, it is cold, some even goes bad. Sometimes you study the whole afternoon without lunch, only two meals one day.
I never worry about my life. Every day I study in a bright room and enjoy each delicious meal! What different lives we are living! As a teenager, surely I should do something fro you like raising money, collecting books, etc.
We are living under the same sky and let’s share the same happiness!
When we are studying in the bridge classroom, some poor students in Guizhou are walking on the way to school. Being poor, they have no money to buy food for lunch. What they eat at noon is the clod food they bring from home. Sometimes the food even goes bad. Some of them have only two meals a day. They often go on with their lessons in the afternoon without lunch.
What a hard life they are living! I think we should do something for them. Let’s share our pocket money with them and se some books to them.
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10、、【2011温州】书面表达（本题有1小题，共20分）
假如你叫刘宏，你学校每年都在世界水日（World Water Day）开展丰富多彩的活动，宣传节约用水，你的笔友Jim所在的学校也要开展类似活动，请你写信向他介绍你们的活动情况（活动内容见下表）。
活动时间
3月22日
参加人员
全校师生
活动形式
表演短剧
演讲比赛
制作海报
……
活动目的
告诉人们水的重要性、浪费水的危害、节约用水的方法……
活动感受
……
要求： 1. 短文应包括表中所有的要点，课适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
3. 文章长度；约100词（不包含已给的词数）。
参考词汇：take part in, put on short plays, speech competition, make poster, helpful, save, waster
Dear Jim,
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day.
Yours,
Liu Hong
One possible version：
Dear Jim,
Nice hearing from you. Let me tell you what we often do on World Water Day. On March 22nd all the teachers and students of the school take part in different activities.
Lots of students put on short plays. Some plays are funny, and they show us wasting water is bad for humans. Many students take part in the speech competition. They tell us what we should do to save water. Some teachers and students make posters and put them up in the school and neihborhood. In this way, more people know the World Water Day and join us.
All these activities are helpful. More and more people know the importance of water and begin to save it. Maybe you do the same.
Yours,
Liu Hong
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11、、【2010·青海宁夏】
假定你是赵方，今年暑假你将和父母一起去上海参观世博园，火车票已买好。请根据下表信息给你在上海的好友Jenny写一封信，告知她你们的行程安排，并与她约定一个见面的时间。字数：80词左右。信的首尾句已给出，不计入总词数。
日期
活动内容
7月15日
从银川出发
7月17日
到达上海，入住江天宾馆（距世博园约四公里）
7月18-19日
参观世博园
7月20日
返回银川
参考词汇: 世博园 the pavilions of the World Expo
Dear Jenny,
I have got good news to tell you. ___________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Zhao Fang
【答案】Dear Jenny，
I’ve got good news to tell you. This summer vacation my parents and I will go to Shanghai to visit the pavilions of the World Expo. We have already bought the train tickets. We will leave Yinchuan on July 15 and arrive in Shanghai on July 17. We will stay in Jiangtian Hotel which is about 4 kilometers away from the pavilions. During the next two days we will visit the pavilions. We plan to return to Yinchuan on July 20. I will be free on the evening of July 19. Can we meet then? I am looking forward to seeing you.
Yours,
Zhao Fang
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12、、【2012 梅州】书面表达。（本题共15分）
目前，我国实施城市化进程中，给从乡村（镇）迁入城市的大多数孩子带来诸多的问题，特别在交朋友方面尤为突出。假如你是Know，你的朋友Tony 发电子邮件请教你关于如何交朋友的问题，请你给他回复一封电子邮件提几点建议，词数约80左右。
内容包括如下：
在小区内玩耍时，你可以主动与他们交流成为新朋友，并告知家长；
请求父母带你去图书馆或一些公共场所，既可认识更多伙伴又可参加文体活动；
在星期天，可外出郊游等。
总之，多参加交流活动，克服困难，保持耐心。
要求：1、涵盖所有要点，意思连贯，符合逻辑。
2、卷面整洁、书写规范工整。不得逐字翻译。
(可能用到的词：First, Second, Third，In conclusion)
Dear Know,
I need some advice on how to make friends! I have just moved to a new city. I am 13. I don’t know anybody here and I want to make some friends. What’s the best way? Where can I meet people?
Yours,
Tony
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do.
_____________________________________________________________________________
It takes time and patience(耐心). I hope you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
One possible version:
Dear Tony,
There are lots of things you can do. First, you can ride your bike in your neighbourhood and try to find some kids. When you find some, you can go up and talk to them. You should also let your parents know that you want to make friends because they can help you. Second, you can ask your parents to take you to the library or some（public） places where there are lots of kids. You could try joining an art class or a sports club. These are all great ways to meet people. Third, you can try making friends in it if you go outing to take part in activities on Sundays.（you can try making friends at churches(教堂) too if you go to church on Sundays.）In conclusion(What’s mre),try to be active wherever you are, but just be yourself and don’t try so hard. It takes time and patience(耐心). I hop you will find a best friend soon!
Yours,
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13、、【2011贵州安顺】书面表达（15分）
最近你校进行了一次“说出你的烦恼”(“Don’t keep your worries”) 的调查活动，请你用英语写一篇短文。
要求：1、内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、对老师和父母的建议。
2、词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。
One possible version:
Our school has made a survey — "Don't keep your worries"．Here are the results．
About fifty percent of the students in our school are worried about their homework．They have so much homework to do every day．And they feel stressed too much．About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them （in their studies）．It's difficult for them to get along/on well with their parents．The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health．They complain that they almost have no time for their hobbies or after-school activities．
Dear teachers, would you please give us less homework and more time to relax ourselves? Dear mom and dad, we want to take more exercise to keep fit/healthy,/stay healthy．We will try/do our best and we also want to play on our own．
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14、、2011?湖南衡阳?】书面表达。（共10分）
你喜欢过生日吗？你的生日过得开心吗？每个人都曾有过难以忘怀的生日。请以“My Birthday”为题写一篇短文，介绍你最开心、最难忘的一次生日，让大家共同分享你生日的快乐。
要求：1.词数：80左右
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。
3.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
My Birthday
My Birthday
March 5th is my birthday. This year I celebrated my birthday in a different way. In the morning, I got up early and cooked breakfast for my parents. At school, I helped my desk-mates to repair their broken chairs. After school, I took my birthday cake to the home for the aged. The old men were so happy to see me. All of them hoped that I would be back again.
What a joyful birthday it was!
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15、、【2012 黄冈】书面表达(1 题，满分10 分)
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念的转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
注意：①所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；
②文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
③词数：80 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词汇：网购shopping on line; 避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods; 导致cause With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line.
One possible version:
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping on line. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping on line has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping on line, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping on line may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed.
That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping on line.
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16、、【2011湖北十堰】初级写作（本题一节，计15分）
针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展开了讨论。作为一名90后的中学生，请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言稿，展示真实的你。
要求：1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯，可适当发挥。
2. 文中不能出现真实校名、姓名等相关信息；
3. 词数：不少于80词。发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：selfish(自私的) ; Internet; believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想); in style, creative
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. ____________________
_________________________________________________________________
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_________________________________________________________________
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We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
One possible version
As we know, most of us are the only child in our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us, which make us become selfish. Usually we are so concentrate on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.
There is no doubt that we have our own advantages as well.
We teenagers have high ideals. We always believe in ourselves and never say “die”. Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be easily accepted by us. You can find out that creative thinking is full of our life. We also know how to respecet your parents and teachers.
We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
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17、、【2011山东】书面表达（共1题，计15分）
随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢？ 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考范文：
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenience for us to go shopping on the internet. The shop on Internet for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. we can't see the things while we are shopping. so we are not sure whether they are good or not. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
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18、、【2010·浙江省卷】
你即将告别朝夕相处的初中老师，请选择5门学科，给这些老师分别写一句最想对她/他说的话。下面所列学科供参考。
注意：范例可以适当参考，但不得抄袭；句中不得出现真实的人名和校名.
English Chinese Maths Science PE Art Music IT….
e.g. My dear English teacher，your class is really interesting.
【答案】76.Thank you for teaching me so well，my dear Chinese teacher..
You are so helpful，my dear maths teacher.
You make science so interesting，my dear teacher.
I love you，my music teacher.
Thank you for your help，my dear PE teacher.
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19、、【2012南昌】书面表达(15分)
某中学生英文报为了了解中学生的购物习惯与喜好，向广大中学生作调查。请你根据下面图表提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍自己的购物习惯与喜好。（学科网精校）
提示：1．短文应包括图表中的全部信息，条理清楚，行文连贯；
2．短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3．词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I 'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. ______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
One Possible Version:
I'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi. In my spare time, I like shopping. There is a supermarket in my town. Lots of things are being sold there. So I often go there with my mother to buy school things, food and drinks.
Of course, sometimes I want to buy something expensive. An MP4 player is what I want most, but I can't afford it now. I'm going to work for an English club during this summer holiday and make some money for it. We teenagers should not always ask our parents for money.
As for shopping online, I like it, because things there are much cheaper and I don't need to walk to the shops, which helps me save time. No matter where to shop, I enjoy it because it's really relaxing.
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20、、【2011肇庆】书面表达（满分15分）
请以“My Favourite Fruit” 为题写一篇英语作文。
要点：1. 简要介绍这种水果的形状、颜色等特点；
2. 列举你喜欢它的原因（至少三条）。
要求：1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 选择除桔子之外的其它水果；
3. 词数：60—80词左右。
One possible version:
My Favourite Fruit
Of all the fruits, I like apples best. First it is very beautiful. It is red and round. You can’t help eating it when you see it. Second, it is very sweet. It is really a kind of enjoyment when you taste it. Third, it is said that apples are very good for our health. There is a saying: “One apple a day, keeps a doctor away.” It means that if you have one apple every day, you won’t get any disease. The apple is not only an ordinary kind of fruit, it can also keep you away from disease, so there is no reason to refuse it. Try it and enjoy it!
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21、、【2011湖北黄石】 书面表达（10分）
假如你叫刘畅，你的朋友小明因为沉溺于电脑游戏，成绩日益下降。作为小明的朋友，你很担心，并决定给他写一封e-mail ,帮助他改掉这个坏习惯，好好学习。
要点提示：1、说明玩电脑游戏的利弊。
2、建议小明在课余时间多参加有意义的活动。
3、你对小明的期望。
要求：1、字数：80词左右（开头与结尾已给出，且不计入总词数。）
2、文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
3、文中必须包括提示中所规定的要点，并可适当发挥。
参考词汇：be addicted to 沉溺于--- ---
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently?
Yours,
Liu Chang
Dear Xiao Ming,
How are you doing recently? We take pride in that you are good at playing computer games. Computers are more and more important in our lives. Playing games on them can help us know more about computers, which is very useful for our future lives. But if you are addicted to it, it’ll be quite harmful to you. It is not only bad for your health but also has bad influence to your study to spend too much time playing them.
Next you should take an active part in all kinds of activities in your free time. We all know you are a cute boy, you must do better in the study if you spend less time playing computer games.
Yours,
Liu Chang
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22、、【2010·山东省滨州市】
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。
暑 假 计 划
1、好好休息，学会放松
2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识
3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务
4、参加社会活动，了解社会
5、……
注意：
1、词数80～100；
2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名；
3、方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I’d like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
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23、、【2012 广州真题】书面表达(共1题，满分15分)
你是学校英文报的小记者李华。请给你校初三学生写一封公开傍，就如何保持考前健康提出建议。主要内容如下：
(1)早睡早起，保持充足睡眠；
(2)饮食均衡，少吃垃圾食品；
(3)多做体育运动；
(4)你的其它建议。
Dear students，
As we all know,good health is important for success in the exams，so I’m writing to…
Best wishes and stay healthy．
Yours，
Li Hua
注意：1．词数80左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数)；
2．不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
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24、、【2012黔西南真题】.书面表达。（共30分）
假如你是Jane，你的好友Mary在微博上说最近很累很不开心， 而且很担心即将到来的期末考试，请你在Mary的微博中回复， 给她一些建议，使她振作起来。（注意：文中不能出现姓名和学校等相关信息）
提示：
1. 分析Mary 不开心的原因；
2. 给她一些建议使她减少压力；
3. 给她美好的祝福。
【参考范文】
Dear Mary,
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. I know you are under too much pressure. You can’t get on well with your classmates; you may worry about your exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.
Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem.
Less pressure, better life! Best wishes to you!
Your,
Jane
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25、、【2012无锡真题】书面表达 （本大题共10分）
假设你是无锡日报英文周刊English Weekly的特约小记者，请在答题卡指定的位置上，以“A New Town” 为题，写一则80词左右的简讯，介绍我市的太湖新城（Taihu New Town）。内容提示见下表：
简介
位于无锡南部，近五年来变化巨大
过去
有很多大型工厂
现在
政府已迁走所有工厂，空气清新，没有污染
问题
尚存一些，其中之一是公交线路太少
展望
……
注意：
简讯须包括表格内所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
表格中“展望“栏，请用自己的2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥；
简讯的标题已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数。
【参考答案】One possible version:
A New Town
Taihu New Town is in the south of Whxi. It has changed a lot in the past five years. There used to be many big factories here. The government has moved them all away, so the air is fresh and there is no pollution. There are still a few problems. One of them is there are too few bus lines. But I believe all these problems will be solved soon. The new town will become a wonderful place to live.
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26、、【2012南京真题】书面表达（满分15分）
上周日在秦淮河便发生了张明救落水小男孩的事情，请根据以下四幅图所描述的事情经过，为校刊的英语园地写一篇题为“A Brave Young Man”的英文稿件。
注意：
1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2、语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3、词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday.
【参考范文】One possible version:
A Brave Young Man
It was a nice day last Sunday. Zhang Ming was fishing by the Qinhuai River when a little boy went to play nearby. Suddenly, Zhang Ming heard someone shouting for help. He looked around and found that the little boy was falling into the water. It was very dangerous. Zhang Ming jumped into the river immediately. He tried his best to pull the boy out of the river. At that time other people came to offer help. Finally, the boy was saved and he was very grateful. People all said Zhang Ming was very brave and helpful. We should learn from him.
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27、、【2012温州真题】书面表达（本题有1小题，共20分）
某英文网站提出“走路去上学”的倡议，请你就这一话题写一篇约100词的英语文章：内容包括，走路有利健康，和朋友结伴有利于……让父母节省……使城市……等等；可适当发挥。
注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇：be good for, with friends, save
【参考范文】
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving helps to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowded as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
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28、、【2012衢州真题】假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A pleasant outing”的英语短文，参加某英文报纸的征文比赛。
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A pleasant outing
时间
上周末
参加者
你和……
地点
北山公园(the North Hill Park)
活动
骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏……
感受
……
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要求：（1）不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增减内容；
（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名；
（3）词数: 80~110个。
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参考词汇：go for an outing; climb the hill; have a picnic
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A pleasant outing
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【参考范文】One Possible version
A pleasant outing
Last weekend, I went for an outing with my classmates. At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the North Hill Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to climb the hill at once. We had a picnic on the top of the hill. After that, we walked down the path and had a rest. Later, some girls danced under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 p.m.. We were tired but very happy.
What a pleasant outing it was!
(106 words)
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29、、【2012宁波真题】书面表达（共15分）
小组活动（group work）是我们英语课堂中的一个重要学习方式。请你根据以下图示，写一篇短文，介绍我们应如何在课堂中开展小组活动，并谈谈你喜欢或不喜欢这种学习方式的理由。
注意： 1. 文章应包含所有要点；2. 不能出现真实的校名和姓名；3， 开头已给出（不计入总词数）， 你只需接着写；4. 词数80左右，
Group work is often organized in the English classroom. Let me show you how to do it.______
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30、、【2012陕西真题】书面表达
你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求：
1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现真实地名和姓名；
4. 词数：60-80词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Hello, everyone!
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That's all.
【参考范文】One possible version
Hello, everyone!
May I have your attention, please? Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip? Now I've got good news to tell you. This Sunday, we are going to have a school trip like this. We'll walk to Fenghuang Mountain, It's about 10 kilometers away from our school. As we'll be away for the whole day, please remember the following things, Take enough food acid drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes. The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way. I think we'll have a nice trip.
That's all.
Thank you!
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31、、【2012黑河真题】书面表达 (共计15分)
（本题共15分，A题5分，B题10分）
（注意: 文中不能出现考生真实姓名、校名和老师名，否则不赋分）
( A ) 6月1日，张丽莉老师班级的学生组织召开了“为老师祈福”的主题班会，会后由你(张佳岩)代表班委会给老师发一封E-mail。询问她的身体状况，表达感激与思念，并告诉她同学们一定会努力学习，同时祝她早日康复。要求：字数30—50词。
Dear Ms Zhang,
How are you?________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
(A) One possible version:
Dear Miss Zhang,
How are you? We all miss you very much (1分). Thank you for teaching us so well (1分). Don’t worry about us. We must try our best to study hard (1分). Are you feeling better now (1分) ? We all hope you’ll get well soon (1分).
Yours,
Zhang Jiayan
( B ) 今春我省部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)
内容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水的不良现象 3.提出几条建议
要求：1.词数：80—100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all.
Saving Water
As we all know, water is important to us all. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.
But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.
Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, we’d better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.
Water is really important to man. Let’s save water from now on.
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32、、【2012 山东滨州真题】书面表达(共1题，计15分)
规划人生，成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一
篇英语短文，描述你梦想的工作。
要求：
1．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2．词数：80—100。标题和短文开头已给出，不计
入总词数。
3．参考词汇：be friendly to…，help，study hard，
come true
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be ______________________________________________
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【参考范文】One possible version:
My Dream
Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor were very friend to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
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33、、【2012 山东枣庄真题】书面表达(共1题，满分10分。）
把下面的对话改成一篇短文。
A: Who is your best friend?
B: My best friend is Tom.
A: Why doesn’t he talk to you now?
B: Because we had a quarrel in school last week.
A: How did it start?
B: When he wanted to copy my homework. He had forgotten to do his. I didn’t think good idea for him to copy mine.
A: Why was it a bad idea for him to copy your homework?
B: It would start a bad habit and he should do his own work.
A: Did he get mad at you?
B: Yes, he said he didn’t want to be my best friend anymore.
A: What did you say then?
B: I said that was OK and we stopped talking to each other.
A: Are you sure he will get over it and say sorry to you soon?
B: Yes, he will.
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34、、【2012新疆阜康真题】书面表达（满分15分）
在阳光雨露里，我已长高、长壮，但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么？是关心、帮助同学？是体贴、理解父母？是感恩、回报亲朋师长？还是……，成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More为题，记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已经不再是一个下孩子。
要求：1.请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，不少于80词；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计算
I am not a child any more
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【参考范文】
I am not a child any more
I have changed a lot during the past three years. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am strong and as tall as my father. The most important thing is that I have learned to care about others.
It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didn’t know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although it tasted salty. At bedtime, I fetched hot water for my mother to wash feet. My mother said, “Dear, you are really grown up.”
It was the first time that I had realized I was not a child any more.
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35、、【2012福州真题】提示作文(12分)
2011年12月20日，福州市被评为“全国文明城市”(National civilized city)。你学校
的English club正在举办以“文明福州，持续文明”为主题的征文活动，请你根据以下的内容提示及要求写一篇应征稿。
内容提示：◆尊敬师长，明礼诚信 ◆友善待人，乐才助人
◆遵守交规，不闯红灯 ◆保护环境，(写2—3个例子)
要 求：1)词数80左右，不包含已给出的句子的词数；
2)内容完整，意思连贯，语句通顺，书写规范。
参考词汇：respect (v. 尊敬), polite, honest, obey, traffic lights, protect the environment
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students, what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we ..._________________________________
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In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
【参考范文】
Civilized Fuzhou going on
We are glad that Fuzhou is now among the national civilized cities. As students~ what shall we do to keep up the good work? First of all, we should respect our teachers, parents and the old. Also, we ought to be polite and honest. Second, it's always good to be kind, friendly and helpful to others. Third, we must obey traffic rules and mustn't cross the streets when the traffic lights are red. Last but not least, it's important and necessary to help protect the environment. For example, we shouldn't spit here and there or throw litter about. We'd better not pick flowers or step on the grass. In short, if everyone makes contributions, our city will be better and better.
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36、、【2012 桂林真题】书面表达（共15分）
假设Susan是你的好朋友，下面是Susan的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
Name
Susan
Age
14
Country
America
Appearance
tall , blue eyes , golden hair
Character
lovely , helpful
Favourite sports
swimming, running
Hobbies
reading , listening to music
Interests
Chinese history and culture
要求：
（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥,但不必逐条翻译；
（2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。.
【参考范文】 One possible version
My good friend[www.@z&zstep.#︿c%om]
I have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14 years old. She’s from America. She’s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. She enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She’s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She’s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress in English. I’m lucky to have such a good friend.
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37、、【2012 宿迁真题】书面表达（满分15分）
江苏省教育厅5月7日公布的2011年学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。
现 状
大约70%学生眼睛近视
主要原因
1. 睡眠不足
2. 长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等
预防方法
1. 做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动
2. 养成正确的用眼习惯
你的观点
… ….（至少一条）
注意：
1. 词数80左右。开头已经写好，不记入总词数；
2. 内容必须包括上表中的要点，可作必要的发挥；
3. 条理清楚、语句连贯；
4．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
（参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted）
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present,
【参考范文】One possible version:
The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.
Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.
In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.
I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them.
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同课章节目录
- 词法
- 名词
- 动词和动词短语
- 动词语态
- 动词时态
- 助动词和情态动词
- 非谓语动词
- 冠词
- 代词
- 数词和量词
- 形容词副词及其比较等级
- 介词和介词短语
- 连词和感叹词
- 构词法
- 相似、相近词比较
- 句法
- 陈述句
- 一般疑问句和否定疑问句
- 特殊疑问句及选择疑问句
- 反意疑问句
- 存在句(There be句型)
- 宾语从句
- 定语从句
- 状语从句
- 主谓一致问题
- 简单句
- 并列句
- 复合句
- 主谓一致
- 主、表语从句
- 名词性从句
- 直接引语和间接引语
- 虚拟语气
- 感叹句
- 强调句
- 倒装句
- 祈使句
- 句子的成分
- 句子的分类
- 题型专区
- 单项选择部分
- 易错题
- 完形填空
- 阅读理解
- 词汇练习
- 听说训练
- 句型转换
- 补全对话
- 短文改错
- 翻译
- 书面表达
- 任务型阅读
- 语法填空
- 其他资料