2013中考英语书面表达第7集:共47页(含名师指导写作方法)
该精品包括2012年、2011年、2010年各省市的模拟题、真题中的书面表达,既有经典的常练作文,也有与时俱进的新创新作文;题材广泛,都有参考范文。大多数文章都标明了年、省市,方便会员选用。排版工整。是专题练习、组合考卷的好材料。
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2013年的中考作文可能仍然是给材料作文,如果要写好今年的中考作文并获得高分,一定要掌握以下秘诀。
1 认真审题,看好让你写什么-what—确定文章的内容和体裁。
2 看好要写的人物是谁—who—确定写文章使用的人称。
3 看好事件发生的时间—when—确定写文章时使用的时态。
4 要看事情发生的空间―where―确定好地点。
5 要看事情为什么发生―why―确定好事由。
6 要看事情发生到何种程度―result-确定好结局。
另外,从去年开始哈尔滨考试就以议论文为主,我想全国各地会效仿,下面我再单独谈一下议论文写作时要注意的事项。
我见议在写议论文时除注意以上几点外,在结构上最好分成三段。开头第一段提出论点,也就是你的观点;当然这个观点要是正确的,第一段用三句话比较合适。你可以用谚语开头,用谚语开头会让老师看出文章切入点和很强。然后,在第二段具体谈一下你的理由:第一,第二,第三写清晰。论据可以用数字来表示,比如说上网,你可以写中学生有百分之多少上网,让你的论据能更充分一点,后一段必须要扣题,议论文的关键就是在结尾时很好的扣题。
同学们,事上无难事,只怕有心人,(Nothing is too difficult for you in the world if you put your heart into it.)相信大家一定能够在英语写作路上潇洒走一回!预祝大家取得成功!
1、、【2012十堰真题】初级写作 (本题一节,计l5分)
亲爱的同学们,初中生活即将结束!在此离别之际,恰逢《中学生英语》征稿,请你以“A(n)——(Lucky/Unusual/ Excitin9/Proud/Regretful(遗憾的)/…)Thing”为题,简要描述一件你亲身经历的、印象深刻的事情,并谈谈你从这件事中所获得的启示。
要求:
1.写短文前,请用一个恰当的形容词补全下面的标题,所用形容词可以从上面括号中选
取,也可以另外选择;
2.语句通顺,表达准确,内容连贯;
3.文中不得出现真实的校名和姓名:
4.词数:80-100词。短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。www.精校
A(n) Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.
【参考范文】One possible version:
A Regretful Thing
In the past three years, the life of middle school has impressed me deeply. Many stories happened. The following is one of them.
Xiao Ming was one of my good friends. One day, a little thing caused a serious quarrel between us. From then on, we didn't talk to each other. I had hoped to make peace with him, but I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face. Not until when he moved to another city
with his parents did I know I lost my friend forever.
The lesson I learnt from this is that if you realize your mistakes, you should correct them at once, or you may leave yourself lasting regrets. (96 词)
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2、、【2012达州真题】书面表达(满分10分)
目前中学生学习任务重,压力大。而丰富多彩的业余生活,有利于开拓视野,调节身心,提高学习效率。请结合下面的提示词,以My Spare Time为题写一篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你的业余生活。看书、看电视、玩电脑、做运动、参加社会活动等。你喜欢做什么?你是如何合理安排的呢?说说你的想法和理由。
提示词语:busy, play, healthy, knowledge, houswork, relax,volunteer, colorful
要求:
1. 短文内容应包括以上提示的内容,可适当发挥。
2. 书写工整,句式规范,条理清楚。有表达自己观点的句子。
3. 不得出现真实的姓名和地名。
My Spare Time
【参考范文】One possible version:
My Spare Time
I am a middle school student. Though I’m busy with my lessons, my spare time is still colorful.. After school I usually play sports. I like basketball and football very much. Sports help me to keep healthy and study better. I often do some reading in the evening. I think books are our best friends. They give us much knowledge that we can’t learn at school. So reading books is the best way of spending my spare time. Sometimes I watch TV or surf the Internet. I find it’s a good way to relax myself. At the same time it can also help me open up my eyes to the outside world. At the weekends I often help my parents with the housework. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn to cook. Duing the summer or winter vacation, I have enough time to do things like volunteering. I help those people who are in need.It’s a good experience for me. I enjoy myself in my spare time.
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3、、【2012山东日照真题】面表达 (共1题,计10分)
三年的初中生活就要结束,崭新的高中学习即将到来。回顾过去,你一定有许多成功的喜悦与失利的遗憾;展望未来,你肯定有美好的憧憬和实实在在的打算。请你以“Unforgettable Memories ”为题,给英文报纸21st Century “青春校园”栏目写一篇80词左右的征文。
注意:1. 内容要包含对过去的回忆(学业有成、爱好特长、师生情谊以及最大的遗憾)和对未来的憧憬。
2. 文中不要出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed
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【参考范文】One possible version:
Unforgettable Memories
How time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help I’ve made great progress. But I’m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said, “It is not our abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice.” The two-month holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.
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4、、【2012兰州真题】书面表达 (满分l5分)
学校作业多,学生嫌负担重;学校作业少,家长又担心的不得了。参考表格中所提供的信息,用英语写一篇70—90词的短文,谈谈你对这一现象的看法或态度,并明确阐述你的观点。
家长/老师
学生
多做习题,巩固所学知识
作业多,没时间运动,身体弱
多做练习,提高成绩
作业太多,厌学
如果作业少,学生贪玩(电脑游戏,电视等)
特别是周末作业多.没时问培养兴趣爱好
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书面表达
Many people think the more time is spent, the more work will be done. So students have to spend the whole day doing work except three meals. It is common to see students struggling in a sea of school work both at school and at home.
Modern students usually have many interests. They love music and sports. They like reading and watching TV. Especially, a two-day weekend can get them away from too much homework. But they have no time to enjoy themselves. Students are really tired of their weekend homework. So they usually don’t do their weekend homework until Sunday night. And there is not enough time but much work, students have to finish it carelessly. The poor weekend homework makes teachers angry.
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5、、【2012武汉真题】书面表达(满分15分)
假如上周日你参加了长江社区的Yard Sale活动。请给你们学校校刊上的English Club栏目写一篇关于此次活动的介绍。
要点如下:
1有200多人参加了此次活动;
2有的人出售旧物如:衣服、玩具、自行车等;
3有的人出售自制的蛋糕、卡片、书签等;
4还有的人交换旧书;
5请写一至两点你对此次活动的看法。
注意:
1词数60—80 ,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。不要逐条翻译。
参考词汇:
Changjiang Community n .长江社区 exchange v. 交换 used adj旧的
【参考范文】PossibleVersion:(共78字)
It was fine last Sunday. I went to the Yard Sale in Changjiang Community. More than 200 people took tark in the activity .Some people sold used things such as bikes, toys, and clothes. Others sold cakes, cards and bookmarks made by themselves. Used books could be exchanged in the yard, too. I enjoyed myself there. In my opinion, it was a very good activity. We can not only make full use of used things, but also protect our environment in this way.
【点评】作者根据题目要点提示,对Yard Sale情况进行了描述最后谈了自己的看法。整篇文章行文流畅,能较好地运用所学短语和句型来表达自己的意思,语句通顺,语法运用得当。
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5、、【泸州市2011】书面表达(共1题,满分15分)
假如上周末你和班上的同学到方山玩得很快乐。请以My happy weekend 为题,根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
要点提示
时间是星期天早上8点;
学校门口集合,人到齐后就出发;
骑自行车到达目的地大约30分钟;
有拍照,游戏,野餐等活动;
大家都渡过了一个快乐的周末。
要求
词数为80词左右(已给出的短文开头部分不计入总词数);
所有要点提示必须用完,不得逐字翻译;
字迹工整,卷面整洁;
不得用真实姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇
Get together, ride, photo, games, pinic
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmates and I went to Fangshan. It was so interesting ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】One possible version:
My happy weekend
Last weekend, my classmate and I went to Fangshan. It was so interesting.
At 8:00 on Sunday morning, we got together at the school gate. When everyone arrived, we started. We liked riding, se we went there by bike. After about 30 minutes’ ride, we got there. We found a beautiful place to have a rest. And we took many beautiful photos and played games together. When we felt a little hungry, we took out our food to have a picnic. Everyone ate a lot. We all had a happy weekend.
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6、、【2011四川绵阳市】书面表达(共1题,满分20分)
有两名国际交流生想加人你们学校的英语俱乐部。请你根据下面的日程表,用英语给他们介绍俱乐部每周的活动安排。
☆☆学校英语俱乐部活动日程表
日期
活动内容
时间
地点
星期一
学唱英文歌曲
下午4:00-5:00
302教室
星期三
英文电影欣赏
晚上7:30-9:00
学校图书馆2楼
星期五
英语会话、开放式英语角
下午3:30-4:30
学校风雨(indoor)操场
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,但文中不能出现学校的真名;
3.开头已给出,不计人总词数。
【参考范文】One possible version:
Hello! Welcome to join in our English club. Let me tell you the calendar of our school English club. We have three activities every week. On Monday afternoon, we learn to sing English songs from 4:00 to 5:00 in Classroom 302. On Wednesday evening,we enjoy English movies class from 7:30 to 9:00 on the second floor of the school library. On Friday afternoon, We have English conversations and English corner from 3:30 to 4:30 on the school indoor playground.
I hope you can join us.
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7、、【2012佛山】
8、、【2012北海】书面表达(10分)
假设你是Alice,请你根据Lily的来信的内容写一封回信。针对Lily的困惑,首先谈谈你的看法,然后给Lily提一些建议,建议提示如下:
1.去她的朋友家里或打电话与她的朋友交谈;
2.给她的朋友写信或发E-mail;
3.请她的朋友购买不同的衣服或留不同的发型;
要求:
1.回信内容必须包括你的看法以及所有的提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;
3.词数:70个左右。
【参考范文】One possible version
Dear Lily,
I’m glad that I received a letter from you.
I think you should be happy that you best friend likes your clothes and haircut. If not, I have some advice that may help you. You should go to her house or call her up to talk to her. You could write or send an e-mail to her about your problem. You could also ask her to get different clothes and have a different haircut, or maybe you could find a new best friend.
Good luck!
Yours,
Alice
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9、、【2012北京真题】文段表达。(共15分)
根据中文和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文,所给英文提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
74. 生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验,如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……
现在,某英文报纸就分享(Sharing)话题征文,请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语:share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident
参考范文: One possible version
I had an eaperience of sharing.When my ramily moved,I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that Ifailed. Igot worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on,we got to know each other and shared our ideas,problems,and happiness.We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.
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10、、【2012天津真题】书面表达(本大题共15分)
假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日,是星期五,在放学回家的公交车上,你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。
要点:
一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车,老人拿着书包和小提琴;
你给老人让座,老人的孙子却坐了下来,老人只得站在旁边;
孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝,并将空水瓶扔到车上;
你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人,保持环境卫生。
参考词汇:孙子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 保持……干净keep…clean
要求:1. 词数:80~100个。
2. 日记开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
June 3, Friday Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw
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参考范文:One possible version:
June 3, Friday Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.
When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
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11、、【2011新疆阜康】书面表达(共1题,计15分)
请根据下表中提供的信息,用英语写一篇报道中国成功地发射了“嫦娥二号”探月卫星的短文。词数:80左右。?
发射时间、地点
2010年10月1日晚10月1日西昌卫星发射中心
背景
1.它的建造技术基建于嫦娥一号,并且它有一些改进,比如更高分辨率的摄像头。
2.它将会持续120小时在月球表面100公里的高度环绕。
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意义
1.得到详细的月球表面数据
2.标志着中国的科技发展达到了较高水平
?参考词汇:绕月卫星 circumlunar satellite
嫦娥2号 Chang'e-2 lunar probe; Chang'e-2 lunar satellite
月球探测卫星 lunar probe; lunar exploration satellite; lunar orbiter
???????? 收集月球表面数据 collect lunar surface data
【参考范文】One possible version:
Chang'e 2 was scheduled for launch on October 1st, 2010, the national day of China. Chang'e 2 is China's second lunar orbiter. It is modeled after Chang'e 1 with some improvements including a better camera with higher resolution. Chang'e 2 will be traveling 100 kilometers above the moon for 120 hours. Its goal is to collect lunar surface data. Chang'e 2 is scheduled for launch on October 1st, 2010, the national day of China. All this shows that the development of science and technology in China has reached a high level. In the future, I believe that we will explore the universe further and further.
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12、、【2011四川内江】书面表达(本节1个题,共30分)
初中即将毕业,同学们都感到压力挺大。就此问题,你在英语课上做了一个以”Less Pressure Make Life Better”为题的值日报告,谈谈你的做法,与同学们分享经验,内容包括:
普遍存在的压力:同学关系;考试
我过去的压力:父母的期望;学习
我成功缓解压力 的办法及效果;……
要求:1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.词数80左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总次数。
Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!
【参考范文】One possible version:
Less Pressure Makes Better Life
Hello, my classmates!
Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.
I’m always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in class. They had me study all day. even send me to all kinds of classes on weekends.
I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally they understand me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies..
Less pressure makes better life. Thank you!
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13、、【2012北京】文段表达。(共15分)
根据中文和英文提示词语,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文,所给英文提示词语仅供选用,请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
74. 生活中每个人都有过与他人分享的体验,如分享一本有趣的书、一段难忘的经历、一个闪光的想法……
现在,某英文报纸就分享(Sharing)话题征文,请你投稿。描述一次你与他人分享的经历,并谈谈你的感受。
提示词语:share…with…;experience; interest; learn; change; encourage; enjoy; happiness; confident
【参考范文】One possible version
I had an eaperience of sharing.When my ramily moved,I had to go to a new school and study in a new class. The first test made me so nervous that Ifailed. Igot worried and felt helpless until one of my new classmates came up to me and asked softly if I was OK. After I told him about my problem, he gave me some advice. From then on,we got to know each other and shared our ideas,problems,and happiness.We became good friends. Sharing with friends helped me bring back my confidence and fit in with others.
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14、、【2012天津】书面表达(本大题共15分)
假如你是某中学的一名学生。6月3日,是星期五,在放学回家的公交车上,你所经历的一件事让你印象深刻。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇日记。
要点:
一位老爷爷和十来岁的孙子上了车,老人拿着书包和小提琴;
你给老人让座,老人的孙子却坐了下来,老人只得站在旁边;
孩子大声喊着向老人要水喝,并将空水瓶扔到车上;
你认为孩子应该尊敬、照顾老人,保持环境卫生。
参考词汇:孙子grandson 空水瓶empty bottle 保持……干净keep…clean
要求:1. 词数:80~100个。
2. 日记开头已给出,不计入总词数。
3. 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
June 3, Friday Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw
【参考范文】One possible version:
June 3, Friday Fine
On my way home on the bus, I saw an old man get on with his grandson of about ten. He was carrying the boy’s schoolbag and violin. I gave my seat to the old man at once. However, the boy sat down first. The old man had to stand nearby. After a while, the boy shouted to his grandpa for water and then dropped the empty bottle on the bus.
When I saw this, I got very angry. I think the boy should not only respect and take care of the old man but also keep the environment clean.
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15、、【2012河南真题】书面表达(15分)
目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史,有人选择读史书来了解历史。你选择的理由是什么?请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。
选择
理由
看历史剧
情节有趣、通俗易懂;
读历史书
资料真实、引人深思;
你的选择
?
要求:1、语言表达准确;短文连贯通顺;
2、短文必须包括以上内容要点,可以适当发挥;
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4、词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总次数。
Many historical plays have been on TV recently.
参考范文:Many historical plays have been on TV recently.Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history.They think they are interesting and easy to understand.Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.
Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history.They believe books can tell them the true storied.They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.
I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.om]
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16、、【2012绵阳真题】书面表达(共1题,满分20分)
在即将告别母校的时刻, 你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情。请根据下面表格所列要点,以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题, 用英语写出一篇短文,放在你的QQ空间,供大家访读。
感
恩
对象
存栏记忆
未来与祝福
母校
美丽校园,快乐家园
越来越好
老师
教授知识,给予帮助
铭记在心
职员
关心照料,抚育成长
永远开心
同学
相处和睦,情同兄弟姊妹
保持联系
注意:1.词数:80词左右;
2. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名;
3. 短文的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计人总词数)。
参考词汇: 知识 knowledge; 职员 staff members; 永远 always/forever
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
【参考范文】One possible version:
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, dear junior school. You’re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you’ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You’re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I’ll remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You’ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You’ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let’s always keep in touch [80 words]
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
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17、、【2011山东德州】写作(共1题,计15分)
假如你是张文,八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧(an English textbook play),准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂(the school hall)演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail,邀请他来观看演出,并在演出结束时发言。
注意:1. 可增加细节,使文章连贯完整;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
【参考范文:】
参考一、Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
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18、、【2011山东威海】书面表达(共1小题,计15分)
81.计算机在我们的工作、生活中的作用越来越大, 你知道计算机的起源于发展吗?请就计算机的发明时间(1946年)、大小、用途等方面,谈一下它的发展变化,并说明你对未来计算机的畅想。
要求:1.意见连贯,语句通顺;
2.词数不少于80词;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers?
【参考范文】One possible version:
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? Computer was invented in 1946. At that time, The machine was huge and it was as large as a big house. It weighed about 30 tons.
Computer is a very useful tool in our life, in our study as well as works. For example, computer can send some messages to foreign friends by E-mail. The computer can open our eyes to let us know more. Computer is the most helpful invention in the world. Computer can help us in study or work. There are many computer functions(功能)We can listen to music or play the game on computer. It makes us relax.
It's hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. And in my opinion, computers are going to change our life completely in the near future.
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19、、【2012河南】书面表达(15分)
目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史,有人选择读史书来了解历史。你选择的理由是什么?请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。
选择
理由
看历史剧
情节有趣、通俗易懂;
读历史书
资料真实、引人深思;
你的选择
?
要求:1、语言表达准确;短文连贯通顺;
2、短文必须包括以上内容要点,可以适当发挥;
3、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4、词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计入总次数。
Many historical plays have been on TV recently.
【参考范文】:
Many historical plays have been on TV recently.Some people like watching historical TV plays to know about history.They think they are interesting and easy to understand.Both the old and the young will have a lot of fun watching them.
Some other people think another way to learn about history is to read books on history.They believe books can tell them the true storied.They can learn and think a lot from them while reading.
I like watching historical TV plays because they make me relaxed and save me much time.om]
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20、、【2012绵阳】书面表达(共1题,满分20分)
在即将告别母校的时刻, 你想表达你对母校、老师、职员和同学的感恩之情。请根据下面表格所列要点,以The last moment held on to(难舍时刻)为题, 用英语写出一篇短文,放在你的QQ空间,供大家访读。
感
恩
对象
存栏记忆
未来与祝福
母校
美丽校园,快乐家园
越来越好
老师
教授知识,给予帮助
铭记在心
职员
关心照料,抚育成长
永远开心
同学
相处和睦,情同兄弟姊妹
保持联系
注意:1.词数:80词左右;
2. 短文中不得提及真实人名、校名及地名;
3. 短文的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计人总词数)。
参考词汇: 知识 knowledge; 职员 staff members; 永远 always/forever
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
【参考范文】One possible version:
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
Thanks, dear junior school. You’re a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you’ll be better and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You’re taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I’ll remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You’ve taken good care of us and helped us grow up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You’ve got on well with me just like sisters and brothers. Let’s always keep in touch [80 words]
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!
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21、、【2012连云港真题】书面表达(满分20分)
假设你班上周就 “ Is it OK to tell white lies?” 开展了一场讨论,请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文, 简单介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈你自己的观点。
陈述方
主要观点
赞成者
善意的谎言是出于好意, 说了不为过;
善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处;
善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信。
反对者
善意的谎言也是谎;
谎言会伤害友情;
谎言终究不能持久。
你的观点
………. ( 至少两点)
注意:1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计总词数;
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名;
4.参考词汇: 善意的谎言 a white lie
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies . The students have different opinions.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies . The students have different opinions.
Some think it is all right to do so out of kindness. Besides , white lies can often help people get on well with each other. Sometimes , they may make one confident.
However, many others take telling lies very seriously. They insist that white lies are lies after all. They do harm to friendship. What’s worse, lies never go far.
In my opinion, I have to admit that all people lie at times. As long ass we’re true to each other, lies , whatever kinds they are , won’t stand in our way. (94 words)
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22、、【2012咸宁真题】书面表达(共12分)
同学们,咸宁市被列为首批国家旅游标准化四个示范城市之一了。让我们也行动起来吧!为了让母校变得更加美好,为家乡建设添砖加瓦,请同学们为校园建设积极建言献策。假如你是滨海中学初三年级学生刘雨,请你写一份建议书。 (以上背景内容无需表述)内容要点:1、校园环境(如:植树、种花、运动场、图书馆……)
2、特色课程(如:舞蹈、音乐……)
3、……注意:1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;词数80左右。文章开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
2、要点齐全,语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可以适当发挥。
3、提示词:hope; organize; interestingDear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your reading!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
【参考范文】*************
One possible version: (107 words)Dear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, a library with a lot of interesting books in it should be built, so that we can read in our spare time every day. Second, we expect our own dancing hall and piano room. Many of us like dancing, and some are even good at playing the piano. Third, we dreams of having a playing-field with many flowers and green trees around. We can exercise there every day to make our body strong. Finally, I suggest teachers in our school organize more colorful after- class activities for students.
In a word, I hope our school will attract more visitors and I wish her a good future.
Thanks for your reading!Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
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23、、【2011邵阳】作文(计10分)
7月1日即将来临,为了庆祝党的第90个生日,也为了丰富学校师生的课余生活,最近你校组织了一次“红歌”演唱会。请根据下面的提示,以为Let’s sing red songs标题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:
①全校师生积极参与,演唱会取得了圆满成功;
②平时同学们忙于学习,老师们也忙于工作,这次活动使你们得到了放松;
③你的观点……
参考词汇:
red songs 红歌; enrich 使丰富;organize 组织;take an active part in 积极参与......
Let’s sing red songs
In order to celebrate the 90th birthday of our Party and enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn't it?
【参考范文】
Let’s sing red songs
In order to celebrate the 90th birthday of our Party and enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. Everyone took an active part in this activity, and the concert was successfully held. As you know, we are always so busy learning the lessons that we feel stressed out sometimes. The concert gave us a chance to relax.
In my opinion, red songs can make us learn more about the past. And we will love our country more than before. This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn’t it?
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24、、【2011 四川广安】书面表达(满分15分)
初中生活即将结束,我们有很多不能忘记的美好记忆。与同学之间的友好交往,与老师之间的坦诚沟通。与家长之间的倾心交流……已成为我们生活中的重要内容。请以(My Past Beautiful Life)为题,写一件你与同学(或朋友、老师、家长)等曾经经历过的美好事情,以表达对他们的感激或怀念之情。
要求:1.书写规范,层次清楚,真情实意。
2.文章中不得使用你及你的朋友、同学、老师、家长的真实姓名和校名。
3.词数不少于80词。
部分参考词汇: an unforgotten time (一段难忘时光) meaningful(有意义的) thankful(感激的)moved(感动的)
My Past Beautiful Life
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【参考范文】One possible version:
My Past Beautiful Life
Our life in middle school will come to an end soon. It was an unforgotten time. I will never forget you an outgoing boy. There is always smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. It was very meaningful for us to play basketball. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. So I was thankful and moved. At this every moment I'm saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes:
I hope you are happy and healthy forever.
I hope you are successful in the future.
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25、、【2012连云港】书面表达(满分20分)
假设你班上周就 “ Is it OK to tell white lies?” 开展了一场讨论,请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文, 简单介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈你自己的观点。
陈述方
主要观点
赞成者
善意的谎言是出于好意, 说了不为过;
善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处;
善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信。
反对者
善意的谎言也是谎;
谎言会伤害友情;
谎言终究不能持久。
你的观点
………. ( 至少两点)
注意:1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
2.词数90左右,短文开头已给出,不计总词数;
3.文中不得提及考生所在的学校及自己的姓名;
4.参考词汇: 善意的谎言 a white lie
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies . The students have different opinions.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Is it OK to tell white lies?
Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies . The students have different opinions.
Some think it is all right to do so out of kindness. Besides , white lies can often help people get on well with each other. Sometimes , they may make one confident.
However, many others take telling lies very seriously. They insist that white lies are lies after all. They do harm to friendship. What’s worse, lies never go far.
In my opinion, I have to admit that all people lie at times. As long ass we’re true to each other, lies , whatever kinds they are , won’t stand in our way. (94 words)
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26、、【2012咸宁】书面表达(共12分)
同学们,咸宁市被列为首批国家旅游标准化四个示范城市之一了。让我们也行动起来吧!为了让母校变得更加美好,为家乡建设添砖加瓦,请同学们为校园建设积极建言献策。假如你是滨海中学初三年级学生刘雨,请你写一份建议书。 (以上背景内容无需表述)内容要点:1、校园环境(如:植树、种花、运动场、图书馆……)
2、特色课程(如:舞蹈、音乐……)
3、……注意:1、文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;词数80左右。文章开头、结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
2、要点齐全,语言通顺,意思连贯,书写规范,可以适当发挥。
3、提示词:hope; organize; interestingDear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your reading!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
【参考范文】One possible version: (107 words)
Dear Headmaster,
I am very glad to write to you. These days we are talking about how to make our school more beautiful. Here are some of my suggestions.
First, a library with a lot of interesting books in it should be built, so that we can read in our spare time every day. Second, we expect our own dancing hall and piano room. Many of us like dancing, and some are even good at playing the piano. Third, we dreams of having a playing-field with many flowers and green trees around. We can exercise there every day to make our body strong. Finally, I suggest teachers in our school organize more colorful after- class activities for students.
In a word, I hope our school will attract more visitors and I wish her a good future.
Thanks for your reading!Yours sincerely,
Liu Yu
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27、、【2012毕节真题】书面表达分A、B两部分,A部分10分,B部分20分。
A. 假如你校成功举办了第一次英语角活动,请根据下列提示,以“The First English Comer in Our School”为题,用英语为学校的校报写一篇20 -30词的简 讯。请在答题卡相应位罝答题。(10分)
活动时间:2012年6月14日下午3:00-4:00 活动内容:用英语交谈英语学习的方法 活动地点:学校图书馆 参加人数:英语教师和学生共100余人 活动效果:学生积极参与,有利于促进英语学习
B. 假如你是张武,是某校八年级学生,感到学习任务太重,每天要学习的科 目多,老师布罝的作业多,连周末和节假日都有做不完的作业,很多时候放学后 老师还要补课,每天几乎都没有属于自己的时间,睡眠时间严重不足,身心疲惫, 不知道怎么办。请你以张武的名义用英语写一封80 - 100词的信给某报社的中 学生信箱,谈谈你的这种情况,并希望老师们少布罝作业,多关爱学生的健康成 长。(20分)
部分参考词汇:editor (编辑)task(任务)healthy growth(健康成长)subjects(科目)
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28、、【2012安徽真题】书面表达【共1小题;满分20分】
英语课堂上,老师要求学生就“与人相处”的话题展开小组讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以" how to get well with others" 为题,写一篇英语短文。
Suggestions
Learn to share
Respect[尊重] others
Communicate with each other
......
My suggestions
....
注意:1.词数80--100;
2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3.文中请勿提及你的真实姓名和学校。
How to get on well with others
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29、、【2012重庆真题】书面表达。(15分)
假如你校有几位来自美国的交换生,他们打算周末步行去翠湖公园。请根据提示为他们写出前往的路线,并简介公园情况。
要点提示:校对
1.路线(见右图);
2.公园环境优美、凉爽,
还可游泳、野餐等;
3.……
要求:
1.词数:80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight
【参考范文】.One possible version:
Cuihu Park is not far from here. It's easy to get there. Just go straight and return at the first corner. Walk along the road and turn left when you find a hospital. Cuihu Park is down the street on your right. Across from the park is a restaurant.
The park is really a good place to have fun. It’s beautiful and cool with the trees and flowers. You can swim and play games or have a picnic there. It’s very relaxing. You my also get a good chance to practice Chinese. I hope you will enjoy yourselves.
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30、、【2012株洲真题】中考马上要结束了,考完后你就可以做你喜欢的事哦。假如你是David,你的美国笔友Fred来信询问考后你想做什么。请给他写封回信,告诉他你喜欢做的两、三件事情,并说明理由。
注意:1. 60词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息;
3.不要把已给出部分再抄写在答题卡上。
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to receive your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
76. A possible version:
Dear Fred,
I am so glad to get your letter. You want to know what I like to do after the exam. Now let me tell you about it.
You can’t imagine how happy I am! At first, I will have a good sleep because I often stayed up in the past two months. Next, I am going to watch TV. I like playing basketball very much, so I will enjoy some basketball matches on it. I will also go to the bookstore and buy a few interesting books so that I can spend a good summer vacation. How about you? Please write to me soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
David
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31、、【2012苏州真题】书面表达(共1题;满分20分)
假设你是名初三毕业生,考上了理想的学校。今天是开学第一天,请你根据下表所列的 内容要点,用英语写一篇日记,写下这一天的感受。.
去校前
兴奋(原因自拟) 担忧(原因自拟)
到校后
发现老师、同学友好 忘了紧张、感觉自在
离校时
不会再担心 相信会快乐
注意:
1. 词数90左右;
2. 日记的开头已为你写好,不计人总词数;
3. 日记须包括所有内容要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺;
4. 日记中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year. I was excited as well as worried.___________________
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【参考范文】One possible version :
Monday, Sept. 3 Fine
Today was the first day of my new life. I looked at my new books and checked everything for the new school year, I was excited as well as worried.
I was excited because I am a student of senior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers, students in this school. I was afraid that I couldn’t fit in well.
When I got to school, I found everyone was really sweet to me. Teachers were kind and ready to help us. I soon forgot my nervousness. 1 felt at home.
At the end of today, I felt no more fear and I believe I will have lots of fun at this new school.
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32、、【2012岳阳真题】作文
今年四月份,岳阳市启动了“文明餐桌行动”,号召全体市民“文明用餐,节俭惜福”。请结合图片,联系实际,适当发挥,以“Save(节约) Food and Eat Healthily”为题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
waste too much eat up all the food eat junk food eat a balanced diet
Save Food And Eat Healthily
Yueyang government has called on the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we
【参考范文】One possible version:
Save Food And Eat Healthily
Yue yang government has called on the citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.
To save food, we shouldn’t waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldn’t order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world don’t have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shouldn’t eat junk food but healthy food. It’s good for our health to eat a balanced diet. We’d better not eat in small restaurants. The food and the oil they use are not clean or healthy enough. We’d better eat at school or at home if we have time.
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33、、【2012山东东营真题】书面表达(共1题,计20分)
你在求学的过程中肯定遇到过很多好老师,你最喜欢哪位呢?请你以The Teacher I Like Best为题, 用英语写一篇短文,参加美国杂志Weekly Reader的征文活动。
内容可涉及:他(她)是谁、教什么学科;你喜欢他(她)的原因。可以适当发挥。
要求:1、80-100词;
2、文中不得出现真实姓名及校名,老师姓名统一使用Mr./Mrs./Miss XX,例如:Mr. Ma。
【参考范文】 A possible version:
The Teacher I Like Best
Of all my teachers, I love Mrs. Li best. She taught us English in junior middle school.
She had many ways of making her classes interesting and exciting. She always taught us something new in easy ways. She helped us use English by doing interesting activities, such as, making surveys, playing games, etc.
Mrs. Li was a strict but kind teacher. She often asked us to be on time for class and do homework by ourselves. When we had trouble, she often helped us out.
Thanks to Mrs. Li, I started to love English. I love Mrs. Li and her class.
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34、、【2012四川乐山真题】书面表达(满分15分
今年的3.15晚会曝光了北京一麦当劳店将过期食品改换包装再次出售一事,引来舆论哗然,食品卫生安全再次成为人们关注的焦点。作为一名中学生消费者,该如何维护自己的权益,吃到放心的食品?请你根据下面提供的要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇80词左右的短文,并谈谈自己的看法。
1. 买食品前检查生产日期,查看是否过期;
2. 识别食品是否新鲜或变质;
3. 购物以后索取并保管好发票;
4. 发现问题食品以后,拨打12315或向当地消费者协会寻求帮助。
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 应覆盖所有要点:可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:date日期;overdue过期的;go bad变质;invoice发票;Consumer Association消费者协会。
Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?
【参考范文】One Possible Version:
Since the CCTV program exposed the wrongdoings by a McDonald’s restaurant in Beijing, the safety of food has become a hot topic. What shall we do to fight for our rights and interests?
First, before buying food, we need to check the date and see whether it is overdue. Then we should study carefully what we buy and decide if it is fresh or it goes bad. After we pay for the food, we should get the invoice and take good care of it. Last but not the least, if we find there’s a problem with the food, call 12315 or go to local Consumer Association for help.
Food safety is of great importance in our daily life. In my opinion, the government should take action to punish the producers and companies that went against consumers’ rights. On the other hand, we should learn to be wise consumers.
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35、、【2011山东德州真题】写作(共1题,计15分)
假如你是张文,八年级四班的班长。你们班排练了一部英文课本剧(an English textbook play),准备本周六下午4:00在学校礼堂(the school hall)演出。请你用英语给学校的外籍教师Terry写一封80字左右的E-mail,邀请他来观看演出,并在演出结束时发言。
注意:1. 可增加细节,使文章连贯完整;2. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8.
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We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
范文:
参考一、Dear Terry,
Hi, I’m Zhang Wen, monitor of Class 4, Grade 8. I’m writing to ask if you will be free on Saturday. Our class have made an English textbook play. We are going to put it on at the school hall on Saturday. Time is 4:00 p.m. The play is about a famous English story. I’m sure you will enjoy it. We hope you can come, and we do hope you can give a speech at he end of the performance. We’d like you to give us some tips about English learning. If you can come, please let me know.
We are all looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Zhang Wen
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36、、【2011山东威海真题】书面表达(共1小题,计15分)
计算机在我们的工作、生活中的作用越来越大, 你知道计算机的起源于发展吗?请就计算机的发明时间(1946年)、大小、用途等方面,谈一下它的发展变化,并说明你对未来计算机的畅想。
要求:1.意见连贯,语句通顺;
2.词数不少于80词;短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers?
【参考范文】One possible version:
Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? Computer was invented in 1946. At that time, The machine was huge and it was as large as a big house. It weighed about 30 tons.
Computer is a very useful tool in our life, in our study as well as works. For example, computer can send some messages to foreign friends by E-mail. The computer can open our eyes to let us know more. Computer is the most helpful invention in the world. Computer can help us in study or work. There are many computer functions(功能)We can listen to music or play the game on computer. It makes us relax.
It's hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. And in my opinion, computers are going to change our life completely in the near future.
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37、、【2011邵阳真题】文(计10分)
7月1日即将来临,为了庆祝党的第90个生日,也为了丰富学校师生的课余生活,最近你校组织了一次“红歌”演唱会。请根据下面的提示,以为Let’s sing red songs标题,写一篇70词左右的英语短文,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
内容提示:
①全校师生积极参与,演唱会取得了圆满成功;
②平时同学们忙于学习,老师们也忙于工作,这次活动使你们得到了放松;
③你的观点……
参考词汇:
red songs 红歌; enrich 使丰富;organize 组织;take an active part in 积极参与......
Let’s sing red songs
In order to celebrate the 90th birthday of our Party and enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn't it?
【参考范文】
Let’s sing red songs
In order to celebrate the 90th birthday of our Party and enrich our lives, our school has organized a red song concert recently. Everyone took an active part in this activity, and the concert was successfully held. As you know, we are always so busy learning the lessons that we feel stressed out sometimes. The concert gave us a chance to relax.
In my opinion, red songs can make us learn more about the past. And we will love our country more than before. This kind of activity is very meaningful, isn’t it?
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38、、【2011 四川广安真题】书面表达(满分15分)
初中生活即将结束,我们有很多不能忘记的美好记忆。与同学之间的友好交往,与老师之间的坦诚沟通。与家长之间的倾心交流……已成为我们生活中的重要内容。请以(My Past Beautiful Life)为题,写一件你与同学(或朋友、老师、家长)等曾经经历过的美好事情,以表达对他们的感激或怀念之情。
要求:1.书写规范,层次清楚,真情实意。
2.文章中不得使用你及你的朋友、同学、老师、家长的真实姓名和校名。
3.词数不少于80词。
部分参考词汇: an unforgotten time (一段难忘时光) meaningful(有意义的) thankful(感激的)moved(感动的)
My Past Beautiful Life
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【参考范文】One possible version:
My Past Beautiful Life
Our life in middle school will come to an end soon. It was an unforgotten time. I will never forget you an outgoing boy. There is always smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. It was very meaningful for us to play basketball. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time there. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. So I was thankful and moved. At this every moment I'm saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes:
I hope you are happy and healthy forever.
I hope you are successful in the future.
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39、、【2012山东济宁真题】书面表达(共1小题,计15分)
假如你叫李华,市第三中学初三的学生。星期天你和班里的同学去康乐敬老院(old folk’s home) 参加了社区活动。请根据下面的图画的提示词语,用英语写一篇100词左右的日记。可合理想象,适当发挥。句首已给出,不计入总词数。
(一)审题
本篇作文考查的为记叙文。要求利用所给的信息列举在星期天去往敬老院的经过。然后写出你个人的观点。
(二)列举写作要点
1. 乘坐的交通工具,去往敬老院。老人见到我们的心情。
2. 在敬老院,我们为老人做的事情。我们的感受。
3. 总结:作为学生我们很喜欢参加社区活动。帮助老人是我们的职责。
(三)列举重点短语和句型
重点短语:take the school bus, help sb do sth, sweep the floor, clean the windows, clean the desk, enjoy oneself , have lunch
重点句型:We swept the floor for them, we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk.
And I think it’s our duty to help the old people.
【参考范文】
Sunday Fine
Today, we took the school bus to Kang Le old folk’s home. The old people greeted us warmly and they were very pleased to see us. We helped them do a lot of things in the old folk’s home. We swept the floor for them, we cleaned the windows and we also cleaned the desk. Some girls danced for them and we enjoyed ourselves that day. Finally, we had lunch together with the old people and the dishes were very delicious.
As the students in Grade Nine in No.3 Middle School, we like the activity very much. And I think it’s our duty to help the old people, do you think so?
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40、、【2012恩施真题】书面表达(共1题,计15分)
父爱如山!假设父亲节即将来临,请你借此机会给你父亲写封信,和他谈谈心里话。
写作要点: 1.父亲辛勤工作,让我受到更好的教育,过上更好的生活;
2.父亲在学习上对我严格要求;考试失利时,他鼓励我不放弃;遇到困难时,父亲鼓励我笑对生活;表达对父亲的感谢和祝福。
温馨提示:
1. 短文内容应包含所提示的要点,语言流畅,不要逐字翻译,可适当发挥;
2. 短文字数不少于80词,短文开头和结尾已替你写好,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实的人名、校名和地名。
Dear father,
Father’s Day is coming, I’d like to say something to you. ________________________________
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Yours
Li Hua
【参考范文】One possible passage :
Dear father,
Father’s Day is coming. I,d like to say something to you.
You always work hard so that I can receive a better education and live a better life. You are strict with me in my study and help me with my homework. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me to be confident and keep trying. When I had trouble in life, you always told me to be brave and smile at life.
You have given me so much, not only in my study but also in my life. Thank you for your deep love. Thank you for all that you have done for me. I love you! I hope you will be healthy and happy forever!
Happy Fathers Day!
Yours, Li Hua
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