2021年中考英语专题复习书面表达之写人记叙文课件（18张PPT）

(共18张PPT)
写人记叙文
写作指导
真题再现
题目分析（审题+构思）
素材积累（词汇+短语+句型）
范文赏析（全文背诵）
真题训练
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1.写人要写“魂”
写人记叙文是通过对人物思想性格的刻画来表现中心思想的。
2.写作角度要新、小、集中、典型。
写作指导
真题再现
假设Lucy是你的好朋友，下面是Lucy的个人信息，请你根据以下提示，以“My good friend”为题，用英语写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
注意：内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不必逐条翻译。
要点提示：
Name Lucy
Age 14
Country America
Appearance good-looking, tall, blue eyes, golden hair
Character kind, outgoing, helpful
Hobbies reading, listening to music, doing sports
Interests Chinese history and culture
题目分析
1.审题
体裁：____________
要点：____________
人称：____________
时态：____________
记叙文
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一般现在时
2.构思
3.写作
4.检查
Beginning part:
Body part:
Ending part:
点题 引出这个人
要点
评论，点缀这个人
：拼写、语法
素材积累
1.好看的
2.热心的
3.大方的
4.有志向的
5.好竞争的
6.有创造力的
good-looking
warm-hearted
generous
ambitious
competitive
creative
必备词汇
7.诚实的
8.金色的
9.积极的
10.多愁善感的
11.幽默的
12.感激的
honest
blonde / golden / fair
active / positive
sensitive / sentimental
humorous
grateful / thankful
1. 一位名叫Lucy的好朋友
2. 一名 14岁大的女孩
3. 金发碧眼
4. 中等身材的女孩
5. 喜欢做……
常用短语
a good friend named/called Lucy
a fourteen-year-old girl
with fair hair and two blue eyes
a girl of medium height/build
like/enjoy doing sth.
6. 擅长……
7. 在某方面帮助某人
8. 在某人的帮助下
9. 在某人的空闲时间
10.此外
be good at/do well in sth.
help sb. with sth.
with the help of sb.=with one’s help
in one’s spare / free time
besides / what’s more
1. 我有一个好朋友，名叫 Lucy.
I have a good friend ___________________.
2. 她是一名14岁的女孩，来自美国。
She is ______________________ from America.
3. 她个子高，很漂亮，金发碧眼。
She is tall and pretty _____________________________.
4. Lucy也是一个善良诚实的女孩，乐于助人。
Lucy is also a kind and honest girl, ______________________.
句型练习
named/called Lucy
a fourteen-year-old girl
with fair hair and two blue eyes
who is always ready to
help others
5. 力所能及去帮助他人是她的愿望。
________________________________ is what she wishes.
6. 她总是面带笑容，向身边的每一个人传递着友善
______________________, she spreads kindness to everyone around her.
7. 在她的帮助下，我的英语学习在这学期取得了很大进步。_____________, I have made much progress in English this term.
8. 这就是 Lucy，一个我应该向之学习的优秀女孩。____________ , an excellent girl that I should learn from.
Doing what she can do to help others
Always wearing a smile
With her help
Such is Lucy
范文赏析
My best friend I have a good friend named Lucy. She is a 14-year-old girl from America. She is tall and pretty with fair hair and two blue eyes. Lucy is a kind and honest girl, who is always ready to help others. Doing what she can do to help others is what she wishes. Always wearing a smile, she spreads kindness to everyone around her. Besides, she is also helpful. She always helps me with English. With her help, I have made much progress in English this term. I’m very thankful for what she has done for me. In her spare time, she enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture.
Such is Lucy, an excellent girl that I should learn from.
名叫Lucy
一个14岁大的女孩
金发碧眼
乐于助人
力所能及地去帮助别人
面带笑容
此外
帮我学英语
在她的帮助下
取得很大进步
感激的
此外
对......感兴趣
这就是Lucy
范文赏析
My best friend I have a good friend named Lucy. She is a 14-year-old girl from America. She is tall and pretty with fair hair and two blue eyes. Lucy is a kind and honest girl, who is always ready to help others. Doing what she can do to help others is what she wishes. Always wearing a smile, she spreads kindness to everyone around her. Besides, she is also helpful. She always helps me with English. With her help, I have made much progress in English this term. I’m very thankful for what she has done for me. In her spare time, she enjoys reading books and listening to music. What’s more, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture.
Such is Lucy, an excellent girl that I should learn from.
真题训练
假如你是校报编辑，学校决定在校报上宣传一批优秀学生。请你用英文向全校同学介绍优秀学生之一王磊，内容如下：
1. 王磊，男，九年级一班学生；
2. 王磊的外貌、兴趣爱好和特长；
3. 王磊的英语成绩优异；
4. 王磊乐于助人，在学习上帮助同学。
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3. 词数：80 词左右；
4. 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
1.偶像，榜样
2.身边的人：
同学，朋友，老师，父母
3.介绍自己
考点
Thank you!