人教新目标版英语九年级全Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.Section B 3a—Self check写作课件（22张PPT无素材）

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SectionB 3a—Self check写作
Lead in：
What is she like
She is of medium height.
is thin.
has short black hair.
has black eyes.
is friendly.
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3 minutes
小组讨论并写下有关描述人的外貌、性格和爱好的单词
（2分钟）；小组一起汇总（1分钟）。
Group 1: Appearance(外貌)
Group 2: Personality（性格）
Group 3: Hobbies（爱好）
short / long
straight / curly
black / brown / blonde (金色的 )
hair
build
thin of medium build heavy, big, strong
height
tall of medium height short
How can we describe people’s appearance
Appearance
外貌
Personality
性格
friendly, humorous（幽默的
brave , outgoing
shy , quiet
serious , active
funny, lovely …….
How can we describe people’s personality
Hobbies
爱好
like
swimming
reading,
drawing
playing basketball
watching movies
doing sports
……
I had long hair in the past.
I used to have long hair. But now I have short hair.
But now I have short hair.
Wei Yuting used to be short, but now she is tall.
Make similar sentences 仿写句子
I used to be/have ____, but now I am/have _____.
He used to be shy. But now he is outgoing.
I used to be ____, but now I am _____.
My daughter used to like drawing, but now she likes reading.
I used to like ____, but now I like _____. 或者
I enjoyed ___ when I was young, I'm good at ____ now.
Miss Chen是你们初三的新英语老师，她想更多的了解你们，为此，请以“How I’ve changed!”为题写一篇短文，介绍下你进入初中后的一些变化。
要求：1. 根据要求进行写作，可适当发挥；
2. 灵活运用本单元所学短语 used to；
3. 60-80词左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Write about how you have changed. What did you use to be like (appearance, personality, hobbies)
作文： How I’ve changed!
总述观点
My life has changed a lot
in the past few years.
分述过去与现在的
生活情况
I used to ···, but now ···
收尾
People sure changed.
appearance personality hobby …
now
past
How I’ve Changed!
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be short, but now I’m one of the tallest students in my class. I used to be shy and quiet, but now I’m outgoing and I like to make friends. I used to hate reading, but now I have fallen in love with it. The biggest change in my life is that I am interested in English now and my English is better. People sure changed.
根据表格信息提示，以“Li Ping’s Change”为题，简要介绍林萍的成长变化。
过去 现在
外貌 个子矮小，短发 个子高，长发
性格 文静，有点儿害羞 活泼，外向
爱好 弹钢琴、看电视和聊天 喜欢打网球、看书和网上冲浪
要求：1. 条理清晰，时态准确。词数60-80。
2. 可适当发挥。
3. 不要逐字逐句翻译，逻辑要合理顺通。
小试身手（writing）
1.审题
①人称：
②时态：
第三人称 she / Li Ping
一般现在时
要求：条理清晰，时态准确。词数60-80。
注意动词的三单形式
根据表格信息提示，以“Li Ping’s Change”为题，
简要介绍林萍的成长变化。
一般过去时
过去 现在
外貌 个子矮小，短发 个子高，长发
性格 文静，有点儿害羞 活泼，外向
爱好 弹钢琴、看电视和聊天 喜欢打网球、看书和网上冲浪
注意动词的过去式，used to do sth.
3.连词成句。加主语和其他成分。注意句首首字母大写和动词形式以及标点符号。
4.再连句成篇。
5.通读文章并改错。
单词拼写，主谓一致，固定用法
注意加入一定的连词，如and,
but, however
过去 现在
个子矮小，短发 个子高，长发
文静，有点儿害羞 活泼，外向
弹钢琴、看电视和聊天 喜欢打网球、看书和网上冲浪
used to be short…, had short hair
be tall…, have long hair
used to be quiet, a little shy
used to play the piano, watch TV, chat with…
play tennis, read books and surf the Internet
根据表格信息提示，以“Li Ping’s Change”为题，简要介绍林萍的成长变化。
注意
动词的三单形式和动词过去式哦
be outgoing
Begining：
There have been great changes in my life in the last few years.
How greatly I have changed in the last few years!
People sure change and so do I.
Ending
I’m glad that I’m not what I used to be.
I am glad that I has made great progress!
I think I’m not the same as before. I like this change.
What great changes I have .
1、卷面不干净，字迹不工整书写不规范。
2、审题不清，乱用人称，遗漏信息要点。
3、单词拼写错误。
4、时态误用，主谓不一致。
5、习惯用汉语思维写英文句子。
日常写作普遍存在问题：
1、记：读记背诵基础知识和基本句型结构
以及优美的句子。
2、练：每周练一篇，要求在15分钟内完成。
Summary 总 结
写作
列
Listing
连
Connecting
改
Correcting
审
Analysing
学习和运用了写作的基本步骤。
1. 收集评改意见， 修改润色后把文章抄写在作文本上。
2. 初中阶段你印象最深的是哪位老师？请以“The Teacher I Never Forget”为题写一篇英语作文。
内容包括：
（1）简要介绍老师的外貌、性格或爱好；
（2）举一个最令你难忘的事例；
（ 说明老师是如何在学习上帮助或鼓励你取得进步的）
（3）感谢老师，祝福老师。
Thank you for listening!