2022年中考英语备考写作专题：难忘经历篇学案（含答案）

英语写作专题：难忘经历篇
在我们的人生历程中，有许多事值得我们在以后的生活中去不断地回味，对这些难忘的经历，我们一定想要将它们变成文字，珍藏起来。如何记述这些难忘经历？请看今天的写作话题———
首先我们一起来看一则写作实例：
放学回到家，Tony发现父母都不在，便开始做起了作业。直到十一点父母才回来，之前从没有一个人单独在家的13岁的他有了一次难忘的经历。当门外有人走过时他害怕;听到外面的房间好像有什么动静，他更是害怕，后来才发现是自己的小猫。
根据上面的提示以“My Unforgettable Experience”为题用第一人称写一则短文，可适当增加内容。
一、分析提示，把握写作主题
由提示及所给的标题可知这里所描述的主题应是“I”（Tony）第一次一个人在家时的难忘经历。明确主题应为： My Unforgettable Experience。
二、构思写作顺序
确定了主题后，接下来需要构思好写作的步骤。描述经历的文章当属叙事类，说明时可按事件发生的顺序进行描述。开始可说明与事件相关的人及时间，或开篇点题，说明这是一次难忘的经历，随后说明事情发生的时间、地点及相关人物。在叙述事情经过的时候重点应突出“unforgettable”，针对这篇文章写作的重点应放在描写当时让“I”感到恐惧的环境的渲染上。文章结尾可总结全文，进一步说明这是一次难忘的经历，突出主题。
三、写作范文
My Unforgettable Experience
Have you got any unforgettable experience？ Well， let me tell you one of my unforgettable experiences.
One afternoon I came back from school and found that my parents weren't in. You know， I was only 13 years old. I never stayed at home alone before. So I felt a little afraid. When I was doing my homework in my bedroom， I heard someone walking outside. Then I felt even more frightened. However， just at that moment， I heard a great noise in the next room. Was anyone there？ Was it a robber or a thief？ You couldn't imagine my feeling then. I was too scared to move. Then my door opened. I found my cat enter my room. It frightened me. Then I began to laugh. I stayed at home alone until eleven when my parents returned.
I think it's my unforgettable experience because it was the first time that I stayed in a place alone.
四、范文点评
这篇文章叙述了作者第一次一个人呆在家的难忘经历，语句表达准确、通顺，句式多变，用词也很有讲究，如几个表示害怕的词afraid， frightened， scared的使用避免了用词的单调。文章首尾呼应，结构严谨。特别是重点描述了一个人在家的经历，重点突出，较好地表达了主题。
五、写作练笔
根据下文提示描述一次难忘的经历。
1. 上周六去野餐，头一天晚上做了准备，买了许多食物，烧了一些饭菜。
2. 一大早就来到乡间，山脚下、树林旁、小河边到处鸟语花香。
3. 大家又唱又跳，品尝食物。最后我们跳入水中和鱼儿嬉戏。
4. 大家都度过了愉快的一天。
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答案
We went on a picnic last Saturday. The evening before that， we got ready for it. After buying some food in the store， we cooked some dishes ourselves.
Early in the morning， we came to the countyside and found a quiet place. It was beside a river at the foot of a hill. There were many trees and flowers with birds singing in them. Then we enjoyed the food， sang and danced. At last we jumped into the water and swam with fish.
We had a good Saturday there. I'll never forget it.