2022年中考英语书面表达课件（39张ppt）
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中考英语书面表达高分策略
让过程更有方法!
80-100字数要求
话题符合中学生的生活 开放性人文性传播正能量
能根据提示，要求整合信息
特点
书面表达题型特点
话题作文，图表作文，应用作文
中考作文评分标准
第四档(12—15分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。
第三档(8—11分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。
第二档(4—7分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。
第一档(0—3分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。
高分作文的几大要素：
①紧扣主题。
②覆盖所有的要点。
③词汇使用正确。
④句式结构丰富。
⑤有效运用连词。
⑥段落清晰，层次分明。
圈出要点，提炼关键
分清层次，首尾呼应
具体步骤
高分书面表达解题技巧
复核要点，不要遗漏
根据中英，审题扣题
理顺词句，巧用连词
真题解析1
安全对每个人都很重要。
写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示： 1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，内容连贯；
2．短文适当发挥包含要点。
3．词数：80—100词。
短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
难点是：提示词全是中文且较短。
安全对每个人都很重要。
写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
第一步 审题扣题
主题是校园安全！
时态是一般现在时，主语为学生们students/we!
提示： 1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
解题思路：第二步，圈要点
要点为避免危险的一些建议！
提炼校园危险的四个方面！
动笔列出关键词：
do sports, do exercise
go upstairs and downstairs
make friends
eat healthy food , avoid junk food
第三步理顺词句，巧用连词
1.运动：first, should ,take care, get injured.
2. 上下楼：second, there are, many students, narrow, crowd each other
3.交友：besides, we must, be friendly, get on well with,
4. 健康食品：Last but not least ,we
should , eat more healthy food, stay away from junk food
体育锻炼(take care, get injured)
We should take care not to get
injured. We have many sports
activities.
调整为：We have many suggestions. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.
如何丰富句式？
上下楼（there are, many students, crowded, push ）
Second, There are too many students at school. Our hallways are too crowded. When we go upstairs and downstairs, don’t push.
调整为：Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t push each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.
调整为Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t argue or even fight.
交友：（must, be friendly, get on well with,）
We must be friendly.
We should get on well with others.
We can’t quarrel or fight.
健康食品：should , eat healthy food,
stay away from junk food
We should eat more healthy food,
but stay away from junk food.
调整为：Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
第四 分清层次，首尾呼应
1.开头已给出，已点题！（不计入字数？） 总
2.中间为文章的4个方面：（小层次，可以用顺序连词）
⑴运动（2-3句话）：小心，避免受伤
⑵上下楼（2-3句话）：人多，走廊上不打闹 分
⑶交友（2-3句话）：友好，好好相处
⑷食品健康（2-3句话）：多健康食品，
远离垃圾食品。
3.结尾点题：记住以上要点很重要！ 总
开头已给已点题！Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.
分层次叙述，用必要连词！We have some helpful suggestions. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too crowded. So don’t push each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t fight or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
最后再次点题，首尾呼应！！！
第五步 复核要点 不要遗漏
真题解析
针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些
评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展
开了讨论。作为一名90后的中学生，
请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言
稿，展示真实的你。
要求：1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
2. 不能出现真实校名、姓名相关信息。
3. 不少于80词。开头和结尾不计数。
参考词汇：selfish(自私的) ; Internet;
believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想);
in style, creative
As we know, most of us are the only child in our
families now.
We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
难点是：
1.只有少量的英文提示词，要大胆推测出词与词之间的逻辑关系，是因果/并列/转折等。
2.开头结尾已经给出，需要大量扩充细节。
3.大层次已有，注意细节的分层。
第一步审题+第二步要点
从中文材料中捕捉主题是对90后的看法：
从英文提示中探出以下细节：
1.从英文提示中主题：90后有缺点也有优点！
2. selfish大胆推测：90后的性格特点！缺点！
3. Internet:多电脑网络，少沟通交流！
4.high ideals:我们有崇高的理想。
5.believe in oneself:相信自己，不轻言放弃！
6. in style, creative：我们容易接受新事物/新观 点/思维创新。
7.补充1-2点，符合字数要求：
我们应尊重父母老师之间的关系。
As we know, most of us are the only
child in our families now.
selfish父母宠爱给予一切导致①变得自私
Parents love us very much. They do
everything for us. It makes us selfish.
调整为：Our parents love us very
much and they try their best to do
everything for us. It makes us
become selfish.
第三步，理顺，连词！
调整为：Usually we spend so much time
on the Internet that we have less time
to communicate with others.
Internet:②关注网络③缺乏交流
We usually spend too much time on the
Internet. So we have less time to communicate.
自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。
There is no doubt that we have our
own advantages as well.
有理想①相信自己不言放弃！
We teenagers have high ideals.
We always believe in ourselves
and never say “give up”.
应调整为：New ideas can be easily accepted
by us. You can find out that creative thinking
is full of our life. We also know how to respect
your parents and teachers. We are growing up.
We are sure to do better.
②接受新事物，思维创新
③尊重父母老师
We can accept new ideas. Our thinking is creative. We must respect parents and teachers.
开头
父母宠爱给予一切，导致：
①变得自私②关注网络③缺乏交流
90后
的普
遍缺
点
自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。
①相信自己，不言放弃
②接受新事物，思维创新
字数不够补充③尊重父母老师
结尾：我们长大会做的更好 呼应主题
优点是：有理想！
分层次说明！
第四步：首尾呼应
As we know, most of us are the only child in
our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us. It makes us become selfish. Usually we spend so much time on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.
There is no doubt that we have our own
advantages as well.
We teenagers have high ideals. We always
believe in ourselves and never say give up.
Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be
easily accepted by us. You can find out that
creative thinking is full of our life. We also
know how to respect your parents and teachers. We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
练一练：
在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：
父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。
学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，
比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助……
那么你对“友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？
谈谈你的看法。
要求：
1. 文中不可出现真实人名与校名。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
3. 词数：80—100。短文开头部分已给出,
不计入总词数 。
参考词汇：respect, understand, help,
relationship, contribute to(有助于),
get on well with
There is no doubt that a friendly relationship
is of great importance in our life._________
________________________________________
_______________________________________
________________________________________
_______________________________________
难点是：要从大量的中文提示和少量的英文提示词中，扣紧题目，捕捉细节！
在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：
父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。
学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，
比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助……
那么你对“友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？
谈谈你的看法。
扣紧主题：友善待人
围绕以下几个方面展开：
①尊重他人②相互理解③提供帮助
第一步？
第二步？
参考词汇：respect, understand, help,
relationship, contribute to(有助于),
get on well with
如何围绕提示和参考词汇展开？
How to get on well
with…
4个why
①尊重他人respect others,
contribute to ，good relationships…
②相互理解understand each other
③提供帮助help others
④补充一点bring happiness
第三步？
第四步？
还有，应帮助有困难的人，因为每个人都会遇到麻烦。
首先，尊重他人是必要的，人们常说，
尊重他人即尊重自己。
另外，我们应理解他人，尽管不同人有不同观点。
我们应学会如何与他人友好相处？开头
同时，帮助他人也会让我们收获快乐。
总之，友善待人让我们的生活变得更美好！结尾
中间
已给There is no doubt that a friendly relationship is of
great importance in our life. We should learn how to
get on well with others. First of all, respecting
others is very necessary. As people often say,
respecting others means respecting ourselves,
which can contribute to good relationships.
Besides, we should understand each other. Different
people have their own views, which can cause
disagreements. What’s more, it’s a pleasure to offer
help to those who are in trouble. Everyone can meet
with ups and downs. Meanwhile, helping others can
also bring us happiness. In a word, being kind and
friendly is just like bright sunlight. Only by doing
so will we live better and better.
第五步？
1.慎用谚语名言。
2.尽量用新目标课本中的佳句。
3.避免Chinglish !
4.句子成分的缺失。
5.认真检查拼写，语法错误。
6.试卷草稿，答题卡上认真书写！
复核时应避免的问题
1.词汇短语“攻关秘笈”
音型义巧妙记忆
加强中考课标词汇、短语
坚持阅读，积累高频词汇、短语、佳句
2.有效的句式教学
认清“五大”基本句式
中考相关话题必备佳句
做真题积攒实战经验
3. “多样”的句式变换
学会使用感叹句/定语从句/宾语从句/比较级/最高级/被动语
等复合句式合并简单句
如何提升英语写作能力？
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式1：适当使用感叹句！
I had a busy day!
What a busy but meaningful day I had!
Zongzi is very delicious!
How delicious I cooked!
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式2：适当使用定语从句连接简单句！
Messi is my idol. He plays football best in the world.
Messi who plays football best in the world
is my idol .
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式3：适当使用状语从句连接简单句！ I was afraid to do that.
Because I made lots of mistakes.
I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式4：适当使用比较级最高级！
I try more times, our life will be happy.
The more I try, the happier our life will be.
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式5：适当使用宾语从句！
We must obey the rules. Our room will become comfortable.
I hope all of us can obey these rules and our
room can become more comfortable.
I believe you
can make it!
中考英语书面表达高分策略
让过程更有方法!
80-100字数要求
话题符合中学生的生活 开放性人文性传播正能量
能根据提示，要求整合信息
特点
书面表达题型特点
话题作文，图表作文，应用作文
中考作文评分标准
第四档(12—15分）覆盖所有内容要点。准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构。全文结构紧凑，有效地使用了语句间的连接成份，符合英语交际习惯；具备较强的语言运用能力。
第三档(8—11分）覆盖所有内容要点。恰当使用较丰富的词汇和语言结构。适当运用了语句间的连接成份，较好地达到了交际的目的。
第二档(4—7分）没能覆盖所有内容要点。词汇和语言结构不能完全满足写作任务的要求。文章不够连贯，影响对写作内容的理解。
第一档(0—3分）漏掉较多内容要点或写的内容与规定任务无关。词汇和语言结构错误较多。内容不连贯，无法传达有效信息。
高分作文的几大要素：
①紧扣主题。
②覆盖所有的要点。
③词汇使用正确。
④句式结构丰富。
⑤有效运用连词。
⑥段落清晰，层次分明。
圈出要点，提炼关键
分清层次，首尾呼应
具体步骤
高分书面表达解题技巧
复核要点，不要遗漏
根据中英，审题扣题
理顺词句，巧用连词
真题解析1
安全对每个人都很重要。
写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
提示： 1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
要求： 1. 语句通顺，内容连贯；
2．短文适当发挥包含要点。
3．词数：80—100词。
短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
难点是：提示词全是中文且较短。
安全对每个人都很重要。
写一篇关于校园安全的英语小短文。
第一步 审题扣题
主题是校园安全！
时态是一般现在时，主语为学生们students/we!
提示： 1. 体育锻炼
2. 上下楼梯
3. 交朋结友
4. 食品卫生
解题思路：第二步，圈要点
要点为避免危险的一些建议！
提炼校园危险的四个方面！
动笔列出关键词：
do sports, do exercise
go upstairs and downstairs
make friends
eat healthy food , avoid junk food
第三步理顺词句，巧用连词
1.运动：first, should ,take care, get injured.
2. 上下楼：second, there are, many students, narrow, crowd each other
3.交友：besides, we must, be friendly, get on well with,
4. 健康食品：Last but not least ,we
should , eat more healthy food, stay away from junk food
体育锻炼(take care, get injured)
We should take care not to get
injured. We have many sports
activities.
调整为：We have many suggestions. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.
如何丰富句式？
上下楼（there are, many students, crowded, push ）
Second, There are too many students at school. Our hallways are too crowded. When we go upstairs and downstairs, don’t push.
调整为：Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don’t push each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.
调整为Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t argue or even fight.
交友：（must, be friendly, get on well with,）
We must be friendly.
We should get on well with others.
We can’t quarrel or fight.
健康食品：should , eat healthy food,
stay away from junk food
We should eat more healthy food,
but stay away from junk food.
调整为：Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
第四 分清层次，首尾呼应
1.开头已给出，已点题！（不计入字数？） 总
2.中间为文章的4个方面：（小层次，可以用顺序连词）
⑴运动（2-3句话）：小心，避免受伤
⑵上下楼（2-3句话）：人多，走廊上不打闹 分
⑶交友（2-3句话）：友好，好好相处
⑷食品健康（2-3句话）：多健康食品，
远离垃圾食品。
3.结尾点题：记住以上要点很重要！ 总
开头已给已点题！Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to us students.
分层次叙述，用必要连词！We have some helpful suggestions. First, we should take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports. Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too crowded. So don’t push each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident. Besides, we should be friendly and get on well with others, don’t fight or even fight. Last but not least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food which is harmful to our health.
In a word, it's important to remember these for us all.
最后再次点题，首尾呼应！！！
第五步 复核要点 不要遗漏
真题解析
针对社会上人们对90后年轻人的某些
评论，英语课上同学们与老师就此展
开了讨论。作为一名90后的中学生，
请参考下面的提示词写一篇英语发言
稿，展示真实的你。
要求：1. 语句通顺，表达准确，内容连贯。
2. 不能出现真实校名、姓名相关信息。
3. 不少于80词。开头和结尾不计数。
参考词汇：selfish(自私的) ; Internet;
believe in oneself; high ideals(崇高理想);
in style, creative
As we know, most of us are the only child in our
families now.
We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
难点是：
1.只有少量的英文提示词，要大胆推测出词与词之间的逻辑关系，是因果/并列/转折等。
2.开头结尾已经给出，需要大量扩充细节。
3.大层次已有，注意细节的分层。
第一步审题+第二步要点
从中文材料中捕捉主题是对90后的看法：
从英文提示中探出以下细节：
1.从英文提示中主题：90后有缺点也有优点！
2. selfish大胆推测：90后的性格特点！缺点！
3. Internet:多电脑网络，少沟通交流！
4.high ideals:我们有崇高的理想。
5.believe in oneself:相信自己，不轻言放弃！
6. in style, creative：我们容易接受新事物/新观 点/思维创新。
7.补充1-2点，符合字数要求：
我们应尊重父母老师之间的关系。
As we know, most of us are the only
child in our families now.
selfish父母宠爱给予一切导致①变得自私
Parents love us very much. They do
everything for us. It makes us selfish.
调整为：Our parents love us very
much and they try their best to do
everything for us. It makes us
become selfish.
第三步，理顺，连词！
调整为：Usually we spend so much time
on the Internet that we have less time
to communicate with others.
Internet:②关注网络③缺乏交流
We usually spend too much time on the
Internet. So we have less time to communicate.
自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。
There is no doubt that we have our
own advantages as well.
有理想①相信自己不言放弃！
We teenagers have high ideals.
We always believe in ourselves
and never say “give up”.
应调整为：New ideas can be easily accepted
by us. You can find out that creative thinking
is full of our life. We also know how to respect
your parents and teachers. We are growing up.
We are sure to do better.
②接受新事物，思维创新
③尊重父母老师
We can accept new ideas. Our thinking is creative. We must respect parents and teachers.
开头
父母宠爱给予一切，导致：
①变得自私②关注网络③缺乏交流
90后
的普
遍缺
点
自然的过渡：有缺点也有优点。
①相信自己，不言放弃
②接受新事物，思维创新
字数不够补充③尊重父母老师
结尾：我们长大会做的更好 呼应主题
优点是：有理想！
分层次说明！
第四步：首尾呼应
As we know, most of us are the only child in
our families now. Our parents love us very much and they try their best to do everything for us. It makes us become selfish. Usually we spend so much time on the Internet that we have less time to communicate with others.
There is no doubt that we have our own
advantages as well.
We teenagers have high ideals. We always
believe in ourselves and never say give up.
Meanwhile we are in style. New ideas can be
easily accepted by us. You can find out that
creative thinking is full of our life. We also
know how to respect your parents and teachers. We are growing up. We are sure to do better.
练一练：
在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：
父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。
学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，
比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助……
那么你对“友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？
谈谈你的看法。
要求：
1. 文中不可出现真实人名与校名。
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
3. 词数：80—100。短文开头部分已给出,
不计入总词数 。
参考词汇：respect, understand, help,
relationship, contribute to(有助于),
get on well with
There is no doubt that a friendly relationship
is of great importance in our life._________
________________________________________
_______________________________________
________________________________________
_______________________________________
难点是：要从大量的中文提示和少量的英文提示词中，扣紧题目，捕捉细节！
在生活和学习中，我们要与许多人交往：
父母、老师、同学、朋友等等。
学会怎样与人友善相处是非常重要的，
比如尊重他人、相互理解、提供帮助……
那么你对“友善待人”是怎样理解的呢？
谈谈你的看法。
扣紧主题：友善待人
围绕以下几个方面展开：
①尊重他人②相互理解③提供帮助
第一步？
第二步？
参考词汇：respect, understand, help,
relationship, contribute to(有助于),
get on well with
如何围绕提示和参考词汇展开？
How to get on well
with…
4个why
①尊重他人respect others,
contribute to ，good relationships…
②相互理解understand each other
③提供帮助help others
④补充一点bring happiness
第三步？
第四步？
还有，应帮助有困难的人，因为每个人都会遇到麻烦。
首先，尊重他人是必要的，人们常说，
尊重他人即尊重自己。
另外，我们应理解他人，尽管不同人有不同观点。
我们应学会如何与他人友好相处？开头
同时，帮助他人也会让我们收获快乐。
总之，友善待人让我们的生活变得更美好！结尾
中间
已给There is no doubt that a friendly relationship is of
great importance in our life. We should learn how to
get on well with others. First of all, respecting
others is very necessary. As people often say,
respecting others means respecting ourselves,
which can contribute to good relationships.
Besides, we should understand each other. Different
people have their own views, which can cause
disagreements. What’s more, it’s a pleasure to offer
help to those who are in trouble. Everyone can meet
with ups and downs. Meanwhile, helping others can
also bring us happiness. In a word, being kind and
friendly is just like bright sunlight. Only by doing
so will we live better and better.
第五步？
1.慎用谚语名言。
2.尽量用新目标课本中的佳句。
3.避免Chinglish !
4.句子成分的缺失。
5.认真检查拼写，语法错误。
6.试卷草稿，答题卡上认真书写！
复核时应避免的问题
1.词汇短语“攻关秘笈”
音型义巧妙记忆
加强中考课标词汇、短语
坚持阅读，积累高频词汇、短语、佳句
2.有效的句式教学
认清“五大”基本句式
中考相关话题必备佳句
做真题积攒实战经验
3. “多样”的句式变换
学会使用感叹句/定语从句/宾语从句/比较级/最高级/被动语
等复合句式合并简单句
如何提升英语写作能力？
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式1：适当使用感叹句！
I had a busy day!
What a busy but meaningful day I had!
Zongzi is very delicious!
How delicious I cooked!
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式2：适当使用定语从句连接简单句！
Messi is my idol. He plays football best in the world.
Messi who plays football best in the world
is my idol .
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式3：适当使用状语从句连接简单句！ I was afraid to do that.
Because I made lots of mistakes.
I finally failed to do that because of my being afraid of losing face.
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式4：适当使用比较级最高级！
I try more times, our life will be happy.
The more I try, the happier our life will be.
提高句子“颜值”的一些微技能！
方式5：适当使用宾语从句！
We must obey the rules. Our room will become comfortable.
I hope all of us can obey these rules and our
room can become more comfortable.
I believe you
can make it!