中考英语专题复习——书面表达（23张PPT）

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中考英语专题复习
书面表达
PART TWO
第二篇 语法突破篇
中考作文“六步 ”走
满分作文展示
（前置作业）2021年印度疫情肆虐,5月安徽疫情再起，新型冠状肺炎（COVID 19）在很大程度上影响了人们的生活。请你以“How to Protect Ourselves from COVID 19”为题,根据以下提示，用英文写一篇90词左右的短文。
写作要点：1.减少外出；外出时佩戴口罩；
2.勤洗手；
3.多喝水，适当锻炼；
4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物。
5....
人称：
时态：
一般现在时
第一人称
Step 1：审
(read the requirements carefully)
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basic steps(基本写作步骤)
Main points
1. 尽量少外出，佩戴口罩
2. 勤洗手
3. 多喝水、适当锻炼
4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物
5. ...
Step2：列 (list)
try not to go out, wear a mask
wash your hands
drink more water and take proper exercise
keep a healthy diet, don’t eat wild animals
（前置作业）2021年印度疫情肆虐,5月安徽疫情再起，新型冠状肺炎（COVID 19）在很大程度上影响了人们的生活。请你以“How to Protect Ourselves from COVID 19”为题,根据以下提示，用英文写一篇90词左右的短文。
写作要点：1.减少外出；外出时佩戴口罩； 2.勤洗手；
3.多喝水，适当锻炼；
4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物 5....
用简单的英文句子或短语列出要点。来确定文章的框架，但必须确保要点无遗漏。
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basic steps(基本写作步骤)
Main points
1. 尽量少外出，佩戴口罩
2. 勤洗手
3. 多喝水、适当锻炼
4.饮食健康，不吃野生动物
5.....
1.try not to go out, wear a mask
2.wash your hands
3.drink more water and take proper exercise
4.keep a healthy diet, don’t eat wild animals
It's necessary to...
It's important to...
It's a good idea to...
We'd better(not) do...
...
At this special time,we should try not to go out.
We should (not) do...
1.添枝加叶：主语、定语 、状语等；注意句式多样性
At this special time,we should try not to go out.It's
necessary to wear a mask when we go out.It's very
important to wash your hands as often as possible.
It's also a good idea to drink more water and take proper
exercise to keep healthy. We should keep a healthy
eating habit.We'd better not eat wild animals.
I believe we have confidence and we are able to overcome the disease.
（topic sentence）
（the ending）
Over the past months, COVID 19 has greatly influenced
our life and study. In order to protect ourselves from
COVID 19,
we should pay attention to our personal
protection and follow these tips.
2、加首尾，使文章结构完整，开头和结尾应注意简洁漂亮
Step3 添 (add)
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basic steps(基本写作步骤)
Step4 连 (connect)
Over the past months, COVID 19 has greatly influenced
our life and study. In order to protect ourselves from
COVID 19, we should pay attention to our personal
protection and follow these tips.
Firstly,at this special time,we should try not to go out.
Secondly,It's necessary to wear a mask when we go out.
Thirdly,It's very important to wash your hands as often as
possible. It's also a good idea to drink more water
and take proper exercise to keep healthy.At the same time,
We should keep a healthy eating habit.What' more, We'd better
not eat wild animals.
I believe we have confidence and we are able overcome the
disease.
恰当运用连接词，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。
Firstly
Secondly
Thirdly
At the same time
What’s more
恰当的连接词
表顺序 At first, first of all, first(ly), second(ly), then, next finally/at last, in the end...
表解释 for example, such as...
表对比 while;
on one hand, on the other hand(一方面，另一方面...)
表转折 but, however, though/although...
表因果 because, as, so, as a result...
表条件 if, unless...
表并列 递进 what’s more, moreover, besides, especially, in fact, as well as...
表观点 I think, I believe, I hope, as we all know...
表总结 all in all, in a word, in general, last but not least...
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basic steps(基本写作步骤)
1. 要点是否齐全
2. 时态是否正确
3.人称是否用对
4.主谓是否一致
5.名词的单复数等
6.有无语法、拼写、大小写错误等
7.避免出现Chinglish现象
8....
Step5: 查 (check)
前置
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前置
作业3
1. 要点是否齐全
2. 时态是否正确
3.人称是否用对
4.主谓是否一致
5.名词的单复数等
6.有无语法、拼写、大小写错误等
7.避免出现Chinglish现象
8....
Step5: 查 (check)
工整，美观地抄写在答题纸上。
卷面整洁不一定加分，
卷面潦草一定要扣分。
Step6: 誊 (copy)
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basic steps(基本写作步骤)
2021年是十四五开局之年，也是建党100周年，各行各业都在为建设美丽中国而奋斗。请根据下列图示，谈谈以下几种职业是怎样做贡献的。作为学生，你又该怎么办？
Writing: 用六步法完成写作
Buiding
Beautiful
China
Doctors
(save)
Policemen
(protect)
Farmers
(grow)
Scientists
(invent)
Students
(study)
档次 得分 内容
五档 15-13 能写明全部要点，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，行文流畅，表达清楚。
四档 12-10 能写明大部分要点，语言有一些错误，但行文基本流畅，表达基本清楚。
三档 9-7 能写明一些要点，语言错误较多，但意思基本连贯，表达基本清楚。
二档 6-4 能写明少数要点，语言错误多，意思不连贯，影响意思表达。
一档 3-0 只能写出若干单词，无可读的句子。
评分标准
Now all the Chinese people are making their efforts to build beautiful China and achieve the Chinese Dream．
In the fields，a large number of farmers work hard every day to improve our living levels．In order to produce enough vegetables and fruit，they are busy growing plants．Meanwhile，in hospitals，doctors and nurses always try their best to save patients day and night．
Besides，they also take good care of the old．In our daily life，we can see many policemen in the streets on duty to protect people．As for scientists，they devote themselves to scientific studies to invent something useful and raise our living standards．
As students，what should we do to build our country？I think we should study hard to get rich knowledge so as to make contributions to our country.
Sample
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Success ahead!
Homework
1. Organize your notes
2. Correct your writing