2022届高考英语作文专题写作公开课课件（38张ppt）
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(共37张PPT)
welcome
Module 2
Highlights of My Senior Year
Writing
First of all, let’s have fun together.
1.Good good study, day day up.
2.Heart flower angry open
3.If you want money, I have no; if you want life, I have one!
那些中式英文表达
Guess
I. Learning aims:（学习目标）
1) To know how to form a good passage.
2) To use proper sentence structures and advanced words when writing a composition.
Read the composition, underline the well-written sentences and circle some good transitional words（过渡词）.
Dear Sir,
How are you getting along I’m Li Hua, a student from China who is taking summer courses in your university. Now, I have met so much trouble that I have to turn to the Learning Center for help. Your precious advice will be highly appreciated.
As you know, people who are far away from home often feel homesick, so do I. I think the reason why I miss home is that I am so lonely and lack friends here.
Besides, it’s difficult for me to adapt to the foreign culture and food here. Even I can’t take care of myself in daily life. I don’t know what I should do the following days.
What’s more, no matter what great efforts I make, I find it not easy to understand the lessons given in English, because my English is so poor. Could you please tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my learning easier.
If it’s convenient for you, can I make an appointment on next Friday afternoon in the Center Reply can call at 12345678 or send Email to lihua@. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Marking Standard (评分标准):
第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
要点全
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）
连接词
语言地道，规范
Five Skills Jingle 五字口诀
一
二
三
四
五
Keep A Neat Answer Sheet
Remember
个被动句/形式主语It句型；
个非谓语；
个从句句子；
个连接词；
个高级短语+句型
颜值很重要！
Skill Ⅰ The Variety of the Subject 主语多样性
① First, we should read more English magazines and newspapers every day to help us form the habit of thinking in English.
① More English magazines and newspapers should be read every day to help us form the habit of thinking in English.
主动不如被动妙
Patterns transformation
2. 句型：It is a good way/necessary/ important/ useless/ a must … for us to do…
② It is a good way for us to watch some English-speaking TV programs and movies, which can broaden our horizons.
②Secondly, we can watch some English-speaking TV programs and movies. It can broaden our horizons.
3. 动名词做主语
③Thirdly, we can make more foreign friends. It is also helpful.
③ Making more foreign friends is also helpful.
Skill Ⅱ Nonfinite Verbs 非谓语
To solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
translation
为了解决这个问题，应该采取一些措施。
Skill Ⅲ Three Clauses 三大从句
Noun Clause 名词性从句
2. Attributive Clause 定语从句
Multiple choice
The old man has two sons. One of them is a soldier.
____ is the most important is we should raise the awareness of protecting our environment.
A. What ; that B. That ;what
C. Which; that D. What; why
The old man has two sons, one of whom is a soldier.
combination
3. Adverbial Clause 状语从句
无论遇到什么困难，我都不会放弃我的梦想。
No matter what difficulties I meet, I will never give up my dream.
translation
Skill Ⅳ Transitional Words and Phrases 连接词
In addition/Besides/ What’s worse
1. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _____________________________ , it may make us fat.
2._______can reading enrich our mind, ________ broaden our horizons.
Not only
but also
Filling
Skill Ⅴ Outstanding Phrases and Sentence Patterns 高级短语及句型
1.It is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
2. The importance of reading can never be too stressed.
3.Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.
4.The reason why he succeeded is that he works very hard.
5.What is the most important is that something must be done to protect our environment.
reciting
假设你是自贡一中高二2班学生李华。请你以“My Dreaming Senior Year(理想高三)”为题写一篇120词的英语短文参加比赛。内容要点如下： 1. 简单做自我介绍。 2.高三学习时间设计。3. 业余活动的设想等。
Writing practice
What should we write about
self -introduction
general introduction about the senior year
about study
after –class activities
conclusion
Plan the structure
1. Who are you Which class and school do you come from (同位语结构)
2. 下期我会更加繁忙。我要为即将来临的高考做准备。(现在分词作伴随状语)
3.时间有限，我将制定一个非常科学合理的学习计划。我将更努力地学习。(不定式作目的状语)
4. Do you want to be kept too busy all day long？Why Do you relax on weekends and holidays （用强调划线部分信息的副词）
5. Which activities will you take part in and what’s the benefit of these activities （用定语从句使语句更紧凑）
6. What kind of senior life will you live Can you get along well with your study and life (分词作伴随状语）
遣词造句
Check the answers by playing a game. Choose your favorite fruit, and find the lucky one.
Game
check the answers:
I’m Li Hua.
I am a student from Class 2 Grade 2, NO.1
Middle School.
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 2 Grade 2，
NO.1 Middle School.
1. Who are you Which class and school do you come from (Answer the questions)
普通表达：
高级表达：(同位语结构)
check the answers:
2. I’ll be busier next term. I will be preparing for the
coming college entrance examination.
2. I’ll be busier next term, preparing for the coming college
entrance examination.
2. 下期我会更加繁忙。我要为即将来临的高考做准备。(翻译)
普通表达：
高级表达：(现在分词作伴随状语)
check the answers:
3. Time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and
proper schedule for my study. I’ll study harder and
more effectively.
3. Time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and
proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.
3.时间有限，我将制定一个非常科学合理的学习计划。我将更努力地学习。(翻译)
高级表达：(不定式作目的状语)
普通表达：
4. I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day
long. We need some free time to relax our mind. We can
relax on weekends and holidays.
4 I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day
long. We need some free time to relax our mind, especially
on weekends and holidays.
check the answers:
4. Do you want to be kept too busy all day long？Why Do you relax on weekends and holidays (Answer the questions)
普通表达：
高级表达： （用强调划线部分信息的副词）
5. I want to take part in some sports and amusing
clubs held by our class or school. They can help
us to keep healthy and active.
5. I want to take part in some sports and amusing
clubs held by our class or school, which can help
us to keep healthy and active.
check the answers:
5. Which activities will you take part in and what’s the benefit of these activities (Answer the questions)
高级表达：
（用定语从
句使语句更
紧凑）
普通表达：
6.I want to live a busy but interesting life. I can get
along well with my study and my life in the coming
year.
6.I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along
well with study and life in the coming year.
check the answers:
6. What kind of senior life will you live Can you get along well with your study and life (Answer the questions)
普通表达：
高级表达：(分词作伴随状语）
How to link these sentences
③I’ll be busier next term, preparing for the coming college entrance examinations. _________, ④time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and proper schedule to study more hard and more
effectively.
Additionally, In addition, Besides, And moreover, Furthermore, What’s more
(What’s worse)
(表递进关系）
⑤_____, I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. Just as the proverb says: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” We need some free time to relax our mind, especially at the weekends and on holidays.
Even though, However, Nevertheless, To be honest, Otherwise
（表转折关系）
只工作不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.
⑦__________, I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along well with my study and my life in the coming year.
All in all, Briefly, In conclusion, In summary,
To sum up, On the whole, In a word,
To summarize, To conclude
（表总结）
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 2 Grade 2， NO.1 Middle School. Next term, I’ll be busier with my study, preparing for the coming college entrance examination. Besides, time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and proper schedule to study harder and more effectively. To be honest, I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. Just as the proverb says, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” So we need some free time to relax our mind, especially on weekends and holidays. Also, I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school, which can help us to keep healthy and active.
All in all, I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along well with study and life in the coming year.
有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。
避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.
改变句子的开头方式
注意使用高级词汇代替一些简单单词，以增加文采。
点评总结
一、主语
二、句式
三、词汇
四、结构
你校正在举办一次英语征文活动，请你以
“My Ideal School Life (我理想的高中生活)”为题写一篇短文，短文内容包括：
1.你的个人信息：姓名（李华）年龄、所在班级、
你最喜欢的科目.
2.学校规模大还是小 / 课程安排 / 假期长短/
课外活动及其原因。
3.学校应既重视智能的发展又重视社会技能的发展.
注意：
1.可适当增加细节，用恰当的联系词使行文连贯；
2.词数：120左右。
prefer…to… / scientific and proper schedule / after- school clubs / put importance on / intellectual skills / social skills
homework
Thank you!
Rome was not built in a day, and practice makes perfect.
My ideal senior high school life
My name is Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class7, Grade 2 of No.8 senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best.
I prefer a big school to a small one with a beautiful garden full of flowers and trees. In addition, we have the most scientific and proper schedules for our study, which can help us to study more effectively. As far as I’m concerned, the vacation should be about a month. What’s more, I like competitive sports,
so I think my ideal school should have after-school clubs such as Basketball Club, Debating Club, Running Club and so on. In this way I can not only build my bodies but also make friends.
In my view, a school should put importance on both the development of intellectual skills and the development of social skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future.
Dear Sir,
How are you getting along I’m Li Hua, a student from China who is taking summer courses in your university. Now, I have met so much trouble that I have to turn to the Learning Center for help. Your precious advice will be highly appreciated.
As you know, people who are far away from home often feel homesick, so do I. I think the reason why I miss home is that I am so lonely and lack friends here.
Besides, it’s difficult for me to adapt to the foreign culture and food here. Even I can’t take care of myself in daily life. I don’t know what I should do the following days.
What’s more, no matter what great efforts I make, I find it not easy to understand the lessons given in English, because my English is so poor. Could you please tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my learning easier.
If it’s convenient for you, can I make an appointment on next Friday afternoon in the Center Reply can call at 12345678 or send Email to lihua@. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
welcome
Module 2
Highlights of My Senior Year
Writing
First of all, let’s have fun together.
1.Good good study, day day up.
2.Heart flower angry open
3.If you want money, I have no; if you want life, I have one!
那些中式英文表达
Guess
I. Learning aims:（学习目标）
1) To know how to form a good passage.
2) To use proper sentence structures and advanced words when writing a composition.
Read the composition, underline the well-written sentences and circle some good transitional words（过渡词）.
Dear Sir,
How are you getting along I’m Li Hua, a student from China who is taking summer courses in your university. Now, I have met so much trouble that I have to turn to the Learning Center for help. Your precious advice will be highly appreciated.
As you know, people who are far away from home often feel homesick, so do I. I think the reason why I miss home is that I am so lonely and lack friends here.
Besides, it’s difficult for me to adapt to the foreign culture and food here. Even I can’t take care of myself in daily life. I don’t know what I should do the following days.
What’s more, no matter what great efforts I make, I find it not easy to understand the lessons given in English, because my English is so poor. Could you please tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my learning easier.
If it’s convenient for you, can I make an appointment on next Friday afternoon in the Center Reply can call at 12345678 or send Email to lihua@. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Marking Standard (评分标准):
第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑
要点全
词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）
连接词
语言地道，规范
Five Skills Jingle 五字口诀
一
二
三
四
五
Keep A Neat Answer Sheet
Remember
个被动句/形式主语It句型；
个非谓语；
个从句句子；
个连接词；
个高级短语+句型
颜值很重要！
Skill Ⅰ The Variety of the Subject 主语多样性
① First, we should read more English magazines and newspapers every day to help us form the habit of thinking in English.
① More English magazines and newspapers should be read every day to help us form the habit of thinking in English.
主动不如被动妙
Patterns transformation
2. 句型：It is a good way/necessary/ important/ useless/ a must … for us to do…
② It is a good way for us to watch some English-speaking TV programs and movies, which can broaden our horizons.
②Secondly, we can watch some English-speaking TV programs and movies. It can broaden our horizons.
3. 动名词做主语
③Thirdly, we can make more foreign friends. It is also helpful.
③ Making more foreign friends is also helpful.
Skill Ⅱ Nonfinite Verbs 非谓语
To solve the problem, some measures should be taken.
translation
为了解决这个问题，应该采取一些措施。
Skill Ⅲ Three Clauses 三大从句
Noun Clause 名词性从句
2. Attributive Clause 定语从句
Multiple choice
The old man has two sons. One of them is a soldier.
____ is the most important is we should raise the awareness of protecting our environment.
A. What ; that B. That ;what
C. Which; that D. What; why
The old man has two sons, one of whom is a soldier.
combination
3. Adverbial Clause 状语从句
无论遇到什么困难，我都不会放弃我的梦想。
No matter what difficulties I meet, I will never give up my dream.
translation
Skill Ⅳ Transitional Words and Phrases 连接词
In addition/Besides/ What’s worse
1. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _____________________________ , it may make us fat.
2._______can reading enrich our mind, ________ broaden our horizons.
Not only
but also
Filling
Skill Ⅴ Outstanding Phrases and Sentence Patterns 高级短语及句型
1.It is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.
2. The importance of reading can never be too stressed.
3.Only by taking exercise can we keep healthy.
4.The reason why he succeeded is that he works very hard.
5.What is the most important is that something must be done to protect our environment.
reciting
假设你是自贡一中高二2班学生李华。请你以“My Dreaming Senior Year(理想高三)”为题写一篇120词的英语短文参加比赛。内容要点如下： 1. 简单做自我介绍。 2.高三学习时间设计。3. 业余活动的设想等。
Writing practice
What should we write about
self -introduction
general introduction about the senior year
about study
after –class activities
conclusion
Plan the structure
1. Who are you Which class and school do you come from (同位语结构)
2. 下期我会更加繁忙。我要为即将来临的高考做准备。(现在分词作伴随状语)
3.时间有限，我将制定一个非常科学合理的学习计划。我将更努力地学习。(不定式作目的状语)
4. Do you want to be kept too busy all day long？Why Do you relax on weekends and holidays （用强调划线部分信息的副词）
5. Which activities will you take part in and what’s the benefit of these activities （用定语从句使语句更紧凑）
6. What kind of senior life will you live Can you get along well with your study and life (分词作伴随状语）
遣词造句
Check the answers by playing a game. Choose your favorite fruit, and find the lucky one.
Game
check the answers:
I’m Li Hua.
I am a student from Class 2 Grade 2, NO.1
Middle School.
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 2 Grade 2，
NO.1 Middle School.
1. Who are you Which class and school do you come from (Answer the questions)
普通表达：
高级表达：(同位语结构)
check the answers:
2. I’ll be busier next term. I will be preparing for the
coming college entrance examination.
2. I’ll be busier next term, preparing for the coming college
entrance examination.
2. 下期我会更加繁忙。我要为即将来临的高考做准备。(翻译)
普通表达：
高级表达：(现在分词作伴随状语)
check the answers:
3. Time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and
proper schedule for my study. I’ll study harder and
more effectively.
3. Time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and
proper schedules to study harder and more effectively.
3.时间有限，我将制定一个非常科学合理的学习计划。我将更努力地学习。(翻译)
高级表达：(不定式作目的状语)
普通表达：
4. I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day
long. We need some free time to relax our mind. We can
relax on weekends and holidays.
4 I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day
long. We need some free time to relax our mind, especially
on weekends and holidays.
check the answers:
4. Do you want to be kept too busy all day long？Why Do you relax on weekends and holidays (Answer the questions)
普通表达：
高级表达： （用强调划线部分信息的副词）
5. I want to take part in some sports and amusing
clubs held by our class or school. They can help
us to keep healthy and active.
5. I want to take part in some sports and amusing
clubs held by our class or school, which can help
us to keep healthy and active.
check the answers:
5. Which activities will you take part in and what’s the benefit of these activities (Answer the questions)
高级表达：
（用定语从
句使语句更
紧凑）
普通表达：
6.I want to live a busy but interesting life. I can get
along well with my study and my life in the coming
year.
6.I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along
well with study and life in the coming year.
check the answers:
6. What kind of senior life will you live Can you get along well with your study and life (Answer the questions)
普通表达：
高级表达：(分词作伴随状语）
How to link these sentences
③I’ll be busier next term, preparing for the coming college entrance examinations. _________, ④time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and proper schedule to study more hard and more
effectively.
Additionally, In addition, Besides, And moreover, Furthermore, What’s more
(What’s worse)
(表递进关系）
⑤_____, I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. Just as the proverb says: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” We need some free time to relax our mind, especially at the weekends and on holidays.
Even though, However, Nevertheless, To be honest, Otherwise
（表转折关系）
只工作不玩耍聪明的孩子也变傻.
⑦__________, I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along well with my study and my life in the coming year.
All in all, Briefly, In conclusion, In summary,
To sum up, On the whole, In a word,
To summarize, To conclude
（表总结）
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 2 Grade 2， NO.1 Middle School. Next term, I’ll be busier with my study, preparing for the coming college entrance examination. Besides, time is limited and I’ll make a most scientific and proper schedule to study harder and more effectively. To be honest, I don’t want to be kept too busy with my study all day long. Just as the proverb says, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” So we need some free time to relax our mind, especially on weekends and holidays. Also, I want to take part in some sports and amusing clubs held by our class or school, which can help us to keep healthy and active.
All in all, I want to live a busy but interesting life, getting along well with study and life in the coming year.
有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结构紧凑。
避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.
改变句子的开头方式
注意使用高级词汇代替一些简单单词，以增加文采。
点评总结
一、主语
二、句式
三、词汇
四、结构
你校正在举办一次英语征文活动，请你以
“My Ideal School Life (我理想的高中生活)”为题写一篇短文，短文内容包括：
1.你的个人信息：姓名（李华）年龄、所在班级、
你最喜欢的科目.
2.学校规模大还是小 / 课程安排 / 假期长短/
课外活动及其原因。
3.学校应既重视智能的发展又重视社会技能的发展.
注意：
1.可适当增加细节，用恰当的联系词使行文连贯；
2.词数：120左右。
prefer…to… / scientific and proper schedule / after- school clubs / put importance on / intellectual skills / social skills
homework
Thank you!
Rome was not built in a day, and practice makes perfect.
My ideal senior high school life
My name is Li Hua, a 17-year-old student from Class7, Grade 2 of No.8 senior high school. I like maths, physics, chemistry and English best.
I prefer a big school to a small one with a beautiful garden full of flowers and trees. In addition, we have the most scientific and proper schedules for our study, which can help us to study more effectively. As far as I’m concerned, the vacation should be about a month. What’s more, I like competitive sports,
so I think my ideal school should have after-school clubs such as Basketball Club, Debating Club, Running Club and so on. In this way I can not only build my bodies but also make friends.
In my view, a school should put importance on both the development of intellectual skills and the development of social skills as every student will make a living by themselves in the future.
Dear Sir,
How are you getting along I’m Li Hua, a student from China who is taking summer courses in your university. Now, I have met so much trouble that I have to turn to the Learning Center for help. Your precious advice will be highly appreciated.
As you know, people who are far away from home often feel homesick, so do I. I think the reason why I miss home is that I am so lonely and lack friends here.
Besides, it’s difficult for me to adapt to the foreign culture and food here. Even I can’t take care of myself in daily life. I don’t know what I should do the following days.
What’s more, no matter what great efforts I make, I find it not easy to understand the lessons given in English, because my English is so poor. Could you please tell me how to deal with the problems mentioned above and make my learning easier.
If it’s convenient for you, can I make an appointment on next Friday afternoon in the Center Reply can call at 12345678 or send Email to lihua@. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,