2022届高考英语二轮复习：读后续写之巧用动作链 学案（含答案）

巧用动作链
在描写动作时，要学会细化动作，把动作过程分解成一连串细微的动作（2-3个动作）形成动作链，写出动作的连贯性，使描写具有画面感，使人物更立体。其本质就是避免简单粗暴的使用一个动词概括整个动作，而是用2-3个动词给合进行描述。
句式3：主语+动作A+动作B and 动作C （三个并列谓语，动作依次发生）
示意停车=看到车+走到路中间+扬手
He looked up at the car, stepped into the road, and held up a hand to stop me.
他一抬头看到我的车，便走到路中央，扬手示意我停车。
练能生巧：用括号内动词的正确形式，结合语境补全句子构成动作链。
仿写1：上车=拦车+上车+告诉目的地
He________ the taxi, ________in with the suitcase and________ the driver, “Go to the police station, please.” （tell, jump,stop)
仿写2：抱住儿子=冲向前+蹲下+一把抱住
She ________ forward, ____________ and________ her son into her arms.( kneel down下跪, gather, dash冲)
仿写3：歌手唱歌=扫视观众+深吸一口气+开始演唱
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仿写4：孩子跳进湖里嬉戏=孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进水里。
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仿写5: 妈妈给钱那个可怜人=打开钱包+取出钱+递给可怜人
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句式4：句子+ing/ed, 或者ing/ed+句子（使用条件：凸显同一逻辑主语，主动或被动，表示动作伴随，原因或结果）
1、Putting his ladder against the wall, he climbed and peered over.《秘密花园》
他把梯子靠在墙边，爬上去往外看。
2、老人静坐=坐在夕阳下+看报纸+听广播
The old man sat under the sunset, reading the newspaper and listening to the radio.
练能生巧：用括号内动词的正确形式，结合语境补全句子构成动作链。
仿写1：I _________ the telephone and __________, _________.(put down, shake, sit down)
仿写2：_________ me crying louder and louder, she silently____________ a pack of napkin and_________ to me.( pull out of, hand, see)
仿写3：他站起身来，走到窗前，苦思冥想。(stand up, walk, think)
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翻译巩固（每日三题）
他穿上外套，怒气冲冲地跑了出去，把门重重地关上。(put on,storm out, slam the door shut)
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Lorna 走到窗前，打开窗子，抬头望向星空。
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她拿起照片，盯着看了一会儿，然后小心翼翼地放进相册里。(pick up, stare at, place)
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她和妈妈吵了一架，然后生气地跑出房子外。
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我毫不犹豫地抓起我的暖和外套，匆匆走向那个家伙。
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(2021全国I卷)爸爸拍拍他们的头，告诉他们不要担心。
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第二天一早，我们收拾好装备，沿着海岸出发了。（pack up, set off)
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她轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀，然后说再见。
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听到他的声音，Kent沉默了。
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听到这个消息，她妈妈笑了，轻轻拍了一下她的背。
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父亲拍着我的肩膀，鼓励我永远不要放弃自己的梦想。
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她站在一个摊子(stand.n)旁边，看着一个中年人忙着做事情。
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_________________________________(看到我的女儿安全到达)，I rested my heavy on the sofa.
她和妈妈一起在收银台(checkout stand)等着，她看到一串闪亮的珍珠项链挂在一个粉红色的金属盒子里。
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看到这么可怕的景象，我能感觉到背后的寒意。
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低头看着熊，我们发现它在吃我们刚做的面包。
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看着孩子的背影，大卫如释重负地哭了。
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看到他, conroy 太太很困惑。
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看到一辆车正在靠近，她激烈地挥手，希望能搭上车。(wave violently, get a ride)
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想到他会让他妹妹失望，阿里忍不住哭了。
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我们绝望地站在那里，不知道下一步该怎么办。
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我睡在床上，想知道我还能不能再见到我的孩子们。
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Spot看起来病了，懒洋洋地躺着，不愿意动。
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我很震惊，说话声音很低，有点犹豫。(in a low voice, with hesitation)
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他向他父亲道歉，乞求他父亲原谅他的不良行为。
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简感到很失望，又一个人待了一晚。
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现在感觉更强壮了，简开始沿着小溪走，希望它能把她带到湖边。
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他们站在空旷的路边，仰望天空，感受着珍贵的平静。
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二、巧用动作链
仿写1：He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver, “Go to the police station, please.”
仿写2：She dashed forward,knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.
仿写3：The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
仿写4: The children rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water. 孩子们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服，跳进水里。
仿写5: 给钱=打开钱包+取出钱+递给可怜人
My mom opened the purse, took out five dollars and handed it to the poor man.
仿写1：I put down the telephone and sat down, shaking.
仿写2：Seeing me crying louder and louder ,she silently pulled out of a pack of napkin and handed to me.
仿写3：He stood up ,walked to the window and thought hard.
He stood up and walked to the window,thinking hard.
翻译巩固。（每日三题）
He put on his coat, stormed out and slammed the door shut.
Lorna came to the window, opened it and looked out up at the night sky.
She picked up the photo, stared at it for a while and placed it carefully into the album.
She had a quarrel with her mother and ran out of the house with anger.
Without hesitation, I grabbed my warm coat and hurried to the guy.
The father patted their heads, telling them not to worry.
Early next morning,we packed up the equipment and set off along the coast.
She patted me on the shoulder gently and saying goodbye to me.
Hearing his voice, Kent became silence.
Hearing the news ,her mother smiled, patting her back gently.
My father patted me on the shoulder, encouraging me never to give up my dreams.
She stood beside a stand , watching a middle-aged man busy doing his business.
Seeing my daughter arrive safely, I rested my heavy on the sofa.
Waiting with her mother at the checkout stand, she saw a necklace of shining pearls in a pink mental box.
Seeing such terrible sight, I could tell a coldness flooding from my back.
Looking down at the bear,we found that he was eating the bread that we just made.
Looking at the back of the child, David cried with relief.
Catching sight of him, Mrs.Conroy was confused.
Seeing a car approaching, she waved violently, hoping to get a ride
Thinking he would let his sister down, Ali couldn’t help sobbing.
We stood there hopelessly, wondering what to do next.
I slept on the bed, wondering if I would ever be able to see my children again.
Spot looked sick,lying lazily and unwilling to move.
I was shocked, speaking in a low voice with hesitation.
He made an apology to his father, begging his father to forgive his bad behavior.
Feeling hopeless, Jane stayed alone for another night.
Feeling stronger now,Jane walked along the stream, hoping that it would lead her to the lake.
Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within