外研版必修一Module 6 The Internet and Telecommunications Writing课件（37张PPT）
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外研版
Module 6
Module 6
The Internet and Telecommunications
Writing
We can learn all we need on the Internet
I agree with this idea, especially on the subject of learning English. In my class, there are 45 students, and our English lessons last for 50minutes. That means that we each other have one minute of our teacher’s time! Our English teacher is excellent, but she can’t help everyone in the class in 50 minutes.
It would be much better if we spent the time working on a computer. There are 45 computers in our school, so we could do that. If we work independently, we can learn much more. And we can learn about the subjects that we are interested in.
What is the writing style of the passage？
1
Writing Style
1
Practical writing 应用文
Argumentation 议论文
Narration 记叙文
Exposition 说明文
Read the short essay again and answer the questions.
1. What's the author's opinion
2. Which sentences are the supporting sentences（支撑句，即段落中的主体，通过解释或举例来说明主题句）
2
I agree with this idea, especially on the subject of learning English. In my class, there are 45 students, and our English lessons last for 50minutes. (1)That means that we each other have one minute of our teacher’s time! Our English teacher is excellent, (2)but she can’t help everyone in the class in 50 minutes.
(3)It would be much better if we spent the time working on a computer. (4)There are 45 computers in our school, so we could do that. (5)If we work independently, we can learn much more. And we can learn about the subjects that we are interested in.
We can learn all we need on the Internet
opinion
supporting sentences
3
Discuss with your partner and make a list of supporting opposite ideas.While doing this, refer to the following:
the importance of having a teacher
the importance of working together as a class
the danger of spending too much time looking at a computer
4
Write a paragraph giving the opposite view. Try to use some of these words and expressions.
I don't agree with this opinion···
In my opinion···
It's very important to···
It would be very difficult to···
some other useful expressions:
As far as I am concerned/ From my point of view/ In my opinion,···
I (don't) think that... Firstly,/To start with,... Secondly, /Besides, ... Lastly, /Finally, /Last but not least...
One possible answer:
I don't agree with this opinion.
To start with, students can learn better with teacher's help. Besides, students can understand the importance of working together as a class and the spirit of teamwork in class. Last but not least, it's harmful to student's eyesight if they spend too much time looking at a computer.
opinion
supporting sentences
1. 词汇层面————主题分类词汇、刻意练习高级词汇替换
2. 语法与句式层面————分层练习：基础句型、句式多变
3. 逻辑与结构层面————主题句、承接句、拓展句、细节支撑句、结论句
4. 修辞层面————名家名句仿写：修辞手法
5. 思维方式（文化差异）层面——结构与逻辑
6. 写作练习策略层面————同类话题的广泛迁移：十年高考分类题目—热点预测
How to improve writing skill
5
Para1
【主题句——点明社会现象】As cell phone is inexpensive and almost all people can afford it, most people tend to depend on cell phones a lot. Whenever you see people around whether they are walking on street or sitting anywhere,you will find that people just stare at their cell phones.
【承接句——转折到问题】This situation has caused public’s attention. Some believe that cell phones bring them fun. Some argue that cell phones will cause disaster.
【拓展句——点明作者的核心观点】In my opinion, I agree that cell phones facilitate our life. Reasons are listed as follows.
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Mobile Phones
Para 2
【细节支撑句1】Firstly,cell phones bring us entertainment.We can read our favorite novels and newspapers, listen to the music and even watch movies by cell phones. We can enjoy much fun by playing cell phones.
【细节支撑句2】Secondly, we can contact our friend in a minute. Provided that we don’t have cell phones,we can just use letters to contact with our friend and it takes several days to hear from them.If we have cell phones,we just need to dial their number and we can know what they are doing or what they plan to do.Thus,cell phones make people closer.
Para 3
【结论句】All in all, we can not only enjoy fun by playing cell phone,but also we can contact our friend in a minute.Thus, cell phones facilitate our life.
（2014重庆卷 写作一）请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry"
要求：(1)就此材料发表你的看法；
(2)紧扣材料，有明确的观点；
(3)词数不少于60；
(4)在答题卡上作答。
【参考思路】 论说—观点类—社会现象（手机）
1. 结合材料，提炼观点，现在的孩子过多的迷恋于手机和网友而忽视了身边的朋友。
2. 发表你的观点。
【主题句——点明社会现象】The advancement of modern technology(artificial intelligence) is making people's life more comfortable and at the same time less human.
【承接句——转折到问题】To those who enjoy the benefits of technology, there is no better time to be alive than now, but to others life has been increasingly complex and stressful. The issue is whether such new technological machines as computers(AI) and the Internet (AI) would be our servants forever or eventually could become our masters.
【拓展句1——优势】 Technology has turned this world into a different one full of wonders, some of them being too good to be true.
【细节支撑句1】For example, mobile phone (AI) is playing an important role in our social and professional lives, whereas the Internet has connected people at every corner on the planet and beyond.
【细节支撑句2】Once upon a time, we were plain people, but that was before we began having relationships with technological systems. By getting involved with computerized machines(AI), we could not help changing the way we live and the way we work, for better or for worse
【拓展句2——问题】It can be realized that life is more complex because much of modern technology is not born to meet primary human needs, and many "unnecessary" inventions are producing negative effects on a living style that used to be relatively simple.
【细节支撑句1】 Thus, there is an overwhelming feeling of complexity in the sense that machines act like humans and humans act like machines. Now that "intelligent" machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings because they are capable of doing many useful jobs, although making many people jobless.
【细节支撑句2】 Those who cannot work with computers are disadvantaged and therefore helpless while the traditional skills and simple ways of life are fading away, never to return again.
【拓展句3——问题】Actually people are no closer to feeling happy in various respects because such technological developments are destroying many basic values of simple and easy lifestyles.
【细节支撑句】Computers in particular have made life less emotional since the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with human beings.
【结论句】In sum, there are reasons to be worried about what will become of mankind as a whole facing an increasingly complex world in which they may enjoy all the conveniences of life and yet they do not feel any happier or wiser. Who knows that over-dependence on modern technology could not mean the beginning of the end of human sparks of creativity, spirit, compassion, love and understanding and other good things about a simple and easy life. In making people's lives more enjoyable but more complex, technology seems as if sending plenty of blessings from heaven as well as sending plenty of evils from hell. All kinds of inventions made possible by technology are designed to be the slaves of human beings, if human beings are not to be slaved by machines.
Look at the picture
Discussion
What's the advantages and disadvantages of using smartphones at school
help students to take notes
Advantages
help students to learn better / convenient for students to learn anywhere and anytime
connect with teachers and classmates closely
release([r 'li:s]v.释放) pressure
get more information about the world
interrupt the class
play smartphones in class
Disadvantages
stay up late
再玩一下
have bad effects on eyesight/
suffer from short sight
爸爸，我的眼睛怎么看不清楚了？
have bad effects on study
/fall behind in study
/waste too much time on the Internet
be addicted to the Internet
正反观点式议论文
导入
正文
结论
Writing Guides
导入话题，并列出相对应的观点
阐述正方观点+理由
阐述反方观点+理由
结论，说出自己的看法
严谨的文章结构:
主题句+承接句+拓展句子+细节支撑句+结论句
1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern.
2.People's views on … vary from person to person.
Some hold that …. However, others believe that….
3.People hold different opinions about ...
4.It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
导入话题
1. Some of them agree with the idea that···
2. Some of them are for the idea that ···
3. Some people think that it is right to ···
4. Some people think it is a good idea to ···
5. Some people consider it reasonable ([ ri zn bl] adj. 合理的，公道的；通情达理的) to ···
6. Some people are in favor of ···
表示支持
1. Some of them don't think that it is a good idea to ···
2. Other people are opposed to the idea that ···
3. Other people don't think it is suitable to ···
4. Some of them are against the idea that it is necessary to ···
5. Other people disapprove ([ d s pru v] vi. 不赞成；不喜欢) of the idea that it is necessary to ···
6. Other people disagree with the idea that it is necessary to ···
表示反对
1.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2.There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of…outweigh ([a t we] vt.比…重要; 胜过，强过; 比…有价值) its advantages.
3.From my point of view, ….
4.Personally, I think…
5.I take/hold a negative/positive view of…
结论
Writing
Write a passage about the advantages and disadvantages of students using smartphones at school, and show your opinion.
SHARE!
1.Exchange essays with your classmates and revise them.
2.Share your passages !
正反观点式议论文
lead-in
body
conclusion
Writing Guides
导入话题，观点有分歧。
正方观点+理由
反方观点+理由
结论，说出自己的看法
Summary
Homework
Exchange your passage with your group members.
Remember
Don't spend too much time on playing the smartphones.
外研版
Module 6
Module 6
The Internet and Telecommunications
Writing
We can learn all we need on the Internet
I agree with this idea, especially on the subject of learning English. In my class, there are 45 students, and our English lessons last for 50minutes. That means that we each other have one minute of our teacher’s time! Our English teacher is excellent, but she can’t help everyone in the class in 50 minutes.
It would be much better if we spent the time working on a computer. There are 45 computers in our school, so we could do that. If we work independently, we can learn much more. And we can learn about the subjects that we are interested in.
What is the writing style of the passage？
1
Writing Style
1
Practical writing 应用文
Argumentation 议论文
Narration 记叙文
Exposition 说明文
Read the short essay again and answer the questions.
1. What's the author's opinion
2. Which sentences are the supporting sentences（支撑句，即段落中的主体，通过解释或举例来说明主题句）
2
I agree with this idea, especially on the subject of learning English. In my class, there are 45 students, and our English lessons last for 50minutes. (1)That means that we each other have one minute of our teacher’s time! Our English teacher is excellent, (2)but she can’t help everyone in the class in 50 minutes.
(3)It would be much better if we spent the time working on a computer. (4)There are 45 computers in our school, so we could do that. (5)If we work independently, we can learn much more. And we can learn about the subjects that we are interested in.
We can learn all we need on the Internet
opinion
supporting sentences
3
Discuss with your partner and make a list of supporting opposite ideas.While doing this, refer to the following:
the importance of having a teacher
the importance of working together as a class
the danger of spending too much time looking at a computer
4
Write a paragraph giving the opposite view. Try to use some of these words and expressions.
I don't agree with this opinion···
In my opinion···
It's very important to···
It would be very difficult to···
some other useful expressions:
As far as I am concerned/ From my point of view/ In my opinion,···
I (don't) think that... Firstly,/To start with,... Secondly, /Besides, ... Lastly, /Finally, /Last but not least...
One possible answer:
I don't agree with this opinion.
To start with, students can learn better with teacher's help. Besides, students can understand the importance of working together as a class and the spirit of teamwork in class. Last but not least, it's harmful to student's eyesight if they spend too much time looking at a computer.
opinion
supporting sentences
1. 词汇层面————主题分类词汇、刻意练习高级词汇替换
2. 语法与句式层面————分层练习：基础句型、句式多变
3. 逻辑与结构层面————主题句、承接句、拓展句、细节支撑句、结论句
4. 修辞层面————名家名句仿写：修辞手法
5. 思维方式（文化差异）层面——结构与逻辑
6. 写作练习策略层面————同类话题的广泛迁移：十年高考分类题目—热点预测
How to improve writing skill
5
Para1
【主题句——点明社会现象】As cell phone is inexpensive and almost all people can afford it, most people tend to depend on cell phones a lot. Whenever you see people around whether they are walking on street or sitting anywhere,you will find that people just stare at their cell phones.
【承接句——转折到问题】This situation has caused public’s attention. Some believe that cell phones bring them fun. Some argue that cell phones will cause disaster.
【拓展句——点明作者的核心观点】In my opinion, I agree that cell phones facilitate our life. Reasons are listed as follows.
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Mobile Phones
Para 2
【细节支撑句1】Firstly,cell phones bring us entertainment.We can read our favorite novels and newspapers, listen to the music and even watch movies by cell phones. We can enjoy much fun by playing cell phones.
【细节支撑句2】Secondly, we can contact our friend in a minute. Provided that we don’t have cell phones,we can just use letters to contact with our friend and it takes several days to hear from them.If we have cell phones,we just need to dial their number and we can know what they are doing or what they plan to do.Thus,cell phones make people closer.
Para 3
【结论句】All in all, we can not only enjoy fun by playing cell phone,but also we can contact our friend in a minute.Thus, cell phones facilitate our life.
（2014重庆卷 写作一）请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。
“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry"
要求：(1)就此材料发表你的看法；
(2)紧扣材料，有明确的观点；
(3)词数不少于60；
(4)在答题卡上作答。
【参考思路】 论说—观点类—社会现象（手机）
1. 结合材料，提炼观点，现在的孩子过多的迷恋于手机和网友而忽视了身边的朋友。
2. 发表你的观点。
【主题句——点明社会现象】The advancement of modern technology(artificial intelligence) is making people's life more comfortable and at the same time less human.
【承接句——转折到问题】To those who enjoy the benefits of technology, there is no better time to be alive than now, but to others life has been increasingly complex and stressful. The issue is whether such new technological machines as computers(AI) and the Internet (AI) would be our servants forever or eventually could become our masters.
【拓展句1——优势】 Technology has turned this world into a different one full of wonders, some of them being too good to be true.
【细节支撑句1】For example, mobile phone (AI) is playing an important role in our social and professional lives, whereas the Internet has connected people at every corner on the planet and beyond.
【细节支撑句2】Once upon a time, we were plain people, but that was before we began having relationships with technological systems. By getting involved with computerized machines(AI), we could not help changing the way we live and the way we work, for better or for worse
【拓展句2——问题】It can be realized that life is more complex because much of modern technology is not born to meet primary human needs, and many "unnecessary" inventions are producing negative effects on a living style that used to be relatively simple.
【细节支撑句1】 Thus, there is an overwhelming feeling of complexity in the sense that machines act like humans and humans act like machines. Now that "intelligent" machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings because they are capable of doing many useful jobs, although making many people jobless.
【细节支撑句2】 Those who cannot work with computers are disadvantaged and therefore helpless while the traditional skills and simple ways of life are fading away, never to return again.
【拓展句3——问题】Actually people are no closer to feeling happy in various respects because such technological developments are destroying many basic values of simple and easy lifestyles.
【细节支撑句】Computers in particular have made life less emotional since the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with human beings.
【结论句】In sum, there are reasons to be worried about what will become of mankind as a whole facing an increasingly complex world in which they may enjoy all the conveniences of life and yet they do not feel any happier or wiser. Who knows that over-dependence on modern technology could not mean the beginning of the end of human sparks of creativity, spirit, compassion, love and understanding and other good things about a simple and easy life. In making people's lives more enjoyable but more complex, technology seems as if sending plenty of blessings from heaven as well as sending plenty of evils from hell. All kinds of inventions made possible by technology are designed to be the slaves of human beings, if human beings are not to be slaved by machines.
Look at the picture
Discussion
What's the advantages and disadvantages of using smartphones at school
help students to take notes
Advantages
help students to learn better / convenient for students to learn anywhere and anytime
connect with teachers and classmates closely
release([r 'li:s]v.释放) pressure
get more information about the world
interrupt the class
play smartphones in class
Disadvantages
stay up late
再玩一下
have bad effects on eyesight/
suffer from short sight
爸爸，我的眼睛怎么看不清楚了？
have bad effects on study
/fall behind in study
/waste too much time on the Internet
be addicted to the Internet
正反观点式议论文
导入
正文
结论
Writing Guides
导入话题，并列出相对应的观点
阐述正方观点+理由
阐述反方观点+理由
结论，说出自己的看法
严谨的文章结构:
主题句+承接句+拓展句子+细节支撑句+结论句
1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people's concern.
2.People's views on … vary from person to person.
Some hold that …. However, others believe that….
3.People hold different opinions about ...
4.It has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
导入话题
1. Some of them agree with the idea that···
2. Some of them are for the idea that ···
3. Some people think that it is right to ···
4. Some people think it is a good idea to ···
5. Some people consider it reasonable ([ ri zn bl] adj. 合理的，公道的；通情达理的) to ···
6. Some people are in favor of ···
表示支持
1. Some of them don't think that it is a good idea to ···
2. Other people are opposed to the idea that ···
3. Other people don't think it is suitable to ···
4. Some of them are against the idea that it is necessary to ···
5. Other people disapprove ([ d s pru v] vi. 不赞成；不喜欢) of the idea that it is necessary to ···
6. Other people disagree with the idea that it is necessary to ···
表示反对
1.As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion to some extent.
2.There is some truth in both arguments, but I think the disadvantages of…outweigh ([a t we] vt.比…重要; 胜过，强过; 比…有价值) its advantages.
3.From my point of view, ….
4.Personally, I think…
5.I take/hold a negative/positive view of…
结论
Writing
Write a passage about the advantages and disadvantages of students using smartphones at school, and show your opinion.
SHARE!
1.Exchange essays with your classmates and revise them.
2.Share your passages !
正反观点式议论文
lead-in
body
conclusion
Writing Guides
导入话题，观点有分歧。
正方观点+理由
反方观点+理由
结论，说出自己的看法
Summary
Homework
Exchange your passage with your group members.
Remember
Don't spend too much time on playing the smartphones.