中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
文段表达
一.做法类
这一类话题共考查了3次。2019、2018以及2015年分别以“自律”“节约”以及“文明中学生”为主题,让学生谈论个人的做法及意义。
话题1 规则
【开头句】
1. Parents and schools are sometimes strict, but remember, they make rules to help us.
2. Teenagers should be given chances to make their own decisions.
【中间句】
1. It is necessary to keep off mobile phones during the meeting.
2. Teenagers under eighteen shouldn’t be allowed to smoke or drink.
3. We must not take photos, especially in the museum.
4. It’s necessary for all of us not to spit and throw rubbish anywhere.
5. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish our homework by ourselves.
【结尾句】
1. If we do like this, our school will be better and better.
2. Our school makes these rules. Anyway, they are necessary for us to make fewer mistakes and become good students.
3. All in all, we should obey the rules above.
话题2 环境保护
【开头句】
1. Water pollution is becoming worse and worse. We should call on the people around us to protect water.
2. Nowadays the quality of our environment has become an important problem.
3. It's our duty to take good care of the environment.
【中间句】
1. We should write to the government and ask them to close down the factories.
2. To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus or the subway instead of driving.
3. Remember to throw rubbish in the bins and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.
4. You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.
【结尾句】
1. Everyone should take action to make our city become better and better.
2. All these small things can add up and become big things that can improve the environment.
3. If everyone makes a contribution to building a green city, the world will become a better place to live in.
例子1
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
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【高分范文】
Self discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self disciplined.
I often follow all kinds of rules and finish the homework on time at school. And I not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I am able to balance housework and homework. I usually make a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goals. After finishing all the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early and getting up early.
I have benefited a lot from being self disciplined. First of all, I have had many good habits, which make my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been on high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. In the future, I will continue to be a self disciplined person.
例子2
“持之以恒,方得始终。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在初中生活中坚持的一件事(爱好,习惯……),你是怎样做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语: keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题: 1. What did you do
2.How do you feel
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【高分范文】
I love running and I have kept running for three years.
When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports, and running was always my headache. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that
I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could
make it. No matter what kind of difficulties I faced, I tried my best to keep running.
Now I do much better in running and I’m very proud of myself. I feel more confident and I'm ready for any challenges in the future.
二.介绍类
这一话题共涉及过两次,以“介绍人或物”为主题。其中,2013年介绍最喜欢的校园一角及原因,2010年介绍北京良好的公交服务并谈论感受。
话题1 事物介绍
一、开头句
1. As we all know, the computer is very necessary in our life.
2. DIY is popular among young people. Yesterday I did my first DIY work — a card.
3. I’m very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
4. Do you want to know something about our school’s library Here is something about it.
5. The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It’s one of the most important festivals to Chinese.
二、中间句
实物介绍
1. You can do many things with the computer, such as doing your homework, listening to music and so on.
2. I decided to draw some colorful fish and a boat on the card.
地点介绍
3. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes.
4. You can enjoy reading many kinds of books in the library.
5. I’ll travel with my family or friends to enjoy the beautiful scenery of the nature.
节日介绍
6. During the Spring Festival, everywhere is full of red things which stand for celebration and happiness.
7. Everyone goes home to get together with his family, though some people are far away from home.
三、结尾句
1. There is no doubt that computers are very useful and important in our daily life.
2. I hope to learn more about DIY. And I will buy some books about DIY. I believe I will do better next time.
3. I hope I can have a good time during my holiday.
4. I’m sure you will like...
5. I hope you can come to China next year and spend the festival with me.
6. In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.
话题2 人物介绍
一、开头句
1. From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Ming is one of the people I admire most.
2. Thanks for telling me about...
3. I’d like to talk about the person I like in school.
二、中间句
外貌
1. She is tall and beautiful with long hair.
2. He is shorter than me.
3. She is of medium height, neither too tall nor too short.
性格
4. He is outgoing and good at communicating with others.
5. She’s very patient, friendly and warm hearted.
6. She is kind but strict with us.
7. She is always ready to help those who are in trouble.
兴趣爱好
8. She has many hobbies, such as reading, playing sports and so on.
9. I often do some reading in my spare time.
10. Math and science are my favorite subjects, and I like Chinese, English and music as well.
三、结尾句
1. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
3. What a great person he is! I have learned a lot from him.
4. We will keep in touch with each other all the time.
例子3
上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以“My Favourite Place at School”为题征文。请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并说明原因。
提示词语:classroom, reading room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve
提示问题:● What places the students like to go
● Which place do you like best And why do you like the place
● How do you feel about the place
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【高分范文】
My Favourite Place at School
Our school has a lot of places to go when students would like to hang out, such as playground, computer room, art room etc. My favourite place is our library.
In the library, people know how to restrict themselves and behave more politely, and it is a good place for me to read plenty of novels and study my own subjects. I am used to hanging out in the library after school, because even after I go home, I may not have
the mood or conditions to finish my homework. It is a good place for me to meet some friends who have something in common with me and we can share experience on study or other subjects.
It’s really good to have such a quiet place!
例子4
作为一名学生,在生活和学习中,你一定会拥有一个相伴成长的好朋友。某英文网站正在开展以“I Have a Good Friend”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的好朋友。
提示词语: outgoing, be talented in
提示问题: ● Who is your good friend
● What does she/he look like
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My name is Li Hua. I am a 13 year old middle school student. My good friend is Helen. She is tall and thin with long straight black hair. In some ways, we are different. I’m outgoing and I enjoy singing. I sing better than most kids in my class. Helen is more outgoing than me. She is talented in dancing. Helen always gets better grades than me. She is good at math and often helps me with my math. I’m better at playing tennis
than her. When we play tennis, I always win.
There is an old saying, “Friendship is like wine. The longer it keeps, the better it will be.” This is my best friend. Who is your best friend Can you tell me
三.观点建议
这一类话题仅2011年考查,考查角度为:针对是否要借钱这个话题,给出看法和建议。
话题1 学生生活
开头句
1. As we all know, using mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes.
2. Last week, we had a discussion about the hot topic “To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems.
3. Our school did a survey about whether students should bring mobile phones to school or not.
4. The idea about whether to go to school by bike or not has been discussed.
中间句
1. First of all, breakfast offers us the energy we need for the whole day.
2. In my opinion, it is important for my friends to be honest.
3. I think it is necessary to do housework, because parents are also tired.
4. The journey with friends will be more interesting, because we usually have same hobbies and interests.
结尾句
1. Only in this way, can children learn to be independent.
2. From what I said, I agree to the idea that reading is a part of our life.
3. As for me, I prefer to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.
4. In a word, children are supposed to help parents to do housework.
5.It’s important for us to learn to be thankful. If everyone can understand and love each other, the world will be much better.
话题2 学生学习
开头句
1. Chinese is very interesting and useful. I’m happy to share some ways to learn it well with you.
2. By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our minds.
3. I think studying in groups has many advantages.
4. Working in groups helps me realize my weaknesses.
5. As students, we may meet all kinds of difficulties in learning.
中间句
1. We should make a right reading plan and read more classic books.
2. Meanwhile, the language in the book is very lively, which makes me feel I am just in the story as well.
3. There’s no doubt that students should finish their homework on time.
4. It is worth trying to use new technology in education.
结尾句
1. As far as I am concerned, we should try our best to solve the problems alone.
2. In order to create a fair competitive environment, we should say NO to the exam cheating.
3. In a word, practice makes perfect.
4. Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life.
例子5
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼,并解决问题。假设你叫刘明,是美国中学生艾丽斯的朋友。你收到了她的一封电子邮件,请给她回复,回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Hi! Liu Ming,
I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know what to do. Do you have the same problem I need your help.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alice
提示词语: be sorry to, on time, it's better that..., say no to...
提示问题: ●What’s your attitude to Alice’s problem
●What’s your suggestions to help her solve the problem
●How do you think about such a problem
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours,
Liu Ming
【高分范文】
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’m so sorry to know that you are sad now. I think what you think is right. Because if she doesn’t return it on time, you will be short of money and you can’t do the things that you have to do. I think it’s better that you tell her your real situation and ask her when she can return it. If she promises to return it as soon as possible, you can lend it to her. Maybe she is in great need of it now. But if you really have something important to
do at present, you can just say no to her and explain the reasons. I think she will understand you well.
As for me, I think we should be careful when borrowing or lending money, because we are all just students.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
例子6
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼,并解决问题。假设你叫李华,是美国中学生大卫的朋友。他写邮件向你咨询如何平衡学习与娱乐的时间,请写一封邮件回答他的问题,提出你的建议并谈谈你的看法。
提示词语: be good at, deal with
提示问题:● What’s your opinion to David’s problem
● How can you help him solve the problem
● How do you think about the problem
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear David,
I’m glad to hear from you.
All of us want to be good at learning. In my opinion, those people who are good at learning are able to manage their time very well. They not only study hard at their subjects but also enjoy playing games. Playing also helps them learn better.
As for how to deal with learning and playing, the most important thing is to follow the rule—study while you study and
play while you play. Moreover, you should learn to study happily and relax totally.
It’s very important for our growth to deal with the problem of knowing when to play and when to learn.
Hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
四.经历及感受
这一类话题考查了3次。2017、2016以及2012年分别以“宽容”“友爱、互助”以及“分享”为主题,让学生描述个人经历并谈论感受。2014年是记叙自己过生日的经历。
话题1 沟通
1. Communication plays a significant role in our daily life.
2. As we all know, body language is also widely used in cross cultural communication and sometimes you can use it.
3. You’d better speak slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood more easily.
4. Be interested in others, like their hobbies, their work, their friends and families so that you will have some topics to talk with others.
话题2 感恩
1. It’s polite to say “thanks” when others help you.
2. We should be thankful for our parents. They give us life and bring us up.
3. Be thankful for the difficult times, because during those times we grow.
4. There are always some people and things that we want to thank in our daily life.
话题3 独立
1. It’s very important for teenagers to do things independently.
2. When I work out a difficult math problem by myself, I always feel I'm great.
3. When I do things independently, I always feel very happy because I know I can learn something and get some skills.
4. I'm very happy because I finished this task without others’ help.
话题4 诚信
1. It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest.
2. As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed.
3. I never tell a lie to others, no matter what happens.
4. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.
例子7
宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光。某英文网站正在开展以“包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,
主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受。
提示词语: hurt, realize, forgive(原谅), happy
提示问题: ● What happened between you and him/her
● Why did you decide to forgive him/her
● How did you feel after forgiving him/her
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【高分范文】
I still remember what happened between my best friend Lin Tao and me.
When I was in Grade Eight, my father bought me a pen as my birthday gift. I liked it very much and showed it to my best friend, Lin Tao. He saw it with an expression of admiration. He asked me to lend it to him. Although I wasn’t willing to do that, I still lent it to him because he was my best friend. But the next day, he told me that the pen was broken by accident. I got so angry at that time that
I didn’t talk to him the whole day.
When I got home, I told it to my father. Hearing about the story, my father told me that an ideal friendship should be filled with love, care and understanding. I thought a lot and chose to forgive him finally. As far as I’m concerned, nothing is more important than friendship. What’s more, I became very happy after I forgave him.
例子8
倾听是一种尊重,尊重是一种美德。在人与人交流过程中,如果能多一份倾听,彼此就会多一份理解,社会就会多一份温暖。
某英文网站正在开展以“倾听、理解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中因为认真倾听而理解他人的一次经历。主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么能理解对方以及你的感受。
提示词语: argue, upset, listen, forgive, pleased
提示问题: ● What happened between you and him/her
● Why did you understand him/her
● How did you feel after that
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I still remember that unforgettable experience.Friday, on a P.E. class, my classmate Tom knocked me down while we were running on the playground. I felt so hurt on my leg. When I struggled to stand up, I saw Tom still in a great shock, without saying sorry to me. I got angry and almost started shouting at him. At the very moment, he said, “I am so sorry, Li Hua. I didn’t see Someone in front of me blocked my eyesight. Shall I go to the school clinic with you?” Hearing his words, I understood and forgave him. After school, we went home together.
From this, I understood that listening is the best way to avoid misunderstanding and argument. Listening and understanding others make not only others comfortable but also ourselves happy.
you running towards me.
随堂练习
一
假如你是李华,将代表班级参加你校组织的以“垃圾分类”(litter sorting)为主题的英文演讲比赛。比赛前,你打算给你校的外教老师 Mr. Green 写一封邮件,请他帮忙指导。请告诉他你的演讲内容,以及需要他提供什么帮助。
提示词语: reason, ways, grammar, correct
提示问题: What are you going to talk about in your speech
What do you want Mr. Green to help with
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing to ask for your help with my English Speech Competition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing to ask for your help with my English Speech Competition. I am going to talk about litter sorting. First, I will explain the reasons why we should sort out rubbish. Then I will share some of my ways of doing it at home such as preparing different bins for different kinds of rubbish.
I would be grateful if you could help me with my English grammar. I will send you my speech by email as soon as I finish it. If you notice any mistakes, please tell me and I will correct them.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。给外教老师写一篇请求帮忙指导的邮件。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用第一人称。分为三段式:第一段介绍自己写这封信的目的及需要他提供什么帮助;第二段表达自己的感激之情;第三段表达自己的期待。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
二
探索是每个孩子的天性。探索让我们了解未知,让我们的生活丰富多彩。
某英文网站正在开展以“探索”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你曾经探索过什么,有什么收获。
提示词语:
Forbidden City, explore, books, model, creative
提示问题:
What did you do in your exploration
What have you learned from that experience
Everyone has experiences of exploring. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Everyone has experiences of exploring. I was very curious about the Forbidden City when I was little. Who lived in it How many rooms are there I asked my parents to buy me some books about its history. I also went online to search for some information about different buildings in the Forbidden City. To learn it better, I even bought a model of it!
Exploration has made me creative. It helps me to learn about things I don’t know. If we carry on exploring, we will learn more and make more progress.
【解析】1. 题干解读:文章属于材料作文,主要是介绍自己的一次探索经历,内容按照题目中的提示描写,也可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:文章主要用一般过去时,人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己的探索情况,包括探索的是什么、通过什么方式探索以及从中得到的收获等。写作时语言要简单易懂,文章结构要完整,多使用简单词语表达,意思要通俗易懂。
三
著名哲学家弗朗西斯·培根在《论读书》一文中写到:读书足以怡情,足以博彩,足以长才。
假如你是李华,是你校读书俱乐部成员。俱乐部要举办一次“我最爱的书籍”主题演讲比赛。请你用英文介绍一下你最喜欢的一本书,你喜欢它的原因,以及读书带给你的益处。
提示词语:wonderful, inspiring, knowledge, benefit, improve
提示问题: What’s your favorite book
Why do you like it
How does reading help you
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【答案】
My Favorite Book
I enjoy reading different kinds of books. “Harry Potter” is my favorite.
Although the story is very long, it is attractive and amazing and I am interested in it. Harry was such a brave and clever boy that he dared to fight against powerful enemies. Harry taught me no matter what kinds of difficulties we will meet, we should be optimistic and strong in soul.
Reading not only broadens my horizons but also inspires me when I’m in trouble.
【解析】1.题干解读:该题目属于话题作文。题目要求是介绍你最喜欢的一本书是什么,为什么喜欢它,和读书带来的益处。
2.写法指导:本文时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主,写作时,可以分为三段,第一段:交代自己最喜欢的一本书;第二段:阐述喜欢的原因,可以写书中令你印象最深刻的人物或情节,你从中学到了什么等;第三段:阐述读书的好处,比如可以写读书使我扩大眼界,增长知识等。文章要紧扣题目要点,内容要完整,表述要准确,语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句要符合英语的表达习惯。
四
“见贤思齐焉,见不贤而内自省也。”
在成长过程中,我们一定会受到身边榜样的影响。假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike想了解你的榜样的相关事情与你的想法。请你用英语给他回信。说说你的榜样是谁,简述你的榜样所做的那件/些事情影响了你,你从他/她身上学到了什么。
提示词语:hard-working, helpful, successful, admire, creative
提示问题:Who is your role model
What did he/she do makes him/her your role model
What have you learned from him/her
Dear Mike,
It’s nice to hear from you.
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Look forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Mike,
It’s nice to hear from you.
My role model is my father because he sets a good example for me.
I still remember on a cold and snowy winter evening, my father came to pick me up. When we were walking across the road, suddenly, an old lady fell down on the ground because of the ice. There were many people walking past her, but no one stopped to help her. However, my father ran to her and helped her to stand up without thinking. Unluckily the old lady hurt her leg. My father sent her to the hospital at once. The old lady thanked him again and again. What my father did makes me believe in love and trust. I feel proud of being his daughter. I realize I should help the people who are in trouble whenever I can.
Look forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。写一篇有关自己的榜样的短文。
2.写作指导:本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时,在描述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。先介绍自己的榜样是谁,再介绍是什么事情让他成为我的榜样,最后介绍从他身上学到的东西。写作时注意保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
五
假如你是李华,你们学校将要在下周二下午三点钟举办关于“垃圾分类, 人人有责”的宣讲活动,请给你们班的交换生 Peter 发邮件邀请他参加,告诉他活动的时间、地点以及活动内容。
提示词语: introduce, share, game, poster
提示问题:
● When and where will the activity be held
●What activities will be included
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on I’m writing to invite you to take part in our Waste Sorting Activity. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if there is anything more that I can help with.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on I’m writing to invite you to take part in our Waste Sorting Activity.
We are going to organize the activity at school next Tuesday afternoon. I will introduce the advantages and meaning of garbage sorting to people so that they know the importance of it in our life. Then we will show how to sort the garbage. Besides, there will be a talent show at the activity. I think you can learn more about garbage sorting by having this kind of activity.
Please let me know if there is anything more that I can help with.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。写信告诉Peter学校下周举办的“垃圾分类, 人人有责”的宣讲活动的相关信息。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般将来时。分为三段式:第一段点明主旨;第二段介绍活动的内容,时间及地点等信息;最后一段询问对方是否还有需要帮助的地方。写作时保持主谓一致性,逻辑性要强,无语法和标点错误。
六
国有国法,校有校规。在守护健康,校园防疫过程中,你们学校一定也启用一些新的规章制度规范同学们的行为。
某英文网站正在开展以“校园防疫新规”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍一下你们学校的新规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示词语: COVID-19, mask, temperature, duty
提示问题:
● What are the new rules in your school
● What do you think of the rules
China achieved success in controlling COVID-19 outbreak. We are so lucky to be able to return to school________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
China achieved success in controlling COVID-19 outbreak. We are so lucky to be able to return to school. But to avoid the spread of COVID-19 our school also has many rules.
First, our temperature is taken at the school gate every day. If our temperature is high, we are not allowed to enter the school. Second, we have to wear masks in class so that we can protect ourselves. Third, we should keep a distance of one meter from each other.
I think these school rules are necessary. In this way, we can better help the school epidemic prevention.
【解析】
【分析】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍学校在防疫过程中的一些新规章制度。
2.写作指导:本文采用第一人称,时态采用一般现在时。分为三段式:第一段点明主旨,第二段介绍学校的新规章制度;最后一段发表自己对这些规章制度的看法。写作时要保持主谓一致性,无语法和标点错误。
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一.做法类
这一类话题共考查了3次。2019、2018以及2015年分别以“自律”“节约”以及“文明中学生”为主题,让学生谈论个人的做法及意义。
话题1 规则
【开头句】
1. Parents and schools are sometimes strict, but remember, they make rules to help us.
2. Teenagers should be given chances to make their own decisions.
【中间句】
1. It is necessary to keep off mobile phones during the meeting.
2. Teenagers under eighteen shouldn’t be allowed to smoke or drink.
3. We must not take photos, especially in the museum.
4. It’s necessary for all of us not to spit and throw rubbish anywhere.
5. We should listen to the teachers carefully in class and finish our homework by ourselves.
【结尾句】
1. If we do like this, our school will be better and better.
2. Our school makes these rules. Anyway, they are necessary for us to make fewer mistakes and become good students.
3. All in all, we should obey the rules above.
话题2 环境保护
【开头句】
1. Water pollution is becoming worse and worse. We should call on the people around us to protect water.
2. Nowadays the quality of our environment has become an important problem.
3. It's our duty to take good care of the environment.
【中间句】
1. We should write to the government and ask them to close down the factories.
2. To cut down air pollution, we should take the bus or the subway instead of driving.
3. Remember to throw rubbish in the bins and keep public places clean and beautiful for everyone.
4. You can save electricity by turning off the lights when you leave a room.
【结尾句】
1. Everyone should take action to make our city become better and better.
2. All these small things can add up and become big things that can improve the environment.
3. If everyone makes a contribution to building a green city, the world will become a better place to live in.
例子1
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。某英文网站正在开展以“自律”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。
提示词语: self disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
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例子2
“持之以恒,方得始终。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情,都需要持之以恒的精神。某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你在初中生活中坚持的一件事(爱好,习惯……),你是怎样做的,以及你的感受。
提示词语: keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud
提示问题: 1. What did you do
2.How do you feel
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二.介绍类
这一话题共涉及过两次,以“介绍人或物”为主题。其中,2013年介绍最喜欢的校园一角及原因,2010年介绍北京良好的公交服务并谈论感受。
话题1 事物介绍
一、开头句
1. As we all know, the computer is very necessary in our life.
2. DIY is popular among young people. Yesterday I did my first DIY work — a card.
3. I’m very glad to tell you something about my hometown.
4. Do you want to know something about our school’s library Here is something about it.
5. The Spring Festival falls in January or February. It’s one of the most important festivals to Chinese.
二、中间句
实物介绍
1. You can do many things with the computer, such as doing your homework, listening to music and so on.
2. I decided to draw some colorful fish and a boat on the card.
地点介绍
3. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lakes.
4. You can enjoy reading many kinds of books in the library.
5. I’ll travel with my family or friends to enjoy the beautiful scenery of the nature.
节日介绍
6. During the Spring Festival, everywhere is full of red things which stand for celebration and happiness.
7. Everyone goes home to get together with his family, though some people are far away from home.
三、结尾句
1. There is no doubt that computers are very useful and important in our daily life.
2. I hope to learn more about DIY. And I will buy some books about DIY. I believe I will do better next time.
3. I hope I can have a good time during my holiday.
4. I’m sure you will like...
5. I hope you can come to China next year and spend the festival with me.
6. In a word, it is high time for us to treasure and develop our own valuable culture.
话题2 人物介绍
一、开头句
1. From time to time, we are moved by the people and things around us. Yang Ming is one of the people I admire most.
2. Thanks for telling me about...
3. I’d like to talk about the person I like in school.
二、中间句
外貌
1. She is tall and beautiful with long hair.
2. He is shorter than me.
3. She is of medium height, neither too tall nor too short.
性格
4. He is outgoing and good at communicating with others.
5. She’s very patient, friendly and warm hearted.
6. She is kind but strict with us.
7. She is always ready to help those who are in trouble.
兴趣爱好
8. She has many hobbies, such as reading, playing sports and so on.
9. I often do some reading in my spare time.
10. Math and science are my favorite subjects, and I like Chinese, English and music as well.
三、结尾句
1. Thank you for everything you have done for me.
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
3. What a great person he is! I have learned a lot from him.
4. We will keep in touch with each other all the time.
例子3
上学期间,学校的某些场所一定给你留下了美好的记忆,如教室、阅览室、操场等。某英文报纸正以“My Favourite Place at School”为题征文。请你投稿。描述一个你最喜欢的地方,并说明原因。
提示词语:classroom, reading room, playground, bright, quiet, large, help, improve
提示问题:● What places the students like to go
● Which place do you like best And why do you like the place
● How do you feel about the place
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例子4
作为一名学生,在生活和学习中,你一定会拥有一个相伴成长的好朋友。某英文网站正在开展以“I Have a Good Friend”为主题的征文活动,假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的好朋友。
提示词语: outgoing, be talented in
提示问题: ● Who is your good friend
● What does she/he look like
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三.观点建议
这一类话题仅2011年考查,考查角度为:针对是否要借钱这个话题,给出看法和建议。
话题1 学生生活
开头句
1. As we all know, using mobile phones too often is bad for our eyes.
2. Last week, we had a discussion about the hot topic “To change or not”. I think different people have different choices to deal with problems.
3. Our school did a survey about whether students should bring mobile phones to school or not.
4. The idea about whether to go to school by bike or not has been discussed.
中间句
1. First of all, breakfast offers us the energy we need for the whole day.
2. In my opinion, it is important for my friends to be honest.
3. I think it is necessary to do housework, because parents are also tired.
4. The journey with friends will be more interesting, because we usually have same hobbies and interests.
结尾句
1. Only in this way, can children learn to be independent.
2. From what I said, I agree to the idea that reading is a part of our life.
3. As for me, I prefer to make some good friends so that we can learn from each other.
4. In a word, children are supposed to help parents to do housework.
5.It’s important for us to learn to be thankful. If everyone can understand and love each other, the world will be much better.
话题2 学生学习
开头句
1. Chinese is very interesting and useful. I’m happy to share some ways to learn it well with you.
2. By reading books, not only can we get all kinds of knowledge, but also we can open our minds.
3. I think studying in groups has many advantages.
4. Working in groups helps me realize my weaknesses.
5. As students, we may meet all kinds of difficulties in learning.
中间句
1. We should make a right reading plan and read more classic books.
2. Meanwhile, the language in the book is very lively, which makes me feel I am just in the story as well.
3. There’s no doubt that students should finish their homework on time.
4. It is worth trying to use new technology in education.
结尾句
1. As far as I am concerned, we should try our best to solve the problems alone.
2. In order to create a fair competitive environment, we should say NO to the exam cheating.
3. In a word, practice makes perfect.
4. Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life.
例子5
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼,并解决问题。假设你叫刘明,是美国中学生艾丽斯的朋友。你收到了她的一封电子邮件,请给她回复,回答她的问题,提出你的建议,并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Hi! Liu Ming,
I’m so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her the money, I’m afraid she won’t pay me back. I don’t know what to do. Do you have the same problem I need your help.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alice
提示词语: be sorry to, on time, it's better that..., say no to...
提示问题: ●What’s your attitude to Alice’s problem
●What’s your suggestions to help her solve the problem
●How do you think about such a problem
Hi! Alice,
I’m glad to hear from you.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Liu Ming
例子6
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼,并解决问题。假设你叫李华,是美国中学生大卫的朋友。他写邮件向你咨询如何平衡学习与娱乐的时间,请写一封邮件回答他的问题,提出你的建议并谈谈你的看法。
提示词语: be good at, deal with
提示问题:● What’s your opinion to David’s problem
● How can you help him solve the problem
● How do you think about the problem
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四.经历及感受
这一类话题考查了3次。2017、2016以及2012年分别以“宽容”“友爱、互助”以及“分享”为主题,让学生描述个人经历并谈论感受。2014年是记叙自己过生日的经历。
话题1 沟通
1. Communication plays a significant role in our daily life.
2. As we all know, body language is also widely used in cross cultural communication and sometimes you can use it.
3. You’d better speak slowly and clearly. In this way, you can make yourself understood more easily.
4. Be interested in others, like their hobbies, their work, their friends and families so that you will have some topics to talk with others.
话题2 感恩
1. It’s polite to say “thanks” when others help you.
2. We should be thankful for our parents. They give us life and bring us up.
3. Be thankful for the difficult times, because during those times we grow.
4. There are always some people and things that we want to thank in our daily life.
话题3 独立
1. It’s very important for teenagers to do things independently.
2. When I work out a difficult math problem by myself, I always feel I'm great.
3. When I do things independently, I always feel very happy because I know I can learn something and get some skills.
4. I'm very happy because I finished this task without others’ help.
话题4 诚信
1. It’s one of our traditional virtues to be honest.
2. As for me, I consider honesty to be one of the most important rules that should be followed.
3. I never tell a lie to others, no matter what happens.
4. Once I make a promise, I will try my best to keep it.
例子7
宽容是一种美德。人与人之间难免会有磕磕绊绊。面对矛盾,多一份包容和谅解,生活就会多一缕阳光。某英文网站正在开展以“包容、谅解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中你原谅他人的一次经历,
主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么原谅对方,以及原谅对方之后的感受。
提示词语: hurt, realize, forgive(原谅), happy
提示问题: ● What happened between you and him/her
● Why did you decide to forgive him/her
● How did you feel after forgiving him/her
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例子8
倾听是一种尊重,尊重是一种美德。在人与人交流过程中,如果能多一份倾听,彼此就会多一份理解,社会就会多一份温暖。
某英文网站正在开展以“倾听、理解”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈生活中因为认真倾听而理解他人的一次经历。主要内容包括:你们之间发生了什么,你为什么能理解对方以及你的感受。
提示词语: argue, upset, listen, forgive, pleased
提示问题: ● What happened between you and him/her
● Why did you understand him/her
● How did you feel after that
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随堂练习
一
假如你是李华,将代表班级参加你校组织的以“垃圾分类”(litter sorting)为主题的英文演讲比赛。比赛前,你打算给你校的外教老师 Mr. Green 写一封邮件,请他帮忙指导。请告诉他你的演讲内容,以及需要他提供什么帮助。
提示词语: reason, ways, grammar, correct
提示问题: What are you going to talk about in your speech
What do you want Mr. Green to help with
Dear Mr. Green,
I’m writing to ask for your help with my English Speech Competition. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
二
探索是每个孩子的天性。探索让我们了解未知,让我们的生活丰富多彩。
某英文网站正在开展以“探索”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英文写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你曾经探索过什么,有什么收获。
提示词语:
Forbidden City, explore, books, model, creative
提示问题:
What did you do in your exploration
What have you learned from that experience
Everyone has experiences of exploring.
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三
著名哲学家弗朗西斯·培根在《论读书》一文中写到:读书足以怡情,足以博彩,足以长才。
假如你是李华,是你校读书俱乐部成员。俱乐部要举办一次“我最爱的书籍”主题演讲比赛。请你用英文介绍一下你最喜欢的一本书,你喜欢它的原因,以及读书带给你的益处。
提示词语:wonderful, inspiring, knowledge, benefit, improve
提示问题: What’s your favorite book
Why do you like it
How does reading help you
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四
“见贤思齐焉,见不贤而内自省也。”
在成长过程中,我们一定会受到身边榜样的影响。假如你是李华,你的笔友Mike想了解你的榜样的相关事情与你的想法。请你用英语给他回信。说说你的榜样是谁,简述你的榜样所做的那件/些事情影响了你,你从他/她身上学到了什么。
提示词语:hard-working, helpful, successful, admire, creative
提示问题:Who is your role model
What did he/she do makes him/her your role model
What have you learned from him/her
Dear Mike,
It’s nice to hear from you.
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Look forward to hearing from you again.
Yours,
Li Hua
五
假如你是李华,你们学校将要在下周二下午三点钟举办关于“垃圾分类, 人人有责”的宣讲活动,请给你们班的交换生 Peter 发邮件邀请他参加,告诉他活动的时间、地点以及活动内容。
提示词语: introduce, share, game, poster
提示问题:
● When and where will the activity be held
●What activities will be included
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on I’m writing to invite you to take part in our Waste Sorting Activity. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Please let me know if there is anything more that I can help with.
Yours,
Li Hua
六
国有国法,校有校规。在守护健康,校园防疫过程中,你们学校一定也启用一些新的规章制度规范同学们的行为。
某英文网站正在开展以“校园防疫新规”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍一下你们学校的新规,并谈谈你的看法。
提示词语: COVID-19, mask, temperature, duty
提示问题:
● What are the new rules in your school
● What do you think of the rules
China achieved success in controlling COVID-19 outbreak. We are so lucky to be able to return to school________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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