Unit 5 Why do you like pandas 写作课课件（共23张PPT）

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Unit 5 Why do you like pandas
写作话题：My Favorite Animal
Wonderful！
How do you know these animals？
Task1:了解度大测试！
Pre-writing
It likes to eat ________.
leaves
Pre-writing
It can _____ all day.
sleep
Do you know
It likes to ____ ________.
bananas
Pre-writing
eat
Do you know
It can climb(爬) _____ .
trees
It likes to ____ ________.
bamboo
Pre-writing
eat
Do you know
_____ _____climb(爬) _____ .
It
can
trees
It _____ to ____ ________.
meat
Pre-writing
. (run)
It can run quickly
eat
Do you know
likes
They ____ ____ ____ _______.
grass
Pre-writing
Do you know
eat
like
to
They can walk for a long time
. (walk)
记忆大比拼（说一说）
I have a friend, he is Jill. Becky is Jill’s favorite animal. Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.
like beautiful Africa years lives because
3a
This is Becky. Isn’t she _________ She is from _______. She is twelve _____ old. I ____ Becky _______ she is smart and friendly. She _____ in Blackwood Zoo.
years
Africa
beautiful
like
because
lives
Check the answers.
like beautiful Africa years lives because
Isn’t she beautiful 她难道不漂亮
本句为否定句的一般疑问句,含有反问语气, 常意为“难道……不…… ”
Write a description of a panda using the words in the box, or write about your favorite animal using your own ideas.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Beibei five years old China cute shy Beijing Zoo
3b
12
1. 这是一篇介绍动物的短文，用一般现在时态。
2. 先介绍Beibei的名字及年龄。然后介绍它来自哪里。
3. 再描写Beibei的特征。同时写明喜欢它的原因。可以用句子结构：I like … because she’s …
最后，写明它现在居住在哪里，并通读一遍短文，看有没有写错的句子。
【写作任务】
请根据提示词语写一篇英语短文，介绍你最喜欢的动物大熊猫。
Beibei , five years old, China, cute, shy, Beijing Zoo
【思路点拨】 定调---列纲---衔接---成文（四步法）
1. 定基调
体裁：说明文
时态：一般现在时
人称：第三人称
Discussing and Expressing
Try to complete the mind map.
A description of an animal
name
nationality
（国籍）
hobby
age
what to eat
where to live
appearance
（外貌）
others
personality
（个性）
2. 列提纲、写句子
列提纲 写句子
介绍大熊猫 产地 及居 住地 (1) 贝贝是一只大熊猫，它来自中国四川。
Beibei is a panda. It ______ ______ Sichuan, China.
(2) 它目前在北京动物园生活。
Now it ______ ______ Beijing Zoo.
is / comes
from
lives in
列提纲 写句子
年龄、外貌、性情 (3) 贝贝五岁了。
Beibei is ______ ______ ______.
(4) 它黑白相间，并且有一双大眼睛。
It’s ______ ______ ______ with two big eyes.
(5) 它看起来很漂亮也很可爱，但有时它有点害羞。
It ______ ________ and cute. But sometimes it’s kind of shy.
five years old
black and white
looks beautiful
列提纲 写句子
习性 (6) 它喜欢吃竹子。
It ______ ______ bamboo.
(7) 它喜欢在白天睡觉。
It ______ _______ in the day.
总结 (8) 大熊猫是我们的朋友，所以我们应该保护它们。
______ ______ ______ _______, so we should protect them.
likes eating
likes sleeping
Pandas are our friends
3. 巧衔接
在介绍某种动物时，应重点写它的产地、外貌、性情、习性等方面。这是通过语义相关联的方式使全文语义具有明显的统一性和连贯性。
4. 成篇章
Beibei is a panda. It comes from Sichuan,
China. Now it lives in Beijing Zoo. It is five years old. It’s black and white with two big eyes, and it looks beautiful and cute. But sometimes it’s kind of shy. It likes eating bamboo, and it likes sleeping in the day. Pandas are our friends, so we should protect them.
随着动物越来越少，人们对动物的关注越来越多。请你以“My Favorite Animal”为题写一篇英语短文来描述你最喜欢的动物。
写作内容：
1.最喜欢的动物的基本情况（至少3点）
2.最喜欢的原因（至少2点）
3.呼吁保护动物
写作要求：
1.内容完整，条理清晰
2.60词左右
以“My Favorite Animal”为题
1.最喜欢的动物的基本情况
2.最喜欢的原因
3.呼吁保护动物
Beginning
Ending
Step1 Structure
Body
1）表达喜好的句型：
My favorite animal is...
I like ...very much.
2) 介绍动物产地的句型:
It/ He/ She is/ comes from...
3) 关于年龄、外貌、个性、才能等的句型：
It/ He/ She is ...years old.
It/ He/ She is beautiful/ big/ small.
It/ He/ She is (kind of/ very/ really) shy/ smart/ cute...
It/ He/ She can run fast/ draw well...
表达储备
4) 表达情感态度的句型：
I like ...because it/he/ she...
5) 文章结尾：
呼吁式：We should save them.
期待式：I hope he lives happily...
感叹式: Isn’t she beautiful
Don’t you like her
Writing Time