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外研版 选择性必修第二册
Unit 4 Breaking boundaries
Period 4 Writing
金句背诵
1.The one who pities you is not your friend, but the one who helps you is your friend.
怜悯你的人不是朋友,帮助你的人才是朋友。
2.No road is long with good company. 与良友为伴,路遥不觉远。
文体感知
演讲稿属于应用文的一种。 写作时要首先点明演讲的主题和目的,以便抓住听众的注意力;主体部分可以通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍;结尾总结时,要对主题进行概括、强调。
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇人物介绍类的演讲稿,所以,文章除了要符合一般演讲稿的特点和要求外,还要指明人物、时间、地点、事件及结果等要素。写作时可以主要从以下三个方面入手:
1.介绍人物的身份、职业、成就及其产生的影响;
2.描述人物如何打破界限,尤其是该人物与众不同的方面;
3.阐述自己的感受: 从人物事迹中学到的品质以及对人物的评价。
基本框架
第一段:对人物进行简单介绍,点出演讲主题;
第二段:根据写作具体要求详细介绍此人物;
第三段:概括自己或人们对此人物的评价。
增分佳句
1.Today, I'm going to introduce..., who is...
2.He/She made a contribution to...by doing...
3.Although he/she was...what set him/her apart from the others was that...
4.His efforts made other countries have a better understanding of...
5.I admire him/her for...and I'm determined to learn from him/her.
6.She was a lively young woman with patience and imagination.
7.Everyone who knows him likes to make friends with him.
8.He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.
9.She took an active part in social activities.
10.Showing great interest in drawing, she made up her mind to be a painter.
11.He fell in love with science and devoted himself to it.
12.She finished middle school in 1980, after which she went to university.
写作要求
感恩,是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩,学会热爱生活,我们将会感受到更多快乐。你校学生会和校团委准备举行一次以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。
要点:1.感恩对象(父母、老师、朋友……);
2.为何感恩(至少提出两点原因);
3.如何感恩(至少给出一种途径或建议)。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.只能选择一个感恩对象;
3.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good afternoon, everyone,
It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The title of my speech is “Thank you, ______________________.”
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Thank you!
审题谋篇
第一步:审题构思很关键
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.________________ 有幸得到
2.__________ 心烦意乱
3._________ 振作起来
4.__________ 回报
5.__________ 呼吁
6._____________ 闲谈
be blessed with
get upset
cheer up
in return
appeal to
a small talk
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.像你们中的许多人一样, 我很幸运有一位母亲,她是爱的源
泉。(定语从句)
Like many of you, I _________________________________________
_____________________.
2.我的母亲是位普通的家庭主妇。
My mother is ______________________.
have been blessed with a mother who is a source
of love
an ordinary housewife
3.我非常感谢她的体贴,尤其是在那些压力很大的日子里。
I _____________________________________,especially ____________________________.
4.当我难过的时候,她会倾听我,安慰我,直到我振作起来。
__________________,she listens to me and comforts me ________________________.
highly appreciate her kind consideration
during those stressful days
When I get upset
until I have cheered up
5.我很幸运有这样一位关心我的母亲。
I'm __________________________________________.
6.大考的时间快到了。
The time for the big exam _______________.
7.这是作为回报表达我们的爱的一个机会。(it作形式主语)
____________________________________________________
8.我呼吁在座的各位为我们亲爱的母亲们努力学习。
I ______________________________________ for our dear mothers.
so fortunate to have such a caring mother
is approaching
It's a chance for us to express our love in return.
appeal to all of us here to work hard
9.我有另一个消息要告诉在座的各位。
I __________________________________ here.
10.与母亲简短的谈话或者给母亲一杯茶都会让她开心。
____________________________________________________will make her happy.
have another message for everyone
Either a small talk with our mother or a cup of tea for her
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.把第三步中的句4改为让步状语从句
_________________________________________________________________________________
2.把第三步中的句6和句7合并为定语从句
__________________________________________________________________________________________________
Whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up.
The time for the big exam is approaching, which is a chance for us to express our love in return.
第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
Good afternoon, everyone,
It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The title of my speech is “Thank you, ________________________.”
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
Thank you!
One possible version:
Good afternoon, everyone,
It's a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The title of my speech is “Thank you, mum.”
Like many of you, I have been blessed with a mother who is a source of love. My mother is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during those stressful days. Besides, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. I'm so fortunate to have such a caring mother.
The time for the big exam is approaching, which is a chance for us to express our love in return. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mothers. I have another message for everyone here. Either a small talk with our mother or a cup of tea for her will make her happy.
Thank you!
假定你是李华,将参加主题为“My Favourite Hero”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下表格提示写一篇演讲稿。
人物 郑和
朝代 明朝
事迹 1.1371年出生,著名的航海家;
2.1405—1433年先后七次下西洋,进行贵重物品的贸易,如金、银、丝绸等;
3.发展了中国与其他国家和地区间的贸易,促进了文化和技术的交流,促进了那些国家和地区的发展。
评价 ……
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
One possible version:
Hello, everyone. I would like to say Zheng He is my favourite hero in history. He was born in 1371, and became a famous voyager later. He built a great fleet of ships, which was the biggest in the world at that time. From 1405 to 1433,Zheng He went on seven trips to the Western Ocean, trading valuable goods, such as gold, silver and silk.
What's more, the voyages have developed the trade between China and other countries and regions and encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies, which contributed to the development of those countries and regions.
Zheng He is really an international hero and his vayages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in opening up cultural contacts between different peoples around the world.
Thank you!
生如蝼蚁当立鸿鹄之志
命如纸薄应有不屈之心
谢谢
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