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Unit 4　Breaking boundaries
读后续写 自然场景描写
续写练习重点——自然场景描写
Ⅰ 外刊输入——悟语言之道
Canada, the Great White North
　　Wherever you go in Canada, particularly in the large cities, you will be astonished by the fact that you encounter people from every part of the globe. You can find an authentic Italian pizzeria sitting
alongside a Vietnamese restaurant. The taxi driver was born in Jamaica and the grocer is with French accent. With so many cultures co existing in Canada, Multiculturalism has been a fundamental characteristic.
　　For example, Ottawa, the capital of Canada, is not a prosperous, industrial place. Contrary to that, it's small, beautiful, pleasant and quiet. It's more like a town hiding in the wonderful scenery of Lake Ontario. Out of everything you would experience, the unique local red bus is the highlight. To keep Ottawa's original style, the city planners gave up a complex transportation system for narrow but well stretched (四通八达的) roads. The traditional red buses literally shoulder the duty of taking people in and out. Many, from children to old people, from white collar workers to housewives, take buses.
　　Vancouver is a natural masterpiece, peaceful and pure. It is filled with awesome landscapes, brilliant sunsets, and clean air to breathe. For tourists, the upshot of all this diversity is that Vancouver has some of the best international food—unique, international delights. Another thing that attracts people is the weather. Much of Canada is freezing cold, but Vancouver's temperature averages between 10 and 20 degrees for most of the year. The comfortable weather allows visitors to walk on the shore, surfing in the bay and boating in the harbour.
　　Now, Canada is the second best country on Earth, second only to Switzerland. For beauty and freshness, the great outdoors of Canada can't be beaten. Canada's vast and cold wilderness also makes it the most anticipated destination for winter sports. Canada is also famous for its culture of good manners and politeness. Canadians are funny, too. With this, Canada reaches such a high position among the world's best countries and is called the Great White North.
1.重点词汇再现
(1)astonish vt. 使吃惊
(2)alongside prep. 在……旁边
(3)accent n. 口音
(4)Ottawa 渥太华
(5)contrary to 相反的
(6)pleasant adj. 令人愉快的
(7)scenery n. 风景
(8)highlight n. 最精彩的部分
(9)literally adv. 真正地
(10)Vancouver 温哥华
(11)awesome adj. 令人惊叹的
(12)breathe v. 呼吸
(13)freezing cold 极冷的
(14)shore n. 岸
(15)bay n. 海湾
(16)harbour n. 港口
(17)anticipate vt. 期望
2．重点句型再现：with复合结构
With so many cultures co existing in Canada, Multiculturalism has been a fundamental characteristic.
在加拿大，多种文化并存，多元文化主义已经成为其一个基本特
征。
Ⅱ 迷你语料库(Mini Corpus)
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
1 Rather than travel by commercial airline all the way, they decided to fly to Vancouver and then take the train. 描写对交通方式的选择。rather than意为“_______”。
而不是
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
2 For both of them, the thought of crossing the whole country by rail was exciting. 描写激动的心情。
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
3 During their first day, as is typical of Vancouver, it rained. 描写自然场景：下雨。此处as引导_______从句，意为“______”； be typical of意为“___________
______________________”。
定语
正如
是……的特点，典型的
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
4 Despite the weather, they were able to take a boat ride out into the bay, and later visit an island that had wonderful shops selling crafts and antiques. 描写外出游玩活动。despite 意为“尽管”。“selling crafts and antiques”为v. ing形式作_____，修饰wonderful shops。
定语
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
5 The next day was clear and mild, and they were pleased to see the beautiful mountains looking out over the city. 描写自然场景：天气和群山。looking out为v. ing形式作______，修饰beautiful mountains，“the beautiful mountains looking out over the city”意为“_____________________”。
定语
俯瞰城市的壮美群山
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
6 Later, they took a pleasant hike in a forest just a short distance away. 描写户外活动。
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
7 Seen from the train window, the mountains and forests of Canada looked massive. 描写自然场景：群山和森林。“Seen from the train window”为v. ed形式作_________，和句子的主语构成被动的关系。
状语
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
8 When the train arrived at the station, they took a taxi to Lake Louise, where the blue water literally took their breath away with its exceptional beauty. 描写自然环境：美丽的湖。where引导_______从句，修饰先行词 Lake Louise。literally意为“确实地”，take one's breath away意为“________________
____________”，exceptional意为“_______________”。
定语
令人屏住呼吸、
特别的、罕见的
令人神往
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
9 Looking at the beautiful scenery, they both agreed that it was the most awesome journey they had ever taken. 描写看到美景之后的心理感受。“Looking at the beautiful scenery”为v. ing形式作__________，和句子的主语构成主动的关系。awesome意为“令人惊叹的”。
状语
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
10 In addition to seeing spectacular mountain peaks and forests, one highlight of their trip was being able to see many different creatures, including deer, mountain goats, and even a grizzly bear and an eagle. 描写自然场景：包括群山、森林及野生动物。in addition to意为“___________”， spectacular意为“_______”，highlight意为“_____________”。
除……之外
壮观的
最精彩的部分
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
11 Edmonton is freezing cold in winter, with daily temperatures averaging －10 ℃. 描写寒冷的天气。freezing cold意为“_________”。“with daily temperatures averaging －10℃”为“___________________”的复合结构；average 为动词，意为“___________”，没有被动形式。
极冷的
with＋宾语＋宾补
平均为
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
12 They went through two wheat growing provinces, where they saw a bunch of farms that covered a very large area. 描写自然场景：农场。where引导_____从句，修饰先行词two wheat growing provinces; a bunch of意为“_______”； that 引导______从句，其中cover 为熟词生义，意为“___________”。
定语
大量的
定语
占……面积
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
13 The train thundered on, through the rolling hills. 描写火车行进的场景。thunder在此处为名词动用，意为“轰隆隆地快速移动”；rolling hills意为“起伏的群山”。
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
14 The bushes and maple trees outside their windows were red, gold, and orange, and there was frost on the ground, confirming that autumn had arrived in Canada. 描写自然场景：枫树及秋霜。
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
15 When they woke up the next morning and pulled back the curtain，they could see the wide stretch of Lake Huron—one of the four Great Lakes on Ontario's southern border. 描写自然场景：广袤的湖面。pull back the curtain 意为“________”；the wide stretch of Lake Huron 意为“________休伦湖”。
拉开窗帘
广袤的
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
16 It was not until 9：30 a．m. that they finally reached the capital of Ontario, Toronto. 描写抵达的时间。本句中“It was not until 9：30 a．m. that”是________句型。
强调
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
17 After Li Daiyu and her cousin arrived in Toronto, the largest and wealthiest city in Canada, they only had a few hours to kill before they had to proceed to the next leg of their trip to Montreal, so they went on a tour of the city. 描写旅行的进程。proceed to意为“___________”，the next leg 意为“_______”。
继续下去
下一站
序号 佳句呈现 赏析
18 Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake. 描写自然场景：瀑布及其上的水雾及看到之后的心情。“Standing in the distance”为v. ing形式作______，和句子的主语构成主动的关系；“see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls”为“see ＋宾语＋宾补”结构，其中_______为misty clouds，______为rising from the great Niagara Falls。
状语
宾语
宾补
Ⅲ 读后续写精炼篇：自然场景描写
一、写作微技能：自然场景描写
　　(1)自然场景往往指的是故事发生的时间、地点、环境及气候景物，其最主要的功能是描绘出故事发生或人物活动的背景和反映心情、烘托气氛。
　　(2)根据读后续写这个题型的实际要求，需要着重把握两个方面的自然场景描写：美好的自然场景及恶劣的自然场景。
　　(3)积累“美好的自然场景”描写
①阳光
When I was bathed in the sunlight, it felt like the amber like sunshine was kissing every inch of my skin.
沐浴在阳光下，我感觉琥珀般的阳光亲吻着我的每一寸肌肤。
When I drew the curtains back, the warm sunlight flooded in.
当我拉开窗帘时，温暖的阳光照了进来。
②蓝天白云
I was immediately impressed by the blue sky with thick silver lining clouds drifting around.
镶着银边的云朵漂浮在碧空中，我立即被此景深深地打动了。
White clouds flow in the blue sky like quiet fish swimming in the broad ocean.
白云在蓝天上流淌，像安静的小鱼在广阔的海洋中遨游。
③风与花
The wind, soft and cold, danced through tree branches and stirred the bushes that sprinkled the slope.
柔和而凉爽的风在树枝间翩翩起舞，吹动了山坡上的灌木丛。
There are many kinds of flowers blooming in the corner of the park, even in autumn. I smell the fresh scent with cool breeze. How sweet!
即使是在秋天，公园的角落里也开着各种各样的花。我闻到随凉风而来的清香味。多么美好！
④山水风景
(2020·全国卷Ⅲ)As the small boat moved gently along the river he was left speechless by the mountains being silently reflected in the water.
小船轻轻地沿着河边移动，群山静静地倒映在水中，他激动得说不出话来。
(2020·全国卷Ⅲ)He passed milky white waterfalls and mountains in many shades of blue.
他依次经过白色的瀑布和深浅不一的蓝色山脉。
(2020·全国卷Ⅲ)And when he saw the mists rising from the river and the soft clouds surrounding the mountain tops, he was reduced to tears.
当看到河里升起的薄雾和山顶周围的柔软的白云，他不禁感动得泪流满面。
(4)积累“恶劣的自然场景”描写
①风
It was actually very calm, but she could see that the wind was picking up. The branches of the trees were swinging and the garbage bin had tipped over.
看似很平静，但她看得出来风越来越大。树枝在摇摆，垃圾桶也被吹翻了。
Something dreadful had happened. The wind was shaking the house, rattling the windows, banging a piece of iron on the roof and making her bed tremble.
可怕的一幕发生了。风把房子吹得摇摇晃晃，窗户吱吱嘎嘎，一块铁在屋顶上砰砰作响，她的床也在颤抖。
The frosty air blew in, cutting like knife.
冷风吹来，像刀割一样。
The frigid gusts of wind stung their faces.
一阵阵寒风刺痛着他们的脸颊。
On that dark and stormy night, the waves were crashing and the winds were howling.
在那个漆黑的暴风雨之夜，海浪狂卷，大风呼啸。
The boys were frightened as the wind blew several trees on their side and the lightning continued to come and go in the sky.
风把他们身边的几棵树吹得左摇右摆，闪电在天空中穿梭，孩子们都吓坏了。
②云
Over the valley, the grey clouds marched in from the ocean. They piled in together and settled low over the west.
在山谷上空，从海洋方向飘来灰色的云。它们慢慢累积，低低地挂在西边的天空。
The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds.
乌云密布，黑云压顶。
The sky was overcast, and the whole world seemed to be enveloped in a huge gray quilt.　天空乌云密布，整个世界仿佛被一条巨大的灰色被子包裹着。
Clouds gather, driven by the rising wind.
风越来越大，云聚集在一起。
Dark clouds were indeed forming.And they seemed to be moving quickly across the sky.
乌云实际上正在积聚。它们像是匆匆穿过天空。
③雨
Rain started to come down hard，making it almost impossible to see the trees in her front yard through the window.　雨下得很大，透过窗户，几乎看不到前院的树。
It seemed that it would rain forever. The water would rise inch by inch, covering the grass, trees and even houses.
雨好像不会停了。河水会一寸一寸地上涨，淹没草地、树木甚至房屋。
The most violent storm appeared to approach rapidly.
最猛烈的暴风雨似乎很快就要来了。
The rain came pouring down, the streams rose, and the winds blew and beat against the house.
大雨倾盆而下，溪流涌起，狂风吹袭着房子。
④雪
The dry, fresh snow had been falling.
雪开始下了，干燥而新鲜。
It was snowing and cold. Nobody would be coming past. There was no phone signal.
雪一直下，天气非常冷。没有人经过。也没有电话信号。
Towards noon, there had come the snow, driven along the street by the northwest wind, and whitening the roofs and sidewalks.　快到中午的时候，开始下雪了，沿街被西北风不停地吹。屋顶和人行道都白
了。
It was a heavy snowfall, in great flakes and it lay, thick.
大雪纷飞，堆积在地上，厚厚的一层。
⑤洪水
A swollen river had flooded the road.
河水涨起来了，淹没了道路。
Half way across the road, the rushing water grabbed hold of his vehicle, sweeping it off the road.
刚过一半，湍急的水流把他的车冲出了路面。
With the water rising quickly, he was shaken with fear.
水涨得很快，他吓得浑身发抖。
⑥冷
I couldn't feel my hands or my toes from the cold.
我的手和脚趾都冻得失去了知觉。
It had been a bitterly cold day, and a cutting wind had blown for some time.
那是一个非常冷的日子，刺骨的寒风不停地吹。
⑦热
The air that has been hot all day becomes heavy. It hangs over the trees, presses the heads of the flowers to the ground, and sits on my shoulders.
天气闷热，感觉沉甸甸地挂在树上，花也抬不起来头，压我的肩膀上。
The sky was cloudless.The sunshine was too bright.
天空万里无云，阳光刺眼。
二、牛刀小试：策略引领，演练读后续写“6＋3”模式
【典题精析】
　　阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
　　Several years ago, as I was on a business trip from San Francisco to New Orleans, I noticed I would have some time at the airport in Dallas before catching my connecting flight. So I called my friend Luke who lived in Dallas. “Luke, I've got an hour and a half stop at the airport. If you'll come out and meet my plane, I'll treat you to dinner.” Luke enthusiastically agreed.
　　When the pilot announced that our flight would be delayed an extra few minutes in San Francisco, I became upset. Every minute that passed was one minute less that I would be able to spend with my friend. The plane arrived in Dallas an hour late. That left me only half an hour to stay with Luke and I still needed time to catch my connecting flight. At this point, I knew our having dinner together was totally out of the question.
　　When I stepped off the plane, Luke was there, waiting for me. “Hey, Luke，” I said apologetically, “Thanks for coming out to meet me. I hope you didn't have to wait here too long.”
　　“Oh, no problem，” he replied easily. “I called ahead and found out your plane was going to be late.”
　　“Oh, good，” I replied.“Look, I'm really sorry about dinner, but I'll owe you one next e on, we'll find out what gate my next plane is leaving from. We can head over there together and talk a bit.”
　　“I am very interested in having dinner with you，” he said to me.
　　“The only way you're going to have dinner with me tonight is if you buy a plane ticket to New Orleans！”
　　“We're having dinner，” replied Luke with determination. “Believe me, I have this whole thing arranged. Just follow me.”
He picked up one of my bags and carried it out through the security check. The two of us hurried down a short flight of stairs in the parking garage and walked rapidly along several rows of cars until we came to the place where Luke's car was parked.
　　注意：续写词数应为150左右。
　　I immediately noticed, in the parking space next to his car, a folding table.________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
　　With seven and one half minutes to go, we put everything back in the car and ran for my plane.__________________________________
__________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________
1．一审——审要素
时态 一般过去时 六要素 When ___________________，as I was ___________________ from San Francisco to New Orleans.
Where I would have some time _________________________ before catching my connecting flight.
Several years ago
on a business trip
at the airport in Dallas
时态 一般过去时 六要素 Who I, my friend Luke ____________________
What I got ________________________ at the airport. If Luke could come out and meet my plane, I planned to ____________________. Luke enthusiastically _______．
who lived in Dallas
an hour and a half stop
treat him to dinner
agreed
时态 一般过去时 六要素 What But the flight would be ________ in San Francisco and the plane arrived in Dallas _____________．
I thought we couldn't have dinner together, but Luke was still _________________________________ and he said he had this whole thing _________.
So we came to the place ____________________________.
delayed
an hour late
very interested in having dinner
arranged
where Luke's car was parked
时态 一般过去时 六要素 Why Both of us valued our friendship.
How How would we have dinner in such a short time？
2.二定——定主题
主题：We both valued our friendship and we really enjoyed a great dinner in such a short time.
3．三推测——推测段首句定基调
　　(1)标出段首句的关键词
　　第一段： I immediately noticed, in the parking space _________________________________.
　　第二段：_______________________________________，we ____________________ in the car and _________________.
next to his car, a folding table
With seven and one half minutes to go
put everything back
ran for my plane
　　(2)推测第一段和第二段的结局。尤其关注第二段的段首句，做到第一段和第二段的逻辑性衔接。
　　根据第一段的段首句可知，“我”和卢克(Luke)将在这个折叠桌上共进晚餐。
　　根据第二段的段首句可知，我们不仅一起享用了美食，还幸运地赶上了飞机。
　　通过以上可推测：
　　第一段的结局：在________的时间内，我们一起享用了特殊的_______。
　　第二段的结局：完成晚餐后，“我”还及时_____________。
　　续写线索：看到折叠桌——坐在桌子旁——一起喝香槟——周围的司机表示惊讶——7分钟后飞机起飞——赶上飞机——回忆朋友的款待——打电话感谢朋友
有限
晚餐
赶上了飞机
4．四构思——每段3分天下
按照每段三个层次，构思每一段的情节。
第一段 卢克的晚餐安排
我们享用晚餐：可以喝香槟，卢克_________________
我在有限的时间内，不仅吃了_____，还和朋友______________________
第二段 我及时_______________
回忆_________的晚餐时光
升华：____我的朋友，____友谊
提前准备的晚餐
晚餐
重新联络了感情
赶上了飞机
美好
感谢
珍惜
5.五遣词造句——连词成句，连句成文
(1)高级词汇及语块
①______ n. (汽车)后备厢
②__________ n. 香槟
③________ v. 安排
④________ adj. 恼怒的
⑤_____________________ adj. 吃惊的
trunk
champagne
arrange
annoyed
surprised/astonished
⑥___________________ adj. 令人激动的
⑦_________ v. (使)提供能量、活力
⑧______ n. (心中的)形象；图像
⑨_________ adv. 恰当地
⑩_________ n. 祝福
_____________________ 咧嘴笑
_____________ 寻找
__________________ 仔细看
exciting/thrilling
energize
image
properly
blessing
grin from ear to ear
in search of
take a close look
__________________ 占据空间
_________ 在车(船/飞机)上
____________ 安顿
_____________________________ 在整个飞行过程中
_________________________ 情不自禁地做某事
take up the space
on board
settle into
throughout the entire flight
couldn't help doing sth.
(2)亮点句型及高级结构
①v. ing形式作状语描写吃饭的场景
我们在一个停车场中间隔着桌子坐着，用香槟相互敬酒，笑得合不拢嘴。
There we were, _________________________ from each other in the middle of a parking lot, toasting each other _______________ and __________________________brightly.
sitting across the table
with champagne
grinning from ear to ear
②once引导的时间状语从句
他们仔细一看，许多人都露出惊讶的笑容。
__________________________，many of them broke into astonished smiles.
③whoever引导的主语从句
愿意为另一个人做这样事的人肯定非常珍惜他们的友谊。
_____________________________________ for another person must ______ their friendship very much.
Once they took a closer look
Whoever would do something like that
value
④动词的联动
空乘人员抓起我的机票，匆忙带我上了飞机，把我引到座位上。
The flight attendant _________my ticket, _______ me on board and _______ me to my seat.
⑤so...that 句型意为“如此……以至于”
整件事发生得太快了，我真的没有机会好好感谢他。
_____________________________________________ I hadn't really had a chance to thank him properly.
grabbed
rushed
guided
The whole thing had happened so quickly that
⑥as soon as引导时间状语从句，意为“一……就”
所以飞机一着陆我就打电话给他说：“Luke，谢谢你。”
So ____________________________ I called him and said, “Luke, thank you.”
⑦隽永的升华
卢克真是我的福星，有这么一个好朋友是如此的荣幸。
Luke was ________________ and ________________________ to have so sweet a friend.
as soon as the plane landed
such a blessing
it was such a privilege
6．六成文——誊写清晰，字迹工整
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　　I immediately noticed, in the parking space next to his car, a folding table. Luke opened the trunk of his car and pulled out a tablecloth, two folding chairs, a bottle of champagne and a few dishes he had arranged. There we were, sitting across the table from each other in the middle of a parking lot, toasting each other with champagne and grinning from ear to ear brightly. Drivers in search of a parking place were annoyed at us for taking up the space,
but once they took a closer look, many of them broke into astonished smiles. Whoever would do something like that for another person must value their friendship very much.
　　With seven and one half minutes to go, we put everything back in the car and ran for my plane. Fortunately, we arrived at the gate with only seconds to spare. The flight attendant grabbed my ticket, rushed me on board and guided me to my seat. I settled into my seat, relieved and energized by the whole thrilling experience. Throughout the entire flight, I couldn't help thinking of the images of the dinner with Luke.
The whole thing had happened so quickly that I hadn't really had a chance to thank him properly. So as soon as the plane landed I called him and said, “Luke, thank you！”Luke was such a blessing and it was such a privilege to have so sweet a friend.
再次回读原文，并积累以下高级词汇、语块、亮点句型及高级结构
1．_________________ adv. 热情地
2．______ n. 飞行员
3．_________ v. 宣布
4．______ v. 耽误
5．______ adj. 心烦意乱的；沮丧的
6．________ adv. 完全地
enthusiastically
pilot
announce
delay
upset
totally
7．_______→_____→______ adj. 很少的(原级→比较级→最高级)
8．_______________ adv. 抱歉地
9．____ v. 欠
10．_______ v. 跟随
11．________ adv. 快速地
12．___________________ 出差
13．___________________________ 赶上我转乘的飞机
little
less
least
apologetically
owe
follow
rapidly
on a business trip
catch my connecting flight
14．____________________ 请某人吃饭
15．____________________ 与某人共度时光
16．__________ 到达
17．____________________ 根本不可能
18．___________________ 下飞机
19．_____________ 我提前打电话
20．________________ 到那边去
treat sb. to dinner
spend time with sb.
arrive in
out of the question
step off the plane
I call ahead
head over there
21．_________________________ 下定决心地说
22．_______________________ 拿起我的一个包
23．___________________ 安检
24．___________ 匆忙下来
25．_________________________ 一小段楼梯
reply with determination
pick up one of my bags
the security check
hurry down
a short flight of stairs
26．“before＋ v． ing形式”作状语
我注意到在赶上转机之前，我会在达拉斯机场待上一段时间。
I noticed I would have some time at the airport in Dallas _____________________________________.
27．v. ing作主语
我们一起吃饭是完全不可能的。
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before catching my connecting flight
Our having dinner together was totally out of the question.
28．v. ing 作状语
当我下飞机时，卢克已经在那儿等我了。
_____________________________，Luke was there, _______________.
29．have sth. done结构
相信我，一切我都安排好了。
Believe me, I _______________________________．
When I stepped off the plane
waiting for me
have this whole thing arranged
30．where引导定语从句
我们来到卢克停车的地方。
We came to the place where ______________________．
Luke's car was parked
生如蝼蚁当立鸿鹄之志
命如纸薄应有不屈之心
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