海南省2021-2022学年高一上学期期末学业水平诊断英语试题（Word版含答案，无听力音频含文字材料）

海南省2021-2022学年第一学期高一学业水平诊断
英语
第一部分 听力（共两节，满分30分）
做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。录音内容结束后，你将有2分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。
第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A，B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
例：How much is the shirt？
A. 19.15. B. 9.18. C. 9.15.
答案是C。
1. What’s the probable relationship between the speakers
A. Mother and son. B. Teacher and student. C. Customer and waiter.
2. What will the woman do nest
A. Take a plane. B. Visit her uncle. D. Travel with her uncle.
3. What kind of TV program does the man like
A. News B. Sports. D. History.
4. Why does the man want to find another job
A. Because he has to work at weekends.
B. Because he wants to find more time to study.
C. Because his present job is boring.
5. What does the man have to do today
A. Ask for leave. B. Take a holiday. B. Go to work
第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）
听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A，B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。听第6段材料，回答第6，7题。
6. Why does the woman go to school by bus today
A. It is faster than taking a bike.
B. Her bike is broken.
C. She was late in the morning.
7. What does the woman ask the man to do
A. Help her fix the bike. B. Take a bus with her. C. Buy her a birthday gift.
听第7段材料，回答第8至第10题。
8. What did the woman do last night
A. She went to the cinema. B. She taught English at school. C. She visited a learning group.
9. Who is learning Chinese now
A. Lily B. Sam C. Jack
10. What does Sam do probably
A. He is a student. B. He is a teacher. C. He is a movie director.
听第8段材料，回答第11至13题。
11. Why does the woman stop the man going out
A. It is going to rain. B. His dad will come. C. He has lost of homework to do.
12. What does the woman ask the man to do at last
A. Open the door. B. Do housework. C. Watch the rain outside.
13. Where does the conversation most probably take place
A. At home. B. In a shop. C. At an office.
听第9段材料，回答第14至17题。
14. What will the man do this summer
A. Take a holiday. B. Visit a dressmaker. C. Attend a birthday party.
15. How much will the man save on his clothes
A. About 600 yuan. B. About 100 yuan. C. About 500 yuan.
16. What does the woman want to buy
A. A skirt. B. A pair of jeans. C. A pair of shoes.
17.What are the speakers mainly talking about？
A. Making clothes. B. Going on a trip. C. Their summer plans.
听第10段材料，回答第18至20题。
18. How many departments are there in the college now
A. Six. B. Five. C. Four.
19. Where do the teachers in English department mainly come from
A. England and America. B. America and Australia. C. America and Canada.
20. Where are they going nest
A. Old Main. B. The English department. C. The Student’ Activity Center Building.
第二部分 阅读（共两节，满分50分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）
阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B.C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。
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Introduction to LNER
London North Eastern Railway (LNER) is new to the train operating company in the UK, and here’s all you need to know.
LNER has taken over all existing Virgin Trains East Coast routes (路线) since June 24th ,2021. That covers journeys from London King’s Cross to Hull, Leeds, Harrogate, York, Newcastle, Edinburgh, Glasgow, Inverness and Aberdeen. A new fleet (车队) of state-of-the-art Azuma trains will be servicing these routes in the near future—check out our information page for LNER’s Azuma fleet.
While this is a change in train operators, customers who use the network at present will not be affected by the change. All Advance & Season tickets and ravel vouchers (优惠券) bought with Virgin Trains East Coast still remain in force and train times will run as normal.
LNER map
Unsure about where to start your adventure Use or LNER route map to plan out where you want to go.
LNER takes you further. From the North East, Yorkshire, to the East Coast and to the far reaches of Scotland, LNER makes connecting to various parts of UK smooth and comfortable.
Book in advance
Train tickets in the UK usually go on sale 3 months before the date of travel. Look out for Advance tickets, as there tend to be cheaper when they’re first sold. Be quick though, as they sell easily on busier routes.
Find out more about our Advance ticket alert (提醒) tool.
21. What should you do with your planned trip when seeing the change in train operators
A. Change your ticket. B. Go as you planned.
C. Map out a new route. D. Consider your destination again.
22. Which station must you go through if you travel from London to Inverness
A. York. B. Leeds. C. Aberdeen. D. Edinburgh.
23. What is the advantage of buying Advance tickets mentioned in the text
A. You can save money. B. You can get better service.
C. You can choose a comfortable seat. D. You can travel quicker.
B
When I think of the word “perfect”, I think of something only a few can achieve, like high beauty standards (标准), the super smart girl in my class, or anything that I can compare myself to.
For a few weeks now, I have been noticing this one girl. She has wonderful long dark brown hair, big blue eyes, and the most beautiful face. She always wears the prettiest clothes and seems to be the most popular girl in school, at least from my point of view. It seems like she has a perfect life, lost of friends, all A’s, and everything anyone could ever want.
One day, I was in language arts talking to my teacher about one of the upcoming tests, when I saw the girl staring at me in a strange way. I immediately started to be anxious and think, “Why is she looking at me Did I do something wrong Is my hair messed up ”
When the class was over and everyone was rushing to their next class, she caught up with and said, “I think you are really pretty.” I replied, “Oh my god, thank you!” I then watched her as she walked away and thought, “She thinks I am pretty ”
The whole day, I ended up thinking about one thing. That was, “Why does she think that ” After thinking about that topic in my head through each second of the day, I came to learn one big lesson: Everyone has their own insecurities (不安全感) even though it may not seem like in on the outside. In this case, I was thinking that she was everything I wanted to be and she thought the same of me.
We are just us and that’s OK. When I really look at myself, not from my point of view but a fresh one’s, I do see everything I want to be. I see a beautiful, smart, kin girl who is unique.
24. How did the author feel when the other girl fixed her eyes on her
A. Calm. B. Proud. C. Nervous. D. Comfortable.
25. What do we know about the author and the other girl
A. They were perfect girls. B. They admired each other.
C. They were concerned about their safety. D. They were proud of themselves.
26. What did the author get from the other girl’s words in the end
A. Bravery. B. Honesty. C. Selflessness. D. Confidence.
27. What is the main idea of the text
A. How I’ve learned I’m perfect. B. When I met the perfect girl.
C. What kind of person I should be. D. Who taught me what is really perfect.
C
Many people pay a lot of money for face and body mud (泥) treatments. Maybe that is one reason why people like to garden or make things from mud. You must get your hands dirty.
“Getting your hands dirty” is a useful expression. And it has two uses. The first one is for honest, hardworking people. If I am willing to get my hands dirty, it means I am willing to do the hard work of a project myself. I do not give the dirty work to others.
For example, let’s say my good friend is running for city leader. There is a lot of hard work needed to win an election (选举). So, I help gather signatures (签名) to get her on the election list. I walk around neighborhoods and pass out information to hundreds of people. She does too. She is not afraid to get her hands dirty and neither is her team of volunteers. When she wins, she thanks us all for our hard work.
Okay, now it is four years later. My friend has been in office and has become very powerful. In fact, you could say that power has gone to her head. She is thinking unclearly and illegally (非法地) when she asks me to do her a favor. That brings us to the other way we use the expression “get your hands dirty.” This way is for dishonest people.
Let’s imagine that my friend, the Mayor, calls me into her office and asks me to do something for her—something illegal. She wants me to ask a building developer for money for her re-election. In return she will give him some city business.
She promises me that nothing will happen. But she simply can’t risk getting her hands dirty. I tell her that I really can’t risk going to prison (监狱). I also tell her that we are no longer friends.
28. What does the author start to do first to help with his friend’s election
A. Spread his friend’s opinions. B. Apply for an election list for her.
C. Get enough people to support her. D. Ask other people not to run for city leaders.
29. What does the author’s friend want to do four years later
A. Use power dishonestly. B. Cut ties with the author.
C. Send the author to prison. D. Ask the author to lead the election.
30. Which of the following can replace the underlined part in the last paragraph
A. Working honestly. B. Losing her health.
C. Putting her hands in mud. D. Doing it illegally by herself
31. What do we know about the meanings of “getting your hands dirty”
A. They are hard to understand. B. They are very different.
C. They are used for honest people. D. They are changing quickly.
D
Even with an injured leg, a tall, grey-crowned crane (灰冠鹤) walks proudly through a bird shelter in the Rwandan capital Kigali. The shelter—called Umusambi Village—has rescued more than 200 cranes from captivity (囚禁). Olivier Nsengimana founded the Umusambi Village in 2015, and runs it together with the government. Umusambi means “grey-crowned bird” in the Kinyarwanda language. In just four years, the organization has helped to increase the population of these endangered birds from 487 to 881.
Before this work began, local neighborhoods were hunting or catching the birds to sell, said Nsengimana. Nsengimana recently explained why this was possibly happening. In Rwanda, the bird is often a symbol of high social position and wealth. So, they are often raised in private homes or hotels.
In fact, six years ago, he said there were more cranes living in captivity in hotels and homes than in the wild. Nsengimana added that poverty and a lack of awareness (意识) of animal protection in the local neighborhoods also led them to catch and sell the birds illegally. He said raising awareness of their endangered position is helping to protect the birds.
For Nsengimana, his own love of the bird goes back to his childhood. He grew up in a village filled with grey crowned cranes. They not only woke up people in the morning, but they also provided entertainment.
Some of the rescued birds are brought to the village after being injured by illegal hunters. Others come from homes where their owners broke their legs or cut their wings to prevent them from flying away.
At Umusambi Village, the cranes are able to recover. When they are healthy enough to survive in their natural environment, Nsengimana sets them free in a protected forest. However, the cranes are still endangered by illegal hunting and by the destruction of their natural environment. This is happening not only in Rwanda, he said. Cranes are endangered in many other parts of the world, including North America.
32. What is a reason for the illegal selling of the birds
A. Local people knew little about protecting them. B. The government didn’t take measures.
C. Their population was too large. D. They could bring good luck.
33. What happened to the cranes before Nsengimana took action
A. They lost their homes. B. Many of them got hurt.
C. They were used to tell time D. They were hunted for meat
34. What may be the future of these rescued birds
A. Staying in the Village forever. B. Being kept with kind people.
C. Moving to public parks. D. Living in the wild.
35. Which of the following can be the best title for the text
A. Man Reminds People to Protect Endangered Birds.
B. Birds Become a Symbol of Wealth in Rwanda
C. Man Saves Endangered Birds in Rwanda
D. Birds Are Part of People’s Life in Rwanda
第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。选项中有两项为多余选项。
How do You Get Better at Speaking English
Many Learning English fans write to us with this question: How do I get better at speaking English All right My suggestions are follows:
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Every day, you can speak English anytime and anywhere. Keep on doing it, even if you can only speak fore a short time. Begin by saying “good morning”, and “good afternoon or evening” to family member or a friend. As you travel to your school or work, think about how you feel, like “happy” or “sad” and say it to yourself in English. When you arrive, give greetings to a friend who is also learning English. 37 Speaking English every day will help you get better.
Accept a few mistakes.
We all make mistakes. You will probably make some mistakes while learning to speak English. But you should still practice speaking it. And you can learn from your mistakes. 38 Practice saying the words many times so you can say them correctly the next time.
Learn some skills.
Another way to practice speaking is to read a story from our website and listen to the audio. Stop after a few sentences. Listen again, and notice how the speaker’s voice goes up and down. 39
Practice speaking with a partner.
With a friend, choose a conversation from Let’s Learn English. 40 Use a phone to record and listen to yourself. Do you say the words the same way as Anna and her friends
Next week, we will talk about continuing a conversation in English.
A. Speak up loudly and bravely in streets.
B. You may ask, “How are you feeling today ”
C. Ask your friend or teacher to correct them.
D. Try to speak English each day.
E. Repeat the sentences and make your voice change the same way.
F. And them, act it out with your friend when you know it well enough.
G. Speaking English plays an important role in communication with natives.
第三部分 语言运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题11将该项涂黑。
The other day, I was in the local shop with my five-year-old son. He is outgoing and 41 dealing with strangers when he is with a safe adult. That day he greeted a young kid began a 42 . This kid was wearing the uniform (校服) of the school my son will be 43 at next year so I pointed that out to him. When we finished our shopping and were 44 , the other kid said, “See you at school next year!”
As I was 45 my car with goods later, the mother drove up behind me and promised to 46 me a bag of uniforms that no longer fit her son. For nothing! I went and 47 the clothes the next afternoon.
This may seem like a small kindness to some people but for me it is 48 ! I have been worried quite a bit about the 49 of uniforms for school next year. We are planning to start a 50 for a living but we lack money. I also suffer from a few diseases and have had a really bad year this year, 51 in my life.
I cannot even begin to explain how 52 I was for this “small” gesture from a 53 . It has taken away a bit of 54 from my shoulders and is very much appreciated. You never know when the small kindnesses, even 55 a smile in the street, can be a great encouragement to others.
41. A. avoids B. tries C. loves D. suggests
42. A. story B. conversation C. trouble D. chance
43. A. studying B. struggling C. living D. serving
44. A. cheering B. talking C. questioning D. leaving
45. A. cleaning B. filling C. improving D. exchanging
46. A. buy B. show C. make D. offer
47. A. picked up B. paid for C. chose from D. his away
48. A. normal B. formal C. major D. possible
49. A. cost B. style C. colour D. design
50. A. journey B. business C. discussion D. survey
51. A. luckiest B. most C. worst D. easiest
52. A. sorry B. thankful C. responsible D. ready
53. A. pioneer B. friend C. passenger D, stranger
54. A. work B. disaster C. weight D. difficulty
55. A. simply B. usually C. exactly D. honestly
第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式，并将答案填写在答题卡上。
There are many kinds of strength (力量) training equipment. They do not cost much and 56 (sell) in sporting stores.
Free weights (自由负重器械), 57 (common) used in strength training, are handheld weights. They are not connected to exercise equipment, so we call them “free”. If you do not have free weights, you can use a heavy thing 58 is safe to lift.
Many gyms and health clubs have weightlifting or resistance (阻力) machines. Some people also buy these machines 59 (set) them up at home. But they can cost a lot of money.
However, working with free weights or weightlifting machines can sometimes be 60 (danger). If you are new to weight training, experts suggest working with 61 trainer or physical fitness specialist. This way you will learn the right way to move and avoid injury.
Experts have this warning for those 62 (want) to start weight training. They say you should talk with your doctor before beginning if you are 63 (old) than age 40, and have not been active recently.
If you are suing weights, how much should you use The right amount (量) should tire your body after 12 to 15 64 (time). You can slowly increase the amount as you get stronger.
Also listen 65 your body. If an exercise causes pain, stop it. Experts say after the pain goes away, you can try the exercise again, but with a lower weight.
第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分155）
假定你是李华，你校今天举办了“如何强身健体”演讲比赛，请你写一篇报道，刊登在校英语报上，内容包括：
1．比赛目的；
2．演讲内容介绍；
3．同学反响。
注意：1．词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
题目：A Speech Contest
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第二节（满分25分）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I went to the beach nearby for some relaxing time myself. After a tiring week, all I wanted was a book, some loneliness, and a good snack. It was a lovely time watching people come and go for a warm weekend here in California. Kids were joyfully playing in the water, row boating, building sandcastles and sharing meals with their family.
After a few hours，I decided to walk along the waves to get to my car on the other side as I was leaving. As I was near the end and about to head off the beach，I noticed a girl playing by herself，maybe around 8 or 9.It looked like she built a little sandcastle with a moat（护城河）around it and was now trying to fill the moat with water.
Unfortunately, there was no container around to carry water or the usual sand toys. She was playing alone, unlike most of the other kids. She would go to the waves, cup her hands and then walk back to her little castle. Sadly not much of the water was making it to the moat. But she kept trying and was still smiling and hopeful. I so wished I could help her out, but I didn't have a container with me.
As I was standing there watching her, feeling helpless, I had an idea. I realized that I had a bottle of water in my bag that I had completely forgotten about. I quickly dug in, took it out, and walked over to hand it to her.
Confused at first, she smiled but shook her head shyly, saying no. I told her that it would make getting the water much faster. She smiled broadly and finally took it from my hands. Not wanting her to feel uncomfortable, I walked off the beach right away and watched her in the distance.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The girl began to carry water using the bottle.____________________________________________________
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Seeing this, I decided to carry more water for her with a bigger container. _____________________________
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海南省2021-2022学年第一学期高一学业水平诊断
英语·答案
听力原文
Text 1
W：I'd like to have some duck soup，please.
M：I'm very sorry，madam. I'm afraid there isn't any left.
Text 2
W：Uncle Ed，thanks a lot for letting me stay at your house tonight.
M：No problem. I know how easy it is to get to the airport from here.
Text 3
W: I can't see why you like the sports program so much. It's so boring
M: Oh, no. It's exciting. Which is your favorite TV program
W: I enjoy watching history and nature programs. I also like to watch the news
Text 4
M: I need to get a different job W: Why
M: The one I have just doesn't give me enough hours for my study anymore.
Text 5
M: Why is everyone off work today Am I missing something
W: It's a public holiday. Many businesses are closed and so are government offices. A lot of schools have the day off.
too. I guess your boss doesn't believe in this holiday.
Text 6
W: There is something wrong with my bike. I have to take a bus to school. You know, there are always so many people on the bus
M: Have you taken it to the repair shop
W: I went to some shops yesterday, and all the repairmen advised me to throw it away. But it was a birthday gift from my grandfather and I didn't want to do that.
M: But how do you deal with it now Do you plan to fix it by yourself
W: Yes. I want to have a try. By the way. could you do me a favor
M: Of course.
Text 7
M: Lily, who went to the movie theater with you last night
W: Oh, it was Sam. He' s learning Chinese from me and the film was the lesson for him.
M: Where's he from
W: Sam's home is in a small town near Boston. He' s taught English at my college for two years. He is a great workmate to work with.
M: So could you teach my daughter Chinese, too Let me check what's on at the cinema.
W: Hev, it's true. I didn't lie to vou. There is a learning group including Chinese and foreigners. Do you want to join us
M: Wow, great. Could you tell me more about the group Like, how many members How many foreigners Where are they from How do you leam from each other
W: Wait a minute, Jack! Don't ask so many questions.
Text 8
W: Bob, the weatherman says it' s going to rain today. Look at the clouds. You'd better not go on that picnic.
M: Oh, the weather reports are never right. It'll stay sunny, I' m sure.
W: Well, take the umbrella in case it rains.
M: My bag is very heavy already. Dad has put lots of water in it
W: You never listen to my advice. I am sure you'll get wet today.
M: I've got to go. Bye.
W: Remember to close the door M: OK. Oh, my god, it' s starting to rain outside. How terrible!
W: Now stay at home and help me clean the house.
M: I have no time. I have lots of homework to do.
Text 9
W: Have you bought your new clothes yet
M: Not yet. Instead of buying a suit for my friend 's birthday this summer, I think I' m just going to get one made to m own measure
W: You want to get one made Won t that be just as expensive as buying one at a store
M: I don't think so. I went and talked to a man that makes suits, and he said that it would only be about 500 yuan
W: Hmm…. That’s pretty cheap. The ones we saw at the store cost 600 yuan or more
M: Yeah, and I think it'll fit me better if I have it made. instead of buying one from the store
W: You re probably right
M: Why not go together this week
W: Great! Then we can go to the shoe stores afterwards I need a pair of shoes to match my new skirt and jeans for this coming summer.
M: I suggest you have your new clothes made in the future. They are certain to fit you better
W: You are right, but I have enough clothes at present.
Text 10
W: Our school is an international language college. As you can see, there are a lot of buildings It can be difficult for new students to find their way around, so we re taking you on this quick walk around. The college used to have four departments English, French, German and Russian. But there is now also a Chinese department. At the moment, were outside your department, the English department, which is the largest department in the college There are over 75 students in each grade and we have 35 teachers, including 15 professors. The teachers are from different countries, mainly from the USA and Canada, with a few from England and Australia. You’ll have all your classes here in this building. Now, lets walk over to Old Main, which is the largest building in the college just next to the Students' Activity Center Building.
共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）
1—5 CABBC 6—10 BAABB 11—15 ABACB 16—20 CABCA
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21—25 BDACB 26—30 DACAD 31—35 BABDC 36—40 DBCEF
（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
41—45 CBADB 46—50 DACAB 51—55 CBDCA
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56.are sold commo monly 58.that/ which 59.to set 60.dangerous
61.aone 62.wanting 63.older 64. times 65. to
写作第一节（满分15分）
One possible version:
A Speech Contest
In order to build up students 'body, our school held a speech contest with the theme of" How to Keep Fit "today.
The speakers talked about their experiences of keeping fit and offered a lot of good advice to the students, such strengthening exercise, keeping a balanced healthy diet, forming good living habits and so on.
The students listened to the speeches with great interest. They realized that a healthy body is important for fighting against diseases and also a must to complete the learning tasks.
评分原则
1.本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分
4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6.如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7.内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档：（13—15分）
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.覆盖所有内容要点
3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档：（10—12分）
1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容
3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档：（7—9分）
1.基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2.虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解
5.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯
6.整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档：（4—6分）
1.未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3.语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
4.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性
6.信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档：（1—3分）
1.未完成试题规定的任务。
2.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3.语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
4.较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6.信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
未能传达给读者任何信息；内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
写作第二节（满分25分）
One possible version：
The girl began to carry water using the bottle. It was true that it was easier to carry water with a bottle than by hand but every time she poured water into the moat, it immediately disappeared into the sand. So the little girl ran back and forth for water, but there was still no water left. It was then that I realized that the bottle was too small to carry enough water. However, the girl kept running carrying seawater to the moat.
Seeing this, I decided to carry more water for her with a bigger container. I remembered I had a big water bottle in my car. So I went back to my car to fetch it and filled it with seawater. Then I carried the water to the front of the little girl’s sandcastle. I asked her to stand by and watch. I filled the moat with water slowly and it was soon full of water Surrounded with water, the sandcastle looked prettier now. The little girl clapped and cheered with excitement.
评分原则
1.本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4.评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：
（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；
（2）内容的丰富性；
（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；
（4）上下文的连贯性。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档：（21—25分）
1.与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。
2.所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。
3.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
第四档：（16—20分）
1.与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。
2.所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。
3.比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
第三档：（11—15分）
与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
2.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义表达
3.应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档：（6—10分）
1.与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
2.语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达。
3.较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性第一档：（1-5分）
1.与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。
2.语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达。
3.缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。
不得分：（0分）
白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。