2022年中考英语规则主题写作典例课件(共31张PPT)

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2022年中考英语
规则主题写作典例课件
（2020·北京期中）
假如你是李华，你即将代表学校参加海淀区举办的“Rules Make Our Lives Better”英语演讲大赛。请你谈谈你的生活（学校 / 家庭……）中有哪些规则，以及规则的重要性。
提示词语：eat in class；be late for；clean the room；help；learn
提示问题：What are the rules in your life (school/family...) ；Why are rules important
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I’m happy to give a speech about rules. ________________________________________________
Writing
中考作文评分标准说明
先根据文章整体内容确定档次，然后在该档次内评出分数
第一档：（9-10分）
完全符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全，句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清晰，具有逻辑性。
第二档：（6-8分）
基本符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通畅，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（3-5分）
部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。
第四档：（0-2分）
与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼错提示词语，所写内容难以理解。
2. 用谁的口吻写作文
3. 用什么时态
4. 写一大段还是分段
1. 作文话题是什么
看到作文题目该想什么？
5. 写点啥内容？
每一段分别写什么内容，试着连一连吧！
Para2
Para3
Para4
呼吁遵守规则
家规+校规
规则的重要性
假如你是李华，你即将代表学校参加海淀区举办的“Rules Make Our Lives Better”英语演讲大赛。请你谈谈你的生活（学校/家庭……）中有哪些规则，以及规则的重要性。
提示词语：eat in class；be late for；clean the room；help；learn
提示问题：
1. What are the rules in your life (school/family...)
2. Why are rules important
审题目
要点：
人称：
时态：
一般现在时
第一称（we, our）
定框架
第一段总：开门见山(已给出)
第二段分：详细介绍规则
第四段总：总结全文
校规、家规
第三段分：规则重要性
高分作文必备元素！
1. 高分结构
2. 家规校规
3. 规则重要性
总分总
1. 高分结构
总分总
总：万能概括句
分：万能衔接词
总：万能总结问句
本篇开头已给出……
Let’s _______, and we will have a better life. Thanks for listening.
First of all；in addition；what’s more; besides; last but not least
演讲万能结尾段
Let’s _______, and we will have a better life. Thanks for listening.
规则话题
环境保护
Let’s ____________, and we will have a better life. Thanks for listening.
Let’s __________________, and we will have a better life. Thanks for listening.
follow the rules
protect the environment
2. 做家务
3. 上课认真听讲
4. 穿校服
1. 早点回家
家规校规都有啥？
5. 不能在楼道嬉戏打闹
6. 保持教室整洁
Yes
No
规则 Yes or No
Eat in class
Be late
Clean the room
Help parents do housework
Go to bed early
规则话题词汇短语积累
规则表达
1.情态动词
must 表命令，必须
should表义务，应该
They must wear sports shoes in gym class. They should keep quiet in the school bus.
规则话题词汇短语积累
规则表达
Almost all schools require students to wear uniforms.
2. require sb. to do sth.
要求某人做某事
规则话题词汇短语积累
规则表达
The students are not allowed to dye (染) their hair and are supposed to keep hair black.
4. be supposed to 应该
3. be allowed to 被允许
规则话题词汇短语积累
规则表达
They can’t go outside if they are not allowed to.
如果不允许他们出去，他们就不能出去。
1. if 条件句
规则话题词汇短语积累
规则表达
2. When it’s time to…
到……的时候
When it’s time to go to bed, all the lights in the bedrooms are turned off.
到了睡觉的时候，卧室里所有的灯都关了。
规则话题词汇短语积累
规则表达
It’s not a good idea to carry classmates on the back.
用自行车后座载同学不是个好主意。
3. It’s a good idea to do sth.
做……是个好主意
拓展规则表达
It’s not a good idea to play in the hallway.
规则2：老师要求我们要保持教室整洁。我们不允许在课堂上吃东西。
We are supposed to reach school on time and never be late. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it.
规则1：我们应该准时到学校，决不能迟到。到上课的时候，我们必须做好准备。
Teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We are not allowed to eat in class.
规则3：在走廊中玩耍并不是一个好主意。
We should help our parents do housework.
规则4：我们应该帮助父母做家务。
Rules are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There are many rules in my school and my family.
第二段分：
拓展：引出下列规则
规则相当重要。没有规则，我们的生活将会处于混乱之中。在我的学校和家庭中有很多规则。
第二段分：
规则详细介绍
Rules are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There are many rules in my school and my family. We are supposed to reach school on time and never be late. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it. Teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We are not allowed to eat in class. It’s not a good idea to play in the hallway. We should help our parents do housework.
2. 让学校更美丽
3.规则创造良好学习环境
1.制定规则是来帮助我们的
规则有哪些重要性呢？
4. 养成良好的习惯
5. 让我们专注于学习
第三段分：
规则重要性
They help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
1. 写作初级玩家：Rules can help us.
Rules are made to help us.
写作高级玩家：被动语态
2. 写作初级玩家： We can have a good learning environment.
写作高级玩家：比较级+if 状语从句
We can have a better learning environment if we follow them.
3. 写作初级玩家： They can help our schoolwork.
写作高级玩家： focus on 集中注意力；improve 提升
版本1：Rules are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There are many rules in my school and my family. We are supposed to reach school on time and never be late. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it. Teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We are not allowed to eat in class. It’s not a good idea to play in the hallway. We should help our parents do housework.
Rules are made to help us. We can have a better learning environment if we follow them. They help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
版本2：Rules are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There are many rules in my school and my family. First of all, we are supposed to reach school on time and never be late. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it. In addition, teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We are not allowed to eat in class. What’s more, it’s not a good idea to play in the hallway. Last but not least, we should help our parents do housework.
Rules are made to help us. We can have a better learning environment if we follow them. Besides, they help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
比一比
第二、三段分：
规则详细介绍+规则重要性
Rules are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There are many rules in my school and my family. First of all, we are supposed to reach school on time and never be late. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it. In addition, teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We are not allowed to eat in class. What’s more, it’s not a good idea to play in the hallway. Last but not least, we should help our parents do housework.
Rules are made to help us. We can have a better learning environment if we follow them. Besides, they help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
Rule are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There is many rules in my school and my family. First of all, we are supposed to reach school on time and never be lately. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it. In addition, teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We were not allowed to eat in class. What’s more, it’s not a good idea to play in the halway. Last but not least, we should help our parents do housework.
Rules are made to help us. I can have a better learning environment if we follow them. Besides, they help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
lately—late
were—are
Rule—Rules
is—are
I—we
名词单复数
语法
单词词性
时态
作文人称
halway—hallway
单词拼写
大家来找茬
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. I'm happy to give a speech about rules.
Rules are quite important. Without rules, our life will be in disorder. There are many rules in my school and my family. First of all, we are supposed to reach school on time and never be late. When it’s time to have class, we must prepare for it. In addition, teachers require us to keep the classroom clean and tidy. We are not allowed to eat in class. What’s more, it’s not a good idea to play in the hallway. Last but not least, we should help our parents do housework.
Rules are made to help us. We can have a better learning environment if we follow them. Besides, they help us to focus on schoolwork and improve ourselves.
Let’s learn the rules and follow them, and our life will be better. Thanks for listening.
处于混乱之中
应该
到……的时候
要求我们
做……是一个好主意
不被允许
如果
专注于
做准备
高分范文
大家好! 我的名字是李华。我很高兴做一个关于规则的演讲。
规则相当重要。没有规则，我们的生活将会处于混乱之中。在我的学校和家庭中有很多规则。首先，我们应该准时到学校，决不能迟到。到上课的时候，我们必须做好准备。除此之外，老师要求我们要保持教室整洁。我们不允许在课堂上吃东西。更重要的是，在走廊中玩耍并不是一个好主意。最后重要的一点是，我们应该帮助父母做家务。
规则的制定是来帮助我们的。如果我们遵守它们，我们会有一个更好的学习环境。而且它们帮助我们专注于学业并提高自己。
让我们学习规则并且遵守它们吧，那么我们的生活将会更美好。感谢各位的聆听。
范文翻译
高分句型 2： It’s a good idea to do sth. 做……是一个好主意
高分句型 3： if 条件句
高分句型 1： When it’s time to… 到……的时候
四大高分句型
高分句型 4： Let’s _______, and we will have a better life.
Thanks for listening.
高分要素
高分短语 2： be supposed to 应该
高分短语 3： prepare for 做准备
高分短语 4： require sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事
高分短语 1： be in disorder 处于混乱之中
六大高分短语
高分短语 5： be allowed to 被允许
高分短语 6： focus on 专注于
高分要素
2. be in disorder
3. focus on
4. be supposed to
5. prepare for
1. require sb. to do sth.
6. be allowed to
E. 要求某人做某事
B. 处于混乱之中
C. 被允许
A. 应该
D. 做准备
F. 专注于
连一连