2022届高三英语复习短文改错课件（14张PPT）
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| 名称 | 2022届高三英语复习短文改错课件（14张PPT） |  | |
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| 科目 | 英语 | ||
| 更新时间 | 2022-01-20 10:03:53 | ||
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(共14张PPT)
短文改错解题指导
常见错误类型：
1、名词：单数/复数；名词所有格；
可数与不可数；某些复数形式的特殊变化；
有些不可数名词在一定意义上转化为可数名词；等等。
1.He can go without examination to a comprehensive school, a kind of school for all ability.
abilities
2.In that clothes shop only man’s clothes are sold.
3.They did not want me to do any work at family.
4.On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.
5.Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.
6.It’s surprise to see you here.
Boys’ games, Teachers’ Day, Women’s Day, shoe factory
men’s clothes
home
pictures
knowledge
a surprise
2、冠词：固定搭配；冠词的基本用法
1.An old lady was in hurry to go across the street.
2.To keep the balance of the nature, China built a “Great Green Wall”.
3.After a hour or so we began to feel very tired.
4.I’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday.
5.When a child is five in England, his parents must send him to the school.
a
an
a
the
3、形容词、副词：形容词或副词；比较等级；much 与very; much too 与too much; too, either 或also.
1.Lucky enough, a lot of neighbors came out and soon firefighters arrived.
2.The boy seems happily.
3.That afternoon we worked more better.
4.There are new-built houses along the bank of the river.
Luckily
happy
newly-built
4、介词：固定搭配；习语；多余或漏掉
have an effect on, make an effort to do , return into , laugh at, pay attention to, look forward to, devote to , have an effect on , etc.
1.We had a good time on that day.
2.Three months after returning U.S, from Germany, I took part in a college course in French.
3.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
to
5、连词与逻辑关系：when/ while; since/for/as/because; that / what; and / but/so/or;though/ although/ as; until/unless; that/which
1.30% of girls would like to become teachers when only 5 % of boys want to do this job.
2.In one class, I learned it rained.
3.Clever as she is , but she works very hard.
4.A girl was crossing the street on a Zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her.
while
why
when
6、代词：he /who; it/which; its/his/whose; both/all; neither/ none; it/that/one; other/another; it/them/he/they; he/she;it 作形式主语或形式宾语。
1.That boys like to do most is to become managers.
2.Today our school invited Mr.Bill, he is teaching in a college of our city, to give us a lecture on how to improve our reading ability.
3.They soon begin to hate this kind of work with a force that can destroy his happiness.
4.That was very dangerous to drive fast.
What
who
their
It
7、动词：使用不当，如：rise/raise; reach/arrive/get; lie/ lay; see/look; hear/ listen; find/look for; realize/ know/ recognize; buy/ have; borrow/ keep; contain/ include/ including; receive/ accept 等；
主谓一致；
时态；语态；
谓语/非谓语；
现在分词/过去分词(surprising/ surprised; interested/ interesting,etc)
1.You can usually borrow it for weeks, or perhaps two, before taking it back.
2.On warm days some small restaurants put tables and chairs outside the houses to let people to take a rest and have some tea .
3.At ten minutes to eleven they were still busy running around do things, except Mrs.Wilson.
4.He looked out of the window and finding a store nearby on the street was on fire.
5.There will an important game next month.
keep
doing
found
be
6.Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become strangers at once.
7.The bike outside my house is belonged to Tom.
8.The serious accident was happened in Jinan.
9.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
10.As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.
talk
are
is
练练吧
1. What a great fun we had swimming in the lake in hot summer!
2.We often hear this English song sing in our school.
3.Losing in thought, he almost ran into a car in front of him.
4.Being busy, so he can’t take a few days off to go home.
5.It is much exciting to watch a football match than to see a film.
6.Disappointing at failing in the math exam, Jim wouldn’t like to talk about it to his parents.
7.The woman stood there surprising for a moment when she saw a beggar appear before her.
8.Stepped carelessly into the street, he was knocked down by a motorbike.
9.The Whites should either keep their dogs in the house or tying them up in the backyard.
10.Though the high price, demand for these cars is very high.
Keys to the exercises
I.1.modern, 2.apartment 3.architect 4.poems, 5.idioms 6.convenient 7.passage 8.construction 9.development 10.absence
II. 1.stands out 2.is good for 3.created 4.contributes 5.reminded 6. architect 7.belongs to 8.pulled down 9.come into being 10.went against.
III.1.ADCBA 6.CCBDD 11.BDBAC
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短文改错解题指导
常见错误类型：
1、名词：单数/复数；名词所有格；
可数与不可数；某些复数形式的特殊变化；
有些不可数名词在一定意义上转化为可数名词；等等。
1.He can go without examination to a comprehensive school, a kind of school for all ability.
abilities
2.In that clothes shop only man’s clothes are sold.
3.They did not want me to do any work at family.
4.On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.
5.Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well.
6.It’s surprise to see you here.
Boys’ games, Teachers’ Day, Women’s Day, shoe factory
men’s clothes
home
pictures
knowledge
a surprise
2、冠词：固定搭配；冠词的基本用法
1.An old lady was in hurry to go across the street.
2.To keep the balance of the nature, China built a “Great Green Wall”.
3.After a hour or so we began to feel very tired.
4.I’ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday.
5.When a child is five in England, his parents must send him to the school.
a
an
a
the
3、形容词、副词：形容词或副词；比较等级；much 与very; much too 与too much; too, either 或also.
1.Lucky enough, a lot of neighbors came out and soon firefighters arrived.
2.The boy seems happily.
3.That afternoon we worked more better.
4.There are new-built houses along the bank of the river.
Luckily
happy
newly-built
4、介词：固定搭配；习语；多余或漏掉
have an effect on, make an effort to do , return into , laugh at, pay attention to, look forward to, devote to , have an effect on , etc.
1.We had a good time on that day.
2.Three months after returning U.S, from Germany, I took part in a college course in French.
3.I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.
to
5、连词与逻辑关系：when/ while; since/for/as/because; that / what; and / but/so/or;though/ although/ as; until/unless; that/which
1.30% of girls would like to become teachers when only 5 % of boys want to do this job.
2.In one class, I learned it rained.
3.Clever as she is , but she works very hard.
4.A girl was crossing the street on a Zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her.
while
why
when
6、代词：he /who; it/which; its/his/whose; both/all; neither/ none; it/that/one; other/another; it/them/he/they; he/she;it 作形式主语或形式宾语。
1.That boys like to do most is to become managers.
2.Today our school invited Mr.Bill, he is teaching in a college of our city, to give us a lecture on how to improve our reading ability.
3.They soon begin to hate this kind of work with a force that can destroy his happiness.
4.That was very dangerous to drive fast.
What
who
their
It
7、动词：使用不当，如：rise/raise; reach/arrive/get; lie/ lay; see/look; hear/ listen; find/look for; realize/ know/ recognize; buy/ have; borrow/ keep; contain/ include/ including; receive/ accept 等；
主谓一致；
时态；语态；
谓语/非谓语；
现在分词/过去分词(surprising/ surprised; interested/ interesting,etc)
1.You can usually borrow it for weeks, or perhaps two, before taking it back.
2.On warm days some small restaurants put tables and chairs outside the houses to let people to take a rest and have some tea .
3.At ten minutes to eleven they were still busy running around do things, except Mrs.Wilson.
4.He looked out of the window and finding a store nearby on the street was on fire.
5.There will an important game next month.
keep
doing
found
be
6.Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become strangers at once.
7.The bike outside my house is belonged to Tom.
8.The serious accident was happened in Jinan.
9.Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
10.As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.
talk
are
is
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1. What a great fun we had swimming in the lake in hot summer!
2.We often hear this English song sing in our school.
3.Losing in thought, he almost ran into a car in front of him.
4.Being busy, so he can’t take a few days off to go home.
5.It is much exciting to watch a football match than to see a film.
6.Disappointing at failing in the math exam, Jim wouldn’t like to talk about it to his parents.
7.The woman stood there surprising for a moment when she saw a beggar appear before her.
8.Stepped carelessly into the street, he was knocked down by a motorbike.
9.The Whites should either keep their dogs in the house or tying them up in the backyard.
10.Though the high price, demand for these cars is very high.
Keys to the exercises
I.1.modern, 2.apartment 3.architect 4.poems, 5.idioms 6.convenient 7.passage 8.construction 9.development 10.absence
II. 1.stands out 2.is good for 3.created 4.contributes 5.reminded 6. architect 7.belongs to 8.pulled down 9.come into being 10.went against.
III.1.ADCBA 6.CCBDD 11.BDBAC
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