中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 3 Times change!
Period 4
关于发展变化的短文
文体感知
关于发展变化的文章,其体裁可以是记叙文、议论文或说明文。如果是记叙文,要交代清楚时间、地点、人物、过程和结局; 如果是议论文,观点要明确,要分层次进行有力的论证; 如果是说明文,要把现象的特征以及因果关系等描述清楚。在叙述过程中,我们可以从多个方面着手,把发生的变化有序地写下来;或者只选择某一个领域,着重介绍一下该领域的变化;也可以根据表达的需要截取某一个片段或想象的生活场景,通过生动细致地描绘,反映未来的变化。
基本框架
第一段:开头提出主题句 (提出什么事情发生了变化);
第二段:对过去情况的描述 (用过去时态,主要是一般过去时);
第三段:对现在情况的描述 (用现在时态,主要是一般现在时)。
增分佳句
1.Dramatic changes have already taken place in...
2.With the development of science and technology,smart homes are coming to us.
3.Nowadays, more and more people prefer to...rather than...
4.It is expected/estimated that...won't be around in our life.
5.There is no doubt that...will take the place of...
6.There are many factors that have resulted in..., of which the following three are the most important.
7.The reason why...is that...
8.Firstly...Besides/What's more...
9.As we can see, it's more convenient to...than to...
10.Most people would rather...than...
11.We are all enjoying the convenience of...which makes us proud of the prosperous age.
12....is surely a thing of the past./I'm sure...is a thing of the past.
13.I believe that the more...the more...
14.Thanks to the..., our life is more colorful and interesting.
15.But for now, maybe it's best that we just enjoy using them.
典型例题
写作要求
10年后我们的生活将会是什么样的?根据以下内容,通过合理想象,用英语写一篇80词左右的短文来展望未来的生活。
要点:
1.有些人到月球上度假;
2.某些科学家在海底生活;
3.孩子可以在家通过因特网接受教育;
4.机器人为你做家务。
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审题谋篇
第一步:审题构思很关键
第二步:核心词汇想周全
梦想……
去月球度假
在海底生活
没有必要去学校
在家中学习
变成现实
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.或许有些人会去月球上度假。
Perhaps some people .
2.某些科学家将在海底生活。
Some scientists .
3.网上有很多教育资源。
on the Internet.
4.孩子没有必要天天去学校。
Children .
5.或许将来每个家庭都会有机器人。
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6.它们可以做它们被告诉的一切,如购物、做家务等。
They can do .
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.用with复合结构改写第三步中的句3,然后和第三步中的句4合并成一个简单句
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2.用which引导的定语从句合并第三步中的句5和句6
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第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
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实战演练
假定你是某中学的学生李华,最近收到美国朋友Joy的电子邮件。他在三年前参观过你们学校,听说你们学校现在变化很大, 希望了解发生了哪些具体的变化。请你根据下表提示,给他回一封电子邮件。邮件的开头和结尾已给出。
三年前 一座教学楼,一个操场,学生1 000人
现在 1.校园扩建:新建了一座教学楼和一座图书馆,教学楼内有音乐室、美术室、计算机教室等;2.学生人数:增加到了2 000人;3.体育设施与乐器配备齐全;4.绿化了校园。
参考词汇:体育设施(sports facilities);装备(equip)
Dear Joy,
I was pleased to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you something about the changes in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案与解析
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.dream_about/of...
2.go_to_the_moon_for_a_holiday
3.live_under_the_sea
4.needn't_go_to_school
5.study_at_home
6.come_true
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.will_go_to_the_moon_for_a_holiday
2.will_live_under_the_sea
3.There'll_be_plenty_of_educational_resources
4.needn't_go_to_school_every_day
5.Maybe_in_the_future_each_family_will_have_a_robot
6.whatever_they_are_told_to,such_as_shopping,housework,etc
第四步:句式升级造亮点
1.With_plenty_of_educational_resources_on_the_Internet,
children_needn't_go_to_school_every_day
2.Maybe_in_the_future_each_family_will_have_a_robot,
which_can_do_whatever_they_are_told_to,such_as_shopping,housework,etc.
第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
One possible version:
I am always dreaming about life in the future. What on earth will it be like
Perhaps some people will go to the moon for a holiday,and some scientists will live under the sea. With plenty of educational resources on the Internet, children needn't go to school every day. As a result,they can study at home.Maybe in the future each family will have a robot, which can do whatever they are told to,such as shopping,housework,etc.
I do believe the dream will come true some day.
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear_Joy,
I_was_pleased_to_hear_from_you_and_I'm_writing_to_tell_you_something_about_the_changes_in_our_school.
As is known, great changes have taken place in our school. It is no longer what it used to be three years ago, when there was only one teaching building and a playground. Now two new buildings have been built and are in use. One of them is a new teaching building, in which there are rooms for music, art and computer teaching. The other is the library, where there are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, our school is well equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. The number of students has also grown from 1,000 to 2, 000. What's more, we have planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.
I believe our school will become better and better, and I hope you will visit our school again.
Yours,
Li_Hua
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