人教版（新课程标准）必修1 Unit 4 Earthquakes写作课名师课件（16张ppt）

(共16张PPT)
邹鹂娜
In this class, you are going to
I. learn the outline of a newspaper story.
II. write a draft(草稿) of a newspaper story.
Class rules
Cyclists Ready to Go on the Road for Disaster-Hit area
(1)In order to ① money to help tens of thousands of children in disaster-hit areas in China, a team of ② known as Bikers for Disaster-Hit area will ③ their bikes 1,888 km from ④ , Yunan Province, to Lhasa, Tibet from ⑤ 5 to 28.
(2)The team has a big ⑥ in Beijing on June 3 to talk about their plan. The cyclists come from China, the US, Europe and other places. Both men and women will ride. Their ages are from 25 to 65. Before their trip this summer, the group hopes to ⑦ 1 million yuan to ⑧ to the schools which ⑨ the children in those natural disaster-
hit areas.
(3)People in the society think highly of
such activity.
NO.
The missing words Outline of a
newspaper story Paragraph
Number
①
②
③
④
⑤
⑥⑦
⑧⑨
Cyclists Ready to Go on the Road for Disaster-Hit area
People in the society think highly of such activity

Headline (Sample范例）
Cyclists Ready to Go on the Road for Disaster-Hit area (Sports Meeting)
___________________________
Why raise money
Who cyclists
How ride
Where Lijiang
When July
What meeting; collect;
give;
help Tips:
Refer to the words in your paper.
4mins
请同学们拿出
答题器进行抢答
7mins
While writing, you should pay attention to the tips:
1. Use the third person
2. Use the past tense
3. 5Ws
4. No personal judgment
5. Handwriting
When Where
Who What Why
7mins
Assessment Yes(√) No(√)
Structure A headline
“Why” “When” “how” “where” “who” and “what”
A summary sentence
Language Past tense
The third person
Any advanced vocabularies
Any advanced sentence patterns
No spelling mistakes.
No grammar mistakes.
Handwriting Beautiful handwriting
Tips: Excellent (8-10“YES”) Good (6-8“YES”) Average (3-6“ Yes”)
4mins
Headline
Lead sentence
Less important details
Summary sentence
Practice makes perfect
We should have a good nose for news