人教版（新课程标准）必修1 Unit 1 Friendship写作课公开课课件（15张ppt）

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A letter of giving advice
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What problem did she meet
Lucy
Can you give her some helpful advice
was absent-minded in dairy life
couldn’t concentrate on study
couldn’t sleep at night
was anxious about exams
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When giving advice, what sentence patterns will you use
It might be a good idea to…
You’d better…
I think you ought to…
I would strongly advise you to…
How about…
Perhaps you should…
How can you
make your advice believable
facts
reasons
examples
numbers
ways
●Take out your green paper
● Read it by yourself
● Underline the information
How can you
make your advice believable
facts
reasons
examples
numbers
ways
As a group of 4,
choose 1 suggestion and write down no more than 3sentences to support it.
Time :10 minutes
Please write a letter to Lucy to offer some helpful advice. The opening and ending have been given.
★ about 60 words, including 3 suggestions
★ every suggestion supported by 1 or 2 sentences
★ linking words
linking words
▲ First,… Second,… Next,… Finally
Then,…/Afterwards,…/Meanwhile
At last,…
▲ Furthermore/ Most importantly
What’s more/ What’s worse
▲ Besides/ In addition
However/ While
Time :10 minutes
Please write a letter to Lucy to offer some helpful advice. The opening and ending have been given.
★ about 60 words, including 3 suggestions
★ every suggestion supported by 1 or 2 sentences
★ linking words
How to evaluate (评价）the article
The body of the articles contains:
①3 suggestions
②1 suggestion vs 1 or 2 sentences
③different sentence patterns to give advice
④some linking words
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主体：提出建议，并用reasons/facts /ways等支撑
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结尾：希望所提建议有用并祝福
How to write a letter of advice
首段：写信的意图
建议信开头常用句式 (照应材料,表明写作意图)
1. I am sorry to know that …
2. I am very glad to hear that you want to…
3. I know you have trouble in…after
reading your letter.
4. I am writing to you for the purpose of …
建议信结尾常用句式
1. I hope you will find these suggestions useful.
2. I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful.
3. I believe if you follow my advice, you’ll ......
4. I believe, with your determination, you can manage to overcome these difficulties.
Homework
Pair work: 两人一组，相互交换并改正写的这篇建议信
基础课时分层-Unit1 Grammar ＆ Writing 教材基础巩固