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话题七 旅行
“旅行”是近年来四川地区都有考查的写作话题。该话题通常有如下命题角度:旅行的经历与感受、旅行的计划安排、旅途中的注意事项等。
【时态】一般过去时、一般将来时、一般现在时
【人称】第一人称
命题分析
教材链接
写作角度 年级、单元 话题
旅行经 历与感受 七(下)Unit 11 How was your school trip? School trips
八(上)Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation? Holidays and vacations
话题单词
交通工具
train n.火车
car n.小汽车
bike n.自行车
bus n.公共汽车
plane n.飞机
ship n.轮船
词汇梳理
旅行经历以及旅行安排
travel v.旅行
plan v.& n.计划
journey n.旅程
guide n.导游
visitor/tourist n.参观者
visit v.参观
camera n.相机
tent n.帐篷
map n.地图
ride n.供乘骑的游乐设施;短途旅行
camp v.扎营;搭帐篷
mountain n.高山
beach n.海滩
sea n.大海
lake n.湖泊
scenery n.风景
sightseeing n.观光;旅游
museum n.博物馆
感受
crowded adj.拥挤的
terrible adj.糟糕的
awful adj.讨厌的
relax v.放松
relaxed adj.放松的
relaxing adj.令人放松的
interesting adj.有趣的
exciting adj.刺激的;令人兴奋的
excited adj.兴奋的
wonderful adj.精彩的
fantastic adj.(口语)极好的;美妙的
boring adj.无聊的
amazing adj.令人惊异的
话题短语
places of interest名胜古迹
thousands of成千上万的
go on vacation去度假
take photos/pictures拍照
show sb.around带领某人参观
such as/for example例如
summer/winter vacation暑假/寒假
amusement park游乐园,look forward to期待
have a good time/have fun玩得开心
by plane/bus/train/car/bike/ship坐飞机/坐公共汽车/坐火车/坐小汽车/骑自行车/坐轮船
so...that...如此……以至于……
different kinds of不同种类的
the Great Wall长城
介绍旅行经历与感受
1.Last summer vacation,I went to Beijing with my parents.
2.We visited many places of interest and ate some delicious food there.
3.People there are all friendly and kind.
4.It is so beautiful that I want to go there again.
5.Beijing is famous for its places of interest and Beijing Duck.
佳句积累
6.Thousands of visitors come to visit the Great Wall every year.
7.We went there by plane last Saturday.
8.What a busy but relaxing trip!
介绍旅行计划
1.I will show you around when you come here.
2.My family are going to go somewhere interesting this winter vacation.
3.I’m writing to invite you to come to China.
4.Next week,we will have a school trip to Beijing Zoo.
5.I’m going to try different kinds of delicious food there.
旅途中的注意事项
1.Don’t throw litter everywhere when you are enjoying the scenery.
2.We can’t take photos in the museum unless we’re allowed to do so.
3.Try to be polite when asking others for help.
4.We should keep quiet and listen to the guide carefully.
(2020·四川甘孜州)假定你叫李华,你的笔友彼得(Peter)发邮件说他打算暑假来四川旅游。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.询问到达时间;3.你的接待安排(如参观名胜古迹等)。
注意:1.内容必须包括所给信息;2.80词左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);3.可适当增加细节,不得出现个人真实信息。
参考词汇:名胜古迹places of interest
典例精析
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题指导】
1.主题:旅行
2.体裁:应用文
3.人称:第一人称
4.时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
5.要点:表示欢迎、询问到达时间、交代接待安排
【写作思路】
【范文点评】
范文
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to visit Sichuan during the summer vacation.I will be very happy if you can stay at my house.
Here is my plan for you.①First,②since I have visited many places of interest in Sichuan,I will be the best guide for you. Second,there are many delicious Sichuan dishes. Don’t miss them! Besides,Sichuan Opera is a symbol of Sichuan Province. If there is enough time,we can go to watch it.
Please let us know when you are arriving.③I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
点评
①first、second和besides等词的使用,使得文章过渡自然。
②用since引导的原因状语从句点明自己为何是对方的最佳导游人选,该词的使用比because更加贴合语境,也更能体现作者的语言功底。
③用look forward to doing sth.结构点明自己期待见到对方的迫切心情。
(2021·山东泰安改编)暑假将近,很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华,请根据以下图示,以“To Be a Good Traveler”为题,给校报专栏写一篇英语短文,倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”,呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥;80~100词;文中不得出现姓名、校名、地名等相关的真实信息。
提示词汇:consume appropriately适当消费;public welfare公益
跟进训练
To Be a Good Traveler
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How can we be good travelers?I think we should do the following.
First of all,we need to travel in an environmentally-friendly way,such as walking or riding bikes.Then we have to take care of the environment.We are supposed to protect the water source and not to throw litter everywhere.Thirdly,we should consume appropriately.We can buy local products and support the development of local tourism.Finally,we should love public welfare.We should actively take part in different kinds of volunteer activities to help those who need help.