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2022年中考英语一轮复习
课本梳理
人教(新目标)版
八年级上册Units 5—6
高频考点导航
词汇拓展
education
educational
discussion
stood
for
1.educate(v.)→___________(n.)教育★
→____________(adj.)教育的;有教育意义的★
2.discuss(v.)→___________(n.)讨论;商量★
3.stand(v.)→_______(过去式/过去分词)忍受;站立★
▲stand _____代表
4.mean(v.)→__________(n.)意义;意思★
→____________(adj.)重要的;重大的;意味深长的★
→_____________(adj.)毫无意义的;意思不明确的
▲mean to do sth.有意做某事;打算做某事
meaningful
meaningless
hopeful
hopeless
5.hope(v.)→_________(adj.)抱有希望
→__________(adj.)无望的★
meaning
6.success(n.)→___________(adj.)获得成功的;有成就的★
→_____________(adv.)成功地
→_________(v.)实现目标;成功★
▲succeed _____ doing sth.成功做某事
▲be successful in (doing) sth.在(做)某事上成功
successfully
succeed
in
mainly
foreigner
improvement
7.main(adj.)→_________(adv.)主要地★
8.foreign(adj.)→__________(n.)外国人
9.improve(v.)→______________(n.)改进;改善★
successful
10.send(v.)→______(过去式/过去分词)邮寄;发送★
▲send ______分发;散发
▲send _____派人去请(取)
out
for
hobbies
relationship
relative
became
become
weekly
11.hobby(n.)→_________(pl.)业余爱好
12.relation(n.)→_____________(n.)关系;联系★
→_________(n.)亲属;亲戚
13.become(v.)→_________(过去式)★
→_________(过去分词)开始变得;成为
14.week(n.)→_________(adj.& adv.)每周的(地)
sent
15.appear(v.)→___________(反义词)消失;不见★
→____________(n.)外貌;外观;外表;出现;露面
appearance
disappear
personal
in
16.person(n.)→__________(adj.)个人的;私人的★
▲_____ person 亲身;亲自
began
begun
beginning
beginner
with
at
17.begin(v.)→________(过去式)
→________(过去分词)开始
→___________(n.)开头;开端
→__________(n.)初学者
▲begin _______ 以……开始
▲begin to do sth.开始做某事
▲_____ the beginning of 在……开始
18.plan(v.)→_________(过去式/过去分词)打算;计划
▲plan to do sth.计划做某事
▲make a plan制订计划
scientist
scientific
violinist
pianist
19.science(n.)→__________(n.)科学家
→__________(adj.)科学上的;科学的★
20.violin(n.)→__________(n.)小提琴手
▲play the violin拉小提琴
21.piano(n.)→________(n.)钢琴家
▲play the piano弹钢琴
planned
22.expect(v.)→____________(n.)预料;预期;期待
→__________(adj.)预料的;预期的
→____________(adj.)出乎意料的;始料不及的
▲expect (sb.) to do sth.期待(某人)做某事
expected
unexpected
cultural
medical
lost
ability
disabled
23.culture(n.)→_________(adj.)文化的
24.medicine (n.)→_________(adj.)医疗的;医学的
25.lose(v.)→______(过去式/过去分词)失去;遗失;丢失
26.able(adj.)→________(n.)能力;才能
→__________(adj.)丧失能力的;有残疾的
expectation
27.own(v.& adj.)→________(n.)物主;主人
重点短语
talk show
soap opera
can’t stand
1.___________访谈节目
2.____________肥皂剧
3.____________不能忍受
owner
find out
learn…from…
action movie
4.__________查明;弄清
5._______________从……中学到……;向……学习……
6.______________动作影片
come out
be ready to do sth.
try one’s best
dress up
take sb.’s place
do a good job
grow up
7.___________出现;出来
8.____________________准备好做某事
9._______________尽最大努力
10.__________装扮;乔装打扮
11.________________代替;替换
12.________________干得好
13.__________长大;成熟;成长
take acting lessons
14.___________________上表演课
keep on doing sth.
15.___________________继续做某事
be sure about
16._______________确信;对……有把握
make sure
17.____________确保;查明
send…to…
18.____________把……邮寄给……
get good grades
19._________________取得好成绩
be able to
20.____________能够做某事
make promises
21.________________做出承诺
write down
22._____________写下;记录下
have to do with
23._________________关于;与……有关系
take up
24._________(尤指为消遣)学着做;开始做
at the beginning of
25.____________________在……开始
agree with
26.____________同意;赞成
重点句子
good
at
writing
1.Now I know why you’re so _______ _____ _________ stories.现在我知道为什么你那么擅长写故事了。
One
of
the
main
reasons
2.______ _____ ______ _______ _________ is that Mickey was like a common man,but he always tried _____ ______ ______ danger.主要原因之一是米奇就像一个普通人,但他总是试图面对任何危险。
to
face
any
3.My parents want me _____ _____ ____ ________,but I’m ______ ______ ________ that.我父母想要我成为一名医生,但是我不确定。
sure
about
see
what
happens
4.I like to follow the story and ______ _______ __________ next.我喜欢跟着故事情节走,看接下来会发生什么。
to
be
a
doctor
not
make
at
the
beginning
of
improve
lives
5.When we _______ resolutions _____ ______ ___________ _____ the year,we hope that we are going to __________ our _______.当我们在新年伊始下决心时,我们希望会改善我们的生活。
resolutions
have
to
do
with
take
up
hobby
taking
to
play
6.Many ____________ _______ _____ _____ _______
self-improvement.很多决心都与自我提高有关。
7.Some people might say they are going to ______ _____ a ________ like painting or ________ photos,or learn _____ _______ the guitar.有些人可能会说他们要培养一种爱好,比如绘画或者拍照,或者学习弹吉他。
8.Sometimes the resolutions may be ______ __________ _____ ____.有时决心可能太难坚持。
too
difficult
to
keep
to
have
no
resolutions
What do you think of/How do you like/feel about talk shows
9.For this reason,some people say the best resolution is _____ ______ _____ ____________!因为这个原因,有些人说最好的决心就是没有决心!
情景交际
谈论喜好
1.A:_________________________________________________________(你认为脱口秀怎么样)
B:I can’t stand talk shows.
Why do you like watching the news
2.A:___________________________________(你为什么喜欢看新闻)
B:Because I hope to find out what’s going on around the world. 谈论安排
What do you plan to watch/What are you going to watch tonight
3.A:___________________________________________________________(今晚你打算看什么)
B:I plan to watch Days of Our Past tonight.
4.A:What do you plan to do this weekend
B:I will visit my grandpa in the village._______
______________________________(为什么不和我一起去呢)
A:Great!I’m interested in your village.I seldom go to a village.
Why
not/Why don’t you go with me
5.A:How are you going to become a writer
B:I’m going to keep on writing stories,of course.
_________________________(你想成为什么)
A:My parents want me to be a doctor,but I’m not sure about that.
What do you want to be
谈论未来打算
B:Yes,Kim,I did.
A:__________________________(你打算去干什么)
B:I’m going to learn to play the piano.
语法
What are you going to do
1.动词不定式作宾语 2.be going to的用法
话题
1.Entertainment(娱乐) 2.Life goals(生活目标)
6.A:Did you make a New Year’s resolution this year,Lucy
基础知识巩固
一、用括号中所给单词的适当形式填空
1. (2021·恩施州改编)Yuan Longping,one of the best-known __________(science) around the world,made great contributions to developing hybrid rice.
scientists
2. (2021·龙东地区)Would you mind _________(close) the door
closing
3. (2021·滨州改编)—As the saying goes,“The longest journey starts with a single step.”
—You are right.Let’s take ________(act) right now.
action
doctors’
4. (2021·铁岭改编)These photos record the __________(doctor) unusual working experiences.
5. (2021·眉山)—Did anyone help them finish the work
—No.They finished it by ____________(they).
themselves
6. (2021·临沂)Our four-week Earth Camp is a fun and ____________(education) summer camp for children aged 6 to 15.Kids enjoy time outdoors while learning about the earth.
educational
7. (2021·黄冈改编)—Dad,I can’t find my school ID card.Did you see it
—No,I didn’t.I think you ___________(lose) it!
have lost
discussion
8. The question is a little difficult.Let’s have a ___________(discuss) about it this afternoon.
hobbies
9. (2021·日照改编)Her _________(hobby) include painting,gardening and stamp collecting.
10. (2021·温州)Mr.Smith called his wife,“Honey,a package _____________(send) to you in an hour.Happy birthday!”
will be sent
二、根据句意填单词(盲填)
1. (2021·鄂州改编)—Why does Linda dislike me
—I don’t know.You’ll have to find ______ the reason yourself.
out
2. (2021·长春)I want to be a teacher like Zhang Guimei when I grow _____.
up
3. —What a friendly boy he is!
—Yes.He’s always ready _____ help others.
to
4. He likes to dress _____ as Santa Claus to give away presents to children.
up
with
5. Some people think success has something to do _______ luck.
三、八上Unit 5 Section B 2b根据课文内容改编填空
become,success,simple,reason,lose,lucky,ready
Over 80 years ago,Mickey Mouse first appeared in the cartoon Steamboat Willie.When this cartoon came out in New York on November 18,1928,it was the first cartoon with sound and music.The man behind Mickey was Walt Disney.He became very rich and 1.___________.In the 1930s,he made 87 cartoons with Mickey.
successful
Some people might ask how this cartoon animal 2._________ so popular.One of the main 3._________ is that Mickey was like a common man,but he always tried to face any danger.In his early films,Mickey was 4.__________ and had many problems such as 5.________ his house or girlfriend,Minnie.However,he was always 6.________ to try his best.People went to the cinema to see the “little man” win.Most of them wanted to be like Mickey.
Today’s cartoons are usually not so 7.________ as little Mickey Mouse,but everyone still knows and loves him.Who has a pair of ears more famous than Mickey’s
unlucky
losing
ready
simple
became
reasons
一词多义
1. stand
(1) (2020·信阳模拟语篇填空)But I know she can’t stand the cold because her legs hurt._______
忍受
(2) They just sat in the stand,watching the game._______
看台
2. rich
(1) (2021·天津阅读)This oil has made some countries in the area very rich._________
富有的
(2) Farmers grow rice in the rich soil._________
肥沃的
(3) (2020·洛阳一模完形)Try to lose your weight.Avoid eating rich food._________
油腻的
3. own
(1) (2021·河南阅读A篇)All you have to do is to create your own stories._________
自己的
(2) (2021·平顶山一模完形)She was so happy to own a paper boat now._______
拥有
4. paint
(1) (2021·宜昌阅读)Mike made a wood fence and I painted it with the kids._________________
在……上刷油漆
(2) (2021·临沂阅读)By the time he had no more paint,he had had lots of toys and treasures,and the fence had had three coats of paint._______
油漆
5. question
(1) (2021·武威阅读)If you have a question,raise your hand. _______
问题
(2) (2021·广元阅读)At 6:30 p.m.,the police arrived and started questioning people.___________
正式提问
(3) (2021·东营阅读)Galileo questioned those ideas and did experiments that showed how things really worked.___________
表示疑问
【活学活用】
从方框中选择适当的词并用其正确形式填空。
stand,rich,paint,own,question
1. (2021·百色改编)I believe each of Chinese will live a ______ life led by our Party.
rich
2. (2021·贵港改编)—So many people are talking and laughing loudly on the subway.
—Yes.It is too noisy.I can’t _______ it.
stand
3. (2021·株洲改编)How cute and lovely the babies are! I will take care of them like they’re my _______ babies.
own
4. (2021·滨州改编)—Do you know where your brother is,Mark
—Sorry.I was thinking about a __________ and didn’t hear what you had said.
question
5. The writer’s dark past helped him _______ a picture that was different to most other writers.
paint
考点完全攻略
考点1 归纳mind的用法
如:It’s cold outside.Would you mind closing the door for me 外面冷。你介意为我关上门吗?
拓展
表示不介意:Of course not./Certainly not./Not at all.等。
表示介意:I’m sorry./You’d better not./I’m afraid …等。如:
—Would/Do you mind if I call you later 你介意我晚点给你打电话吗?
—Of course not.当然不介意。
【活学活用】
1. Grace made up her mind _________(live) abroad with her daughter.
to live
2. (2021·自贡改编)—Would you mind not _________(play) football in the hallway
—Sorry,I won’t.
playing
3. (2021·武威改编)A:Would you mind telling me how to start this machine
B:_________________________________________.It’s very easy.Do it like this.(情景交际)
Of course not/Certainly not/No,not at all/…
考点2 辨析expect,hope,wish与look forward to
辨析 意义 用法
expect 意为“预料;期待”,认为某事会发生。 expect(sb.)to do sth.期望(某人)做某事
expect+that从句期望……
hope 意为“希望”,侧重有可能实现的愿望。 hope for sth.希望……
hope to do sth.希望做某事
hope+that从句希望……
辨析 意义 用法
wish 意为“希望;想要;祝愿”,后接从句时,从句常用虚拟语气,表达一种不太可能实现的愿望。 wish for sth.想要某物
wish(sb.) to do sth.希望(某人)做某事
wish+that从句 希望……
wish sb.sth.祝/祝愿某人……
look forward to 意为“盼望,期待”,常用于表示怀着满足的心情期望或向往某事。 look forward to(doing) sth.盼望(做)某事
续表
如:I expect to have a good rest this weekend.我期望这个周末能好好休息一下。
The boy hoped that his father could bring him some food.这个男孩希望他爸爸能给他带来一些食物。
I wish her a happy birthday.我祝她生日快乐。
I now look forward to going back to work as soon as possible.我现在盼望尽快回到工作中。
【活学活用】
4. (2021·扬州改编)—Do we have to read anything next week, Mr. Wu
—Sure.You are expected _________(read) Black Beauty from pages 58 to 85.
wish,hope
to read
5. (2021·遂宁改编)—I bought a skirt for you.I _______ you like it.
—Thank you,Mom.I can’t wait to try it on.
hope
6. (2021·河北改编)The trip sounds really exciting to me.How I _______ I could go!
wish
7. (2021·恩施州)我盼望收到你的来信。
I’m _________ _________ _____ hearing from you.
looking
forward
to
考点3 归纳plan的用法
如:Where do you plan to spend your holiday 你打算在哪里度假
We need to make plans for the future.我们必须规划未来。
【活学活用】
8. (2021·安顺改编)Mario and his friends are making some plans __________(work) in an old people’s home this summer.
to work
9. (2021·重庆A卷改编)The villagers plan __________(build) a new bridge over the river.
to build
10. It is important to make a plan _____ your study.(盲填)
for
考点4 归纳promise的用法
如:She kept her promise to visit her aunt.她信守诺言去看望她的姑妈。
He promised to help us.他答应要帮助我们。
He promised her some gifts for her birthday.他答应送她一些生日礼物。
Sorry,I promised that I would give it to Susan.抱歉,我答应过会把它给苏珊。
【活学活用】
11. (2020·烟台改编)Once you make __________(promise) to others,you should try your best to keep them.
promises
12. He promised ________(see) his old friend during his stay in Tianjin.
to see
13. Please promise ____________(not tell) lies any more,will you
not to tell
考点5 归纳be sure的用法
如:You’re sure of success.你一定会成功。
Be sure to give your family my regards.务必代我向你的家人问好。
I’m sure that Tom will come on time.我确定汤姆会准时来的。
I think he’ll be back on Monday,but I can’t say for sure.我想他周一会回来,不过我不敢确定。
拓展
【活学活用】
14. This style of sweaters is sure ____________(become) popular.
to become
15. If one of your friends sends you a message to borrow money on the Internet,you’d better phone him directly first to ______________(确保) that.
make sure of
16. We __________(确信) the Chinese dream will come true in the near future.
are sure
17. (2021·葫芦岛改编)—You are going to get much exercise.Are you sure __________ that
—Of course.I promise to keep it.(盲填)
about/of
that
18. (2021·乐山改编)There is a new rule to make sure ______ you don’t waste food.(盲填)
19. (2021·鞍山)在你离开教室之前,确保窗户都关好。
__________ ______ the windows are closed before you leave the classroom.
Make/Be
sure
考点6 归纳ready的用法
ready作形容词,意为“愿意的;准备好的”,常在句中作表语。常用短语有:
如:Both Kate and I are/get ready for the new high school life.我和凯特都为新的高中生活做好了准备。
I’m getting ready to travel in the coming holiday.我正在为即将到来的假期旅游做准备。
【活学活用】
20. He thinks more of others and is always ready _________(help) them.
to help
21. I was given little time to get ready _____ the test,so I wasn’t confident at that time.(盲填)
for
考点7 归纳too … to …的用法
(1)too … to …意为“太……而不能……”,too是副词,后接形容词或副词原形;to为动词不定式符号,后接动词原形。如:
This morning I got up too late to catch the early bus.今天早上我起床太晚,没赶上早班车。
(2)“too … to …”结构可与“so … that …”(从句用否定形式)和“not … enough to do”结构相互转换。如:
The boy is too young to go to school.=The boy is so young that he can’t go to school.=The boy isn’t old enough to go to school.这个男孩太小,还不能上学。
【活学活用】
22. (2021·朝阳改编)—Were you invited to Jim’s birthday party last night
—Yes,I was.But I was too busy ________(be)there.
to be
23. (2021·龙东地区改编)The doctors were so busy ______ they had no time to rest.(盲填)
that
24. Lucy isn’t old enough to carry the box.(改为同义句)
Lucy is ______ ________ _____ carry the box.
too
young
to
考点8 归纳询问职业的常用句型
询问职业的特殊疑问词是what,主要有三种句式:
(1)What+is/are+sb.
(2)What+does/do+sb.+do
(3)What+is/are+名词所有格/形容词性物主代词+job 如:
What is your mother =What does your mother do =What is your mother’s job 你妈妈是做什么工作的?
拓展
询问“希望将来/长大后从事什么职业”,常用句型:What are you going to be in the future/when you grow up
【活学活用】
25. —_______ is your father Does he still work as an engineer
—Yes,he has been an engineer for thirty years.(盲填)
What
26. A:_____________________________________________________________________
B:My father is a teacher.(情景交际)
What does your father do/What is your father/What’s your father’s work/job
综合能力提升
一、语篇填空
第一节
sleep,about,they,shape,great,but,worth,become,sky,forget
Everyone has a dream,and I am no exception(例外).My dream is to be an astronomer(天文学家).
When I was young,I liked going out at night and looking up at the 1.______.The night sky was dark and mysterious.2.______ here and there,some stars would appear suddenly and blink their eyes at me.I enjoyed gazing(注视) at the stars.I always tried to work out how many of 3._______ there were.But I always counted this one and then 4.________ that one.When I lost count,I buried my head in my quilt to 5._______.My dreams were about the universe(宇宙).In these dreams,there were stars of different 6.________ and sizes.
sky
But
them
forgot
sleep
shapes
Now,many years have passed,but my dream of 7.___________ an astronomer has never changed.I still love the starry(布满星星的) universe.There are more and more books 8.________ the universe in my bookcase.I always ask my science teachers whenever I come across something I don’t understand.The wonders of outer space amaze me 9._________.
This is my dream.It seems mysterious,but to me,it’s fascinating and is 10.________ my hard work.I believe I will finally realize my dream and become an astronomer.
becoming
about
greatly
worth
第二节
Dear Li Ming,
How’s it going It has been a long time since we met last time.I can’t wait to share 11.____ piece of good news with you.I will go to Henan again with my parents for vacation.
As we all know,there are lots of places of interest 12._____ visit in Henan.We climbed the Mount Yuntai two years ago.What impressed me most was the Red Rock Valley.When you get close to it,you feel like walking into fairyland.
a
to
This time we are going to visit Shaolin Temple 13.____________ lies in Dengfeng.We plan to drive to my uncle’s home first,14._________ his home isn’t far from there.Then my uncle will take us there.Now we are getting everything ready.Most importantly,I won’t forget to take my camera.I 15.______ show you many beautiful photos as soon as I come back.I’m looking forward to the coming of that day.
Yours,
Zhang Li
because
will
which/that
二、补全对话(2021·省实验四模改编)
A:How time flies!We will soon graduate from this school.
B:Yes,Mike.1.______________________________________________________________________________________________________
A:I want to enter the local senior high school.
B:Sounds great.I know you dream of becoming an artist,right
A:That’s true.I will work hard to make it come true.What about you,Nancy
What do you want to do after graduation/What is your plan for the future/Which school do you want to enter/…
B:2.______________________________________________________________.
A:That’s very good.I know you have a great talent in singing and
this kind of school can improve your singing skills.By the way,
when did you begin to sing
B:3.________________________________________________________________________________________________.
A:That’s really early.I’m sure you will be a great singer.
I began to learn singing at the age of five/when I was five years old/I began to sing when I was five/…
I want to go to a music school/I want to enter a singing school/…
B:But my parents don’t agree.
A:Why?
B:4.____________________________________.They think it is a good job.But it’s not easy to be a doctor.What should I do
A:5.___________________________________________________________________________________________
B:Sounds good.Thanks a lot.
Because they want me to be a doctor
Why not communicate with your parents/How about communicating with your parents/…
高频话题写作点拨
话题4 计划愿望类
话题分析
此话题包括假期计划、活动计划、人生目标等。结合全国真题可知,与“计划愿望”类话题相关的书面表达可能涉及以下命题角度:
1.旅游度假、走亲访友、学校郊游、周末活动、课外活动、学校运动会等活动的计划与安排;
2.职业规划以及实现人生目标的具体措施等。
素材集锦
【常用短语】
1.come true变为现实,成为事实
2.dream of doing sth.梦想做某事
3.enjoy oneself/have fun过得愉快
4.feel like doing想要做某事
5.get ready for为……做准备
6.go on a trip去旅行
7.go sightseeing去观光
8.grow up长大成人,成长
9.hold on to one’s dream坚持自己的梦想
10.in the future今后
11.make up one’s mind to do sth.下决心做某事
12.plan to do sth.计划做某事
13.pay a visit to参观
【常用句型】
开头句
计划类
1.I am going to some places of interest that can open up my eyes.我要去一些能让我大开眼界的名胜古迹。
2.I think it fun to take a winter vacation in…我认为在……度过寒假很有趣。
3.The summer holiday is on the way.Here are my plans for the long holiday.暑假就要到了。以下是我的长假计划。
愿望类
1.Everybody has his dream and so do I.My dream is to work as a doctor.每个人都有自己的梦想,我也是。我的梦想是当一名医生。
2.Life is full of challenges and hopes.That’s why everyone longs for the future.生活充满了挑战和希望。这就是为什么每个人都渴望未来。
中间句
计划类
1.By traveling,we can enjoy the beautiful scenery and relax ourselves.通过旅行,我们可以欣赏美丽的风景,放松自己。
2.Our school sports meeting will last for three days from Thursday to Saturday.我们学校的运动会从星期四到星期六将持续三天。
3.There are many kinds of activities for us to take part in.我们有很多种活动可以参加。
4.From now on,I will study harder and harder.从现在开始,我学习会越来越努力。
愿望类
1.I will study hard to get more knowledge to achieve my dream.我会努力学习以获得更多的知识来实现我的梦想。
2.If I can start work as a(n)…,I would like to…如果我能作为一个……开始工作,我想……
结尾句
1.All of us are looking forward to its coming.我们都期待着它的到来。
2.As long as we work hard,we will realize our dreams.只要我们努力,我们就会实现我们的梦想。
3.I’m sure I’ll have an interesting and meaningful holiday.我相信我会度过一个有趣而有意义的假期。
4.If I stick to my dream,I’m sure I will make it come true.如果我坚持我的梦想,我相信我会使它成真。
俗语谚语
1.Well begun is half done.好的开端是成功的一半。
2.Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.世上无难事,只怕有心人。
3.Rome was not built in a day.伟业非一日之功。
4.No pains,no gains.不劳则无获。
5.One minute on the stage needs ten years’ practice off stage.台上一分钟,台下十年功。
典型例题
(2021·丽水改编)
外教Steve爱好武术,喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据下面的要点,写一封邮件,邀请他到你家过周末。
要点:1.你计划周末做什么(打篮球,包饺子,写毛笔字);
2.做这些活动的原因及感受。
要求:1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Steve,
I’m Li Hua.I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese
culture before going back.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
2.审人称:介绍两个人周末要做的事情,以___________为主,___________为辅;描述活动带来的感受,还会涉及___________。
【审题指导】
应用文
第一人称
第二人称
第三人称
一般将来时
1.审文体:介绍周末活动,属于_________。
3.审时态:介绍周末活动计划,主要用_____________。
【写作提纲】
【范文必背】
Dear Steve,
I’m Li Hua.I hear you’d like to experience some more Chinese
culture before going back. So why not come to my home for the
weekend I have a good plan!
As both of us like sports,we are going to play basketball in the gym around my home in the morning.After that,we can practice writing with a Chinese brush together.It’s not easy but makes us peaceful.You can also
enjoy the beauty of the Chinese characters. To experience more,we’ll make jiaozi,one of the most traditional foods in China.It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself.I’m sure you will have great fun.Wait for your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.“As both of us like sports…”和“I’m sure you will have great fun.”等复合句使文章增色不少。
2.in the morning,after that,to experience more的使用,将周末计划描述得更清晰,使文章结构更严谨;
【亮点分析】
1.运用大量的固定短语如:why not do sth.,both of,practice doing,by oneself,have fun,wait for等;
写作练兵
【句子仿写】
1. As both of us like sports,we are going to play basketball in the
gym around my home in the morning.
仿写:我们将在8点前在校门口集合,乘公共汽车去那里。
________________________________________________________________________
We are going to meet at the school gate before 8 o’clock,and go there by bus.
2. It’s not easy but makes us peaceful.
仿写:我相信风景会让你放松的。
__________________________________________
I’m sure the scenery will make you relaxed.
3. You can also enjoy the beauty of the Chinese characters.
仿写:我们将爬山并欣赏大自然的美。
________________________________________________________
We’ll climb up the hills and enjoy the beauty of the nature.
4. To experience more,we’ll make jiaozi…
仿写:午饭后,我们会去当地的农场摘甜樱桃(cherries)。
________________________________________________________________
After lunch,we’ll go down to a local farm to pick the sweet cherries.
5. It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself.
仿写:在户外待一天一定很有趣。
__________________________________________________
It must be interesting to spend a day in the open air.
【书面表达】
(2021·日照改编)
你班计划本周末乘大巴车到西山(West Hills)郊游,你校交换生吉姆愿意一同前往。假如你是李华,请你用英语写一封电子邮件,将活动事宜告知吉姆。
1.时间:周日上午8点至下午4点;
2.活动内容:爬山,摘樱桃;
3.注意事项:守时;自带午餐;确保安全。
要求:1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;
2.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
高分秘籍:1.运用高分短语keep away from,remember to do sth.,in the open air等;
2.运用高分句型It must be+adj.+to do sth.
Dear Jim,
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are going on a trip to the West Hills this Sunday. Here is some information about the trip.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
We are going to meet at the school gate before 8 o’clock,and go there by bus.We’ll climb up the hills and enjoy the beauty of the nature.I’m sure the scenery will make you relaxed. You must be careful and keep away from any danger. Please remember to bring your lunch.After lunch, we’ll go down to a local farm to pick the sweet cherries before we go back home at 4:00 p.m.
It must be interesting to spend a day in the open air. Have a nice trip!