Module 2 Traffic Jam Writing PPT课件（29张ppt）

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Module 2
Module 2
Traffic Jam
To write a passage about traffic problems individually
Four (too many cars; terrible air; buses stuck; accidents with cyclists).
Read the passage on page 18 and answer the questions.
1. How many problems does the writer
talk about
2. What are the causes of the problems
Two (close the city center; to all traffic except buses and bikes; build car parks outside the town.)
The town is old, and the streets are narrow.
3. How many solutions does the writer
find
4. Who are they in They should close the city center
The first part talks about problems; the second about solutions.
The local government/city council.
5. Why does the writer divide the passage
into two parts
短文改错。
There are too much cars in our town. As a
result there are lots of traffic jams, and the air
we breath is terrible. The town is old and the
streets are narrow, there is no room for bus
lanes. This means that buses get stick in the
traffic jams, too.
many
breathe
so
stuck
There are also lots of accident with cyclists.
There’s a simple solution on these problems.
They should close the city centre to all traffic
besides buses and bikes, and building large
car parks outside the town. Motorists could take
a bus into the city centre and arrive to work or
the shops relaxing and in a good mood.
accidents
to
build
except
at
relaxed
Write a similar passage about your town. Use ideas from Listening and speaking activities 3 and 4.
如何写解决问题型议论文
某英文报正开展主题为“如何解决交通拥堵”的征文活动，你有意参加。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文并投稿。要点包括：
1. 分析原因；
2. 提出解决措施。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
一、审题定调
本写作要求考生就如何解决交通拥堵的问题进行分析并提出解决措施，属于解决问题型议论文。写作时要注意内容的科学性、结构的条理性和语言的准确性。时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可分为三部分：
第一部分：点明需解决的问题：交通拥堵日益严重。
第二部分：分析造成此问题的原因：车量增加、乱停车、人们不遵守交通规则等。
第三部分：提出建议或解决方案：提倡绿色出行、增加停车位、教育市民遵守交通规则等。
普通表达 高级表达
... are becoming more and more serious in ... And it has caught the public’s attention. ... are becoming increasingly serious in ..., which has become a growing concern (关心) for the public.
三、组织语言
第一部分：点明需解决的问题。
普通表达 高级表达
·There are some reasons for this problem. ·The number of private cars is increasing, making roads more and more crowded. ·Some factors (因素) contribute to this problem.
·An increasing number of private cars is the main cause of the crowded roads.
· Limited parking areas lead to illegal car parking, which makes it difficult for traffic to flow smoothly.
第二部分：分析造成此问题的原因。
普通表达 高级表达
· There are not enough parking areas, and some drivers park their cars anywhere they want, which makes it difficult for others to get through. ·Some people don’t follow traffic rules and this makes the problem worse. ·People's lack of
(缺乏) awareness
(意识) of obeying
(遵守) traffic rules makes the situation much worse.
普通表达 高级表达
·To solve the problem, there is much to be done. ·People should drive less and use public transport more. ·The government needs to build more car parks. ·To solve the problem, the following suggestions might work.
·People should use alternative means of transportation, rather than just driving cars.
·More car parks should be constructed.
第三部分：提出建议或解决方案。
普通表达 高级表达
··People should be educated to follow traffic rules. ·People's awareness of obeying traffic rules must be raised.
Traffic jams are becoming increasingly serious in our city, which has become a growing concern for the public.
Some factors contribute to this problem. First, an increasing number of private cars is the main cause of the crowded roads. Second, limited parking areas lead to illegal car parking, which makes it difficult for traffic to flow smoothly.
Third, people's lack of awareness of obeying traffic rules makes the situation much worse.
To solve the problem, the following suggestions might work. People should use alternative means of transportation, rather than just driving cars. And more car parks should be constructed. Most importantly, people's awareness of obeying traffic rules must be raised.
最近，你班同学围绕“How to solve the problem of heavy traffic”这一话题进行了激烈的讨论，请将讨论结果写成一篇英语短文。要点如下：
交通拥堵的原因：人多、车多、人们遵守交通规则的意识淡薄。
How to solve the problem of heavy traffic
Almost every city has a big traffic problem. Today, our class have a debate about how to solve it. _______________________________
______________________________________
第一步：审题构思很关键
一、审题
1．确定体裁：本文为议论文；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；
3．确定时态：主要以一般现在时为主。
二、构思
第一段：简要提出目前多数城市出现交通拥挤这一现象，并展开讨论。
第二段：分析出现交通拥堵的原因。
第三段：针对这一现象提出合理化建议。
第二步：核心词汇
1．have a debate about　就……展开讨论
2．traffic jam 交通阻塞
3．to start with 首先
4．lead to 导致
5．the last but not least 最后同样重要的是
6．respect/obey traffic rules 遵守交通规则
7．deal with 处理，对付
8．insist on 建议
9．pedestrian 行人；步行者
第三步：由词扩句雏形现
1. 首先，人多导致了交通拥堵。(简单句)
To start with, a vast population leads to heavy traffic.
2. 最后一个原因是一些人没有意识到遵守交通规则的重要性。(that引导表语从句)
The last but not least reason is that some people don't realize the importance of respecting traffic rules.
3. 为了解决这个问题，一些学生建议建设更多宽阔的道路。(不定式作目的状语；suggest)
To deal with this problem, some students suggest that we (should) build more wide roads.
4. 有人认为我们应该多步行或多骑自行车。(宾语从句)
Someone else thinks we should walk and ride the bike more.
5. 减少私家车的使用。(private cars)
We should drive private cars less.
6. 行人应该遵守交通规则。(obey)
Pedestrians should obey traffic rules.
7. 行人在红灯时不要乱穿马路。(at a red light)
Pedestrians shouldn't cross the road at a red light.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1. 用instead of合并句4和句5
Someone else thinks we should walk or ride the bike more instead of driving private cars.
2. 用and并列句合并句6和句7
Pedestrians should obey traffic rules and not cross the road at a red light.
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇