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2022年春牛津译林版英语
六年级下册
Being a good student
Project1
(Period 2)
A good student
at school
on the road
at home
in other public places
Brainstorm
What makes a good student
should/shouldn't______.
We should do well at school .
Topic sentence （主旨句）
Tip:写作时，可以围绕中心句进行陈述。
Details（细节）
Describe
the
pictures
We must listen to the teachers carefully in class.
We mustn’t
litter in our school.
We should study hard at
school.
____________________________.
…
We should do well at home.
Give advice
We should put
our things in order and keep our rooms clean
and tidy.
We shouldn't waste food.
(We should save food.)
Tip: 我们可以用不同的语言表达相同的意思，
使文章更有质感。
__________
Rule 1
Rule 2
Rule 3
Rules on the road
First, we must look for a zebra crossing. Then, we must look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man.
We can wait on the pavement and look out for cars and bikes. We must first look left, then right and then left again. We can also cross the road with other people.
We must not run or play on the road because there are many cars and bikes.
Tip: 在写作时要注意句子与句子之间、段落与段落
之间的逻辑顺序，恰当使用关联词。
How can we cross the road safely
Sometimes, there is no zebra crossing.
Rules on the road
Rule 4
Rule 6
Rule 7
Rule 5
Tip: 没有逻辑关系的并列句，写作时可不考虑顺序。
What other traffic rules do you know
What other public places do you know
Rules in other
public places
We should do well in other public places.
Topic sentence（主旨句）：
We should/shouldn’t/can/can’t
/must/mustn’t…in the ….
We must keep quiet and put books in order in the library.
We shouldn’t take photos in the museum.
We mustn’t talk loudly or smoke in the cinema.
We mustn’t climb trees or pick flowers in the park.
We should do well at home. We should get up early and never go to bed late. We should put our things in order and keep our rooms clean and tidy.
We should do well at school. We must listen to the teachers carefully in class. We mustn’t litter in our school.
We should do well on the road. When we cross the road, first, we must look for a zebra crossing. Then, we must look at the traffic lights and wait for the green man.
We should do well in other public places. We must keep quiet in the library. We mustn’t climb trees or pick flowers in the park.
How to be a good student
To be a good studet, what should we do
Let's try our best to be a good student.
Main body主要内容
Head开头
Title标题
Ending结尾
7分钟
要求：请写一篇关于How to be a good student 的文章。可从两方面或者多方面进行陈述。至少60词。
Let’s write!
Checklist
1 紧扣主题,结构完整。
2 时态得当,句子通顺。
3 拼写正确,标点准确。
4 书写端正,布局美观。
5 句式丰富,擅用连词。
得分 _____
要求：请写一篇关于How to be a good student 的文章。可从两方面或者多方面进行陈述。至少60词。
Check by yourselves
Checklist
1 紧扣主题,结构完整。
2 时态得当,句子通顺。
3 拼写正确,标点准确。
4 书写端正,布局美观。
5 句式丰富,擅用连词。
得分 _____
删除：
调位：
替换：
增补：
好句：
You can use these signs to help you.
Exchange and share
1. Read your partner’s article and circle the mistakes.
2. Underline the sentences that you like, and draw stars behind it.
3. Tick the stars.
How to write a complete composition
1.Title
2.Head
3.Main body
4.Ending
structure结构
Sum up
Homework
1. Revise your writing;
2. Make a poster according to your writing.
