Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time!单元书面表达训练

人教版新目标英语八年级上册第10单元书面表达训练
Unit 10 If you come to the party ,you’ll have a great time.
本单元是人教版新目标八年级上册第10单元，主要语法为if引导的条件状语从句。
课本上涉及到的写作训练在教材79页3a、3b和3c.我们结合教材来讲一讲怎么突破这个写作。
3a Talk to someone you know. Find out his/her three biggest worries. Try to think of some solutions to the problem and write them down.
Problems Possible solutions
首先，填写表格，做好写作前的准备。要让书面表达顺利进行，就要选取我们容易上手的语言点和话题：当前学生们的常见问题有：1、肥胖 2、玩手机导致睡眠不足 3、学习的压力（存在弱科且不知所措）。然后，填写解决措施：1、健康饮食、多锻炼 2、合理规划时间，早睡早起 3、多花时间看书学习，遇到问题向老师寻求帮助
Problems Possible solutions
too heavy eat less junk food and more vegetables, do more exercise
Don’t have enough time to have a good sleep use the mobile phone correctly , use it within one hour a day during weekdays
not good at English Spend more time reading books , try to solve the problems by asking the teachers for help
3b Write about your friend’s first problem and possible solutions.
My friends _________has a problem.
He/She __________________________
_________________________________.
I think he/she should _______________
_________________________________.
If he/she _________________________
_________________________________.
He/she will _______________________,
_________________________________.
写作指导：分析3b中的作文提纲，可以看出，我们的写作要从三个方面的内容入手：
首先，写清楚朋友的名字及其现在存在的问题或困难。（注意：1、可以给朋友取一个英文名字。 2、注意一般现在时中主谓一致，主语是第三人称单数He/She，谓语动词就要用相应的第三人称单数与之对应。）
然后，写出自己给他的建议。并用if从句来进一步说明自己建议将会起到的作用。（注意：在提出建议的时候，因为前面是用的情态动词should来引导的，动词要用原形。另外，关于if句型也要给学生强调：它表示的是“如果（条件）。。。就会（出现。。。的结果）”，这个条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时态度，从句用一般现在时。）
最后，复读一遍作文来检查有没有错误。
书面表达范文：
My friend Jenny has a problem. She is too heavy. I think she should eat less junk food and eat more vegetables and fruit. I think she also should get more exercise , such as running after getting up and playing basketball after school. If she eats more vegetables and fruit, she will be healthier and healthier. If she gets more exercise, she’ll be thinner and thinner soon. I hope she can keep healthy.
接下来，按照书上3c的要求，完成书面表达。
My friend has two other problems. （承上启下：开始叙述朋友存在的另外两个问题）
She doesn’t have enough time to have a good sleep. She likes playing games and she uses her mobile phones too much . After school , when she comes back from school , she always spends her time using the mobile phone to play games or chat with her friends . I think she should use the mobile phone correctly. She should use it within one hour a day during weekdays so that she can go to bed early and get up early. If she does like this , she will have more time to sleep and have a good rest.
写作分析：
朋友没有足够的时间睡觉，原因的是沉迷手机。写作的时候就要一针见血的指出这个问题。在手机上花的时间多，最典型的表现就是放学一回到家里就玩手机（玩游戏、和朋友聊天）。接下来再给她提建议：应该正确使用手机（时间上限制），然后早睡早起，睡眠不足的问题就解决了。
Besides , Jenny has some problems with her subjects. She is not good at English and doesn’t what to do. In fact , English will be not difficult if she puts more time on it. She should spend more time reading books . And she can try to solve the problems by asking the teachers for help.
写作分析：一开头，用一个besides（除此之外还有），引出要表达的内容。其中注意条件状语从句English will be not difficult if she puts more time on it.的正确运用。另外，spend 接动词，要用动词的ing形式。