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2022 外研版 中考写作专题
安全救护
【常用表达】
安全守则
1. safety 2. danger 3. rule
4. notice 5. attention 6. careful
7. cheat 骗取 8. disturb 打扰 9. steal 偷
10. warn警告 11. follow 遵守 12. break 破坏
意外与急救
accident 2. sudden 3. burn
4. typhoon 5. dead 6. happen
7. injure 8. save 9. wound
10. disaster
自我保护
1. protect 2. brave 3. drug 4. hero
5. prevent 6. breath 7. injure 8. save
9. wound 10. disaster
重点短语
1. follow the rules 遵守规则 2. break the rules 破坏规则
3. traffic rules 交通规则 4. escape from… 从……逃出来
5. by oneself 独自；某人自己 6. go swimming 去游泳
7. learn from 向……学习 8. in danger 处在困境中
9. look out当心 10. shout to 朝……大喊大叫
11. pay attention to 注意
12. in a sudden 突然
13. by accident 意外地
14. prevent… from… 阻止……发生
15. happen to 发生
重点句型
1. It’s dangerous to go swimming only by yourself.
你自己独自去游泳是危险的。
2. Everyone should follow the traffic rules.
人人都要遵守交通规则。
3. Ask/ Shout for help, when you are in danger.
当你身处危险中，一定要大声呼救。
4. We should learn from the brave hero.
我们应该向这位勇敢的英雄学习。
5. You have to know how to escape from the fire.
你必须学会如何从火灾中逃生。
【实例讲解】
作为中学生，我们应该时时规范自身行为，保护个人安全。假如你校英文网站就“How do we protect ourselves ”这一话题发帖，征集建议。请你根据以下提示写一篇短文进行跟帖回复。
提示：1. 遵守校规校纪，防止意外发生；
2. 慎重交友，特别是网上交友更要谨慎；
3. 不和陌生人说话；
4. 晚上不要独自一人在外逗留。
写作要求：
1. 内容须包括所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 句子连贯，语意通顺，书写规范；
3. 词数：不少于100。
【分析】
思路点拨
首先审题，判断用记叙文文体，确定写作的基本时态为一般现在时。
2. 根据内容提示，列出要点提纲：
遵守校规校纪，防止意外发生；
慎重交友，特别是网上交友更要谨慎；
不和陌生人说话；
晚上不要独自一人在外逗留。
【分析】
写作模板
开头导入：As middle school students, it's very important for us to protect ourselves in our daily life. But how do we protect ourselves Here's my advice.
正文分述：
可以这样开始：First, don’t take…They might…
要点二：Secondly, there are…
要点三：Thirdly, we should…
要点四：At last, we must…Remember to…
结尾呼吁大家学会保护自己：It’s important for us to…Let’s…
How do we protect ourselves
As middle school students, it's very important for us to protect ourselves in our daily life. But how do we protect ourselves Here's my advice.
First, we must follow the school rules. For example, we mustn't run after one another in the narrow hallway and crowd together or push others. Second, we should be careful about making friends, especially on the Internet. We should guard our personal information.
Third, we mustn't talk with strangers who offer us something and mustn't accept gifts from strangers. Fourth, we shouldn't walk late at night all by ourselves. When we're in danger outside, we should call the police or people who are passing by for help.
In a word, if we follow these rules and take care of ourselves, we will grow up safely and healthily.
https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php2020-2021中考真题
安全救护
(2021吉林)
在日常生活中，人们会遇到交友、饮食、交通或防疫等安全问题。请以“Self Protection”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 结合生活实际，谈谈自我保护的重要性。
2. 列举生活中的安全问题（至少两个方面），并分别提出合理化建议。
3. 发出自我保护的号召。
写作要求：
1. 语言流畅，层次清晰，可以适当发挥。
2. 词数80-100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；书写规范，卷面整洁。
3. 文中不能出现考生本人的学校名称和姓名。
Self Protection
These days, people pay more attention to safety problems.___________________
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In short, self protection is important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!
【参考范文】
写作提示：
1. 体裁：说明文。
2. 人称：以第一人称为主。
3. 时态：一般现在时。
4. 要点：1）自我保护的重要性；
2）列举生活中的安全问题，并给出建议；
3）号召人们学会自我保护。
Self Protection
These days, people pay more attention to safety problems. However, some of them know little about how to solve safety problems. Here are some suggestions.
Firstly, we should follow the traffic rules, or it may cause accidents. We mustn’t cross the road if the traffic light is red. We should wait until the light turns green. What’s more, be careful of making friends online. Strangers online may do something bad to us so we’d better not tell personal information to them. Always think twice before meeting a net friend. As long as we follow these suggestions, we are sure to live happily.
In short, self protection is very important to us. Wish everyone a safe life!
(2021黑龙江龙东)
话题作文：同学们都知道安全的重要性，在生活中危险无处不在，你知道如何保护自己的安全吗 请结合自己的实际生活，谈谈看法。
提示：1. 家庭安全：2. 校园安全：3. 户外安全……
As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life... (文章开头已给出， 不计入总词数。)
【参考范文】
As we all know, danger is everywhere in our life. Keeping safe is important to all of us. How can we keep ourselves safe Here is some advice.
First, we should eat safely and not eat unhealthy food. Don't play with fire at home. You may hurt yourself. Second, we should walk in order in the hallways. Don't fight with your classmates. Try to get on well with each other. Finally, we must follow the traffic rule. It's dangerous to play on roads. Also, summer is coming, we mustn't swim in the river. It is safe to swim in the swimming pool.
Remember: Safety comes first.
(2020四川遂宁)
2020年初，新冠肺炎疫情爆发，给我们的日常生活造成了很多的麻烦，我们应该怎样做才能远离这种疾病呢？请以此为话题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示：
1.勤洗手，勤开窗，保持空气流通
2.每天测体温，勤锻炼，保持健康的饮食习惯
3.少乘坐公交车，少去人多的地方
4.在公共场合戴口罩（mask）,尽量避免面对面交谈
5.如发烧，咳嗽等，不必恐慌，立即就医。
注意： 1. 文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2. 文章必须包含所给要点提示,要求语句通顺,行文连贯
3. 不可逐词翻译,应有独自的见解并适当发挥。
4. 文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
As the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away from it, you need to do the following things.
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【参考范文】
As the beginning of the year 2020, COVID-19 broke out and caused much trouble for our daily life. Many people felt scared. In order to stay away from it, you need to do the following things.
First, wash your hands frequently with soap or hand sanitizer and running water, and wipe hands with disposable tissue or clean towel. Regularly open windows and ventilate at home. Second, take your temperature every day, exercise regularly, and keep a healthy diet to improve physical fitness. Third, try not to go out. If you have to, take fewer buses and go to less crowded places. Fourth, wear a mask in public and try to avoid face-to-face conversation. Fifth. Don’t be panic if you have a fever or cough and so on, seek medical advice in time and wear medical masks.
We must protect ourselves. In this way, we are not only responsible for ourselves but also for others, so as to reduce the spread of the epidemic.
(2020·贵州黔东南)
安全对于每个人来说都很重要。作为中学生，我们可能遇到哪些安全问题 该怎样处理呢 校团委决定组织一次安全教育主题班会，请根据以下要点提示， 以How to Keep Safe为题写一篇英文发言稿。
中学生安全 问题及对策 一、交通安全：遵守交通规则。
二、食品安全：注意饮食安全。
三、活动安全：上下楼梯靠右行；体育锻炼要小心；不允许私自下河游泳。
四、交友安全：注意网络交友安全。
遇险建议 遇到危险要保持冷静，保证自身安全，然后及时报警或向家长、老师求助。
写作要求：
1. 结构完整，要点齐全，可适当发挥；
2. 表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；
3. 文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息；
4. 词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
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In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
【参考范文】
How to Keep Safe
Hello, everyone. Safety is very important for us. We should learn to protect ourselves. Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
Firstly, we must follow the traffic rules. Secondly, we should pay attention to the food safety. Be sure not to eat too much junk food. Thirdly, when we go upstairs or downstairs, we should keep to the right. Be careful while doing sports. Remember not to swim in the river alone. What's more, we'd better not make friends online. We must stay away from dangerous people around.
If we get into trouble, we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police, the teachers or parents for help.
In a word, as students, we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
