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2022 外研版 中考写作专题
环境与保护
【话题解读】
环境保护是一个热门话题。与环保相关的书面表达通常是先列举环境中出现的某一现象，然后要求考生就该现象进行描述，提出建议，阐述自己的观点。具体来讲，此话题主要会从以下四方面进行设题：(1)记叙你参加过的一次环保活动；(2)谈论保护环境的重要性；(3)对保护环境的措施和建议；(4)对环境污染的看法并提岀保护环境的措施。
【实例讲解】
随着地球上人口的不断增加，环境污染问题也变得越来越严重。假如你是某国际学校的学生会主席李风，请你根据以下现状提示和写作要求写一封英文倡议书，号召全校同学为保护环境做出自己的贡献。
现状提示:
1. 水污染和大气污染越来越严重；
2. 森林被砍伐；
3. 塑料袋(plastic bags)随处可见。
写作要求 :
1. 针对以上现状至少提出3条合理化建议；
2. 不少于80词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear schoolmates,
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Let’s try together now!
Li Feng
【任务分析】
该写作任务要求大家写的是一封倡议书的正文部分。该部分又包括两方面的内容，一是分析环境污染问题的现状，二是针对现存的问题提出对策，发出倡议。发出倡议时可能用到的句型有We should / shouldn’t ..., We’d better ..., We must ... 等。
引出话题→The pollution of the environment is more and more serious today.
分析问题→... water ... air ... trees ... plastic bags ...
提出对策、发出倡议→ ... we should protect our environment ... shouldn’t ... should ... must ...
【思路点拨】
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【常用表达】
1. 词汇
be supposed to do sth.; what’s more; last but not least; ought to; had better; think, instead of
2. 句子
It’s very important to do sth….
How important it is for us to do…
Let’s do…
We should recycle some things instead of …
【范文展示】
Dear schoolmates,
The pollution of the environment is more and more serious today. The water and air become dirty. People cut down a lot of trees. Plastic bags are everywhere.
In order to live a better life, we should protect our environment. First, we shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.
Second, we should use less paper and turn off lights in time, because this saves money and makes less pollution. Third, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them down. Fourth, we should use fewer plastic bags.
Let’s try together now!
Li Feng
https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php环境保护
2021中考真题
(2021山东泰安)第三节 写作(共1题,满分25分)
暑假将近，很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华，请根据以下图示，以“To Be a Good Traveler”为题，给校报专栏写一篇英语短文，倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”，呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥；词数:80~100；文中不得出现姓名,校名,地名等与考生本人相关的真实信息。
To Be a Good Traveler
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【参考范文】
To Be a Good Traveler
The summer holiday is coming. To make everyone have a good trip, I want to talk about how to be a good traveler. First, you should ride your bike to travel as much as possible. It’s good for the environment. Second, it’s not good to write or draw on any things in the sights. And it’s impolite to spit in public places. Third, please protect the environment. You shouldn’t pick up the flowers or walk on the grass. Fourth, you should take part in volunteer activities. What’s more, don’t waste food. You’d better eat up the food you order.
If you follow the tips above, you can become a good traveler.
(2021广西贺州)近年来、环境思化导致的问题日益凸显。假如你是某中学学生会主席李华，请你以学生会的名义向同学们发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，为保护环境尽一份力。
提示：（一）措施
1.节约水电；
2.少用塑料袋，不乱扔垃圾；
3.绿色出行，如乘公交车、骑自行车、步行上学或购物等；
（二）提出希望
要求：1.文章必须包括所给提示内容，可展开思路；适当发挥；
2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
The environmental problems are getting more and more serious nowadays. As students, we should do something to protect the environment.
First, it’s very important to save water and energy in our daily life. Don’t forget to turn off the lights when we leave the room. Second, we are supposed to reuse the plastic bags when shopping. What’s more, we shouldn’t throw rubbish everywhere. Third, we’d better walk, ride a bike or take the bus when we go out. Last but not least, we need to plant more trees and flowers to make the environment more beautiful.
How important it is for us to protect the environment! If we keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s do it together from now on.
the Students’ Union
2020中考真题
(2020广东深圳)
深圳市正在争创全国文明城市。假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席，希望同学们为“创文”做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点，代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
环境保护 ① 垃圾分类 ② 绿色出行
公益慈善 ① 志愿服务；② ……
人际交往 诚信友善；② ……
要求：1. 词数80左右 (开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)
2. 要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
4. 文章不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇：分类sort out 志愿者volunteer 贡献contribution
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China’s National Civilized City.
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All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It’s time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China’s National Civilized City.
It’s well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.
Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What’s more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations. Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We’d better avoid talking about others’ privacy if we want to show out respect.
I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.
All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It’s time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
(2020江苏扬州)
为倡导绿色环保新时尚，学校将开展以创建“绿色校园”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“Go green at school”为题，根据表格中的内容要点写一份英语演讲稿，号召全体同学行动起来，共建美好校园。
Purposes develop a green lifestyle
Actions save resources 1. save paper: reuse the textbooks; use both sides of the paper 2. save...: two examples 3. save...: two examples
reduce pollution l. take care of the trees and flowers 2. …
Hopes ...
要求： (1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括表格中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
(3) 词数：100词左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) ；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
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That’s all. Thank you!
【参考范文】
Go green at school
Hi, guys,
Isn’t it pleasant to study in an environmentally friendly school To develop a green lifestyle, we students can go green at school in smaller ways.
We can do simple things to help save resources. First of all, we should save as much paper as possible. It’s necessary to reuse the textbooks and use both sides of the paper. Second, it’s a good idea to save water. We should drink up all the water in each bottle. Let’s not keep water running when we don’t use it. What’s more, remember to turn off the lights and TVs when we leave the classrooms.
Besides, we should try our best to reduce pollution at school. It’s important for us to take care of the trees and flowers. For us, walk or ride to and from school if possible. Many hands make light work.
Boys and girls, let’s put these ideas into action from now on. I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.
That’s all. Thank you!
(2020四川达州)
近年来，全球自然灾害频发，极端天气频频出现，2020年新冠肺炎几乎在全球爆发，环境恶化给全球带来的危害正日益凸显。尽管我国政府出台了一系列环境保护方面的政策，采取了很多措施，成效也很显著，但是，我们还需要付出更多的努力。地球是人类共同的家园，时代的一粒灰，落在个人头上就是一座山，没有人能独善其身。假如你叫李华，作为达州中考的学生，应该为环境保护做出哪些贡献呢？请以“Let’s try our best to protect the environment”为题，向达州中考的学生发出倡议，呼吁大家从小事做起，尽最大的努力保护环境！
写作要点：
(1) 了解并让更多的人知道环境保护的重要性；
(2) 在日常生活中节约用水，节约能源；
(3) 为了减少空气污染，最好乘坐公交车、骑自行车或步行上学；
(4) 学会垃圾分类；少用塑料袋。
(5) 保护野生动物，不食用野生动物。
写作要求：
(1) 要点齐全并适当发挥。
(2) 全文字数不少于90词。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3) 条理清晰，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。
(4) 卷面整洁。
参考词汇：(1) reduce v. 减少 (2) sort garbage垃圾分类
(3) four categories (四类垃圾)：recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste
(4) No business, no killing. 没有买卖就没有杀害。
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do
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If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
【参考范文】
Let’s try our best to protect the environment
Dear friends,
I’m a student of Grade 9 in Dazhou. My name is Li Hua. As we know, we have only one earth. But in recent years, many disasters happened on the earth and unusual weather appeared very often. Even worse, the novel corona-virus broke out nearly all over the world this year. All these bad things were caused by the terrible environment, but the terrible environment was caused by humans. Although our government has made some policies and taken many useful measures to protect the environment in the past few years, there are still many things to do. As students in Dazhou, what should we do
First, we need to spread something unusual to protect our environment. For example, we can give talks on how important the environment is. It’s bad for our health to live in a bad environment. Second, we’re supposed to save water and energy in our daily life. Third, in order to reduce air pollution, it’s better to go to school by bus, by bike or on foot. Fourth, the garbage can be divided into four categories: recyclable, harmful, dry and wet waste. Before putting the garbage into the dustbins, we should learn how to sort it. And we can reuse bags instead of plastic bags. Last but not least, no business, no killing. It should be noted that there are never wild animals as food because they are part of the environment. It’s time for us to protect wild animals.
If we all keep doing these things, I believe the environment will be better and better. Let’s try our best!
A student worrying about the environment
(2020甘肃天水)
“绿水青山就是金山银山。” 请你结合自己平时保护环境的一些做法，以“How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful”为题， 写一篇英语短文。
要点：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总次数）；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇：environment ; pollution; reduce ; sort the rubbish(垃圾分类)
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures.
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【参考范文】
How to Make Our Hometown More Beautiful
The clean water and green mountains are our treasures. But the environment pollution is a bit serious these days. In order to make our hometown more beautiful, we students should do something to protect the environment.
First we should turn off the lights to save electricity when we leave the room. Second, let’s walk or ride a bike to school. It is not only good for the environment but also good for our health. Third, we should also advise our parents to take the bus to work instead of driving and use reusable bags when shopping. We should stop using plastic bags to reduce pollution. Fourth but not last, we should try to sort the rubbish and throw it into the dustbin every day.
How important for us to protect the environment! Only if we know what to do in our daily life can we make a difference.
