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2022 外研版 中考写作专题
课 余 生 活
【话题解读】
课余生活的话题范围比较广泛，除家庭作业外，还有一些娱乐活动，如看电视、散步、参加旅游、探亲访友等活动的描述和讨论，以及日常活动中的一些收获、困惑及感受。
介绍课余生活的记叙文以叙述事件的发生、发展、经过和结果为重点。在写作时要注意以下几点：
1. 抓住记叙文的六要素：when, where, who, what, why, how。
通常先要交代清楚时间、地点和人物，然后进一步叙述事
件的起因、发展和结果。
2. 以记叙为主，可适当发表议论或抒情。
3. 叙述的人称可以是第一人称，也可以是第三人称。
4. 恰当使用时态。叙述已经发生了的事情时，多用一般过去
时；介绍目前的状况时则多用一般现在时。
5. 一般按照事情的发展及时间的先后顺序进行叙述，但有时
也可采用倒叙、插叙等。
【常用表达】
1. 词汇
时间：the end of the term, a long time ago, before he
came home
地点：at the end of the street, at the foot of the mountain,
in the middle of the park
感受：excited, tired, unbelievable, nervous, enjoyable,
surprised
因果：as, because, since, so, for, because of, as a result
view 风景，视野 tour旅行，观光
board 上/ 船、飞机等 scenery风景
hiking 远足 souvenir 纪念品
tourist attractions 旅游景点 places of interest 名胜
song 歌曲 tune 曲调
instrument 乐器 play the guitar 弹吉他
see musicals 看音乐剧 folk music 民族音乐
rock music 摇滚音乐 soap opera 肥皂剧
science fiction film 科幻片 join clubs 加入俱乐部
go sightseeing 观光 yoga 瑜伽
to offer help 提供帮助
popular (pop) music 流行音乐 to kill time 消磨时间
have dances on weekends 参加周末舞会
to keep healthy/ fit 保持健康
to meet the demand/ need 符合需要
to relax oneself 放松身心
to strengthen/ build up the body 锻炼身体
to lack recreations 缺乏休闲活动
to follow the fashion/ trend 跟随潮流
to have a chat with 聊天
go for an outing/a picnic 去郊游/ 野餐
to have proper diet 合理的饮食
to do some good deeds 做好事
to insist on doing sth. 坚持要做某事
to take regular exercise 有规律的运动
to take measures/ action 采取措施（行动）
a busy/ low season for tourism 旅游旺/ 淡季
to raise the standard of living 提升生活水平
to develop/get into the habit of… 养成……习惯
to appreciate the scenery of nature 欣赏大自然的风景
2. 句子
★ Through this activity, I learned much about honesty.
★ I’ll never forget the days that we spent in the summer
camp.
★ They had an unusual experience during their visit to
New York.
★ I was so excited that I couldn’t fall asleep on the night
before I started.
★ Although we were very tired, we learned what
we couldn’t learn in school.
★ As soon as I arrived home, I showed the pictures
I took in Nanjing to my parents.
【实战演练 1】
假如你是王宁，你的英国笔友Linda想了解你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示，给Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。
内容提示：
（1）上周六上午，你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘
观光园；
（2）听采摘观光园主人讲述自已的人生故事：16岁时一场车
祸夺去了她的双腿，在政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采
摘观光园，每年收入近百万元，吸引大量的客；
（3）和采摘观光园主人合影，在采摘观光园餐馆就餐；
（4）你的感受。
要求：
（1）语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；
（2）字数：不少于100词；开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：
采摘观光园 Picking and Sightseeing Garden
草莓 strawberry
吸引 attract
游客 tourist
【参考范文】
Dear Linda,
Thanks for your last email.
Last Saturday morning, I went to a strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents. We went there by bike because it was not far from my home. We listened to the story of the owner of the Packing and Sightseeing Garden. At the age of 16, she lost both of her legs because of a car accident. With the help of the government and her family, she set up the Picking and Sightseeing Garden.
The annual income is close to one million yuan and it attracts lots of tourists.
We also took photos with the owner and had a big lunch at the Picking and Sightseeing Garden. It was a meaningful weekend and I had a woderful time with my family.
Yours,
Wang Ning
【实战演练 2】
假如你是Wendy，春天来了，你准备邀请Millie去西太湖（West Taihu Lake）野餐，请根据以下提示给Millie写一封邀请信。内容必须包括以下要点：
（1）春天来了，鸟语花香，都认为西太湖是野餐的好地方；
（2）和朋友们周日上午8点在校门口集合，准备乘公交车前
往，大约半个小时就到了；
（3）带一些食物、水、小吃等；
（4）在西太湖还可以划船、放风筝、环湖骑行和玩游戏。
相信会过得愉快的。
要求：
（1）内容完整，可适当发挥；
（2）表达清楚，意思连贯、符合逻辑；不少于80词。
【参考范文】
A Letter to Millie
Dear Millie,
We are going to have a picnic at West Taihu Lake this Sunday. And I want to invite you to come with us.
We are going to get together at the school gate at 8 o’clock on Sunday morning. We’ll take a bus there. And it will take us about half an hour. Please bring some food, water, and snacks with you.
We can share our food with each other at the picnic. In the morning, we can go boating, fly a kite or ride around the lake.
And in the afternoon, we can play games. I believe we can have time there.
Would you like to come with us
https://www.21cnjy.com/help/help_extract.php2021中考真题
课余生活
(2021浙江嘉兴)
校学生会为即将到来的“健康周”活动策划了两个项目。假设你是学生会成员，请写一篇英语短文，在校英语报上介绍其中一个项目的活动内容及其益处。要点提示如下：
Projects A School Trip Day A Sports Day
Activities ● fly kites ● have a picnic ● … ● have ball games ● play tug-of-war(拔河) ● …
Benefits(益处) ● develop friendship ● feel relaxed ●… ● develop friendship ● keep fit ●…
注意:
(1)短文必须包含表中你所选项目的所有信息，并适当发挥。
(2)文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
(3)词数:80~100。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
During the Health Week, we will have ______________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文1】
During the Health Week, we will have a School Trip Day on Friday. Here is the plan for the day. We will start our trip by walking to Lakeside Park. In the morning, there is going to be a kite-flying competition. At noon, we will have a picnic near a small lake there. After lunch, we will go boating on the lake. We can feel a sense of peace in mind while we are rowing on the blue water.
By being part of these activities, we will not only develop friendship with our classmates, but also relax ourselves and be free from pressure of study.
【参考范文2】
During the Health Week, we will have a Sports Day to make our school life more colorful.
On that day, there will be different sports. In the morning, we will play ball games. Everyone can go in for their favorite ones. In the afternoon, there will be a game that you can never miss—playing tug-of-war. It is really a good chance to make us better understand the meaning of teamwork. After that, there will be a kung fu lesson, which can help us learn to keep fit.
All these sports will do us good. Not only can they make us feel relaxed but also develop friendship.
(2021陕西)
人们常说∶"服务他人, 快乐自己。"你准备利用即将到来的暑假去社区做一些服务工作。请根据以下表格提示内容, 给你们学校的英文报写一篇短文, 介绍你的计划。
Places Activities
Community center help the old, sing songs, tell stories, . .
Community hospital(s) handout the leaflets(宣传册) on COVID-19, …
Community park(s) pick up rubbish, water flowers, . .
. . . . .
要求∶
1. 参考表格提示内容, 可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等) ;
4. 词数∶不少于70 词。(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计入总词数。)
As we all know, "Serving others can bring us happiness.” Summer holiday is coming, I’ll ___________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm sure I'll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
【参考范文】
As we all know, "Serving others can bring us happiness. " Summer holiday is coming. I’ll do some service in my community to make it better. First, I'll go to our community center to help and cheer up the old people. For example, I can sing songs or tell them some interesting stories. Second, I'm going to hand out the leaflets on COVID-19 at our community hospital or other places. Next, I’m also planning to pick up and sort rubbish with my friends in our community park. What’s more, 'l help the kids with their lessons and look after them as well.
I'm sure I'll have a meaningful holiday this summer.
(2021福建)
假定你是学校英语报小记者李华，上周学校开展了“English Day”活动， 请你根据下面的海报和学生参加活动的数据写一篇报道， 介绍活动情况以及同学们的感受。词数 80 左右。
注意事项：
1．必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出， 不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success._____________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Our School English Day
Our school English Day was a great success. It took place in the school hall from 2:00 pm. to 4:30 p. m. on June 18th.
Three activities were included. Half of us students took part in the singing competition. 30% of us went to the cooking show. And the rest of us enjoyed ourselves in the story telling.
We spoke highly of the English Day. We learnt a lot through practice. It also made us come to realize the importance of teamwork. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.
(2021黑龙江龙东)
图示作文：仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。
提示词：volunteer; the old people's home
要求：1. 话题作文和图示作文任选其一。
2. 词数：80-100之间。
3. 字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Last Sunday, my classmates and I went to the old people's home by bus. We went there to do volunteer work. The old people there gave us a warm welcome. They were very glad to see us.
Then we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for them. After that, we talked with them and they told us stories. Some students sang and others danced. All the old people were very happy. When it was time for us to leave, they were thankful for our kindness.
Although we felt tired, it was an unforgettable experience. I think we should care for the old people and respect them.
(2021辽宁鞍山)
根据有关部门调查，我国部分青少年每天劳动时间过少。假如你是李华，请根据表格的内容提示，说一说你平时参加劳动的情况，谈一谈对养成良好劳动习惯的看法。
提示词: 社区志愿者服务community voluntary services; 生活技能life skill;
责任感a sense of responsibility
要求: 1.不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息;
2.根据中文和英文提示，可以适当发挥;
3.内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑、书写整齐;
4.词数: 80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
李华参加劳动的情况 养成良好劳动习惯的重要性
在校 打扫教室…… 提高基本的生活技能 学会照顾自己 拥有责任感
在家 清洗餐具，洗衣服，做饭……
社区 做社区志愿者服务, 如去养老院看望老人……
I'm Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It's good for my development.
At school, _______________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I’m Li Hua. As a teenager, I am supposed to form good working habits. It’s good for my development.
At school, I can clean the classroom and dining room, pick up the litter and water the flowers. Such activities can make our school more beautiful. At home, I can help my mum wash the dishes, wash the clothes, cook meals and take out rubbish after dinner. What’s more in the neighbourhood, I often do some community voluntary services, such as visiting the homeless old people in the nursing home, helping some neighbours clean their flats, look after their babies, or doing shopping for some old people.
I’ve learned a lot from doing these activities. It helps me to develop my basic life skills and learn how to take care of myself in my daily life, so I can live better in the future. More importantly, I’ve learned to take a sense of responsibility in the family, even the whole society. Love labor and start from me.
(2021内蒙古呼和浩特、包头)
假定你是李华, 下周你校将组织去郊外游玩一天。你班英国交换生Alan发来如下邮件。请给Alan回复一封电子邮件, 邮件需包括箭头所指内容。
注意：1. 词数90左右, 开头和结尾己经写好, 不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Alan,
That's great! I'm so happy you're able to come!___________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
See you then!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Alan,
That's great! I'm so happy you're able to come! I know we'll have a good time.
I'd rather try learning from farmers than do some walking, because I am interested in milking a cow and finding out when to pick fruits or vegetables they planted. It's more challenging. Besides, bathed in sunshine and fresh air, we will relax ourselves.
Why don't we take some sandwiches I'll make some for us. Could you bring some bottles of water Besides, don't forget to wear clothes that are more suitable for sport.
Let's meet this weekend for details. We can meet at the coffee shop next to our school.
See you then!
Yours
Li Hua
