2021中考真题
体育锻炼
(2021浙江丽水中考) 76. 外教Steve爱好武术,喜欢运动。他想在任教期满前再体验一次中国文化。假设你是李华,请根据下面的要点,写一封邮件,邀请他到你家过周末。
weekend plan / activities 内容要点 参考词汇
sports (or music/ drawing) paint, play basketball, ….
experience of Chinese cultures make jiaozi, write with a. Chinese brush, …
注意:
(1)文中必须包含上表中的两个要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名和地名等相关信息;
(3)词数∶80~100;开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi. Steve! I’m Li Hua. I hear you'd like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
参考范文
Hi, Steve!
I’m Li Hua. I hear you'd like to experience some more Chinese cultures before going back. So why not come to my home for the weekend I have a good plan!
As both of us like sports, let's play basketball in the gym around my home in the morning. After that, we can practice writing with a Chinese brush together. It's not easy but makes us peaceful. You can also sense the beauty of the Chinese characters. To experience more, we are going to make jiaozi, one of the most traditional foods in China, It must be meaningful to have jiaozi made by yourself. I am sure you will have great fun.
Wait for your reply!
Yours:
Li Hua(共13张PPT)
2022 外研版 中考写作专题
体育锻炼
【话题解读】
随着人们生活水平的不断提高,体育锻炼和健身运动越来越受欢迎。无论是国家还是学校都高度重视体育运动,但就写作来讲,体育运动一直是经久不衰的热门话题。写此类作文,一般来讲是写自己最喜欢的体育运动项目,或者是介绍自己的运动计划、运动习惯、运动方式和运动频率。
1. 介绍某项体育运动或运动计划。此类文章通常是说明文,可以介绍该项运动的比赛规则、发展历史以及自身的影响以及个人的运动计划等,写作时要注意尊重事实,表述准确。
2. 叙述一场体育比赛。通常是记叙文,比赛发生在过去,所以时态要用一般过去时,写作时可以穿插自己的感受等。
3. 介绍喜欢的一项运动。通常是说明文,介绍自己喜欢这项运动的原因、现在参加这项运动的基本情况以及自己喜欢的运动员和自己的梦想等。
4. 对体育运动的一些认识。通常含有说明和议论性质,可以介绍观察到的现状,然后发表自己的看法。
1. 词汇
运动项目:high jump, long jump, badminton, basketball, tennis, volleyball, shooting, boxing, weight-lifting
其他:compete, event, take part in, the Olympics
【常用表达】
2. 句子
Of all kinds of sports, skiing is my favorite.
I spend most of my spare time playing ping-pong.
Our school basketball team won the first prize last year.
Swimming has given me the most wonderful time in my life.
Basketball offers me enjoyment, friendship, knowledge and relaxation.
Since I joined the football club, I have been dreaming of becoming a famous football star in the future.
【实例讲解】
体育锻炼对增强体质、保持健康有重要意义。请你写一篇英语短文介绍自己在新学期的运动计划。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁:说明文
时态:谈计划,用一般将来时
人称:写个人的计划打算,用第一人称
2. 谋布局、写句子
I plan to run for half an hour every
morning
I’m going to practice playing basketball
climb mountains with my good friends
3. 巧衔接
写新学年的计划,可用first、second、third等词语来罗列要点,使文章结构清晰。另外可以使用表示时间关系、空间关系、原因与结果等的连词、副词使文章逻辑清晰,衔接自然。还有,可以适当利用关键词的重复,达到突出主题和中心思想的目的。本文的写作可以使用不同的表示计划、安排的词汇和语法结构,如:plan to do sth.,be going to do,want to do sth.等,这也可使文章衔接自然,浑然一体。
It’s important for us to do sports because it can make us strong and help us keep healthy. I plan to do more sports in the new term.
I plan to run for half an hour every morning. There is a park near my home and it’s a good place to go for a run.
Swimming is my favorite sport. I’m going to swim every Tuesday. I’m going to practice playing basketball with my brother at weekends. I hope I can join the school basketball team one day. I also want to climb mountains with my good friends once a month.
I hope my sports plan can help me have a strong body and stay healthy.
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