短文改错专练（三）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
[A]
Whether they are good and bad, dreams are common since we all need to sleep. Some dreams will stay freshly in our mind for year. I had one such dream yesterday and this is which I dreamed about. It was my cousin's wedding. Both my family members were busy prepare for it. The adults were talking about details of the ceremony, while children were planning how play tricks on the bridegroom. Suddenly I felt drops of a rain fall on my face and wake up. My dog was sitting silent by my bed with his mouth wide open. I will never forget this dream.
[B]
Are we actual growing up I have been think about this question for while. Maybe we are forced to grow up by time. What I mean is we should try to grow mature not only physically and also inside. Imagining a seven-year-old kid with the mind of a 30-year-old. How might this happen On my view, this kid must have great curiosity to learn. That we have inside can be easily reflect on the outside. Let us not to be people forced to grow up by time. No matter how older we are, learning is endless.
[C]
The day before my final exam, it worried me too much that I might fail. At night after dinner I started feeling more nervously. I wanted to study more, but my father told me to stay calm and go to the bed. After an hour and so, I couldn't fell asleep and went to my parents' room. My mother took me in their arms and held me tight. I felt protect by her and sleep peacefully. The next day I went to take the exam and it went very better. I went back home and thanked my parents their support.
[D]
I went to Singapore to spending my summer holiday with my uncle. Grow up in a small village, I had no ideas what life would be like in a big city. Instead the songs of birds, every morning I was wake up by the sound of traffic. Children in the neighborhood would never get time to play. However, things are quite different in your hometown. Nature surroundings, fresh air and simple lifestyle that make life more enjoyable. There is absolutely peace without the noise of cars. I'd rather live in a village to stay in a city.
[E]
It was my eighteen birthday last month. My parents gave me a red bicycle and arranged a extremely wonderful party for me. The house was decorated with balloon and a special birthday cake was ordered for me. My grandparents came from Shanghai attend my birthday party. All my friends was also invited. I was very happier to see them. They all brought gifts to me, who I kept carefully in my room. My friends blow whistles when I cut the cake. After eat the cake, we played many games. It was a lovely evening and I loved every of moment of it.
[F]
It has always be my dream to won an award in a competition. This year, I participated the dance competition during the Arts Festival in my school for the third time. Just one day before the award ceremony, a girl came in my class and tells me to go to the school hall rightly away. I felt rather confusing and did not know that what had happened. When I reached a hall, I got to know that I had won first prize in the competition. I was so happy that I could not control yourself. So hold on to your dreams and never forgetting, “If you can dream it, you can do it.”
答案
A
1. ... good and bad ... and → or
2. ... stay freshly in ... freshly → fresh
3. ... mind for year. year → years
4. ... which I dreamed ... which → what
5. Both my family ... Both → All
6. ... were busy prepare ... prepare → preparing
7. ... how play tricks ... play前加to
8. ... of a rain ... 去掉a
9. ... and wake up. wake → woke
10. ... was sitting silent ... silent → silently
B
1. ... we actual growing ... actual → actually
2. ... have been think ... think → thinking
3. ... question for while. for后加a
4. ... and also inside. and → but
5. Imagining a seven-year-old ... Imagining → Imagine
6. On my view ... On → In
7. That we have ... That → What
8. ... reflect on the ... reflect → reflected
9. ... not to be ... 去掉to
10. ... how older we ... older → old
C
1. ... me too much ... too → very或去掉too
2. ... feeling more nervously. nervously → nervous
3. ... go to the ... 去掉the
4. ... hour and so ... and → or
5. ... I couldn't fell ... fell → fall
6. ... in their arms ... their → her
7. I felt protect ... protect → protected
8. ... and sleep peacefully. sleep → slept
9. ... went very better. better → well
10. ... my parents their ... their前加for
D
1. ... to spending my ... spending → spend
2. Grow up in ... Grow → Growing
3. ... no ideas what ... ideas → idea
4. Instead the songs ... Instead后加of
5. ... I was wake ... wake → woken
6. ... in your hometown. your → my
7. Nature surroundings ... Nature → Natural
8. ... that make life ... 去掉that
9. ... is absolutely peace ... absolutely → absolute
10. ... to stay in ... to → than
E
1. ... my eighteen birthday ... eighteen → eighteenth
2. ... arranged a extremely ... a → an
3. ... with balloon and ... balloon → balloons
4. ... attend my birthday ... attend前加to
5. ... friends was also ... was → were
6. ... very happier to ... happier → happy
7. ... who I kept ... who → which
8. ... friends blow whistles ... blow → blew
9. ... eat the cake ... eat → eating
10. ... every of moment ... 去掉of
F
1. ... be my dream ... be → been
2. ... to won an ... won → win
3. ... I participated the ... the前加in
4. ... and tells me ... tells → told
5. ... hall rightly away. rightly → right
6. ... felt rather confusing ... confusing → confused
7. ... not know that ... 去掉that
8. ... I reached a ... a → the
9. ... not control yourself. yourself → myself
10. ... and never forgetting ... forgetting → forget短文改错专练（一）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
[A]
To me, books seem to have magically powers. I have a little of library of my own at home. Whenever I have a holiday, I pick up a book from the shelf and read them. I get so lost in the book that I often forgot to eat. My mother has to yell at me have lunch. I often borrow books from my friends' and my school library. Some of my friends also have started enjoying read books as many as I do. I think reading increases the intelligent level of a child and push the whole world towards new discoveries and creativity.
[B]
Last Sunday, I was sit in my room doing my homework when I heard of a loud noise. The driver of a car lost control at a turn and the car crashed into a electric pole. I rushed to the rescue. Many another people also came running. We helped the badly hurt driver got out of the car. Soon he carried away. After some times a team of traffic police arrived. They cleared away the crowd and begin their investigation (调查). It was a horribly experience. We should always follow traffic rules as accidents can happens anytime.
[C]
Whenever I see any poor person, one particular thought instant crosses my mind: Why is there poor people on earth After a few minutes another the thought comes into my mind: What if one day I become a rich woman If I have enough money, I will open a school for unprivileged children who parents cannot provide them proper education, food and clothing. In this school job's training programs will be available to all the student. So in the future both of them will be employed, supporting their families but serving the world. Now I am working hard on my goal and hope to realizing my dream some day.
[D]
When I was six, my father used my elder brother bicycle to show me what to ride. I was scaring in the beginning and unable to get over my fear. It seemed very difficult, as I kept fall. My father told me never to give up. So, I gathered my courage and start learning again. My father was with me all time. On the seven day, I could ride the bicycle all by myself. My father hugged of me and said he was pride of me. That day I learned one important lesson: No matter how harder the task is, we should have faith in ourselves.
[E]
My first time to travel by the airplane was when I went to see my sister, which was studying in a big city last winter. My parents sat besides me, telling me there was nothing worry about. But I just couldn't stop become anxious. I became even more worrying before the airplane landed. A flight attendant came to me and reseated me in the front to make me comfortably. I thought the passengers on each side would responded to my fear by ignoring it. Instead, they hold my hands and talked to me in a loving way. Thanks to their kind, I didn't feel so frightened during the landing.
[F]
I still remember the day when I visited my grandparents by yourself. My parents were very busy to drive me to my grandparents' home in countryside. So they asked me to go alone and told me what bus to take. Hold the coin they gave it to me, I went toward the nearest bus stop. It was an early Saturday morning and there were not much people on the bus. I took the back seat by the window. Along the way, I listened to music and talked to some passenger around me. When the bus finally pulled in at the last stop, I got on the bus. My grandparents were already waiting here. What an unforgettable experience it was!
[G]
Last winter, my family went to visiting Shimla, India, and there was in no doubt that I was excited. We fly there and it took us eight hours to reach Shimla. We reached there in the afternoon and it was shocking cold. In the evening, we went for walk on the Mall Road. The place was full of small and pretty house. The local people were so friendlier they even offered us some tea. The next morning they went to the famous spot, Chail, a place from which we could see the entirely valley. I had never see such a beautiful place.
[H]
My family go on vacation for every summer. But last year, I decided to try a difference holiday. I found a job at the animal care center in my city. The center provides shelter to dogs abandoned or lose. I did anything I could help the workers there — feed, bathing and walking the dogs. The dog which impressed me the most was one about three month old. It was so weak when it was took to the center some thought it might not survived. However, it surprised us all that the baby dog health began to improve. It must be a strong dog. I love the experience at the center or I will return this summer.
答案
A
1. ... have magically powers. magically → magical
2. ... a little of ... 去掉of
3. ... and read them. them → it
4. ... forgot to eat. forgot → forget
5. ... at me have ... have前加to
6. ... from my friends' ... friends' → friends
7. ... enjoying read books ... read → reading
8. ... as many as ... many → much
9. ... the intelligent level ... intelligent → intelligence
10. ... and push the ... push → pushes
B
1. ... I was sit ... sit → sitting
2. ... heard of a ... 去掉of
3. ... into a electric ... a → an
4. Many another people ... another → other
5. ... got out of ... got → get
6. ... he carried away. he后加was
7. After some times ... times → time
8. ... and begin their ... begin → began
9. ... was a horribly ... horribly → horrible
10. ... accidents can happens ... happens → happen
C
1. ... thought instant crosses ... instant → instantly
2. ... is there poor ... is → are
3. ... another the thought ... 去掉the
4. ... children who parents ... who → whose
5. ... provide them proper ... them后加with
6. ... job's training programs ... job's → job
7. ... all the student. student → students
8. ... both of them ... both → all
9. ... families but serving ... but → and
10. ... hope to realizing ... realizing → realize
D
1. ... elder brother bicycle ... brother → brother's
2. ... what to ride. what → how
3. I was scaring ... scaring → scared
4. ... I kept fall. fall → falling
5. ... and start learning ... start → started
6. ... me all time. all后加the
7. ... the seven day ... seven → seventh
8. ... hugged of me ... 去掉of
9. ... he was pride ... pride → proud
10. ... how harder the ... harder → hard
E
1. ... by the airplane ... 去掉the
2. ... which was studying ... which → who
3. ... sat besides me ... besides → beside
4. ... nothing worry about. nothing后加to
5. ... couldn't stop become ... become → becoming
6. ... even more worrying ... worrying → worried
7. ... make me comfortably. comfortably → comfortable
8. ... would responded to ... responded → respond
9. ... they hold my ... hold → held
10. ... to their kind ... kind → kindness
F
1. ... grandparents by yourself. yourself → myself
2. ... very busy to ... very → too
3. ... home in countryside. in后加the
4. ... what bus to ... what → which
5. Hold the coin ... Hold → Holding
6. ... gave it to ... 去掉it
7. ... not much people ... much → many
8. ... some passenger around ... passenger → passengers
9. ... I got on ... on → off
10. ... already waiting here. here → there
G
1. ... went to visiting ... visiting → visit
2. ... in no doubt ... 去掉in
3. We fly there ... fly → flew
4. ... it was shocking ... shocking → shockingly
5. ... went for walk ... walk前加a
6. ... and pretty house. house → houses
7. ... so friendlier they ... friendlier → friendly
8. ... they went to ... they → we
9. ... see the entirely ... entirely → entire
10. ... had never see ... see → seen
H
1. ... for every summer. 去掉for
2. ... try a difference ... difference → different
3. ... abandoned or lose. lose → lost
4. ... I could help ... help前加to
5. ... feed, bathing and ... feed → feeding
6. ... three month old. month → months
7. ... it was took ... took → taken
8. ... might not survived. survived → survive
9. ... baby dog health ... dog → dog's
10. ... center or I ... or → and / so短文改错专练（二）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
[A]
One night, I sat in our living room reading different article while my grandpa watched the television. An hour passed before she realized it, and I felt badly for not speaking during that time. I asked how he was OK, and he said yes. Then I apologized not talking more. Grandpa replies, “Talking is like vinegar. If you like the meat enough, you don't need the vinegar — but if you like the company enough, you don't need the conversation.” My grandpa didn't spent much time in school when young, but I believe he is one of the most intelligence people I have ever known.
[B]
My dad is a gardener, who is proud his garden and often tell people, “I can grow just about anything.” However, it was once very difficult for him to growing my favorite lilacs (丁香). He tried everything, with no luck or lilacs to show for my efforts. One night where I was at home, it was raining violent outside. I suddenly heard the side door open, and he come in, wet from head to a foot and holding a large quantity of lilacs. “I found a secret lilac spot,” he said. “It wasn't easier, but I got these flower.” That was how my dad got everything.
[C]
Last week, I take my camera and went with my family to the zoo. It was beautiful day and I got around a hundred picture. When we got on the bus after hours of visit the zoo animals, I felt sleep, so I put my camera on the seat beside me and fell asleep. Suddenly, I heard my dad saying, “Getting off the bus.” I jumped up or ran out of the door. As soon as I reached for home, I remembered that I had carelessly leave my camera behind. I called the bus company, but they could not find them anywhere. Next time I ride the bus, I will hold onto my things tightly.
[D]
One day, I was riding with my elder brother to deliver milk. He spot a small turtle (龟) crossing the road, stopped pick it up, and put it in a box. He told me serious not to play with it until that we got home. At the next stop, she got off the truck to deliver milk bottle to people's doors. Before long, I was crying over a fresh bite with my finger because I couldn't resist touch it. Here's the lesson I learned from an experience: It's wise to follow instructions, and if you are going to touch something alive, using a stick instead of your finger.
[E]
I'm pretty relaxing about my clothes and I don't depend on anyone's advice about what to wearing. I tend to go for a conventional look, clothes who feel great and that you can wear anywhere. At home, I usual wear something casual: a pair of jeans and a tennis shirt with a pocket on chest. I appreciate of classic design, but I don't think clothes matter that much. Under the mask, we're all human being. I sometimes make judgements about people base on their clothes, but I quickly stop herself. It's important to ignore someone appearance and concentrate on the person inside.
[F]
I was reading a story when I come across a word I didn't know. “Dad, what the meaning of the word ostensibly ” My dad was watching her favorite show. “You have a dictionary, don't you ” he replied, with even looking at my face. I went back to my room and found the dictionary, that was on my study table. From now on, I got used to look up new words in the dictionary. I am often gratefully that my dad didn't give me the answer that day. He gave me something more much better: a way to find independent in life.
[G]
I am member of our school's tennis team. Our team practices are scheduled after classes, consisted of movements around the court and general technique. I also lift weights to keep fitly. Because my body's still growing, I need to watch out, as though such exercise is evidently good preparation of long matches. Taking in high-energy products on court keep me energetic, but as time goes on, it's tough to be close matches effectively. I'm doing extra exercises right now to deal with the matter but I expect to see some benefit from that soon. Maybe I should seek advices on eating a balancing diet too.
[H]
My dad once owned a fruit store on a busily street. The sidewalk in front of his store collected a dust and rubbish, that needed to be swept daily. I used to hid behind bags of apples when my dad asks me to sweep. But while sweep one day, I began to find a few coin under the dust and rubbish. I had no idea where they came but I started to like the job. And soon, I was happy to sweep even when no money were found. Many years late, my dad told me that the money on the sidewalk had actually been left there by him.
答案
A
1. ... reading different article ... article → articles
2. ... watched the television. 去掉the
3. ... before she realized ... she → I
4. ... felt badly for ... badly → bad
5. ... how he was ... how → if / whether
6. ... I apologized not ... apologized后加for
7. Grandpa replies ... replies → replied
8. ... but if you ... but → and
9. ... didn't spent much ... spent → spend
10. ... most intelligence people ... intelligence → intelligent
B
1. ... proud his garden ... proud后加of
2. ... often tell people ... tell → tells
3. ... him to growing ... growing → grow
4. ... for my efforts. my → his
5. One night where ... where → when
6. ... raining violent outside. violent → violently
7. ... he come in ... come → came
8. ... to a foot ... 去掉a
9. It wasn't easier ... easier → easy
10. ... got these flower. flower → flowers
C
1. ... I take my ... take → took
2. ... was beautiful day ... was后加a
3. ... a hundred picture. picture → pictures
4. ... hours of visit ... visit → visiting
5. ... I felt sleep ... sleep → sleepy
6. ... Getting off the ... Getting → Get
7. ... up or ran ... or → and
8. ... reached for home ... 去掉for
9. ... had carelessly leave ... leave → left
10. ... not find them ... them → it
D
1. He spot a ... spot → spotted
2. ... stopped pick it ... stopped后加to
3. ... told me serious ... serious → seriously
4. ... until that we ... 去掉that
5. ... she got off ... she → he
6. ... milk bottle to ... bottle → bottles
7. ... with my finger ... with → on
8. ... resist touch it. touch → touching
9. ... from an experience ... an → the / that
10. ... using a stick ... using → use
E
1. ... pretty relaxing about ... relaxing → relaxed
2. ... what to wearing. wearing → wear
3. ... clothes who feel ... who → that / which
4. ... I usual wear ... usual → usually
5. ... pocket on chest. on后加the
6. ... appreciate of classic ... 去掉of
7. ... all human being. being → beings
8. ... base on their ... base → based
9. ... quickly stop herself. herself → myself
10. ... ignore someone appearance ... someone → someone's
F
1. ... I come across ... come → came
2. ... what the meaning ... what后加is
3. ... watching her favorite ... her → his
4. ... with even looking ... with → without
5. ... that was on ... that → which
6. From now on ... now → then
7. ... used to look ... look → looking
8. ... often gratefully that ... gratefully → grateful
9. ... more much better ... 去掉more
10. ... find independent in ... independent → independence
G
1. I am member ... member前加a
2. ... consisted of movements ... consisted → consisting
3. ... to keep fitly. fitly → fit
4. ... as though such ... as → even
5. ... preparation of long ... of → for
6. ... keep me energetic ... keep → keeps
7. ... to be close ... 去掉be
8. ... matter but I ... but → and
9. ... seek advices on ... advices → advice
10. ... a balancing diet ... balancing → balanced
H
1. ... a busily street. busily → busy
2. ... collected a dust ... 去掉a
3. ... rubbish, that needed ... that → which
4. ... used to hid ... hid → hide
5. ... my dad asks ... asks → asked
6. But while sweep ... sweep → sweeping
7. ... a few coin ... coin → coins
8. ... where they came ... came后加from
9. ... no money were ... were → was
10. Many years late ... late → later
