2022中考英语写作指导专题复习：个人情况写作指导 课件(共49张PPT)

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话题一 个人情况写作指导
Never judge by appearances.
切莫以貌取人。
Read aloud
11.friendly__________
12. humorous________
13.patient____________
14.warm-hearted_____
15.kind___________
16.popular___________
17.lovely________
18.brave____________
19.polite________
20.smart/clever____
友好的
有幽默感的
热心的
善良的
受欢迎的
可爱的
勇敢的
礼貌的
耐心的
聪明的
害羞的
1.tall________
2. short________
3.fat____________
4.thin__________
5.strong________
6.weak___________
7.handsome________
8.beutiful_______
9.shy________
10.helpful________
高的
矮的
肥的
瘦的
强壮的
虚弱的
帅气的
美丽的
乐于助人的
Chinese to English:
11.friendly__________
12. humorous________
13.patient____________
14.warm-hearted_____
15.kind___________
16.popular___________
17.lovely________
18.brave____________
19.polite________
20.smart/clever____
友好的
有幽默感的
热心的
善良的
受欢迎的
可爱的
勇敢的
礼貌的
耐心的
聪明的
害羞的
1.tall________
2. short________
3.fat____________
4.thin__________
5.strong________
6.weak___________
7.handsome________
8.beutiful_______
9.shy________
10.helpful________
Summary:1.形容词作表语：she/he is...
2.形容词作定语修饰名词: a+adj+n
高的
矮的
肥的
瘦的
强壮的
虚弱的
帅气的
美丽的
乐于助人的
熟读短语
1.与...某人相处融洽
2.乐于做某事
3.想要做某事
4.来自
5.15 岁
6.有一头长头发
7.努力，刻苦
8.擅长
9.帮助某人做某事
10.在...获得很大得进步
get on well with sb
be ready to do sth
with long hair
study hard/work hard
be good at /do well in
help sb with sth
would like to do/want to do
come from/be from
make great progress in
fifteen years old
Phrases
1.与...某人相处融洽
2.乐于做某事
3.想要做某事
4.来自
5.15 岁
6.有一头长头发
7.努力，刻苦
8.擅长
9.帮助某人做某事
10.在...获得很大得进步
get on well with sb
be ready to do sth
with long hair
study hard
be good at /do well in
help sb with sth
would like to do/want to do
come from/be from
make great progress in
fifteen years old
Read for information
My father is 45 years old . He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes. He is an English teacher in a middle school. Besides English, he likes sports best of all. He often plays basketball with his friends after school.
He is a man who is very strict with me. One day, I made a small mistakes in my math homework. When he saw the paper, he made exercises for me to solve until I completely understand. How strict and careful my father is!
I love him so much.
age
appearance
job
hobby
when
where
what
how
your feeling
篇
章
结
构
how to describe a person
1
2
Activity 1
age/appearance/job/hobby...
structure
when
where
what
how
your feeling
Find out good sentences
My father is 45 years old . He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes. He is an English teacher in a middle school. Besides English, he likes sports best of all. He often plays basketball with his friends after school.
He is a man who is very strict with me. One day, I made a small mistakes in my math homework. When he saw the paper, he made exercises for me to solve until I completely understand. How strict and careful my father is!
I love him so much.
Find out good sentences
My father is 45 years old . He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes. He is an English teacher in a middle school. Besides English, he likes sports best of all. He often plays basketball with his friends after school.
He is a man who is very strict with me. One day, I made a small mistakes in my math homework. When he saw the paper, he made exercises for me to solve until I completely understand. How strict and careful my father is!
I love him so much.
1.He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes. .
1.He/She is....with..... 他/她..... 有.....
她是一个有一头长头发的女孩.
_____________________________
她有一头长头发和一双大眼睛。
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Good sentences
She is a girl with long hair.
She has long hair with two big eyes.
She has long hair and two big eyes.
2.He is a man who is very strict with me.
2.He/She is....who.....
他是一个短头发的男孩孩。
________________________________
She is a girl who has long hair.
She is a girl with long hair.
He is a boy who has short hair.
Good sentences
3.How strict and careful my father is!
how+adj +主语+谓语！
what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语+谓语
这个男孩多么幸运啊！
__________________________
她多么勤奋啊！
____________________
How lucky the boy is!
How hard she studies!
What a lucky boy he is!
1.He/She is...
2.He/She is....with..... 他/她..... 有.....
3.He/She is....who.....
4.how+adj +主语+谓语！
what+(a/an)+adj.+n.+主语+谓语
Writing Practice
While-writing:
朋友在我们的生活中有着非凡的意义，好朋友是值得我们珍惜的。假如你是李立，你所在的英语俱乐部本周讨论的话题为“My best friend”，请你以此话题写一篇英文短文，参与英语俱乐部的讨论。内容包括:
1.介绍自己的好朋友。
2.叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事。
3.这件事给你的感受。
作文要求:1.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
As we know, friends are important in our life....
人称：_______
时态：________
第一，三人称
一般现在时，
一般过去时
大约30字
大约40字
大约10字
朋友在我们的生活中有着非凡的意义，好朋友是值得我们珍惜的。假如你是李立，你所在的英语俱乐部本周讨论的话题为“My best friend”，请你以此话题写一篇英文短文，参与英语俱乐部的讨论。内容包括:
1.介绍自己的好朋友。
2.叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事。
3.这件事给你的感受。
As we know, friends are important in our life.
1.He/She is...
2.He/She is....with.....
他/她..... 有.....
3.He/She is....who.....
4.how+adj +主语+谓语！
get on well with sb
be ready to do sth
would like to do/want to do
come from/be from
fifteen years old
with a long hair
study hard
be good at /do well in
help sb with sth
make great progress in
大约30字
大约40字
大约10字
评分标准
内容分：7分
1.介绍自己的好朋友； ------2分
2.叙述与好朋友之间发生的一件事 -----4分
3.这件事给你的感受。 ------1分
语言分：8分
第一档：8分 要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确， 意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。
第二档：6-7分 要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要求，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。
第三档：4-5分 要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。
第四档：1-3分 要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。
第五档：0分 空白卷或完全没有相关内容。
互评作文（3分钟）
As we know, friends are important in our life. My
best friend is Jane. She has big eyes with long hair. She is very lovely and kind-hearted. Reading is her favourite hobby and she is good at playing the violin.
I remembered that I got a bad mark in my maths exam and I was very sad and disappointed. She came to comfort me with a gentle smile and helped me with my maths. With her great encouragement and support, I made great progress in the final maths exam. We all smiled when we saw the mark on the paper. I was deeply grateful to her
篇
章
结
构
how to describe a person
1
2
Summary
age/appearance/job/hobby...
structure
when
where
what
how
your feeling
1.He/She is...
2.He/She is....with..... 他/她..... 有.....
3.He/She is....who.....
4.how+adj +主语+谓语！
Thank you for listening!
Thank you for listening!
school information
personal information
family information
jobs and careers
interests and hobbies
Personal background
My father is 45 years old. He is of medium build with a big nose and two small eyes. He is an English teacher in a middle school. Besides English, he likes sports best of all. He often plays basketball with his friends after school.
He is very strict with me. One day, I made a small mistakes in my math homework. When he saw the paper, he made exercises for me to solve until I completely understand. How strict and careful my father is!
I love him so much.
熟读短语
1.在…的南部
2.有…人口
3.有…面积
4.有…历史
5.因…出名
6.比如
7.平方公里
8.名胜古迹
9.夏热冬冷
in the south of…
has a population of
be famous for
such as
square kilometers
places of interest
has an area of
has a history of
hot in summer and
cold in winter
PK
1.在…的南部
2.有…人口
3.有…面积
4.有…历史
5.因…出名
6.比如
7.平方公里
8.名胜古迹
9.夏热冬冷
in the south of…
has a population of
be famous for
such as
square kilometers
places of interest
has an area of
has a history of
hot in summer and
cold in winter
地点介绍
边读边思考介绍了广州哪方面的内容。
Guangzhou is in the south of China. It has a history of more than 2,200 years and it is famous as “ Flower City. It has a population of more than 16 million and has an area of about 70,000 square kilometres. There are a lot of places of interest in it. Tourists from all over the world visit Guangzhou. It is never hot in summer or cold in winter.
地理位置
历史
人口
面积
景点
天气
时态： 一般现在时 人称: 第三人称
Place
面积(Area)
人口(Population)
气候(Climate)
风景(Scenery)
文体特点
位置(Location)
历史和文化(History &Culture)
特产(Local products)
1. Location （位置）
(1) …is in the south/north/ of…在…南/北部
1. 北京在中国北部。
Beijing is in the north of China.
2.湛江位于广东的南侧。
Zhanjiang is in the south of Guangdong.
2. Population (人口)
… has a population of… 有…人口
茂名人口六百多万 (six million)。
Maoming has a population of over six million.
3 .Area (面积)
…has an area of…有…面积
英国面积700万平方公里(7 million square kilometers) 。
England has an area of 7 million square kilometers .
4. History : (历史)
… has a history of…有…历史
译：这个城市有1000多年历史。
The city has a history of over 1000 years.
中国有5000多年历史。
China has a history of over 5000 years.
5. Scenery (风景名胜)
There are a lot of paces of interest in…,such as….
1）信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山, 西江温泉(spring)…
There are a lot of places of interest in Xinyi, such as Tianma mountain, Dawu mountain ,Shigen mountain, Xijiang Spring.
places of interest
归纳句型：
(1) ….is in the south/north of … 在…的南/北部
(2) …..has a population of… 有…人口
(3) ….has a history of… 有…历史
(4) …has an area of… 有…面积
(5) There are a lot of places of interest in…, such as… 有很多名胜在… 例如….
Writing Practice
While-writing:
根据以下内容写一篇100字左右的说明文，标题为“Xinyi”
1. 信宜位于广东的南部 ，面积约3,101平方公里(square kilometers), 人口约100多万
(1 million)；
2. 信宜有1000多年的历史，
3. 信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山, 西江温泉(spring)…
4.信宜因为三华李而出名。
5. 信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。
1. 信宜位于广东的南部 ，面积约3,101平方公里(square kilometers), 人口约100多(1 million)；
2. 信宜有1000多年的历史，
3. 信宜有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山, 西江温泉(spring)…
4.信宜因为三华李而出名。
5. 信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。
它
它
be famous for
互评作文（3分钟）
任务：1. 看看别人如何表达你的疑难点；
2. 看看同学的作文里有没有正确使用句型。
评判依据： 1. 卷面（整洁少涂改）
2. 字体（压线写）
3. 内容（要点齐全）
评分档次：
第一档：12-15 (优秀）卷面整洁，字体清晰，内容齐全，错误很少；
第二档: 10-11（良好）卷面较整洁，字体较清晰，内容齐全，错误较少；
第三档: 9 （及格）内容基本齐全，错误较多；
第四档: 4-8 （较差）内容不齐全，错误很多；
第五档: 1-3 （差）只写了一两个相关词句。
Xinyi
Xinyi is in the south of Guangdong province and has an area of 3,101 square kilometers. It has a population of more than one million. Besides, it has a long history of over1000 years. There are a lot of places of interest in Xinyi, such as Tianma mountain, Shigen mountain, Dawu mountain , Xijiang Spring. What’s more, Xinyi is famous for Sanhuali. It is never very hot in summer or very cold in winter. Welcome to my home town---Xinyi.
Summary
….is in thesouth/north of
(2) …..has a population of…
(3) ….has a history of…
(4) …has an area of…
(5) There are a lot of places of interest in…, such as…
时态： 一般现在时
人称: 第三人称
话题：介绍地方
Step 4连句成篇，添加适当过渡词语
如：and, but, however, besides,
what’s more, so等
Step 1: 审题
体裁:
时态:
人称:
Step2: 理清要点
1. 信宜位于广东的南部 ，面积约3,101平方公里, 人口约100多万；
2. 信宜有1000多年的历史，
3. 信宜是山区城市，有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山, 西江温泉…
4.信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。
说明文
一般现在时
第三人称
根据以下内容写一篇100字左右的说明文，标题为“Xinyi”
1. 信宜位于广东的南部 ，面积约3,101平方公里(square kilometers), 人口约100多万
(1 million)；
2. 信宜有1000多年的历史，
3. 信宜是山区城市，有很多风景名胜，如天马山，大雾岭，石根山, 西江温泉(spring)…
4. 信宜夏天不会很热冬天也不会很冷。
◆ Exchange your composition with your desk mate and help each other to improve your writing.
在评改时，应注意以下几个方面：
1、在语言方面,重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范;是否使用了合适而且较丰富的句型结构;是否用上了较高级词汇 。
2、在内容方面，重点评判是否表达全部规定内容，适当添加一些内容，不扣分。
3、在连贯性方面，重点评判是否构成一篇连贯的短文；是否合理使用了过渡词语。
4、卷面是否整洁，字体是否工整。
Xinyi
Located in the south of Guangdong province, Xinyi has an area of 3,101 square kilometers. It’s a small city which has a population of more than one million. Besides, it has a long history of more than 1000 years. As a mountainous city, Xinyi has many places of interest, such as Tianma mountain, Shigen mountain, Dawu mountain , Xijiang Spring and so on. What’s more, Xinyi has gentle climate, which is warm in winter and cool in summer, so it is a good place for people to settle down
Summary
Post-writing:
6. Climate : (气候)
The climate in …is..
Sp has … climate
云南的气候适宜，冬暖夏凉。
The climate in Yunnan is gentle/nice. It is warm in winter and cool in summer
good/nice/gentle/hot/cold
cool/dry/wet/rainy/ snowy..
归纳句型：
(1) Sp. is located in/ lies in …
Located in…, 主句
(2) Sp. has a history of…
主句+with a history of …
(3) Sp. has/covers an area of…
主句+ with an area of …
(4) Sp. has a population of…
主句+ with a population of…
(5) Sp. has many places of interest, such as…
(6) The climate is…
Sp. has …climate，which is…
套用句型：
(1) Sp. is located in/ lies in …
Located in…, 主句
(2) Sp. has a history of…
主句+with a history of …
(3) Sp. has/covers an area of… square kilometers
主句+ with an area of …
(4) Sp. has a population of…
主句+ with a population of…
(5) Sp. has many places of interest, such as…
(6) The climate is…
Sp. has …climate，which is…
句型归纳：
(1) Sp. is located in/ lies in …
Located in…, 主句
(2) Sp. has a history of…
主句+with a history of …
(3) Sp. have/cover an area of…
主句+ with an area of …
(4) Sp. have a population of…
主句+ with a population of…
(5) Sp. has many places of interest, such as…
(6) The climate is…
Sp. has …climate, which is