2022届高考英语二轮复习：应用文&读后续写好题集锦（三）（含答案）
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2022届高考英语二轮复习：应用文&读后续写好题集锦（三）-解析版
2022届南通、泰州、扬州、盐城、淮安、宿迁六市一模联考
第一节 应用文写作
假定你是李华，请给你的英国笔友William写一封信，分享北京冬奥会的精彩瞬间。内容包括:
1.询问近况;
2.你印象最深刻的片断;
3.你当时的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(
Dear William,
Yours,
Li Hua
)
盐城市、南京市2022届高三年级第一次模拟考试英语试题
第二节 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成-篇完整的短文。
December 5, 2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourth adoption for the Lansings.
When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012. For the Lansing family, adoption is about giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.
In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her mother's inability to care for her and her brothers and sisters. Her experiences made it very difficult for her to trust adults, since she learned from an early age that she could only count on herself. She lived in a shelter for several months before moving into a foster home (寄养家庭). Still, Bethany struggled to understand why she had been taken away from the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Children's Residential Treatment Center, where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Hand Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions. She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.
When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethany's insecurities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up.
▲
▲
▲
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things.
▲
▲
▲
范文和解题说明指导
第一节 应用文写作
Dear William,
Have you watched the Beijing Winter Olympic Games recently I’m writing to share with you something exciting.
I was amazed at a lot of exciting moments, among which a freestyle skiing player’s perfect skills and quick mind left the deepest impression on me. She was weaving through the snow with ease when suddenly she almost lost control. But in the blink of an eye, she stopped her skid and rocketed through the rest of her run.
Seeing this, I couldn’t help wondering how she had been going to great lengths to give such a fantastic performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作评分说明
第一节： 应用文写作
文章总共分三部分，包括（1）询问近况; （2）你印象深刻的片段；（3）你此时的感想。如三个部分都涵盖，文章段落分明，书写清楚，字数达到要求，表达无太多错误，得分则应在10分以上。
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于60或多于100的，酌情扣分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档 (13-15分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第四档 (10-12分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档 (7-9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档 (4-6分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 (1-3分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 信息未能传达给读者。
1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分：（0分） 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
第二节 读后续写
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. The other girls shared their stories of coming from the foster care system, and they told her how scared they had been about meeting a new family too and how happy they were now. Soon Bethany’s anxiety eased, and she agreed to go and see her new home. (77 words)
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. From many hours spent at the neighborhood pool to her first trip to the beach, Bethany now lived the life every child deserves. The Lansings celebrated Bethany’s 11th birthday with a superb cruise. When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. The little girl who was once afraid to make eye contact is now a secure, funny young lady who would talk your ear off. (77 words)
读后续写评分标准
一、评分说明
1. 评分原则：
本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
给分公平、公正；宽严并济，不能过严或过松；得分有理，扣分有据。
2. 评分标准：立意积极、情节合理、语言水平及风格（语言风格与前文一致）、书写美观。
三个逻辑一致原则：续写部分与所给短文之间的逻辑；续写两段内容之间的逻辑；续写部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑。
3. 评分程序:
阅读第1遍：根据续写总体情节及重点内容描写，初步确定所属档次。
阅读第2遍：根据写作语言（修辞、句式、词汇等），确定或调整档次。
阅读第3遍：看词数（少于130个，从总分中扣2分）；
看书写（书写及卷面较差的建议降为三档或三档以下）。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第五档 （21—25） 1. 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 2. 内容丰富。 3. 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响 意义表达。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
第四档 （16—20） 1. 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 2. 内容比较丰富。 3. 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响 意义表达。 4. 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写的短文结构紧凑。
第三档 （11—15） 1. 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。 2. 写出了若干有关内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响 意义表达。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档 （6—10） 1. 与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。 2. 写出了一些有关内容。 3. 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影 响了意义的表达。 4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 （1—5） 1. 与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。 2. 产出内容较少。 3. 语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误， 严重影响了意义的表达。 4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。
0 白卷 内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
2022届南通、泰州、扬州、盐城、淮安、宿迁六市一模联考
第一节 应用文写作
假定你是李华，请给你的英国笔友William写一封信，分享北京冬奥会的精彩瞬间。内容包括:
1.询问近况;
2.你印象最深刻的片断;
3.你当时的感想。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(
Dear William,
Yours,
Li Hua
)
盐城市、南京市2022届高三年级第一次模拟考试英语试题
第二节 读后续写
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成-篇完整的短文。
December 5, 2012, was a very special day for Josephine and Scott Lansing, as it marked the fourth adoption for the Lansings.
When they began the journey to adopt their first daughter, Cloe, years ago, Josephine and Scott Lansing never imagined they would eventually have a house full of girls. The couple later adopted Josie in 2011 and Annabelle in 2012. For the Lansing family, adoption is about giving every child the opportunity to grow healthily in a loving home. Scott and Josephine are great advocates for each of their daughters, and they make sure each child knows how special and loved they are.
In February of 2009, Bethany entered into the care of Child Protective Services due to her mother's inability to care for her and her brothers and sisters. Her experiences made it very difficult for her to trust adults, since she learned from an early age that she could only count on herself. She lived in a shelter for several months before moving into a foster home (寄养家庭). Still, Bethany struggled to understand why she had been taken away from the only family she had known. In May of 2010, Bethany was placed at Helping Hand Home for Children's Residential Treatment Center, where her journey to returning to normal finally began. With the patience, support, and guidance of the Helping Hand Home staff, Bethany developed healthy, appropriate ways to express her emotions. She was taught to respect herself, and she learned that it was okay to trust others.
When Bethany was introduced to the Lansing family in June of 2012, the meeting did not go as smoothly as everyone hoped. Bethany's insecurities resurfaced due to the suffering she experienced at such a young age, and she refused to talk or even look at the Lansings at their first meeting.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up.
▲
▲
▲
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things.
▲
▲
▲
范文和解题说明指导
第一节 应用文写作
Dear William,
Have you watched the Beijing Winter Olympic Games recently I’m writing to share with you something exciting.
I was amazed at a lot of exciting moments, among which a freestyle skiing player’s perfect skills and quick mind left the deepest impression on me. She was weaving through the snow with ease when suddenly she almost lost control. But in the blink of an eye, she stopped her skid and rocketed through the rest of her run.
Seeing this, I couldn’t help wondering how she had been going to great lengths to give such a fantastic performance.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作评分说明
第一节： 应用文写作
文章总共分三部分，包括（1）询问近况; （2）你印象深刻的片段；（3）你此时的感想。如三个部分都涵盖，文章段落分明，书写清楚，字数达到要求，表达无太多错误，得分则应在10分以上。
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于60或多于100的，酌情扣分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档 (13-15分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。完全达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 覆盖所有内容要点。
2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第四档 (10-12分) 完成了试题规定的任务。 达到了预期的写作目的。
1. 虽漏掉一、二个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档 (7-9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
4. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档 (4-6分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 (1-3分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 信息未能传达给读者。
1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分：（0分） 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
第二节 读后续写
But the Lansing family had no intention to give up. They were patient with Bethany and explained that they wanted to get to know her better and hoped she would one day be part of their family. The other girls shared their stories of coming from the foster care system, and they told her how scared they had been about meeting a new family too and how happy they were now. Soon Bethany’s anxiety eased, and she agreed to go and see her new home. (77 words)
Later, Bethany experienced a lot of exciting things. From many hours spent at the neighborhood pool to her first trip to the beach, Bethany now lived the life every child deserves. The Lansings celebrated Bethany’s 11th birthday with a superb cruise. When Bethany returns to Helping Hand Home to visit, the first thing everyone comments on is her self-confidence. The little girl who was once afraid to make eye contact is now a secure, funny young lady who would talk your ear off. (77 words)
读后续写评分标准
一、评分说明
1. 评分原则：
本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
给分公平、公正；宽严并济，不能过严或过松；得分有理，扣分有据。
2. 评分标准：立意积极、情节合理、语言水平及风格（语言风格与前文一致）、书写美观。
三个逻辑一致原则：续写部分与所给短文之间的逻辑；续写两段内容之间的逻辑；续写部分与所给开头语之间的逻辑。
3. 评分程序:
阅读第1遍：根据续写总体情节及重点内容描写，初步确定所属档次。
阅读第2遍：根据写作语言（修辞、句式、词汇等），确定或调整档次。
阅读第3遍：看词数（少于130个，从总分中扣2分）；
看书写（书写及卷面较差的建议降为三档或三档以下）。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第五档 （21—25） 1. 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。 2. 内容丰富。 3. 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响 意义表达。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
第四档 （16—20） 1. 与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 2. 内容比较丰富。 3. 所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响 意义表达。 4. 比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写的短文结构紧凑。
第三档 （11—15） 1. 与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。 2. 写出了若干有关内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响 意义表达。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档 （6—10） 1. 与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。 2. 写出了一些有关内容。 3. 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影 响了意义的表达。 4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 （1—5） 1. 与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。 2. 产出内容较少。 3. 语法结构单调，词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误， 严重影响了意义的表达。 4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。
0 白卷 内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。