八年级上期中作文

课件13张PPT。学生书面表达失分的原因分析 ：1、时态误用
2、文体不对
3、汉语式英语
4、逻辑错误
5、单词拼写错误
6、缺少衔接成分
7、漂亮句子少
8、书写不规范高分书面表达特点： 句式美外在美
结构美衔接美词汇美
一、如今,”健康生活”的理念越来越深入人心.假如你是李美,你的网友(Betty)给你发来电子邮件, 叫你写一篇作文有关”how to keep healthy”为主题的文章,号召同学们注意保持身体健康.请从加强锻炼,早睡早起,多吃蔬菜和水果,多喝水,保持卫生等方面回帖,提一些好的建议Dear Betty,
How to keep healthy is a big problem for us. Here are some of my advice. First ,I think we should exercise every day. Second, it is good for us to sleep early and get up early. Third , we’d better eat some fruit and vegetables. We should not eat too much meat and junk food because these are too bad. We also need to drink a lot of water. Keeping clean is also very important. It is very important to have a healthy lifestyle.
Yours,
Li Mei
二、过去的经历将文中主要的动词改成过去式。难点：动词过去式的变化，特别是不规则变化。（书本最后一页）
常用短语：on my last day off/ school trip/ vacation, hang out (hung out), buy (bought) some souvenirs, take (took) some photos, go (went) sightseeing, have (had) lunch, eat (ate) delicious food, want to go there again. It was exciting/ interesting/ boring/ terrible. Tony 一直都有和你发邮件的习惯，最近他发了封邮件，讲诉了自己最近在秋假的一些趣事，他也请你讲诉你记忆深刻、有意义的一次假期。Where did you go?
Did you go with your family?
How was the weather?
What did you do?
Was the food good?
Did you buy anything?
Do you want to go there again? Why or why not?Dear Tony,
Thank you for telling me your last interesting day off. I had a good time on vacation, too. I went to Beijing with my family. It was sunny. One of my friends Tina was in Beijing. So I hung out with her. First, we went to Tian’an Men, I bought some souvenirs and took some photos. Then we went to watch a football match. Next day, I went sightseeing with my family. We also ate a lot of delicious food in Beijing. How exciting my last day off was!
Write me soon.
Yours, 国庆那天，天气很好，我和几个同学一起爬太鹤公园。公园里有很多古松（pine trees）。我们沿着石阶到山顶，放眼眺望，鹤城景色尽收眼底。 On National Day, it was sunny. I slept late. Then my friend Mary called me to go out. We went to Taihe Park with many other classmates. There were many pine trees. They were very tall. We climbed (along the stone steps) to the top of the mountain. I looked down and saw the whole Hecheng. It was really small but beautiful. We took a lot of photos there. After that, we walked back home and had lunch.
It was a tiring but happy trip. / I was tired but happy.三、 回应别人的邀请一般会有表格，可能中文，可能英文，但只要记住几个常用词组以及星期几前用介词on就可以应付。文中一般用have to 和be going to 加动词原形。首先感谢对方的邀请，然后说明这星期很忙，最后另约时间。
Have a toothache and go to the dentist
Help my mom do chores/ housework
Babysit my sister Have tennis training
Study for the chemistry test
Go to the movies with friends
Go to my cousin’s birthday party Henry 想要邀请Sonia去海洋馆玩，请根据Sonia 的日程表给Henry回一封信并说明什么时候可以去。Dear Henry,
Thank you for your invitation/ asking. But I’m sorry. I’m busy this week. On Monday, I have to go to cousin’s birthday party. I have a toothache, so on Tuesday, I have to go to the dentist. On Wednesday I have tennis training. On Thursday I’m going to study for the chemistry test. On Friday I’m going to the movies with my friends. I’m free on weekends. We can go to the aquarium on Saturday or Sunday. What’s your opinion?
Write soon.
Yours,
XX 四、周末就要到了,苏珊计划组织一次北京二日游的活动.假如你是苏珊,给你的堂弟Simon 写一份活动安排,并邀请他一起参加这次活动.你去故宫(The Palace Museum)北京胡同(Beijing Hutongs) 鸟巢 (The Bird’s Nest)长城(The Great Wall)Dear Simon,
How are you ? This weekend is coming. I am going to Beijing to go sightseeing with my family. Let me tell you our plans now. On the first day we are planning to spend time in the Palace Museum. In the afternoon, we are visiting some Beijing Hutongs. We are visiting the Bird’s Nest and the Great Wall on the second day. I am sure we can have a good time there. Would you like to go with us?
Please write to me soon.
Yours ，
Susan作文策略：
看题目，判断时态。
根据时态选择用的上的结构，如be going to，have to 等。
逐字看作文要求，划出文章中必须要提到的内容。
在心里将所有信息整合并打草稿，回想文中要用到的词汇怎么写，然后动笔，字迹务必清楚端正。如没把握，尽量用简单句写。