2022届高考英语复习专题：金太阳百校联考读后续写之不要以貌取人 讲义 （含答案）
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金太阳百校联考之不要以貌取人
理解文章，设计情节（情节不用过于复杂）（10-12句）
Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑，开始说出真相。）
1.事实上,那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。
2.他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。（进一步细节解释）
3.他刚好停车在附近，目睹了发生的一切。（进一步细节解释）
4.所以他开始开车去追那位女士。（进一步细节解释）
5. 他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。
6.然而，这个男子早已离开。
Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后，山姆陷入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）
7. Sam告诉她，虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人。
8.听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚。
9.幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。
10.通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训: 当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出判断直到找到真相。
列举续写常用13大句式：（重温上一次的读后续写）
句式1：With + 复合结构”又称为“with结构”
Unicom它看起来筋疲力尽，因为它受了重伤,左前腿流血不止。
It looked exhausted because it was seriously injured with its left front leg bleeding badly.
句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作
When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。
句式3 ：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果
那是因为浓雾笼罩了森林，几乎覆盖了一切。他们可以看到前面的地方，慢慢地走着。
That is because the thick fog blanketed the forest, covering almost everything. They could not see the place ahead and walked slowly.
他们松了一口气，激动开心，挥手告别。(with短语, 句子，Ving表伴随)
They breathed a sigh of relief with excitement and delight, waving goodbye to it.
句式4 巧用生动的无灵主语：
At this moment, with the moonlight fading ,the whole forest woke up and winds sang welcome to the dawn. 这时，随着月光渐渐褪去fade，整个森林都醒了，风在唱着欢迎黎明dawn的歌。
句式5 ：情感形容词+句子
Tired and worried, they were always fixing their eyes on their surroundings.他们又累又担心，总是盯着周围的环境。
句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节
After what seemed like a century, Eric heard another voice. It was Slide Mountain Rescue who finally came!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！
句式7：. “一……就……”的表达法：as soon as, hardly/scarcely…when…, no sooner… than…, the moment/minute/second/instant, immediately/instantly/directly, on/upon+n.doing。
一听到吼声，他们喜出望外，一边大喊Unicom，一边冲过去。(一...就...)
On hearing that, they were overjoyed and rushed over while shouting , “Look! Unicom!”
句式8：巧用“某人想到”:
At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。
句式9 ：主句，which从句（定语从句）
他们别无选择，只能弯腰寻找血迹或脚印等线索，这让他们走得更慢。
They had no choice but to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or foot prints, which made them walk more slowly.
句式10 ：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+ fill +地点）
Worry and anxiety filled the air.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。
句式11： 关于情感句子的积累:(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写),用so…that
Unicom很顺从，并安静下来，终于, 血止住了。（so...that...)
Unicom was so obedient and quiet that finally the bleeding stopped.
1.兴奋:I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我动得跳了起来
2.开心： I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得上跑下跳
3.感动: I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来
4.悲伤: I was so sad that I hid my face in my hands我难受得用手捂住了脸。
5.(生气)I was so angry that I failed to say a word我气得一句话也说不出。
6.（害怕） I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded.
我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。
7.（羞愧） I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。
句式12：副词修饰动词或句子
幸运的是，需要的东西都在急救箱里。David 温柔安抚Unicom，而Harry 立刻熟练地动手术。
Fortunately, everything they needed was available in the first aid kit.David gently comforted Unicom while Harry was conducting an operation on it immediately and skillfully.
句式13：倒装或强调
经过David和Harry的及时抢救，Unicom能够站起来，然后离开了。
It was because of David and Harry’s timely rescue that Unicom was able to stand up and walked away.
呼应主题常用句式
直到...才.... 倒装句：not until+时间状语 did sb realize that+主题从句 强调句：it was only then that sb realized that+主题从句
还记得某人的话， 某人的话还在脑海中 One’s words echoed/ rang out in one’s ears that+主题
三、巧用句式，写好句子
Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑，开始说出真相。）
事实上, 那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。
___________________________________________________________________________
2. 句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节,句式12：副词修饰动词或句子
他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
3. 句式7：. “一……就……”的表达法：
他刚好停车在附近，一停好车就目睹了发生的一切。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
4. as a result 所以他开始开车去追那位女士。
___________________________________________________________________________
5. 句式5 ：情感形容词+句子; 句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作
他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
6.句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节
然而，这个男子早已离开。
___________________________________________________________________________
Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后，山姆陷入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）
1. 状语从句省略
虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
2. 句式3 ：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果
听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚
___________________________________________________________________________
3. Fortunately,…; 句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作
幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。
___________________________________________________________________________
4. 句式13：倒装或强调Not until…（倒装句）主题要符合社会主义核心价值观
通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训: 当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出判断直到找到真相。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
2022-2-15金太阳百校联考之不要以貌取人
答案
Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑，开始说出真相。）
1. 事实上, 那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。
As a matter of fact, the man just wanted to return the purse to the woman.
2. when…（时间状语）
他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。
He explained that when the woman got into her car, she dropped the purse on the street unconsciously.
3. hardly…when… (一……就……)
他刚好停车在附近，一停好车就目睹了发生的一切。
He happened to park nearby and hardly had he parked the car when he witnessed what happened.
4. as a result
所以他开始开车去追那位女士。
As a result, he started to drive his car to chase the woman.
5. 动作链（A,B and C），2个形容词+句子
他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。
He returned the purse and the woman confirmed that nothing was missing.Excited and grateful, she bowed to the man, took out 100 dollars and handed it to him.
6.用时间状语从句before
然而，这个男子早已离开。However, the man had already left before she knew it.
Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后，山姆陷入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）
1. 状语从句省略
Sam告诉她，虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人.
Sam told her that although not handsome, the man had a heart of gold. In addition, he taught her not to judge people by their appearance.
2. hearing, +句子
听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚
Hearing these words, the woman felt embarrassed and guilty about her actions.
3. Fortunately,…
幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。
Fortunately, she realized her mistake and thanked Sam and the man.
4. Not until…（倒装句，强调句）主题要符合社会主义核心价值观
通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训: 当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出判断直到找到真相。
Through this experience, the woman learned a lesson: when you see something strange, not until you figure out the truth do you make any judgment.
理解文章，设计情节（情节不用过于复杂）（10-12句）
Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑，开始说出真相。）
1.事实上,那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。
2.他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。（进一步细节解释）
3.他刚好停车在附近，目睹了发生的一切。（进一步细节解释）
4.所以他开始开车去追那位女士。（进一步细节解释）
5. 他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。
6.然而，这个男子早已离开。
Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后，山姆陷入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）
7. Sam告诉她，虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人。
8.听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚。
9.幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。
10.通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训: 当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出判断直到找到真相。
列举续写常用13大句式：（重温上一次的读后续写）
句式1：With + 复合结构”又称为“with结构”
Unicom它看起来筋疲力尽，因为它受了重伤,左前腿流血不止。
It looked exhausted because it was seriously injured with its left front leg bleeding badly.
句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作
When the announcer said “Next up is the girls’ 100-meter hurdles”, Jodie took a deep breath and walked to the starting line slowly.当播音员说“接下来是女子100米栏”时，朱迪深吸一口气，慢慢地走到起跑线上。
句式3 ：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果
那是因为浓雾笼罩了森林，几乎覆盖了一切。他们可以看到前面的地方，慢慢地走着。
That is because the thick fog blanketed the forest, covering almost everything. They could not see the place ahead and walked slowly.
他们松了一口气，激动开心，挥手告别。(with短语, 句子，Ving表伴随)
They breathed a sigh of relief with excitement and delight, waving goodbye to it.
句式4 巧用生动的无灵主语：
At this moment, with the moonlight fading ,the whole forest woke up and winds sang welcome to the dawn. 这时，随着月光渐渐褪去fade，整个森林都醒了，风在唱着欢迎黎明dawn的歌。
句式5 ：情感形容词+句子
Tired and worried, they were always fixing their eyes on their surroundings.他们又累又担心，总是盯着周围的环境。
句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节
After what seemed like a century, Eric heard another voice. It was Slide Mountain Rescue who finally came!好像经历了一个世纪之后，埃里克听到了另一个声音。终于来了，是雪山救援队！
句式7：. “一……就……”的表达法：as soon as, hardly/scarcely…when…, no sooner… than…, the moment/minute/second/instant, immediately/instantly/directly, on/upon+n.doing。
一听到吼声，他们喜出望外，一边大喊Unicom，一边冲过去。(一...就...)
On hearing that, they were overjoyed and rushed over while shouting , “Look! Unicom!”
句式8：巧用“某人想到”:
At the thought of the fact that she didn’t have lucky spikes, she felt more anxious with her heart beating fast and her feet sweating.一想到自己没有幸运的钉子，她就更加焦虑，心跳加速，脚出汗。
句式9 ：主句，which从句（定语从句）
他们别无选择，只能弯腰寻找血迹或脚印等线索，这让他们走得更慢。
They had no choice but to bend down to search for clues like blood splashes or foot prints, which made them walk more slowly.
句式10 ：描写气氛或者氛围的句子。（情感词+ fill +地点）
Worry and anxiety filled the air.空气中弥漫着忧虑和焦虑。
句式11： 关于情感句子的积累:(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写),用so…that
Unicom很顺从，并安静下来，终于, 血止住了。（so...that...)
Unicom was so obedient and quiet that finally the bleeding stopped.
1.兴奋:I was so excited/thrilled that I gave a jump in the air.我动得跳了起来
2.开心： I was so happy/cheerful that I jumped up and down.我高兴得上跑下跳
3.感动: I was so moved that I failed to say a word.我感动得一句话也说不出来
4.悲伤: I was so sad that I hid my face in my hands我难受得用手捂住了脸。
5.(生气)I was so angry that I failed to say a word我气得一句话也说不出。
6.（害怕） I was so scared/frightened that my palms sweated and my heart pounded.
我害怕得手心汗,心怦怦直跳。
7.（羞愧） I was so ashamed that I could feel my face burning.我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。
句式12：副词修饰动词或句子
幸运的是，需要的东西都在急救箱里。David 温柔安抚Unicom，而Harry 立刻熟练地动手术。
Fortunately, everything they needed was available in the first aid kit.David gently comforted Unicom while Harry was conducting an operation on it immediately and skillfully.
句式13：倒装或强调
经过David和Harry的及时抢救，Unicom能够站起来，然后离开了。
It was because of David and Harry’s timely rescue that Unicom was able to stand up and walked away.
呼应主题常用句式
直到...才.... 倒装句：not until+时间状语 did sb realize that+主题从句 强调句：it was only then that sb realized that+主题从句
还记得某人的话， 某人的话还在脑海中 One’s words echoed/ rang out in one’s ears that+主题
三、巧用句式，写好句子
Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑，开始说出真相。）
事实上, 那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。
___________________________________________________________________________
2. 句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节,句式12：副词修饰动词或句子
他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
3. 句式7：. “一……就……”的表达法：
他刚好停车在附近，一停好车就目睹了发生的一切。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
4. as a result 所以他开始开车去追那位女士。
___________________________________________________________________________
5. 句式5 ：情感形容词+句子; 句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作
他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
6.句式6：巧用时间状语，表达情节
然而，这个男子早已离开。
___________________________________________________________________________
Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后，山姆陷入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）
1. 状语从句省略
虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人.
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
2. 句式3 ：句子+ing/ed或ing/ed+句子用于表示动作伴随，原因或结果
听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚
___________________________________________________________________________
3. Fortunately,…; 句式2 ：并列谓语，细化动作
幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。
___________________________________________________________________________
4. 句式13：倒装或强调Not until…（倒装句）主题要符合社会主义核心价值观
通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训: 当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出判断直到找到真相。
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
2022-2-15金太阳百校联考之不要以貌取人
答案
Para 1 The man just smiled and started to tell the truth. （那人只是笑了笑，开始说出真相。）
1. 事实上, 那个人只是想把钱包还给那个女士。
As a matter of fact, the man just wanted to return the purse to the woman.
2. when…（时间状语）
他解释说当那位女士进入她的车时，她不知不觉把钱包掉在街上了。
He explained that when the woman got into her car, she dropped the purse on the street unconsciously.
3. hardly…when… (一……就……)
他刚好停车在附近，一停好车就目睹了发生的一切。
He happened to park nearby and hardly had he parked the car when he witnessed what happened.
4. as a result
所以他开始开车去追那位女士。
As a result, he started to drive his car to chase the woman.
5. 动作链（A,B and C），2个形容词+句子
他归还钱包，那位女士确认钱包没有东西丢失。激动和感恩，她向那个男子鞠了一躬并拿出100美元递给他。
He returned the purse and the woman confirmed that nothing was missing.Excited and grateful, she bowed to the man, took out 100 dollars and handed it to him.
6.用时间状语从句before
然而，这个男子早已离开。However, the man had already left before she knew it.
Para 2 Then, Sam was lost in thought and began to talk with the woman.（然后，山姆陷入了沉思，接着开始和那位女士交谈。）
1. 状语从句省略
Sam告诉她，虽然这个人长得不帅，但是他有一颗金子般的心。此外，告诫她不应该以貌取人.
Sam told her that although not handsome, the man had a heart of gold. In addition, he taught her not to judge people by their appearance.
2. hearing, +句子
听了这些话，那位女士为自己的行为感到尴尬内疚
Hearing these words, the woman felt embarrassed and guilty about her actions.
3. Fortunately,…
幸运的是，她意识到自己的错误，并感激Sam和那个男人。
Fortunately, she realized her mistake and thanked Sam and the man.
4. Not until…（倒装句，强调句）主题要符合社会主义核心价值观
通过这次经历，这位女士得到经验教训: 当看到一些奇怪的东西，不要随意作出判断直到找到真相。
Through this experience, the woman learned a lesson: when you see something strange, not until you figure out the truth do you make any judgment.