(共15张PPT)
Unit4 The wonder of literature
-----Writing
Brainstorming
to recommend books
types
reasons
expectation/
result
purpose
Pre-writing
Step1.审题
1.体裁:应用文
2.主题:
3.结构:两/三段
第一段:
第二段:
第三段:
说明写信的目的
说出推荐书籍及推荐理由
希望建议被采纳/建议有帮助到您
案例
Step2.定人称和时态
Step3.列提纲(明确每段要点)
案例:
假设你是李华,从校报得知学校图书馆需要准备购入一批新书,欢迎大家推荐书目。请根据以下要点用英语向外籍图书管理员Michael写一封电子邮件,包括以下内容:
1.推荐科学书刊
2.说明理由
3.希望建议被采纳
Dear Michael,
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
_______________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
3.结构:两/三段
第一段:
第二段:
第三段:
目的
说出推荐书籍及推荐理由
希望建议被采纳/建议有帮助到您
Step3.列提纲(明确每段要点)
Para1:
Knowing that our school library is going to buy some books, I would like to give some suggestions.
Para2
Currently,there are various books in store for teachers and students in our libruary, including novels,poetry,biography and autobiography.What we need most I think is science books, which explain basic principles of nature in a particularly simple and interest way. If our school has these specific kinds of books,it will not only help us have a better understanding of the science subject, but also arouse our curiosity about the science world.
原因1
原因2+原因3
主题句
支持句
Para3
I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendations into consideration.
Knowing that our school library is going to buy some books, I would like to give some suggestions.
Currently,there are various books in store for teachers and students in our libruary, including novels,poetry,biography and autobiography.What we need most I think is science books, which explain basic principles of nature in a particularly simple and interest way. If our school has these specific kinds of books,it will not only help us have a better understanding of the science subject, but also arouse our curiosity about the science world.
I would appreciate it if you could take my recommendations into consideration.
Dear Micheal,
Yours ,
Li Hua
积累写作素材
1.词语
1.in store for
2.have a better understanding of
3.arouse one’s curiosity
4.draw on
5.make up for
6.That is why...
7.appeal to
8.reflect on
9.have a permanent influence on
10.not only...but also...
11.take sth. into consideration
准备着
对......有着更好的理解
引起某人的对......有着奇心
利用
弥补
那就是......的原因
吸引
思考;沉思;反思
对......有永久的影响
不仅......而且......
将某事考虑在内/考虑某事
2.句型
1.Knowing that+从句,I would like to do sth.
2.There be + n.(+swh)
3.What we need most I think is + n/doing/to do/从句。
4.It will/can not only do sth. but also do sth.
5.I would appreciate it if you could...
了解到/知道......我想要做某事
(在某地)有/存在某物
我认为我们最需要的是......
它不仅能/将会做某事,而且能/将会做某事
如果你能......我将不胜感激
假设你是李华最近你的 美国Tom发来邮件,希望你跟他分享一本书。请根据以下信息给他回复邮件。要点如下:
1.分享你的书名及作者;
2.该书的主要内容;
3.从该书中你学到了什么。
注意:
1.词数80词左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
佳作背诵
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to share one of my favorite books with you.It’s Jane Eyre.The author of the book is Charlotte Bronte.
The topic of Jane Eyre is love and independence. In the book,Jane Eyre lived a hard life but she wasn’t defeated. Actually,Jane Eyre is a sensitive,determined,confident and perseverant woman,and within her heart she firmly believes if you hold a belief and stick to it,you will eventually achieve your dream.
From the book Jane Eyre, I have learned that I’m capable of realizing my dream if I stick to it.
Yours,
Li Hua
素材积累:
1. I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
2.The reason why I reccommend this book is that it stresses the importance of good habits.
3.It offers you an opportunity to do something interesting and creative. Meanwhile, it also provides you a source of pleasure.
4.Reading books is a good way to broaden your horizons,through which you can learn different cultures of the world.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
我推荐这本书的原因是它强调了良好的习惯的重要性。
它为你提供了一个做有趣和有创意的事情的机会。同时,它也为你提供了快乐的源泉。
阅读书籍是拓宽视野的好方法,通过它你可以了解世界上不同的文化。
Post-writing
实战演练
(2014.浙江卷)学校图书馆需要购置一批新书,现向学校征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英文给图书馆的王老师写一封80词左右的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。
注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入总数)。
Dear Mr.Wang,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Yue