(共17张PPT)
Assessment & Practice of Writing
---How to write a news report
Star Student of the Week
Li Yue has been awarded the title of “Star Student of the Week” for what she did for our class. On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.
While the rest of us were enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortable rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting. Finally, she found the right clothes.
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where
who
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detailed information
Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried our best and won the first prize in the contest. It was her devotion that made a great impact on us and motivated us to win the prize.
Li Yue is always warm-hearted and cares a lot about the class. Besides, she often devotes her spare time to helping others, who has set a good example for us. Therefore, she deserves the honor and it is worthwhile for us to learn from her.
By Chen Jie, School Newspaper
detailed information
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An Upside down Pyramid
introduction
main body
comment
Part1
Part2
Part3
Summary
when, where, who, what
Development of the event in detail
People’s comments or action to be taken
Analyze the structure
最近,李越被评为你们班的“每周之星”。请你根据她的事迹(在上周六下午,不顾天气炎热,为班级选购歌咏比赛服装),用英语为校报写一篇100---120个词的报道。
你的文章应包括下列要点:
1.李越的事迹及其对同学的影响;
2.你的评论。
注意:1.文章的标题和开头已给出(不计词数)。
2. 参考词汇:singing contest (歌咏比赛)
costume 服装
your own thought and idea
Analyze the content
your comments
Appreciate & Search
Advanced vocabulary (高级词汇)
Linkingwords (连接词/过渡词)
Complex sentence patterns (复杂句式)
Analyze the language
leisure time; spend…searching and selecting;
deeply moved by; win the first prize; devotion;
make a great impact on; motivate us to…
warm-hearted; care about; devote…to helping others;
set a good example for…; deserve the honor;
worthwhile; learn from …
Advanced vocabulary:(高级词汇)
Linking words: (连接词)
While; Finally; Besides; Therefore
Analyze the language
Complex sentence patterns: (复杂句式)
Li Yue went downtown and walked from one store to another, looking for the costumes we would wear in the singing contest.
While the rest of us were enjoying ……, she spent ……
Deeply moved by her efforts, we tried……
It was her devotion that made a great impact on us and motivated us to win the prize.
she often devotes her spare time to helping others, who has set a good example for us.
it is worthwhile for us to learn from her.
ASSESSMENT
structure The article is divided into parts and well organized.
content All the details are included
Everything is to the point(切题).
Language Few spelling or grammatical mistakes.
Advanced vocabulary(高级词汇).
Some complex sentence patterns(复杂句式).
Some proper linking words(连接词/过渡词).
Handwriting
3月12日早上在河畔举行保护A河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下;
1.时间、地点、情景;
2.描述图片内容,包括师(外教)生、母子种树等
3.简要谈谈你的感想(至少2点)。
注意:字数100~120
参考词汇:植树节 Tree-planting Day 树苗 sapling
3月12日早上在河畔举行保护A河为主题的植树节活动。你就此事写一篇新闻报道。要点如下;1.时间、地点、情景;
2.描述图片内容,包括师(外教)生、母子种树等。
Make a list
Summary
when
where
what
who
why
on the morning of March 12
on Tree-planting Day
near/along the A riverside
hold/ carry out an activity; to plant trees
plenty of students as well as some foreign
teachers
in order to protect the A River
Attention: Tense; Passive Voice; in brief
Have a brainstorming in a group.
An editor: to write down your group members’ ideas and try to organize them into a complete news report.
Q1: How many people attended/participated in the activity
Q2: How did the people feel while attending the activity
Q3: Who made a deep impression on you
Q4: What surprised you most
Q5: What is the meaning of the activity
Q6: Would you like to join them and call on more people to do so
In order to protect the A river, an activity whose purpose was to plant trees was carried out by plenty of students as well as some foreign teachers along the A river on Tree-planting Day.
What most surprised me was that there were foreign teachers and students planting trees together. Some were digging holes, while others were putting saplings into the holes. Having planted some trees, they smiled. Besides, a hard-working mother with her son planted trees happily,
which left me a deep impression./set us a good example.
As we know, it is the environment that is getting worse . Therefore, it’s high time that we should be aware of the terrible situation . Thus, I attach great importance to taking steps to protect our home. And only by putting it into practice can the earth grow more beautiful.
Have a discussion in a group.
An assessor(评判员):to make an assessment of the other group’s composition and try to polish(修改,润色) it.
Homework