(共19张PPT)
Unit3 Could you please clean your room
SectionB 3a-self check
写作公开课
Learning objectives:
1.能够写出一篇关于家务简单的议论短文,掌握议论文的写作方法。
2.让学生体会父母的辛劳,养成勤于做家务的习惯,增强独立意识。
Enjoy the English song
How do you thanks for your parents as a student
Maybe you can thanks for your parents by doing chores.
Discussion:
Do chores
do the dishes
fold the clothes
sweep the floor
cook dinner
take out the rubbish
make the bed
wash the clothes
take the dog for a walk
What chores do you often help your parents
Do you think children should do chores
Why or why not
Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence.
Doing chores teaches children how to look after themselves.
Doing chores helps them to understand the idea of fairness.
Everyone should do their part in keeping the house tidy and clean.
Doing chores is better for children’s future.
In my opinion, I agree that ________________.
I think it’s important for children to learn to___________.
because _______________________.
Agree
children should do some housework.
do housework
Housework is a waste of children’s time.
Kids these days have enough stress from school
Children should spend their time on schoolwork in order to
get good grades and get into a good university.
It is not old enough for children to study and do housework.
Children have no time to study and do house work.
It’s parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable
environment at home for their children.
In my opinion, I disagree that ________________.
I think it’s unfair for children to learn to___________.
because _______________________.
Disagree
children should do some housework.
do housework
share your opinion
分A组与B组辩论比赛
表明你的观点：
支持自己观点的理由：
I think/believe/agree that...
I don't think/believe/agree that...
In my opinion,(依我看来）...
First,...
Second,..
Third,...
And anyway,（而且）...
For example,（例如）....
Beginning:
开头
提出论点并陈述正反方观点：
陈述正反观点：
Some students think that…,
however, some students believe that …
Main body：
主体
Ending结束:
表明你的观点：
I agree that...
In my opinion,...
支持自己观点的理由（2-3点）：
First,...Second,..Third,... And anyway...,For example,....
再次重申自己观点:In a word/ All in all,…
How to write an argumentation(议论文)
we have a talk about ...
可用哪些词代替？
可用哪些词代替？
It is good for sb to do sth.
可用哪些词代替？
可用哪些词代替？反面观点呢？
Writing
在英语课上，同学们就中学生是否应该做家务进行了激烈的讨论。有人认为我们应该做家务，有人认为我们没必要做家务。请写一篇短文，说明你支持哪个一个观点并阐述原因。
要求：80词左右。语言规范、意思连贯、表达完整。
一.审题： style(体裁) :_________
person (人称 ) : __________
tense(时态) : _________
议论文
第一人称
一般现在时
审
列
写
改
写作技巧：
Do you think children should do some chores at home
In my opinion, I agree/disagree that ________________.
I think it is fair/unfair for children to _____ ____.
Nowadays, _.I have several reasons for this. First, it is impotant for children to _____________. Second,_____________. What's more!______________________.
All in all, children should/should not_______ .
It is good for them to develop themselvs.
Yours truly,
四.改:self-check（相互改）
①篇章方面：布局是否完整？逻辑是否合理？要点
是否齐全/丰富？
②句子方面：主谓是否一致？时态是否正确？句式
是否多样？是否用到连词过度？
③词语方面：代词的主格、宾格等形式使用是否正
确？名词单复数是否准确？动词搭配、动词的形
式等是否正确？形容词、副词的使用是否达意，
与修饰的对象是否相符？
④细节方面：单词拼写、标点符号、大小写等是否
正确？
We have a talk about doing housework in an English class. Some students think we should do housework ,however others believe we needn’t do housework.
In my opinion, it’s necessary for us students to do some housework. Here’re three main reasons. First, it’s our job to share some housework, because we are a member of our families.Second, we can learn some life skills by doing housework. And anyway, the most important thing is that we can develop our independence.
In a word, it’s necessary and helpful to do some housework.
范文欣赏：
文章条理清楚，结构完整，符合议论文的写作要求。论点鲜明，论据充分真实，结论精炼有力，与论点前后呼应。
在文中能使用“In my opinion, First, Second, And anyway, In a word”等连接词或过渡词，使得行文流畅，层次清晰。
Make a list of chores using these
verbs.
1. do _______________________
2. clean _____________________
3. make _____________________
4. fold _______________________
5. sweep ____________________
6. take out ___________________
Self check
do the dishes
clean the living room
make your bed
fold your clothes
sweep the floor
take out the rubbish
Are these polite requests or
permissions Write the numbers in
the correct places in the chart.
1. Could you please do your homework
2. Could I watch TV
3. Could you take out the rubbish first
4. Could I use your computer
5. Could I leave now
6. Could you come back before nine
Requests
Permissions
2
4
5
1
3
6
Homework
Share your composition with your group-
mates and write down good sentences of
you group-mates’ compositions.
Thank you for listening!
