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One day, little Tony went to a shopping centre with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
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名词
介词
副词
非谓语动词
引导词
动词
动词
冠词
代词
形容词副词
短文改错三不改:
1. 标点符号不改。
2. 大小写不改。
3. 词序不改。
短文改错口诀:
1. 动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;
2. 非谓语,重形式;代词格,要一致;
3. 冠词连词看意思;介词短语记搭配;
4. 习惯用法要牢记;句子成分多分析;
5. 逻辑错误须关注。
一、动词形 (Verb forms)
1)时态不一致(一般现在时与一般过去时错用);
2)and 等并列连词前后动词时态不一致;
3)主谓不一致(主语单复数以及第三人称单数)
4)缺/多动词,特别是be动词
They did not want me to do any work at home; they want me to devote all my time to my studies.
When the day of the exam comes, Tom sat next to Mia.
I still remember the first day I come to this new school.
It scare me so much that I held my breath.
I like NanxiRiver, which lay in the southeast of Zhejiang.
1、时态不一致(一般现在时与一般过去时混淆)
do
came
came
scared
lies
He does go to meet us at the station, but he didn’t see us.
He looked out of the window and finding a store nearby on the street was on fire.
Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become strangers at once.
As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.
Goverments have taken measures to protect the wildlife and create nature reserves.
2、and等并列连词前后动词时态不一致
did
found
talk
visited
created
My picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
Tom as well as two of his classmates were invited to the party
Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library.
As is known to us all, remembering English words are not easy.
It was very cold and there was few people in the street.
are
was
are
is
3、主谓不一致
were
There will an important game next month.
The bike outside my house is belonged to Tom.
The serious accident was happened in Jinan.
This thing can an unforgettable one for him.
Up to now, great changes have been taken place in this city.
4、缺/多动词,特别是be动词
be
be
情态动词后若无动词,添加be动词原形
高考无被动:belong to / happen / take place / realise / appear / disappera / die out等, 若为-ed形式且前有be动词(am /is /are /was /were /been /being),删除即可
二、名词数 (Noun)
1)单数/复数用法错误;
2)可数/不可数用法错误;
There are around one hundred woman workers in this factory.
He can go without examination to a comprehensive school, a kind of school for all ability.
On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.
I’ll get bad marks in few my subject.
Their word were a great encouragement to me.
Maybe we should do several thing to change their mind.
1、单数/复数用法错误
women
abilities
pictures
subjects
words
things
常见的修饰可数名词复数的词:
few / a few ; several;
many; dozens of;
a number of; more than one;
some; a lot of/lots of;
plenty of; most;
all; masses of
根据名词前的修饰语确定名词的单复数是高考的考察重点
Without enough knowledges, you can never teach well..
I’m having some troubles.
They will buy several sets of furnitures for their new house.
He took so much luggages that he was tired.
More informations about the affair came to light.
2、可数/不可数用法错误
knowledge
trouble
furniture
luggage
information
高考中常考的纯不可数名词:information; knowledge; furniture;
advice; trouble; luggage; fun; wealth; progress; equipment等
三、还要注意形和副(Adjective and Adverb)
1)形容词和副词混淆;
2)以-ed和-ing结尾的形容词的错用 ;
3)比较级/最高级
The handwriting of Chinese is quite specially and unique.
Hearing that, Jacky was very happily.
I’m real looking forward to your reply.
Luck enough, he didn’t get injured in the car accident.
Feel frightenedly, he quickened his pace.
They worry about whether people can be as closely as before.
Most problems can be solved, but some are hardly to solve.
What he did true scared theose children.
1、形容词和副词混淆
special
happy
really
Luckily
frightened
close
hard
truly
形容词/副词的用法:
形容词:修饰名词,在系动词后作表语
注意: 下列词其后也可跟形容词
感官动词:feel; look; sound; taste; smell
表似乎:seem; appear
表变化: become; get; turn等
表依旧:remain; keep; stay; 等
副词:修饰动词、形容词、副词或句子
Ammy started to be interesting in how to be a good student.
It was both excited and frightening to be up there!
I became relaxing in studying thanks to my friends’ help.
I got extremely amazing at ancient stories.
The snake was so frightened that it made several kids cry.
2、以-ed和-ing结尾的形容词的错用
interested
exciting
relaxed
amazed
frightening
常见的-ed和-ing结尾的形容词:
interest surprise relax excite
amuse amaze frighten astonish
puzzle satisfy bore touch
embarrass tire
Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong.
This was the bad thing I had ever experienced .
Modern people live much more longer
That afternoon we worked well than anyone else.
Two hours late we arrived at the park.
Compared with America, Chinese history is even long .
Yellow River is one of the longer rivers in China.
2、比较级/最高级
stronger
worst
better
later
longer
longest
比较级的标志:
than前;even/much/far后
比较级and比较级
the+比较级,the+比较级
最高级的标志:
one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数
最高级and最高级
the+形容词最高级+范围(三者或三者以上之间比较)
四、非谓语,重形式 (Non-predicate Verb)
1)现在分词 / 过去分词(主动/被动);
2)and连接的非谓语形式前后一致(尤其距离较远时);
3)介词后ing
4)不定式符号to的省略与添加
5)动词后接动名词或不定式的固定搭配
I found a small house standing in a field with a light shone.
He would also catch the food throwing to him.
Seeing from the mountain, our school looks beautiful..
She walked out of the house, following by her little daughter.
Lost himself in thought, he almost ran into the car in front of him.
Unless constantly repeating, the English word are easily forgotten.
1、现在分词/过去分词 (主动/被动)
shining
thrown
Seen
followed
Losing
repeated
I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.
Children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves.
I’m kooking forward to see all of you againin the near future.
It’s still about be able to run faster,jump higher and throw further.
Learning a language and get a good result requires memory and practice.
Think about how much time you can devote to help others.
2 / 3
seeing
reading
seeing
being
getting
helping
He didn’t want share things with other people.
I could not to run very fast and fell behind.
Many students may also to save up for their college.
I have just got some good news tell you.
It took me such a long time choose a guitar.
Bob get a serious illness and is not expected live
The teacher is teaching how words should to be pronounced
to
to
to
to
4、不定式符号to的省略与添加
What he said reminds the visitors to taking care of flowers.
He has a poor sight and has to wearing glasses.
I spent more than ten years learn English.
Jacky usually volunteered to helping others.
I especially enjoy play football in all sports.
My father demanded to knowing what happened.
I want to keep do this for I’m not satisfied with the reult.
take
wear
learning
doing
5、动词后接动名词或不定式的固定搭配
know
playing
help
五、代词格,要一致 (Pronouns)
1)人称代词:主格/宾格;宾格/反身代词;性别;指代单复数;
2)物主代词:性别;单复数;指代混淆;
3)特殊用法it
I can’t forget the food you cooked for I .
Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!
My brother has a good body and she does exercise regularly.
When my friends come to my house, I’d like to say“Enjoy yourself”.
The teacher collected their papers and graded it.
I think I liked those classes because I felt that it helped me understand what the world works.
me
myself
he
1、人称代词:主格/宾格;宾格/反身代词;性别;指代单复数
they
them
yourselves
He wanted to introduce him to all his neighbours.
The examination held once a month drive our mad.
Tom told Kate she would go to the party.
At the airport, all his baggage eas stolen, but soon he got them back.
Here are some letters for you and he.
She loves swimming.It keeps she fit.
himself
us
her
him
it
he
They begin to hate the work which can destroy his happiness.
Jenny found his parents were missing.
They were late for the exam.To his surprise, the teacher give them a chance.
Due to some people, I usually think about the meaning of this job. Its behavior made me want to give up.
their
her
their
2、物主代词:性别;单复数;指代混淆
Their
That was very dangerous to drive fast.
This is the book which you bough it for me ten years ago.
That is no use cheating in the exam.
I would appreciate if you give me a chance.
That is the sun that give off light and heat.
I found impossible to please everyone, so let them go.
I think that interesting to talk with her.
It
It
3、特殊用法it
it
it
It
it
It的固定句型结构:
It + be +adj. + (for/of sb.)+to do sth.
It is no use/good doing sth.
It is worth doing sth.
It + 被强调部分 +that 从句
主语+find/think/consider/feel/make+ it + adj.+ to do sth.
I would appreciate it if.....
【技法点金】
1.牢记不定代词的用法
(1)some和any的用法
some一般用于肯定句中,意思是“几个”“一些”“某个”。any用于肯定句时,意思是“任何的”。
(2)many和much的用法
many与可数名词复数连用;much与不可数名词连用。
(3)other与another 误用
六、冠词、连词看意思 (Articles and Conjunctions)
1)多或缺冠词以及冠词之间的误用;
2)并列连词but,and,or 和 so的用法错误;
3)从属连词用法错误
Now I’m writing long letter to tell you all the things.
My friend Mary comes from an European country.
An old lady was in hurry to go across the street.
To keep the balance of the nature, China built a “Great Green Wall”.
When a child is five in England, his parents must send him to the school.
Football is most popular game in England
a
a
1、多/缺冠词以及冠词之间的误用
the
a
the
考点必记:
冠词的基本用法
注意:
① useful,European,university, united, uniform前用冠词 “a”;
hour ,honest,honor前用冠词“an”
② 上文中提到的,独一无二的,说话双方知道的,最高级前,序数词 前用冠词the
③ 名词前不加冠词:三餐四季前;语言或学科名词前;球类运动或棋类运动前;有物主代词指示代词或不定代词修饰时;
2. 固定搭配
冠词固定搭配
不定冠词(a/an)
定冠词(the)
all of a sudden ; as a matter of fact ; as a result ; for a while ; get a ride/lift ; have/take a rest ; in a word ; once in a while
at the same time ; to tell you the truth ; at the age of ;
all the time ; on the top of; in the middle of ; at the end of;
in the habit of ; on the other hand ; on the whole
零冠词
for example ; by chance ; by accident ; in danger ; on purpose ; out of date ; on foot ; at dawn
He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away.
Though she is clever, but she works very hard.
Keeping a diary is not only a way to express my feeling, and can help me improve my writing ability.
In order to make sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us.
When I studied chemistry in high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor.
and
but
2、并列连词but,and,or 和 so的用法错误
and
【技法点金】
1.多余:
①because/since与so连用时删除so;
②though/although/as与but连用时,删除but。
2.误用:几个常见的连词误用:
①or与and的误用; ②and与but的误用 ③so与but的误用;
④before与after的误用; ⑤before/after与when/while的误用。
3.固定句式要记清:
① and;both...and...;not only... but (also)...;neither...nor...等表示顺承或递进关系。
②but; yet; while等表示对比或转折关系。
③or; either...or ...; not...but...表示选择关系。
④ so/ such...that...
It won't be long before...
not...until...
Today I was having a lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.
The reason was because more than 90% of the students didn’t be interested in studying.
We doubt that he can win the game.
The father wanted to know that was happened .
I know the girl who mather is a doctor.
Maybe the book is the best which I have read.
My sister broke my cup who was bought by my best friend.
when
that
whether
3、从属连词用法错误
which
whose
what
that
七、介词短语看搭配 (Prepositional Phrases)
1. Under the help of the teacher, I quickly got the book I needed.
2. Leaves differ greatly from size and shape.
3. It would remind me my wonderful adventure.
4. In a rainy night, he came back home alone.
5. As a result of. eople are faced with a serious problem
6. I benefit a great deal of from reading.
7. I’m outgoing and I get in well with others.
on
On
of
in
With
四大原则
1)改动以最少为原则
2)虚词以添加或删除为原则
3)实词以改变词形为原则
4)以不改变句意为原则
When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day ,we’d greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us, Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there!
My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.
child
later
the
him
were
know
chatted
on
exciting
I‘m crazy about football and I think It’s best! I love watching it but I especially enjoy play it. I play for my school’s football team, and I play matches two a week-on Friday evenings after school or on Sunday mornings. And we also had football coaching on Tuesday evenings when we just practise all our football skills. We all have a specially football shirt with a number on the back-I’m number 7, what is my lucky number! My mum always comes to watch us to play-even when it’s rained. My team isn’t very good; in fact, we nearly always lose, but we don’t care! My coach says it’s taking parts that is important.
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