(共13张PPT)
How to do proof reading
For senior one
1.了解短文改错题型的特征和要求,规范答题
2.通过相关题型的练习,掌握不同词性的常考点
Aims
Step
1
Lead in
Listen to the song and find out the mistakes.
When they played I’d sing along, it made me to smile. Those were so happy times, but not so long ago. How I wondered where they'd gone, but we are back again just like long lost friend. All the song I love so well. Every sha-la-la-la every wo-wo still shines. Every shing-a-ling-a-ling that they're starting to sing so fine. When they get to the part where he's breaking her heart, it can real make me cry just like before. It's yesterday one more.
When I am young, I’d listen to the radio, wait for my favorite songs.
was
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a
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waiting
once
such
and
they
songs
really
Step 2
Self study
Observe the passage above and fill in the blanks.
一篇文章共 ____ 处错误。一句话中最多____ 处错误。一般增词 ___ 个;删词 ____ 个; 改词有 _____个 (一增一减八修改)。每处错误及其修改均仅限 _____ 词。只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
*注意格式规范*
增加:在缺词处加一个 ______ (漏字符号),并在下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用 ______ (斜线)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划 _____ (横线),并在该词 _____ (上/下方) 写出修改
后的词。
短文改错规则:
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10
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8
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2
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下
Step 3
Exercises and explanation
错误类型一:动词形
When I am young, I’d listen to the radio.
was
【练一练】 1.Great changes have been taken place in our country.
2. Last summer, I went to London for a holiday and spend
just a week there.
3. Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.
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动词常考点:
(1)时态; (2) 语态; 注: 不及物动词无被动;
(3)主谓一致
spent
likes
不及物动词短语,无被动
错误类型二:名代数
All the song I love so well. /...... and we are back again
songs they
1. Mary taught me some basic step of cooking.
2.Looking back on the progresses that you have made, I am
(2)不可数名词误用复数。
名词常考点:
proud of you.
【练一练】
(1)可数名词单数和复数的误用;
名词常考点:
常见的不可数名词:advice, information, progress, news,
equipment, furniture
steps
progress
some+可数名词复数
progress“进步”(不可数)
(1)主格,宾格和物主代词的误用;
(2)人称指代前后不一致
3. Rose is such a kind girl that we all like him very much.
代词常考点:
her
错误类型三:介 冠多错省
......just like long lost friend.
【练一练】
a
∧
1. Jim has no room to live .
2. Mr. Li will return from America on next week.
3. Last week I met a old friend in the street.
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in
∧
介词常考点:
(1) 介词的多用, 漏用和误用; (2) 介词后+V-ing
冠词常考点:
a , an , the 的多用,漏用和误用
随堂积累: in hurry; have good time; make a progress;
catch a sight of
a
∧
a
∧
\
\
——
an
live 为不及物动词,接逻辑宾语时+in
next week前不用介词
/ ld/ 元音音素开头
错误类型四:留意形和副
...... it can real make me cry.
really
【练一练】
tired
1. They went back home, tiring and hungry.
2. Lucky, he found his lost wallet.
3. He is a careful person and he always does things careful.
形容词常考点:
(1)形容词可修饰名词,还可修饰主句中主语的状态;
(2)比较级/最高级误用
副词常考点:
副词修饰形容词、副词、动词以及整个句子。
carefully
Luckily
adj.修饰主句主语状态
adv.修饰整个句子
adv.修v.
错误类型五:连词错误多关注
How I wondered where they’d gone but we are back again.
and
【练一练】
1.You must get up early tomorrow, for I will go there alone.
2.In the countryside, the air is clean or the mountain is green.
3.Though he is a little child, but he knows a lot.
连词常考点:
(1)并列连词: 表并列(and, or)、表递进(moreover, besides)、表转折(but, yet)、表选择(or)、表因果(for, so);
(2)从属连词:
because和so, though/although和but 不能同时使用
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or
and
【巩固练习】
At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Kate was decorated it with a lot of Christmas gift. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Both Jim and her parents
On
chose
tall
it
\
gifts
beautiful
and
his
were
∧
留意形和副
动词形
动词形
留意形和副
介冠多错省
名代数
连词错误多关注
名代数
名代数
动词形
on+具体某一天
as+adj. 原级+as 和...一样
it 指代圣诞树
singing and dancing happily.
Step 4
Summary
动 词 形,
名 代 数,
介 冠 多错省,
留意 形 和 副,
连 词错误多关注
时态
语态
主谓一致
单复数
主 宾格
人称指代
多/漏/误用
介词+v-ing
a、an、the
修名,主语状态
比较级最高级
修动,副,形,句子
并列连词
从属连词
Thank you!