北师大版（2019）必修第二册：读后续写技巧课件（16张）

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读后续写
写作步骤
采用“四步答题法”阅读—拟稿—润色—成稿。
Step1 阅读，理清故事情节，找出5W+1How。
1. make sense of the main plots of the passage.
2. Analyze the two given sentences&underine key words to predict what is to follow.
Step2 拟稿Draft
Work out an outline
Step3 润色 Polish
1.Use the key words and phrases in the passage.
2.Use different sentense structures.
3. Check whether the verb forms and words spelling is correct.
1．句式要有变化
① 复合句
② 强调句型
It is ……that (who)…
③固定句子结构
too…to… so…that… not …until…
not only…but also… neither…nor…
名词性从句
定语从句
状语从句
2．要使用高级词汇及短语
① 使用高等级词汇
He is a good student. excellent\extraordinary
② 使用短语
I like music. be fond of\be interested in
③ 使用谚语
As the saying goes,“…”
3. 使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺
并列
选择
原因
结果
比较
转折
递进
举例
and; as well as ; also; too,
or; either—or;
because (of) ;owing to; due to ; thanks to
so ; therefore ; thus ; as a result
on the contrary ; compared to …
but ; yet; however ;
besides ; moreover ; in addition
for example; such as ; that is ;
;take …for example
step4 成稿 Present
Produce the final work.
课堂练习
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。（满分25）
I am a doctor, so I love my job. I always have, but I feel particularly proud to do it at the moment. With COVID-19 sweeping through Wuhan, people are avoiding hospitals as possible they can. However, pregnant women still need to come into the hospital. Babies still need to be born.
Right now, it is even scarier for these women, as they have to come in on their own, often feeling frightened. Their families are separated from them due to safety measures. We’ve always provided physical support, but now we are doing so on a different level — we also have to keep them company and offer emotional support. Unfortunately, some of the women have caught corona-virus, and being at the hospital puts me at risk. Personally, I feel protected because we have full personal protective equipment, which we wear all through our 13-hour shifts. You don’t know if someone is carrying corona-virus or not.
I didn’t want to put my family in danger by bringing the virus home and possibly passing it on to them. As a single parent to my children, Xiaohua, 12 years old, and Xiaoyong, 9, I realized I had to make a very tough decision about my family’s safety when the country went into lockdown. Giving up work wasn’t an option for me. I wanted to be able to look after the women who were feeling poorly and very scared, but I could not leave my little angels behind either.
At this point, my sister suggested that the children stay with her and her husband for the time being and leave me to my hospital duties. I thought it was a great idea, so we set a date for her to pick them up. When I explained the situation to my angels and told them they needed to stay with their aunt for a while, they both seemed upset, but agreed to go. On the day I saw them off, they kept looking back at me until they were too far to be seen.
注意：
1、续写词数应为150左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill.
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A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday.
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Storyline
how did Jenny feel about her mother
Beginning: quarrelled, ran out(para1)
angry
Development: a
stranger, a bowl of noodles(para2
mean and cruel
climax :Stranger's words,mother's love(para3&4)
regretful &grateful
later development: went home(para5)

第一步，迅速获取故事情节（5W+1H)
1.who:
2.when:
3. where:
4. What:
5.Why:
6.How:
请思考
第二步，理清人物情感变化
Storyline
AboutXiaoyong’s feelings
Beginning:
Development:
climax :
later development:
想一想
One possible version
After that, my workload increased because some of my coworkers fell ill. We had to work double shifts and my life was dedicated to nothing but work. Every day I came back home completely exhausted and fell asleep. As soon as I woke up, I needed to go to the hospital. I poured all my efforts into my patients, which was very rewarding. However, it troubled me that I didn’t have time for my own kids. Xiaoyong was going to celebrate his birthday soon. I had to do something to make up for him.
A week later, it came to Xiaoyong’s birthday. I made a video call to them from the hospital. I greeted them on the screen with my mask and goggles on, they recognized me at once, shouting excitedly. I took the phone to the hall where my coworkers sang “Happy Birthday, Xiaoyong!” They also encouraged him to be strong, and a grin appeared on his face. My children’s understanding and my coworker’s support gave me a warm feeling, and I believe nothing could ever truly separate me and my beloved ones. We are sure to win.

Homework
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One weekend in August, Daniel and his father drove five hours to camp over night by a lake in the forest. On the way, unfortunately, his father received a phone call from Daniel's teacher saying Daniel had broken the school rules, and then he started to criticize （批评）Daniel. By the time they reached the lake, Daniel was so angry that he said to his father, "I'm going to find a better place for us to camp" and walked away alone.
With no path to follow. Daniel just walked on for quite a long time. After he had climbed to a high place, he turned around, hoping to see the lake. To his surprise, he saw nothing but forest and a snow capped mountain top. He suddenly realized that he was lost.
"Dad! Mom! Dad! Mom!. . . " he cried. "Help! Help me!. . . "
No reply. If only he had not left his mobile phone in that bag with his father. Daniel kept moving, but the farther he walked, the more confused he became. As night was beginning to fall. Daniel was so tired that he had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Daniel said to himself, ''Hadn't I walked away angrily, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, facing with the danger of dying. '' He regretted( 后 悔 ) with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with shining tears in his eyes.
Daniel rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. He could hear water trickling (滴落)some where in the distance. Quickly he followed the sound to a stream. To his great joy. he saw some apple trees. He ate some. Never in his life had he tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Daniel began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead him to the lake.
注意：
1、续写词数应为 150 左右；
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
As he walked along the stream carefully, Daniel heard a strange sound in the distance.

Paragraph 2:
It was early in the morning when Daniel woke up.