2022届高考英语二轮复习短文改错归纳课件（32张PPT）
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(共32张PPT)
Proof-reading
短文改错
Learning aims
1.I can know the testing rules of proof-reading
2.Ican grasp the effective skills of correcting the mistakes
What is proof reading？
满分10分，给出一篇10个错误的短文，要求考生将错误找出并规范改正。
错误所占比例为1(添)：1（删）：8（改）
建议时间：8分钟
Long long ago, there lived the man who was so lazy that no job was fit of him . In order to make a living he one day went to a neighbor of him for help. The neighbor advised him work as a cemetery caretaker as it was the most easiest job one could find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned his job three days before he got it . “It’s unfair. ” He said to the neighbor angry. “In the cemetery all the others are lying while I am the only one who have to stand.
Practice 1
Long long ago ,there was the man
who was so lazy that no job was fit
of him. In order to make a living he
one day went to a neighbor of him
for help. The neighbor advised him
work as a cemetery caretaker as it
was the most easiest job one could
____
_____
for
_________
his
to
介词
冠词
代词
a
非谓语
∧
形容词最高级
find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned
his job three days before he got it .
“It’s unfair.”He said to the neighbor
_______
_____
was
surprise
动词时态
固定搭配
after
逻辑错误
angry. “In the cemetery all the others are lying still while I am the only one who have to stand.”
_______
has
形容词
angrily
动词的主谓一致
常 考 错 误 类 型
错误类型
句 法
行文逻辑
词 法
名词
动词
形容词副词
代词
冠词
介词
连词
固定搭配
名从
定从
状从
主谓一致
时态一致
人称一致
逻辑一致
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
习惯用法要记住
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
A Limerick
Practice makes perfect.
高考真题演练
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! .
1.通读全文，把握大意
2.细读全文，仔细斟酌
3.再读全文,复核审查
The method of correcting
改明显错误
对照考点，排除法
三种题型 是否齐，题量分布是否符合命题规律
3 steps
幻灯片 20
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
习惯用法要记住
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
A Limerick
Homework:
Finish the poof-reading from national papers of 2014
2. Analyze the mistake points
Have a nice day!
Thank you !
1. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good.(
3.Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice
and lively.
2.It was a wonderful surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us.
动 词 形
held
is
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
1.名词单、复数形式误用
注意可数名词与不可数名词
1. …so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.
2. He collected some informations about computers.
subjects
information
progress, furniture,
equipment, fun, news,
information, advice
名 词 数
1.分清形容词和副词用法
2.正确使用比较级和最高级
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work.
2. His father looks much more happier today.
angrily
名词
作定语表语
动词,形容词,副词,
作状语
还要注意形和副
1 Play football makes us grow up tall and strong.
2 I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world.
Playing
feeling
1）不定式；
2）动名词作主语、宾语；
3）并列连词and 等连接的不定式或动名词前后要一致(注意距离较远时)；
4）现在分词和过去分词的区别等。
非谓语， 细辨别
in hurry
in Sunday afternoon
such many people
a
on
∨
so
习惯用法要记住
1. Mary did his best to make me feel at home.
2. He found difficult to learn math well.
her
(一）人称代词要一致 (性/数/格)
(二）反身代词
(三) 不定代词误用 (someone, something, anyone, anything等)
(四) it作形主、形宾或指代时有无缺漏 (make, find, think)
∨
it
代 词 格，细 领 悟
（一）单数可数名词前须加a/an (泛指)或the(特指)
（二）注意用或不用冠词特殊情况
1. We may be one family and live under a same roof.
2. What a fun it is to go swimming in summer.
the
冠 词
1. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very interesting.
2. Although it is raining heavily, but I decided to go out.
3.But before long they began to see which was happening.
which
(一) 注意定语从句中关系代词和关系副词正确用法
名词性从句（连接代词/副词/从属连词的混用）
(二) 注意连词and/ but, and/ or, but/ however之间错用
(三) 注意从属连词如because与so, though /although与but, if与and / or 等不能同时使用.
what
连 词
与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误.
The angel touched his eyes, but he could
see everything clearly.
and
逻辑错误需关注
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
习惯用法要记住
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
A Limerick
Long long ago, there lived the man who was so lazy that no job was fit of him . In order to make a living he one day went to a neighbor of him for help. The neighbor advised him work as a cemetery caretaker as it was the most easiest job one could find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned his job three days before he got it . “It’s unfair. ” He said to the neighbor angry. “In the cemetery all others are lying still while I am the only one who have to stand.
练 一 练
Long long ago ,there lived the man
who was so lazy that no job was fit
of him. In order to make a living he
one day went to a neighbor of him
for help. The neighbor advised him
work as a cemetery caretaker as it
was the most easiest job one could
____
_____
for
_________
his
to
介词
冠词
代词格
a
非谓语
∧
形容词最高级
find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned
his job three days before he got it .
“It’s unfair.”He said to the neighbor
_______
_____
was
surprise
动词时态
固定搭配
after
逻辑错误
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
Practice makes perfect.
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I'd done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
cousin
cousin’s
rich
richer
on
in
∧
it/that
\
faced
face
Late
Later
slow
slowly
knows
knew
ever
never
Practice makes perfect.
Homework :
Finish Exercise paper
During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life. I usually travel by train because of it is much cheaper and safe. But to fly in the sky was something new to me. In the very beginning I feel a little nervous. I looked around and saw many smiling faces and determined eyes, who made me calm down very soon. After a while, I became excited when I found me high in the sky among the clouds. I also found that mountains, fields, rivers and so on was interestingly small. I enjoyed the frightening and comfortable journey very much. After all, it is much interesting to take a plane than to take a car. I will never forget this wonderfully trip by plane.
Have a nice day!
Thank you !
Proof-reading
短文改错
Learning aims
1.I can know the testing rules of proof-reading
2.Ican grasp the effective skills of correcting the mistakes
What is proof reading？
满分10分，给出一篇10个错误的短文，要求考生将错误找出并规范改正。
错误所占比例为1(添)：1（删）：8（改）
建议时间：8分钟
Long long ago, there lived the man who was so lazy that no job was fit of him . In order to make a living he one day went to a neighbor of him for help. The neighbor advised him work as a cemetery caretaker as it was the most easiest job one could find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned his job three days before he got it . “It’s unfair. ” He said to the neighbor angry. “In the cemetery all the others are lying while I am the only one who have to stand.
Practice 1
Long long ago ,there was the man
who was so lazy that no job was fit
of him. In order to make a living he
one day went to a neighbor of him
for help. The neighbor advised him
work as a cemetery caretaker as it
was the most easiest job one could
____
_____
for
_________
his
to
介词
冠词
代词
a
非谓语
∧
形容词最高级
find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned
his job three days before he got it .
“It’s unfair.”He said to the neighbor
_______
_____
was
surprise
动词时态
固定搭配
after
逻辑错误
angry. “In the cemetery all the others are lying still while I am the only one who have to stand.”
_______
has
形容词
angrily
动词的主谓一致
常 考 错 误 类 型
错误类型
句 法
行文逻辑
词 法
名词
动词
形容词副词
代词
冠词
介词
连词
固定搭配
名从
定从
状从
主谓一致
时态一致
人称一致
逻辑一致
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
习惯用法要记住
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
A Limerick
Practice makes perfect.
高考真题演练
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! .
1.通读全文，把握大意
2.细读全文，仔细斟酌
3.再读全文,复核审查
The method of correcting
改明显错误
对照考点，排除法
三种题型 是否齐，题量分布是否符合命题规律
3 steps
幻灯片 20
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
习惯用法要记住
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
A Limerick
Homework:
Finish the poof-reading from national papers of 2014
2. Analyze the mistake points
Have a nice day!
Thank you !
1. I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school. The smell from it was very good.(
3.Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice
and lively.
2.It was a wonderful surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us.
动 词 形
held
is
1.动词的时态和语态错误.
2. 主、谓不一致的错误。
1.名词单、复数形式误用
注意可数名词与不可数名词
1. …so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.
2. He collected some informations about computers.
subjects
information
progress, furniture,
equipment, fun, news,
information, advice
名 词 数
1.分清形容词和副词用法
2.正确使用比较级和最高级
1. He asked angry if we had finished the work.
2. His father looks much more happier today.
angrily
名词
作定语表语
动词,形容词,副词,
作状语
还要注意形和副
1 Play football makes us grow up tall and strong.
2 I still remember going there early and felt anxious about the new world.
Playing
feeling
1）不定式；
2）动名词作主语、宾语；
3）并列连词and 等连接的不定式或动名词前后要一致(注意距离较远时)；
4）现在分词和过去分词的区别等。
非谓语， 细辨别
in hurry
in Sunday afternoon
such many people
a
on
∨
so
习惯用法要记住
1. Mary did his best to make me feel at home.
2. He found difficult to learn math well.
her
(一）人称代词要一致 (性/数/格)
(二）反身代词
(三) 不定代词误用 (someone, something, anyone, anything等)
(四) it作形主、形宾或指代时有无缺漏 (make, find, think)
∨
it
代 词 格，细 领 悟
（一）单数可数名词前须加a/an (泛指)或the(特指)
（二）注意用或不用冠词特殊情况
1. We may be one family and live under a same roof.
2. What a fun it is to go swimming in summer.
the
冠 词
1. Everybody sleeps in tents, that is very interesting.
2. Although it is raining heavily, but I decided to go out.
3.But before long they began to see which was happening.
which
(一) 注意定语从句中关系代词和关系副词正确用法
名词性从句（连接代词/副词/从属连词的混用）
(二) 注意连词and/ but, and/ or, but/ however之间错用
(三) 注意从属连词如because与so, though /although与but, if与and / or 等不能同时使用.
what
连 词
与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误.
The angel touched his eyes, but he could
see everything clearly.
and
逻辑错误需关注
动词形，名词数
还要注意形和副
非谓语，细辨别
习惯用法要记住
代词格，细领悟
句子成分多分析
冠词连词常光顾
逻辑错误须关注
A Limerick
Long long ago, there lived the man who was so lazy that no job was fit of him . In order to make a living he one day went to a neighbor of him for help. The neighbor advised him work as a cemetery caretaker as it was the most easiest job one could find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned his job three days before he got it . “It’s unfair. ” He said to the neighbor angry. “In the cemetery all others are lying still while I am the only one who have to stand.
练 一 练
Long long ago ,there lived the man
who was so lazy that no job was fit
of him. In order to make a living he
one day went to a neighbor of him
for help. The neighbor advised him
work as a cemetery caretaker as it
was the most easiest job one could
____
_____
for
_________
his
to
介词
冠词
代词格
a
非谓语
∧
形容词最高级
find in the world. The lazy man is delighted and soon became a cemetery caretaker. But to everybody’s surprising he resigned
his job three days before he got it .
“It’s unfair.”He said to the neighbor
_______
_____
was
surprise
动词时态
固定搭配
after
逻辑错误
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
Practice makes perfect.
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I'd done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
cousin
cousin’s
rich
richer
on
in
∧
it/that
\
faced
face
Late
Later
slow
slowly
knows
knew
ever
never
Practice makes perfect.
Homework :
Finish Exercise paper
During the weekend I travelled by the air for the first time in my life. I usually travel by train because of it is much cheaper and safe. But to fly in the sky was something new to me. In the very beginning I feel a little nervous. I looked around and saw many smiling faces and determined eyes, who made me calm down very soon. After a while, I became excited when I found me high in the sky among the clouds. I also found that mountains, fields, rivers and so on was interestingly small. I enjoyed the frightening and comfortable journey very much. After all, it is much interesting to take a plane than to take a car. I will never forget this wonderfully trip by plane.
Have a nice day!
Thank you !